英语短文改错-课件.ppt

1、How to do Proof-readinglearning aims1 1）识别错误识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力并正确校正语篇的能力the ability to correct a compositionthe ability to correct a composition2 2）综合运用英语知识的能力综合运用英语知识的能力the ability to use English languagethe ability to use English language3 3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力 the ability to under

2、stand its content and the ability to understand its content andlogiclogical orderal ordercheck your homework短文改错的考点是什么？Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?1.看不出句子有错。看不出句子有错。2.看出句子出错的地方看出句子出错的地方,但无法改正。但无法改正。3.知道改正句子错误的地方知道改正句子错误的地方,但答案不正确。但答案不正确。lets solve these problems together!let

3、 go!I would be more carefully next time.Carefully-carefulcarefull1.child-children.1.child-children.2.he2.he后加后加-加加 was was 3.on-in 3.on-in 4.remains-remained 4.remains-remained 5.a-an 5.a-an 6.6.encourageencourage-encouraging -encouraging 7.his-their 7.his-their 8.was8.was去掉去掉 9.meaningfully-meaning

4、ful9.meaningfully-meaningful10.people10.people后加后加-who -who 名词的单复数名词的单复数主动语态与被动语态主动语态与被动语态介词介词时态时态冠词冠词非谓语动词非谓语动词代词动词的语态形容词和副词从句，句法从句，句法1.have-1.have-加加 have.have.2.progresses-progress 2.progresses-progress 3.whether-that 3.whether-that 4.children-childrens 4.children-childrens 5.for-on 5.for-on pari

5、ng-compared paring-compared 7.hard-harder 7.hard-harder 8.and-but8.and-but9.to 9.to 去掉去掉 10.because-so 10.because-so 动词的时态动词的时态可数与不可数名词可数与不可数名词连词连词名词所有格名词所有格介词介词非谓语动词非谓语动词形容词的比较级连词，行文逻辑非谓语动词连词，行文逻辑连词，行文逻辑1.I can go to home now.2.I like playing piano.3.I am fond at English.theWrong wordMissing wordof

6、Unnecessary word高考短文改错的考察方式高考短文改错的考察方式答题一定要规范，平常要养成好习惯。答题一定要规范，平常要养成好习惯。2：1：7或者或者 1：1：8：多多缺缺 错错 测试点分布测试点分布 1、名词（、名词（none)2、动词、动词(verb)3、代词、代词(pronone)4、从句、从句(clause)5、形容词、副词、形容词、副词(adj,adv)6、冠词、冠词(article)7、连词、连词(conjunction)8、介词、介词(preposition)limerick一、动词形一、动词形 考点：考点：1.主从句中的时态。主从句中的时态。2.上下文中时态要一致上

7、下文中时态要一致。2007四川卷：四川卷：When he gets home,he saw the animal waiting at the door,still wearing his jacket with the wallet in the pocket.2007天津卷：天津卷：In Grade Eight I took physics.In one test I get only 36 percent of the answers correct.gotgot一、动词形一、动词形2011陕西卷：陕西卷：not only did I had my photo taken with hi

8、m,but he signed his name on my skirt.2007天津卷：天津卷：what I liked best were the free high-speed internet connection in the room.havewas考点考点3：注意倒装后的谓语动词形式。：注意倒装后的谓语动词形式。考点考点4：从句，及：从句，及 to do/doing 做主语时的谓做主语时的谓语动词的单复数语动词的单复数Dear Ann,thank you for the lovely day we have with you.(2012 辽宁卷辽宁卷)分析；分析；have-had

9、,写信在描述过去的写信在描述过去的事情。事情。when we were talked on the phone,the firealarm sounded.考点考点5：talked-talking.主动语态与被动语态的混用。主动语态与被动语态的混用。.二、名词二、名词数数 指指名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式的用法错误。的用法错误。高考链接高考链接2：It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.（2011新课标全国卷）新课标全国卷）luggage In early January this year,the rate of UFO r

10、eports was steady,around three per weeks.(2011辽宁卷）辽宁卷）week1.Dont lose hearts,youll be successful in time.2.I need some more informations.3.These machines look the same,but they are of different kind.heartinformationkindspractice绝不可数名词绝不可数名词progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,advice 三、还要注

11、意形和副三、还要注意形和副 形容词和副词的误用形容词和副词的误用高考链接高考链接3：When she dropped me off,I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.（2011 浙江卷）浙江卷）slowly2 2比较级和最高级的混用或误用比较级和最高级的混用或误用.The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陕西）陕西）fasterwe lived in a comfortably double toom witha big bath.(2009 陕西卷陕西卷)分析；分析；

12、comfortably-comfortable.做定语。so I grateful accepted the offer.(2009浙江卷浙江卷)分析：分析：grateful-gratefully考查副词考查副词用法。副词修饰动词用法。副词修饰动词accept.unfortunate,the only problem was the journey home.(2012 辽宁卷辽宁卷)分析；分析；unfortunate-unfortunately。用。用副词修饰整个句子。副词修饰整个句子。It is still hardly for me to write in English.分析：分析：h

13、ardly hard.意思大相径庭。意思大相径庭。.since his family was rich than mine,he had more toys than i did.(2011 浙江卷浙江卷)分析；分析；rich-richer,比较级。比较级。His father looks more happier today(2009浙江卷浙江卷)分析：分析：去掉去掉more。比较级的基本形式。比较级的基本形式。.四、非谓语，细辨别四、非谓语，细辨别现在分词、过去分词，动名词现在分词、过去分词，动名词和和不定式在句中不定式在句中的功能。与谓语动词的区别。的功能。与谓语动词的区别。2007浙江

14、卷：浙江卷：I could not to run very fast and fell behind.2007宁夏卷：宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every day.toTo do 不定式做状语不定式做状语So I helped them going to the nearest hospital.(2009全国卷全国卷2)分析：分析：going改为改为go考查非谓语动词的复合结考查非谓语动词的复合结构：构：help sb(to)do sthwith more patience,I must make my toysto last.(2012课标卷课标卷)【解析】【解析】m

15、ake sb/sth do 要跟不带要跟不带to的动词不的动词不定式定式therefore,I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying brazil.(2012浙江浙江卷卷)分析：分析：interested-interesting 令人感兴趣的令人感兴趣的，修饰物。，修饰物。Adj化的一些分词。化的一些分词。I also shared with my friends many photostaking in Beijing.【解析】【解析】taking-taken 过去分词做定语，表过去分词做定语，表示被动。示被动。I came

16、across a crew make a new film with my faviurite actor.(2011陕西卷陕西卷)分析：分析：make-making.现在分词做定语。现在分词做定语。on the box was a card say:25 cents each.(2010课标卷）课标卷）【解析】【解析】say-saying,现在分词做后置定语，现在分词做后置定语，表主动表主动五五、代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟3.it3.it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏 (make,find,think)高考链接高考链接4：With the help of Katia,

17、a roommate of me(2011 重庆卷）重庆卷）mineIt was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand(2010 辽宁卷）辽宁卷）He found difficult to learn math well.ourit1.1.人称代词，物主代词人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的使用反身代词的使用2.2.代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误.I knew that they will be worried about myself.(201

18、2 浙江卷浙江卷)【解析】【解析】myself-me。我知道他们将担心我。我知道他们将担心我。”Im glad to know that you have an interest in Chinese Food.Here Id like to tell you something about them.(2009重庆卷)分析：分析：them-it依语境知。代指的是依语境知。代指的是“food”六、六、介词介词短语短语常常考常常考，习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住 1.1.主要考查主要考查固定短语，固定介词固定短语，固定介词的搭配。的搭配。高考链接：高考链接：There was one on par

19、ticular Id really wanted.(2011 浙江卷浙江卷)2.2.不定式后的动词短语中介词不能省不定式后的动词短语中介词不能省3 3.时间状语前有指示代词时间状语前有指示代词this,thatthis,that或或one,one,next,lastnext,last等修饰时不用介词等修饰时不用介词.inHe had only a small cold room to live.inHe paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon.practice1.Im sure they will laugh to me and se

20、e me as a fool.2.At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.3.When a young man starts to earn his own living,he can no longer expect others to pay his food.4.The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.atforon考点考点1：冠词冠词a,an,the的用法错误等。的用法错误等。2007全国全国II：I meant to write long letter

21、 and tell you all the things Im doing at the school2007四川卷：四川卷：An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farm.a a七、冠词、连词常光顾七、冠词、连词常光顾it is such great hotel that i would recommand it to any friend of mine who is going to Beijing.(2012陕西卷陕西卷)分析：分析：a.hotel为可数名词为可数名词【解析解析】考查

22、冠词用法。由考查冠词用法。由umbrella 的发音可的发音可知，元音前应使用冠词知，元音前应使用冠词an The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella.(2009浙江卷浙江卷)anbut before long,they began to see which was happening.(2012陕西卷陕西卷)考点考点2：从句的引导词。从句的引导词。which-what,引导宾语从句，在从句引导宾语从句，在从句中做主语。中做主语。I meant to give it back to you before four in th

23、e afternoon，and I was hold up on my way back.(全国卷2)考点3：and,but,so,引导的并列句and but.前后句是转折关系。分析：前后文是并列关系，分析：前后文是并列关系，用并列连词用并列连词and。Some friends of his go to see him every day,they take him lots of good books and fresh fruit.(2009陕西卷)limerick做题步骤？做题步骤？What will you do when facing a wholePassage?first.,I

24、will_.Then,I will_.-.3 steps of doing proof-reading1.Go through the whole passage to get a general idea.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐句找错）3.Read the passage for the third time,check the answers and correct the difficult ones.（检查核对，攻克难点）show time（10改错

25、）改错）My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day.She liked it at once.Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it.As she did this,lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt!I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face!My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as sh

26、e could when a shop assistant came over to us.It was turned out to be her own cup,that shed left on the shelf by mistake.The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister,for I just thought it was funny!wereittheherhardtowhichembarrassedbut/yet/while短文改错应注意的问题短文改错应注意的问题 四不改四不改:标点符号不改标点符号不改。大小写不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。词序错误不改。在纲外生词不改。在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。homework practise how to correct a composition using the method we have learnt in this lesson in a limited time.hope you make great progress.