2020年江苏中考英语写作指导-话题2-经历与感受.ppt

1、2020年江苏中考英语写作指导话题2-经历与感受分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近6年中考真题的书面年中考真题的书面表达可知，与表达可知，与“经历与感受经历与感受”这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：自己的经历及感受，如角度：自己的经历及感受，如2018宿迁、宿迁、2015淮安、淮安、2014淮安。结淮安。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：他人的经历及对合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：他人的经历及对自己的影响。自己的影响。命题探索教材链接 (2019苏州改编苏州改编)假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔

2、友假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说。为犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说。为帮助他排解困惑帮助他排解困惑，请你根据以下所给要点并结合，请你根据以下所给要点并结合自身经历自身经历，写写一封英文邮件来开导他一封英文邮件来开导他。审主题：写邮件审主题：写邮件开导犯错的笔友开导犯错的笔友典例剖析典例剖析审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称审时态：一般过去时审时态：一般过去时审文体：应用文审文体：应用文审人称：第二人称审人称：第二人称一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句要点：要点：1.安慰对方不要担心，每个人都会犯错；安慰对方不要担心，

3、每个人都会犯错；2.自己一次犯错经历：踢足球忘了做作业，向老师道歉，第二自己一次犯错经历：踢足球忘了做作业，向老师道歉，第二天完成了作业；天完成了作业；3.自己是怎么对待这次错误的；自己是怎么对待这次错误的；4.从这次错误中学到了从这次错误中学到了(自主发挥自主发挥)。审要点：除以上审要点：除以上3点外，还需点外，还需自由发挥从这次错误中学到自由发挥从这次错误中学到了什么东西了什么东西一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句注意事项：注意事项：1.词数词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。实的地名、校

4、名、人名等信息。Dear Nathan，Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days._ Su Hua一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.I ever forgot to finish my homework because I spent too much time in playing computer games.2.It was at that time that I decided to help more people in need.3.My father told me a story on my way home

5、 and he helped me to plan my time properly.4.She encouraged me to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others.5.The young man next to our table,talked and laughed loudly.介绍经历介绍经历角度角度1好句范例好句范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.我有次因为沉迷于看电视而忘去见我的朋友。我有次因为沉迷于看电视而忘去见我的朋友。_ _2.就是在那一刻我决定努力学习。就是在那一刻我决定努力学习。_3.

6、在去学校的路上，我发现地上有一个钱包。在去学校的路上，我发现地上有一个钱包。_ I once forgot to meet my friend because I lost myself in watching TV.It was at that time that I decided to study hard.On my way to school,I found a wallet on the ground.句句 子子 仿仿 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4.我的老师鼓励我积极参加课外活动。我的老师鼓励我积极参加课外活动。_ _5.坐在我旁边的女孩，大声说话说了很长时间。坐

7、在我旁边的女孩，大声说话说了很长时间。_ My teacher encouraged me to take an active part in afterclass activities.The girl next to me,talked loudly for a long time.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句6.I could hardly think clearly after the earthquake.(扩写感受扩写感受)I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after the earthquake.7.I

8、 dont know how to remember new words quickly.(扩写感受扩写感受)I often feel stressed because I dont know how to remember new words quickly.介绍感受介绍感受角度角度2扩写范例扩写范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句8.I won the first prize in the reading competition.(扩写感受扩写感受)I won the first prize in the reading competition.I was really happy

9、 that day.角度角度一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句6.When he stood on the stage,he didnt know what to say.(扩写扩写 感受感受)_ _7.I dont want to speak in front of so many people.(扩写感受扩写感受)_ _ He was so nervous that he didnt know what to say when he stood on the stage.I feel so worried and afraid because I dont want to speak

10、 in front of so many people.句句 子子 扩扩 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句8.They were told there was no tickets left.(扩写感受扩写感受)_ _When they were told there was no tickets left,they were very unhappy that day.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句9.His story taught me not to give up my dream no matter what happens.10.From his experi

11、ence,I realized that helping others can make the world more beautiful.11.His words touched my heart and I will remember them forever.他人经历对自己的影响他人经历对自己的影响角度角度3好句范例好句范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句9.这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。_10.从她的经历中，我意识到了微笑在生活中的重要性。从她的经历中，我意识到了微笑在生活中的重要性。_ _11.他的话给了我勇气和自信，我会永远记住他的支持。他的话给了

12、我勇气和自信，我会永远记住他的支持。_ _This experience taught me not to look down upon others.From her experience,I realized the importance of smiling in daily life.His words gave me courage and confidence and I will remember his support forever.句句 子子 仿仿 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段Last year,I met

13、 a difficult situation.I _(所经所经历的事情历的事情)I didnt know what I should do at first.And I felt _(对事情的感受对事情的感受).Then I _(应对的应对的办法办法).Finally,I _(最后的结果最后的结果).I _(对对结果的感受结果的感受)failed the exam/couldnt understand what the teacher said in class/.disappointed/stressed/.asked the teacher for help/reviewed the le

14、ssons carefully/.got a high score in the final exam/made progress in English/.语语 段段 练练 习习 1介绍经历及感受介绍经历及感受was so satisfied/was excited/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句_(简单描述他人的经历或事迹简单描述他人的经历或事迹).As a student,Ive learned a lot from his story.We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life,but we should _(影响

15、影响1).No matter how hard life is,_(影响影响2).Liu Wei lost his left arm by accident but he didnt give up his dream of being a painter/He failed many times to do the research,but he didnt give up/.语语 段段 练练 习习 2他人经历对自己的影响他人经历对自己的影响 believe that our dream will come true byworking hard/never lose confidence

16、in ourselves/.we wont fail unless we give up our hope/we should keep on going/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章Dear Nathan，Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days.You neednt worry too much.Its true that everyone makes mistakes.Take me for example.One day,I spent so much time playing football wi

17、th my friends that I forgot to do my homework.I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day.I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句It doesnt matter whether or not you make mistakes.What matters most is to correct them and learn from the

18、m.In this way,others will understand you.Then you will feel much better.I hope my experience can help you out.Su Hua(2019宁波改编宁波改编)回顾初中三年，有许多事令人难忘。校英语报回顾初中三年，有许多事令人难忘。校英语报Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文，要求用英语写一封信表栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文，要求用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意，正好你对此很感兴趣，想报名参加征文活动。达你对某个人的谢意，正好你对此很感兴趣，想报名参加征文活动。现在请你根据以下所

19、给要点，写一篇英语短文。现在请你根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。要点：要点：1.引出要感谢的人：你的英语老师；引出要感谢的人：你的英语老师；2.讲述你的经历：不擅长英语，失去信心，在老师的鼓励下，取得了讲述你的经历：不擅长英语，失去信心，在老师的鼓励下，取得了很大进步；很大进步；3.自己的感受自己的感受(自主发挥，至少一点自主发挥，至少一点)；4.表达谢意表达谢意(自主发挥，至少一点自主发挥，至少一点)。写作练兵写作练兵注意事项：注意事项：1.词数词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名

20、、人名等信息。写作练兵写作练兵Dear Alice，Looking back on the past three years,Id like to say thanks to you_写作练兵写作练兵for helping me with my English.When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at English.I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class.Once I did very badly in an English test,and I lost heart

21、.However,you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class._Yours，Li Hua写作练兵写作练兵Since then,I have worked harder and made great progress.I feel lucky to be your student.Thanks again.Best wishes to you!宾语从句是主从复合句的一种。其从句部分在整个句子宾语从句是主从复合句的一种。其从句部分在整个句子中作宾语，从句的语序必须是陈述句语序，即中作宾语，从

22、句的语序必须是陈述句语序，即“连接词主语连接词主语谓语其他部分谓语其他部分”。常见的连接词有：。常见的连接词有：that,if/whether,what,when,where,how,who,why等。等。巧用宾语从句1.“Its delicious，”She said.She said(that)it was delicious.2.Does Kate get up early?Do you know？Do you know if/whether Kate gets up early?3.When did you come here?She asked me.She asked me whe

23、n I came here.巧用宾语从句句式连接范例句式连接范例 1.Did he go to school today?Do you know?_2.“Who will give a speech tonight？”She asks her teacher._3.Mr Li asked his son,“Where do you want to have a picnic？”_巧用宾语从句小试牛刀小试牛刀 Do you know if/whether he went to school today？She asks her teacher who will give a speech tonight.Mr Li asked his son where he wanted to have a picnic.4.When and how can we begin our project?Our teachers and we are talking about it._5.What happened over there?Do you know?_巧用宾语从句Our teachers and we are talking about when and how we can begin our project.Do you know what happened over there?