中考英语写作指导(书面表达)话题3-人物介绍课件.ppt

1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“人物介人物介绍绍”这一话题，主要考查这一话题，主要考查1次：次：2017年从年从“自身的优点、如何提升自身的优点、如何提升自我和将来的梦想自我和将来的梦想”三方面介绍自己。再结合全国近年中考真题三方面介绍自己。再结合全国近年中考真题可知，此话题通常有以下命题角度：介绍个人基本信息、外貌可知，此话题通常有以下命题角度：介绍个人基本信息、外貌特征、性格特点、兴趣爱好、梦想及如何实现梦想等。特征、性格特点、兴趣爱好、梦想及如何实现梦想等。命题探索人

2、教课本中涉及人教课本中涉及“人物介绍人物介绍”这个话题的单元有：这个话题的单元有：教材链接(2017河北河北)英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词演讲词，向同学向同学们介绍一下自己们介绍一下自己。典例剖析典例剖析审主题：真实的自我审主题：真实的自我一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句审文体：应用文审文体：应用文审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称提示：提示：(1)What are your strong points?(2)How do you improve

3、yourself?(3)What is your dream for the future?要点要点2：如何提升自己；时态：一般现在时：如何提升自己；时态：一般现在时一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句要点要点3：梦想：梦想(积极正向积极正向);时态：一般将来时时态：一般将来时要点要点1：优点；时态：一般现在时：优点；时态：一般现在时要求：要求：(1)演讲词须演讲词须包括包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2)演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。(3)词数词数80个左右个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数开头和结尾已给出，

4、不计入总词数)。Hello,everyone!Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself._ Thanks for your attention!一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【句子扩写范例】【句子扩写范例】1.My friend Carol is kind and funny.My best friend Carol is really kind and very funny.八八(上上)Unit 3 P212.Im shy.Im shy so its not easy for me to make

5、friends.八八(上上)Unit 3 P211 1角度角度介绍性格特点介绍性格特点一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.I know she cares about me.I know she cares about me because shes always there to listen.八八(上上)Unit 3 P21一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【句子扩写】【句子扩写】1.My friend Lily is kind.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)_2.Jack used to be shy.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)_ _My friend Lily is re

6、ally kind and she often helps others.Jack used to be shy.His face always turned red when he talked to girls.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.Our teacher is very strict with us.(扩写原因扩写原因)_ _4.Wang Yong is a brave boy.(扩写结果扩写结果)_一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Our teacher is very strict with us because she or he wants us to

7、 be a better person.Wang Yong is a brave boy so he isnt afraid of the dark.【好句范例好句范例】1.My parents want me to be a doctor,but Im not sure about that.八八(上上)Unit 6 P422.As for my dream,I want to be an actor and play different roles in the TVs or the movies.3.Id like to be a scientist,because I like sci

8、ence very much.2 2角度角度介绍梦想、生活目标介绍梦想、生活目标一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【句子仿写】【句子仿写】1.我想成为一名科学家，但是我妈妈希望我成为一名老师。我想成为一名科学家，但是我妈妈希望我成为一名老师。_2.至于我的梦想，我想成为一名护士。至于我的梦想，我想成为一名护士。_3.我想成为一名导游，因为我喜欢环游世界。我想成为一名导游，因为我喜欢环游世界。_ _ I want to be a scientist,but my mother wants me to be a teacher.As for my dream,I want to be a n

9、urse.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句I would like to be a guide,because I like traveling around the world.【好句范例好句范例】1.Im going to practice basketball every day.八八(上上)Unit 6 P412.We are going to take singing lessons.3.Im going to write articles and send them to magazines and newspapers.八八(上上)Unit 6 P434.Im going

10、 to take guitar lessons.I really love music.3 3角度角度如何实现目标如何实现目标一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【句子仿写】【句子仿写】1.我将坚持做运动。我将坚持做运动。_2.我将每天跑步。我真的很喜欢运动。我将每天跑步。我真的很喜欢运动。_3.我将每天练习说英语并写下自己的感受。我将每天练习说英语并写下自己的感受。_ _Im going to keep on doing exercise.Im going to run everyday.I really love sports.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Im going

11、to practice speaking English every day and write down how I feel.【句子升格范例】【句子升格范例】1.I admire Wang Yang very much.(用用one of)Wang Yang is one of the people I admire most.2.My mother is a great person.(用最高级用最高级)My mother is the greatest person Ive ever known.3.Mr.Wang is my English teacher.Mr.Wang is ve

12、ry humorous.(用定语从句用定语从句)Mr.Wang is my English teacher who is very humorous.4 4角度角度介绍基本信息介绍基本信息一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【句子升格】【句子升格】1.I admire Mr.Liu very much.(用用one of升格升格)_2.My father is a great person.(用最高级升格用最高级升格)_3.Let me introduce something about Lucy.Lucy is my best friend.(用定语从句升格用定语从句升格)_Mr.Liu

13、 is one of the people I admire most.My father is the greatest person(that)Ive ever known.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Let me introduce something about Lucy who is my best friend.【句子升格范例】【句子升格范例】1.He has brown hair.He wears glasses.(用用and连接连接)He has brown hair and wears glasses.七七(下下)Unit 9 P502.My sister has

14、 a round face.She has bright eyes.(用用with连接连接)My sister has a round face with bright eyes.3.He used to be thin.He is strong now.(用感叹句用感叹句)He used to be thin,but how strong he is now!九九(全全)Unit 4 P265 5角度角度介绍外貌特征介绍外貌特征一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【句子仿写】【句子仿写】1.她又高又漂亮，有一头长长的卷发。她又高又漂亮，有一头长长的卷发。_2.他很帅并且有一双漂亮的蓝眼睛

15、他很帅并且有一双漂亮的蓝眼睛。_3.露茜过去很安静，但现在她多外向啊！露茜过去很安静，但现在她多外向啊！_4.我的妈妈高鼻梁，小嘴巴。我的妈妈高鼻梁，小嘴巴。_She is tall and beautiful with long curly hair.He is very handsome and has beautiful blue eyes.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Lucy used to be quiet,but how outgoing she is now!My mother has a high nose and a small mouth.My English

16、teacher is a very kind person(性格性格1)._(具体表现具体表现1).He is also hardworking(性格性格2).This makes him _(结果结果).He has helped almost every student in our class(具体表现具体表现2)._(具体表现具体表现3).With his help,I make great progress in my subjects and my school life becomes easier and more colorful.He always has a big sm

17、ile on his face一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段语段练习语段练习1 1介绍他人性格介绍他人性格 one of the best teachers in our schoolHe helped me with my English I want _(自己的梦想自己的梦想)when I grow up._(原因原因1)._(原因原因2).If I achieve my dream,I will _(自己的感受自己的感受)to be a teacher一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 语段练习语段练习2 2介绍自己的梦想介绍自己的梦想Because I li

18、ke playing with childrenbeing a teacher is also my mothers dreamfeel very happyBesides,When I go to senior high school,I will _(做法做法1).I think it is good for my future life(好处好处1).I will _(做法做法2).Its _(好处好处2).Besides,I will _(做法做法3).I believe my senior high school life will be colorful.study hard一阶

19、审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语段练习语段练习3 3如何实现自己的目标如何实现自己的目标spend more time helpful to enrich my lifejoin some clubs on my studyIm _(介绍自己的姓名介绍自己的姓名)and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself.Im a kind and helpful person(介绍自己介绍自己的优点的优点1)._(针对自己优点的具体表现针对自己优点的具体表现1).I can sing and dance so well(介绍自介绍自己的优点己

20、的优点2)that _ (具体表现具体表现2)一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语段练习语段练习4 4介绍基本信息介绍基本信息Li HuaIm always ready to help others when theyre in troubleI often give performances at our school parties一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章Hello,everyone!Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself.Im a kind and helpful pe

21、rson.Im always ready to help others when theyre in trouble.I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school parties.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 When I think back what Ive done before,I should help my parents do more housework.It is good for my future life to do housework.As for my

22、dream,I want to be a teacher.Ill make friends with my students.I want to teach them everything I know!Thanks for your attention!(2019杭州改编杭州改编)假如你是李华，最近收到意大利朋友假如你是李华，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件，以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。的电子邮件，以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。写作练兵写作练兵要求：要求：(1)邮件中须回答邮件中须回答Linda的所有问题。的所有问题。(2)邮件中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。邮件中不要

23、出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)写作练兵写作练兵Dear Linda，_写作练兵写作练兵 Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.Now let me tell you something about my brother.He is thirteen years old,easygoing and humorouswe get along really well.He loves different cultures.He is interested in museums and likes trying local food._Yours，Li Hua写作练兵写作练兵My brother is also cute.Hes of medium height with short straight hair.He is good at Chinese Kungfu,and he usually wears Tshirts and jeans.Thanks again for your help.