高中英语-作文新视点-英语作文写作技巧课件1.ppt

1、英语书面表达指导英语书面表达指导 1 General structure1 General structure3 Advanced expressions3 Advanced expressionsVarious structuresVarious structuresGraceful wordsGraceful words2 Linking words2 Linking wordsElements of a passageTopic sentenceTopic sentence Supporting Supporting sentencessentences Concluding sente

2、nce Concluding sentence一、文章总体模板一、文章总体模板1.文章开头的总体交待文章开头的总体交待 起起（引出主题）引出主题）A.Recently,we had a discussion about B.we carried out a survey of C.When it comes to the topic whether 2.呈现不同观点的句式呈现不同观点的句式 转承转承（陈述观点）（陈述观点）A.Some of them are in favor of the idea that However,others hold a completely opposite

3、opinion.B.Some people firmly believe that.Others argue that 呈现论据时常用的连接词呈现论据时常用的连接词in the first place,_(原因一).Furthermore,in the second place,_(原因二).So it goes without saying that _(观点一).Some people hold the idea that_(观点二).In their point of view,on the one hand，_(原因一).On the other hand,_(原因二).Therefo

4、re,there is no doubt that _(观点二).3.结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语 结结（总结观点）总结观点）As far as Im concerned,/From my point of view,/To sum up,方法一方法一:使用多种句子结构使用多种句子结构 If she is compared with other teachers,we find she pays more attention to her way of teaching.(状语)Compared with other teachers,she pays mo

5、re attention to Compared with other teachers,she pays more attention to his way of teaching.his way of teaching.2 You should keep silent at the meeting unless you are invited to speak.(连词+分词)Unless invited ,you should keep silent at the meeting.Unless invited ,you should keep silent at the meeting.3

6、He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.(倒装/强调)Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishnessNot until he returned home did he realize his foolishnessIt was not until he returned home that he realized his foolishness.It was not until he returned home that he realized his f

7、oolishness.二、高分作文技巧二、高分作文技巧4 We can achieve a satisfying grade by changing the way we study.(only倒装).5 How should we protect eyesight?It still remains a question among us.(主语从句)6 We should emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight.(cant too much)Only by changing the way we study can we ach

8、ieve a satisfying grade.Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a satisfying grade.How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.We cant emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight too much.We cant emphasi

9、ze the importance of protecting our eyesight too much.方法二方法二:善用高级词汇善用高级词汇Which is better?1 1 周末我们会有很多作业要做周末我们会有很多作业要做.A We have endless homework to do at the weekend.A We have endless homework to do at the weekend.B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.B We have a lot of homework to do at

10、the weekend.2 2 在我所有的老师里在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很毛老师给我留下了很深的印象深的印象.A Of all my teachers,I still remember Mr Moore.A Of all my teachers,I still remember Mr Moore.B Of all my teachers,Mr Moore gave me the deepest impression.B Of all my teachers,Mr Moore gave me the deepest impression.3 3 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子高级培训

11、班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。感到精疲力尽。A.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,A.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,feeling very tired.feeling very tired.B.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,B.His wife came back home after the advanced training cl

12、ass,feeling very exhausted.feeling very exhausted.4.4.他没听我课上讲的东西。他没听我课上讲的东西。A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.B He didnt listen to what I said in the class.B He didnt listen to what I said in the class.When it comes to the issue of,

13、the majority of people seem to get accustomed to the idea that However,attitudes towardsvary from person to person.some people firmly believe that,there are some factorscontributing to this attitude as follows,in the first place,in the second place,.On top of that,As a matter of fact,it is not often

14、 the case.Others have a preference of,there are several remarkable reasons.For one thing,for another On my part,.1.利用模板利用模板方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明、附加成分作解释说明例一：这样更方便照顾父母。例一：这样更方便照顾父母。拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。原因原因 as they are getting older and older.Owing to/because例二：因广告过多，例二：因广告过多，影片放映

15、晚点影片放映晚点。拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火。后果后果 which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.It will be much more convenient to look after your parentsThere were too many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film

16、,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明、附加成分作解释说明条件条件 目的目的 例三：安全出口（例三：安全出口（exit）标志不明，）标志不明，存在安全隐患存在安全隐患(potential hazard）。）。拓展：万一遇到危险，观众难以逃脱。In case of danger,it is difficult for the audience to escape.例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查 We did a survey about how our high school students communicate with each other

17、during the holiday拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式 In order to learn about how our high school students communicate with each other during the holiday,we did a survey with the help of my classmates.The exit is not clear,so there will be potential hazard.1 1、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体的表情，集体的信念。、纪律是集体的面貌，集体的声音，集体的动作，集体

18、的表情，集体的信念。2 2、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。3 3、反思自我时展示了勇气，自我反思是一切思想的源泉。、反思自我时展示了勇气，自我反思是一切思想的源泉。4 4、在教师手里操着幼年人的命运，便操着民族和人类的命运。一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。、在教师手里操着幼年人的命运，便操着民族和人类的命运。一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。5 5、诚实比一切智谋更好，而且它是智谋的基本条件。、诚实比一切智谋更好，而且它是智谋的基本条件。6 6、做老师的只要有一次向学生撒谎撒漏了底，就可能使他的全

19、部教育成果从此为之失败。、做老师的只要有一次向学生撒谎撒漏了底，就可能使他的全部教育成果从此为之失败。20222022年年1111月月2022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-711/7/202211/7/20227 7、凡为教者必期于达到不须教。对人以诚信，人不欺我、凡为教者必期于达到不须教。对人以诚信，人不欺我;对事以诚信，事无不成。对事以诚信，事无不成。2022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-7November 7,2022November 7,20228 8、教育者，非为已往，非为现在，而专为

20、将来。、教育者，非为已往，非为现在，而专为将来。2022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-72022-11-7方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容2、附加成分作解释说明、附加成分作解释说明(1)表达不同原因的概括语表达不同原因的概括语There are several reasons for this.The reasons are as follows.The reason foris thatThe reason why is that(2)表示无需说明的事实的概括语：表示无需说明的事实的概括语

21、：It goes without saying thatIts needless to say thatNeedless to say,Its obvious that3.加谚语加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.3.添加谚语添加谚语加谚语加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力

22、于学习集中注意力于学习We should focus our mind on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should focus our mind on our studies.怎么添加谚语？怎么添加谚语？方法方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容常用谚语常用谚语(Proverb)Strike the iron while it is hot.趁热打铁。趁热打铁。Think twice before you do.三思而后行。三思而后行。Practice

23、makes perfect.熟能生巧。熟能生巧。A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。入乡随俗。Do it now.机不可失，时不再来。机不可失，时不再来。Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水难收。覆水难收。An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果

24、，医生远离我。医生远离我。All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of pl

25、astic bags,refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees and save water and energy.4.举例说明举例说明人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）Many populated areas suffer from many natural disasters such as flood,hurricanes,droughts or other disasters.珍惜每一滴水珍惜每一滴水Therefore,we should no longer be indiffer

26、ent about this.To protect our valuable water resources,we should call on people to cherish every drop of water.Otherwise,maybe the last drops of water will be our tears.As middle school students,we also have a part to play.Do remember:we are not saving water,we are saving our own life.With everyone

27、doing his bit,we can make a difference.5.结尾提出倡议或号召结尾提出倡议或号召As students,we should start from ourselves.Here Id like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment.With everyone doing his bit,we can change the present situation.参加俱乐部或活动参加俱乐部或活动Dont hesitate.It will be great fun!Don

28、t wait.Join us now!Since it has so many benefits,what are you waiting for?Start to join us now!保护环境保护环境“短话长说短话长说”方法：方法：1.利用模板利用模板 2.附加成分作解释说明附加成分作解释说明 3.加谚语加谚语(Proverb)4.举例说明举例说明 5.结尾提出倡议或号召结尾提出倡议或号召 写作任务写作任务 现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重，很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章 参考词汇：肥胖：obesity 垃圾食品：junk food要求：1.字数150左右 2.对所有要点要适当发挥，

29、不要简单翻译。3.开头已给出，不计入总数Recently,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned._ 原因缺少运动饮食结构不合理建议建议多参加体育锻炼多参加体育锻炼多吃健康食品，多吃健康食品，远离垃圾远离垃圾食品食品 要点分析要点分析如何起、转、承、结如何起、转、承、结On my part,利用模板利用模板When it comes to the phenomenon of teen obesity,our parents are in great concern.Why are so many ki

30、ds getting fatter and fatter?Some are,others areBecause of the popularity of TV and computers,and because students have so much homework to do,they are getting less exercise than before.1.缺少运动缺少运动 Because of the popularity of TV and computers,and students are burdened with so much homework,Because p

31、eoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks,which might make the kids overweight.2.饮食结构不合理饮食结构不合理 In order to lose weight and stay healthy,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV

32、or the computer and do more exercise.建议1.多参加体育锻炼 As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables,and less fast food and junk food.2.多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品Last but not least,they should make a proper time schedule so that they c

33、an balance our exercise and studies.3.制定合理的计划，时间表合成文章合成文章 Recently,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned.Why are teens getting fatter and fatter?In my opinion,there are two remarkable reasons for this problem.Firstly,because of the popularity of TV and computers,and stud

34、ents are burdeded with so much homework to do.They are getting less exercise than before.Secondly,because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks,which might make the kids overweight.For another,

35、On the other hand,arousedFor one thing,On the one hand,In order to lose weight and stay healthy,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits,vegetables,less fast food and junk food.Last but not least,they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.Thanks for you listeningThanks for you listening Bye-bye!Bye-bye!