2020年福建英语中考作文指导话题11-自然;世界与环境.ppt

1、2020年福建英语中考作文指导话题11-自然;世界与环境话题思维导图话题思维导图命题探索 分析福建近分析福建近7年中考书面表达可知，跟年中考书面表达可知，跟“自然；世界与环境自然；世界与环境”相关的话题并未考查。分析全国近年真题可知，该话题的命题相关的话题并未考查。分析全国近年真题可知，该话题的命题角度有：角度有：目前的环境问题目前的环境问题；如何保护环境如何保护环境；保护环境的保护环境的意义意义。典例剖析典例剖析 (2019无锡改编无锡改编)假如你是李华，是阳光中学假如你是李华，是阳光中学(Sunshine Middle School)的一名学生。下周你们班将要举办以的一名学生。下周你们班将

2、要举办以“A Greener World”为主题的班会，为主题的班会，请你根据以下内容用英语写请你根据以下内容用英语写一篇发言稿一篇发言稿，谈谈你对环境保护的观点和建议。词数，谈谈你对环境保护的观点和建议。词数80左右。左右。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章审主题：以绿色世界为主题审主题：以绿色世界为主题审审文体：应用文文体：应用文审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称内容要点：内容要点：1.关闭造成污染的工厂；关闭造成污染的工厂；2.随手关灯；随手关灯；3.及时关掉水龙头；及时关掉水龙头；4.携布袋购物。携布袋购物。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章审审要点：要点：4条要点条要点审时

3、态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时注意：注意：1.必须包含所有内容要点，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；必须包含所有内容要点，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。名。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章Dear Class，As we all know,the Earth is in trouble!But how should we protect the Earth？_ To make the Earth greener,we sho

4、uld make some changes in our daily life.I believe these small changes can make a big difference to the world.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章1角度角度目前的环境问题目前的环境问题句式扩写范例句式扩写范例 1.Elephants are in great danger.Elephants are in great danger.People cut down many trees so elephants are losing their homes.2.The river wa

5、s really dirty.The river was really dirty.Even the bottom of the river was full of rubbish.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3.People are also littering in public places like parks.People are also littering in public places like parks.This is turning beautiful places into ugly ones.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 扩扩 写写

6、 1.Water pollution is becoming worse and worse.(扩写做法扩写做法)_2.We must keep the air fresh.(扩写原因扩写原因)_Water pollution is becoming worse and worse.We should call on the people around us to protect water resources.We must keep the air fresh because we need to have a healthy living environment.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三

7、阶练语段&成篇章3.The land will become less and less.(扩写条件扩写条件)_4.I use plastics too much in my daily life.(扩写观点扩写观点)_The land will become less and less if we dont stop cutting down trees.I use plastics too much in my daily life.Now I have come to realize that its a terribly bad habit.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章2角

8、度角度如何保护环境如何保护环境好句范例好句范例4.We can use less water and plant more trees.5.To cut down air pollution,we should take the bus or subway instead of driving.6.You can save electricity by turning off the lights when you leave a room.7.You can also use reusable bags instead of plastic bags.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章

9、句句 子子 仿仿 写写 5.我们可以通过种植更多的树木来减少空气污染。我们可以通过种植更多的树木来减少空气污染。_6.为了保护环境，我们可以尽量多地步行去上学。为了保护环境，我们可以尽量多地步行去上学。_We can reduce air pollution by planting more trees.To protect the environment,we can walk to school as often as possible.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章7.你可以骑自行车或者步行去上学或工作而不是开车。你可以骑自行车或者步行去上学或工作而不是开车。_8.我们应该减少

10、塑料的使用以便我们可以保护地球。我们应该减少塑料的使用以便我们可以保护地球。_You can ride your bike or walk to school or work instead of driving.We should reduce the use of plastics so that we can protect the Earth.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3角度角度保护环境的意义保护环境的意义好句范例好句范例8.All these small things can add up and become big things that can improve t

11、he environment.9.So together,our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 9.我相信我们可以让世界变成一个更好的居所。我相信我们可以让世界变成一个更好的居所。_10.如果每个人都为建设绿色城市做出一份贡献，世界将变得更如果每个人都为建设绿色城市做出一份贡献，世界将变得更美好。美好。_I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.If everyone ma

12、kes a contribution to building a green city,the world will become better.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段语语 段段 练练 习习 1目前的环境问题目前的环境问题 There is no doubt that it is good for _(好处好处).Most of us stand by the program.However,some of us are worried that the factory will _(担忧担忧).I would like t

13、o know _(解决措施解决措施).the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs make much noise and pollute the environment of the area whether you have any plans for the environmental protection一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语语 段段 练练 习习 2如何保护环境如何保护环境 I think we should _(做法做法1).And when we brush our te

14、eth,wed better _(做法做法2).Also,we should _(做法做法3)and _(做法做法4).turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the roomturn off the tap advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving use reusable bags when shopping一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语语 段段 练练 习习 3 3保护环境的意义保护环境的意义 Only if we know wh

15、at to do in our daily life can we _(意义意义).Then our world will _(影响影响).So lets take actions together.make a differencebe more beautiful一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章（针对（针对“典例剖析典例剖析”的优秀范文）的优秀范文）Dear Class，As we all know,the Earth is in trouble!But how should we protect the Earth?Chinese government has tak

16、en action to protect our Earth.For example,lots of factories that cause serious pollution have been shut down.And we have started to use the sun and wind as new energy.We students also can do something to protect our Earth.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句When we leave a room,wed better turn off the lights.Its a

17、 good behaviour to turn off the tap when we brush our teeth.Going shopping with a cloth bag is also a good method.Whats more,its our duty to call on people around us to join us.To make the Earth greener,we should make some changes in our daily life.I believe these small changes can make a big differ

18、ence to the world.写作练兵写作练兵 (2020原创原创)垃圾分类既是垃圾分类既是“老话题老话题”，也是，也是“新时尚新时尚”。2019年起，全国地级及以上城市将全面启动生活垃圾分类工作。年起，全国地级及以上城市将全面启动生活垃圾分类工作。为此你就为此你就“人们对垃圾分类的态度人们对垃圾分类的态度”对你们小区内对你们小区内100名名10岁到岁到30岁的居民进行了问卷调查，下图是统计结果。请你简要描述下岁的居民进行了问卷调查，下图是统计结果。请你简要描述下图信息，并谈谈你对垃圾分类的理解。词数图信息，并谈谈你对垃圾分类的理解。词数80左右。左右。写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵注

19、意事项：注意事项：1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。参考词汇：参考词汇：sort v分类分类写作练兵写作练兵 Recently,I have done a survey among 100 people on their attitudes towards sorting rubbish.Here are the r

20、esults._ For the first group(aged 10 to 18),there are 19.05%of people who always sort rubbish.52.38%of people sometimes sort rubbish,and 28.57%of people never sort rubbish.For the second group(aged 19 to 30),only 9.74%of people always sort rubbish.50.44%of people sometimes sort rubbish and 39.82%of people never do it.写作练兵写作练兵_ In fact,some rubbish is recyclable and some is dangerous.To protect the environment and save energy,I think it is necessary to sort rubbish.And I have got into the habit of sorting rubbish.