高中英语写作-健康话题课件.pptx

1、如何写与如何写与“健康问题健康问题”有关的话题作文有关的话题作文【案例呈现【案例呈现】2009年年6月月6日是第十四个全国日是第十四个全国“爱爱眼日眼日”，今年，今年“爱眼日爱眼日”活动的主题为活动的主题为“关注青少年眼健康关注青少年眼健康”。你。你(李华李华)作为作为学校广播站的一名播音员，打算在周一学校广播站的一名播音员，打算在周一下午的英文频道下午的英文频道健康之声健康之声广播节目广播节目中分析中分析近视眼形成的原因并介绍科学用眼的知近视眼形成的原因并介绍科学用眼的知识和方法，帮助全体学生培养良好的用识和方法，帮助全体学生培养良好的用眼习惯，防止近视。眼习惯，防止近视。注意：注意：1.词

2、数：词数：100左右。左右。2.文章的开头和结尾已经给出，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。但不计入总词数。Good afternoon,everyone.This is Li Hua at the school radio station.June 6,2009 is the 14th National Eye Care Day.Today I will talk about how to protect our eyesight._.I hope our report might bring your attention to the problem and be helpful

3、for you.Thank you for listening.【写作指导【写作指导】*审题定调：本文主要通过广播节目的形式来宣传介绍科审题定调：本文主要通过广播节目的形式来宣传介绍科学用眼的知识和方法，属于说明文。在有限的词数里要宣学用眼的知识和方法，属于说明文。在有限的词数里要宣传这一活动，内容应该涉及：传这一活动，内容应该涉及：1.学校中近视眼的学生不断增多（现象，可以列数字）；学校中近视眼的学生不断增多（现象，可以列数字）；2.近视形成的原因；近视形成的原因；3.如何保护视力（解决的办法）。时态用一般现在时；人如何保护视力（解决的办法）。时态用一般现在时；人称用第一人称或第二人称。称用

4、第一人称或第二人称。*布局谋篇：布局谋篇：Para.1 The subject(已给出已给出)&Problem the current situation increasing number of students with short-sightednessPara.2 Reasons students do a lot of reading;read in bed;dont read in well-lit rooms;&Solutions do eye exercises;.Para.3 Closing(已给出已给出)*常用表达：常用表达：1.We should take the fol

5、lowing measures to protect our eyesight.2.The number of students who wear glasses is increasing.3.Comparison of the number to the last years figure,we find.4.Reasons for the problem are.5.Solutions to the problem are.6.We have interviewed a doctor about what students can do to protect.7.The doctor s

6、trongly suggests that.【范文欣赏【范文欣赏】Para.1（现状、问题）（现状、问题）Good afternoon,everyone.This is Li Hua at the school radio station.June 6,2009 is the 14th National Eye Care Day.Today I will talk about how to protect our eyesight.I am sure that you have noticed that the number of teenagers with short-sightednes

7、s is increasing.Para.2（原因、办法）（原因、办法）Why do so many children suffer from this problem?The main reason is that many students formed a bad habit of using their eyes,such as reading in bed or in a badly-lit room.The trouble is that children fall behind in their school work when they cant see things clea

8、rly.So we should take action immediately to protect our eyesight.We should do eye exercises both at school and at home,look out of the window during break time,examine our eyesight regularly and take some eyesight supplements such as Vitamins A,C and E.Para.3（呼吁、希望）（呼吁、希望）I hope our report might bring your attention to the problem and be helpful for you.Thank you for listening.HomeworkWrite a passage about a small health problem that you have had.1.Begin with some information about yourself.2.Say what the problem was.3.Explain what you did or what happened.4.Explain how things ended.