高中英语-山东读后续写讲课课件.pptx

1、How to Complete a StoryContinuation Writing How to Complete a StoryContinuation writing Learning aims:Afterlearningthislesson,youwillbeableto1.Know some steps to analyze the reading material 2.Know how to develop a coherent and logical ending to the given passage according to the given information3.

2、Read for the key information of the given passage and write a coherent and logical ending for the given passage according to the given information There is a time when we should heed a certain callCause the world it seems its _ in this lineCause theres a chance for taking in needing our own livesIt

3、seems we need nothing at allI used to feel that I should give away my heartAnd it shows that fear of needing themThen I read the headlines and it said theyre dying thereAnd it shows that we must heed insteadWe are the world We are the children We are the ones who make a brighter daySo lets start _ B

4、ut theres a chance were takingWere taking our own lives Its true well make a brighter day just you and meGive in your _ and you will see that someone caresCause you know that they can feed them allThen I read the paper and it said that youve been dying And it shows the second we will callWe are the

5、world We are the childrenWe are the ones _ make a brighter daySo lets start giving But theres a chance were takingWere taking our own lives Its true well make a _ day just _and _There is a time when we should heed a certain callCause the world it seems its _ in this lineCause theres a chance for tak

6、ing in needing our own livesIt seems we need nothing at allI used to feel that I should give away my heartAnd it shows that fear of needing themThen I read the headlines and it said theyre dying thereAnd it shows that we must heed insteadWe are the world We are the children We are the ones who make

7、a brighter daySo lets start _ But theres a chance were takingWere taking our own lives Its true well make a brighter day just you and meGive in your _ and you will see that someone caresCause you know that they can feed them allThen I read the paper and it said that youve been dying And it shows the

8、 second we will callWe are the world We are the childrenWe are the ones _ make a brighter daySo lets start giving But theres a chance were takingWere taking our own lives Its true well make a _ day just _and _There is a time when we should heed a certain callCause the world it seems its _ in this li

9、neCause theres a chance for taking in needing our own livesIt seems we need nothing at allI used to feel that I should give away my heartAnd it shows that fear of needing themThen I read the headlines and it said theyre dying thereAnd it shows that we must heed insteadWe are the world We are the chi

10、ldren We are the ones who make a brighter daySo lets start _ But theres a chance were takingWere taking our own lives Its true well make a brighter day just you and meGive in your _ and you will see that someone caresCause you know that they can feed them allThen I read the paper and it said that yo

11、uve been dying And it shows the second we will callWe are the world We are the childrenWe are the ones _ make a brighter daySo lets start giving But theres a chance were takingWere taking our own lives Its true well make a _ day just _and _rightgivingheartbrighterwhoyoume2020山东卷真题再现注意：注意：1.续写词数应为续写词

12、数应为150左右；左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para 1：When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.Para 2:With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.Step1:Analyze(分析)the reading material(style,person,tense,main idea,organization,plot development)Step

13、2:Infer the plot development(the given two sentences,reasonable ending)Step 3:Creative writingStep 4：Correct mistakesStep 5:Polish your writingHow to complete a story1.Whats the style of the passage?A.Narration(记叙文)B.Exposition(说明文)C.Argumentation(议论文)whowhen wherewhatwhyhow2.Person(人称):First person

14、?Second person?Third person?3.Tense(时态):Past tense?The simple present tense?Read for basic informationStep1:Analyze(分析分析)the reading material介绍介绍 Mrs.Meredith 介绍介绍 Bernard一家一家孩子们想办法帮助孩子们想办法帮助Bernard 故事背景故事背景Step1:Analyze(分析分析)the reading materialStep1:Analyze(分析分析)the reading materialSetting(under w

15、hat circumstances the story takes place)CharactersPlotThemeThe economy was bad,people lost their jobs and they were trying to help each other.Mrs.Meredith,John,Harry,Clara,Bernard,the sick man and his wife,Uncle John Mrs.Meredith was warm-hearted.Mrs.Meredith told her children about Bernard and his

16、family.All the three children wanted to help Bernard and John thought up the popcorn idea.Love among the neighboursStep 2:Infer the plot development according to the given sentencesPara.1When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.Para.2 With everything ready,Bernard star

17、ted out on his new business.when to tell the plan to Bernard and his parents Bernard and his parents response to the plan where to sell the popcorn peoples response to Bernard how Bernard feels how to make popcornCorrect mistakesPolish the writing:Para.1When Mrs.Meredith heard of the idea,she though

18、t it was a good one,too.Without think twice,they were couldnt wait to prepare the corn.Learn to take charge of the work.The children were busy popping the corn,while their mother went out to buy the bags.We told Bernard we met some trouble what need his help.When mom came back,Bernard just arrived.T

19、he plan made Bernard very happy.Suddenly,they just saw he burst into crying.They gave him a hug and smile together.thinkingThe children learnt ,that neededtheir momfound thatinto tears/out cryingsmiledTheytheyPara.2With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.Followed the first cust

20、omer,more and more people turned around the Bernards popcorn shop.Never had he earned so much money before in his life.Every week he had earned some money to take home.With time went by,their life became better and better.Following up atgoing by/As time went by,Polish the writing:Para.1When Mrs.Mere

21、dith heard of the idea,she thought it was a good one,too.Without think twice,they were couldnt wait to prepare the corn.Learn to take charge of the work.The children were busy popping the corn,while their mother went out to buy the bags.We told Bernard we met some trouble what need his help.When mom

22、 came back,Bernard just arrived.The plan made Bernard very happy.Suddenly,they just saw he burst into crying.They gave him a hug and smile together.thinkingThe children learnt ,that neededtheir momfound thatinto tears/out cryingsmiled.。.TheytheyPara.2With everything ready,Bernard started out on his

23、new business.Followed the first customer,more and more people turned around the Bernards popcorn shop.Never had he earned so much money before in his life.Every week he had earned some money to take home.With time went by,their life became better and better.Following up atgoing by/As time went by.。.

24、Polish your story By using linking words effectively.By adding some details reasonably.By using different sentence structures.Three tips:22Para.1 When Mrs.Meredith heard of the idea,she thought it was a good one,too.Without think twice,they were couldnt wait to prepare the corn.Learn to take charge

25、of the work.The children were busy popping the corn,while their mother went out to buy the bags.They told Bernard they met some trouble what need his help.When mom came back,Bernard just arrived.The plan made Bernard very happy.Suddenly,they just saw he burst into crying.They gave him a hug and smil

26、e together.thinkingThe children learnt ,that neededtheir momfound thatinto tears/out cryingsmiled The three children decided,every Saturday,to help sell popcorn for Bernard.The first time they smelt the sweet taste,they couldnt help screaming.Later they found it was popular with neighbors.They hoped

27、 Bernard could start out on this business.After Bernard learnt about their desire,he felt grateful to all of them for their kindness.Para.2With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.Followed the first customer,more and more people turned around the Bernards popcorn shop.Never had

28、he earned so much money before in his life.Following up atAs a proverb says,”A rose hand is fragrant.”It was the Merediths selfless support that helped the Bernard.Without the Merediths generous help,the Bernard couldnt have gone through the bitter period.Every week he had earned some money to take

29、home.With time went by,their life became better and better.When he found that his father could be treated very well and his parents often smiled at him happily,he realized all he did was so meaningful.More people visited the“little pop-corn boy”to buy more popcorn just for helping the family willing

30、ly.All that happened was because of other childrens kindness and their clever idea,and the way he carried it out.going by/As time went byBernard began to do voluntary work in the community to help those in need.Where there is great love,there are always miracles.。.Para.1When Mrs.Meredith heard of th

31、e idea,she thought it was a good one,too.Without thinking twice,they couldnt wait to prepare the corn.The children learnt to take charge of the work,busy popping the corn,while their mother went out to buy the bags.The first time they smelt the sweet taste,they couldnt help screaming.Later they foun

32、d it was popular with neighbors.They hoped Bernard could start out on this business.After Bernard learnt about their desire，he felt grateful to all of them for their kindness.The three children decided,every Saturday,to help sell popcorn for Bernard.Para.2With everything ready,Bernard started out on

33、 his new business.Following the first customer,more and more people turned up at the Bernards popcorn shop.Never had he earned so much money before in his life.When he found that his father could be treated very well and his parents often smiled at him happily,he realized all he did was so meaningfu

34、l.More people visited the“little pop-corn boy”to buy more popcorn just for helping the family willingly.All that happened was because of other childrens kindness and their clever idea,and the way he carried it out.With time going by,Bernard began to do voluntary work in the community to help those i

35、n need.Where there is great love,there are always miracles.One possible version:Para.1When Mrs.Meredith heard of the idea,she thought it was a good one,too.Then Mrs.Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine.After that,Mrs.Meredith,together with her three children,paid an

36、other visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan.Needless to say,they were deeply moved,especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family.A few days later,the machine was delivered to Mrs.Merediths doorstep.And it wasnt long before they got the hang of using the m

37、achine to make popcorn.get the hang of 掌握掌握.的窍门的窍门Para.2With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.Although it was a hard time and things were tight for everybody,Bernards business worked out quite well.He carried the popcorn on his small bike,going from door to door to sell it.Pe

38、ople were surprised to see such a little,poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors,but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two.It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.Para 1:When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it a good

39、 one,too.She nodded with a smile and encouraged the children，“Lets get started！”Immediately，Clara volunteered to get the big box of corn and prepared the microwave oven to make popcorn.At the same time,John went to purchase some paper bags and arranged all the stuff in place.Harry ran to Bernards an

40、d dragged him to the scene.After hearing the explanation,Bernard was overwhelmed with excitement and gratitude.They can hardly wait.Time went by swiftly,and the children laughed,carrying out their great“project”.Joy filled the yard and everyones heart.One Possible Version:Para 2:With everything read

41、y,Bernard started out on his new business.Carrying all the paper bags,he called out,“Popcorn！50 cents for one extra-large pack！”People started to gather around him,which drew even more people.Everyone is ready to buy one pack to support him.The air was rich with happiness and kindness.Within no time

42、,Bernard sold out all popcorn and earned quite some money.On returning,he thanked the Meredith family with watery eyes.For Clara，Harry and John，it was an unforgettable experience as well.It turned out that their efforts not only helped a brother in need,but also gave themselves the sweet taste of he

43、lping others.How to complete a narrative articleStep one:thorough reading(who;when;where;what;why;how)Step two:logical plotting(the plot,the given two sentences,reasonable ending)Step three:vivid writing(linking words,details,sentence structures)31Polish your continued story&write it on your notebook.