英语基础写作学习培训课件.ppt

1、基础写作基础写作基础写作的命题特点：基础写作的命题特点：考生按所给的内容及要求，用考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。题型题型题量题量赋分赋分时间（分钟）时间（分钟）基础写作基础写作1 115151010 基础写作的评分标准？12 34句子内容的完整性完整性(Completeness)句子结构的正确性正确性(correctness)句子结构的复杂性复杂性(Variety)句子内容的连贯性连贯性

2、(Coherence)1 Read the topic,then organize the messages in 5 sentences 2 Think of the words,phrases,sentence structures you may use in writing.3 Change the sentence structure where necessary;4 Add some conjunctions if needed.Short essay writing is,in fact,to test a students four abilities,as shown in

3、 the following diagram.Ability to take in the information given摄取信息的能力Ability to analyze what is involved in the topic分析信息的能力Ability to build up the frame of the composition构筑信息的能力Ability to express yourself表达信息的能力一、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。要求：要求：1.标题标题:Something about Lihua 2.必须使用必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内

4、容个句子介绍全部所给内容.3.将五个句子组织成连贯的短文将五个句子组织成连贯的短文.姓名姓名:李华李华学校学校:育才中学育才中学地址地址:中国广州育才路中国广州育才路138号号 身高身高:180cm 头发颜色头发颜色:黑色黑色 全家人口全家人口:3人人 父母职业父母职业:教师教师 爱好爱好:集邮和硬币集邮和硬币 掌握外语情况掌握外语情况:英语英语写作指导：先写成简单句子，然后再做组合，连成通顺的5句短文:1.Lihua is a student from Yucai Middle School.2.He is 180cm tall.His fair is black.His family is

5、 at 138,Yucai Road,Guangzhou,China.His family has three people.Both his parents are teachers.Lihua has two hobbies:collecting stamps and coins.3.He knows English well and can speak perfect English.一、一、Something about Lihua Lihua,who is 180cm tall with black hair,is a student from Yucai Middle School

6、.His family,which is at 138,Yucai Road,Guangzhou,China,has got three people.Both his parents are teachers.Lihua has two hobbies,which are collecting stamps and coins.He knows English well and can speak perfect English.December 18,2006二、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。1、标题：Top Meal of the Day 2、必须使用五个句子介

7、绍全部所给的内容。3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。原因：晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一会。结果：上课总想睡觉。注意力下降。考试成绩不理想。建议：早餐不可少，它提供全天所需的能量的30%，青少年健康应从早餐抓起。Some students study late into the night.They choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed.As a result,they tend to be sleepy all day.They have bad memories.It is har

8、d for them to get high marks in all kinds of exams.As a matter of fact/In fact,morning meal plays an important part in our daily life.It can provide 30%of the whole days energy.We students should start with a regular breakfast.二、二、Top Meal of the DaySome students,who study late into the night,choose

9、 to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed.As a result,they tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories,so it s hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of tests.In fact,the morning meal plays an important part in our daily life.It can provide 30%of the whole days

10、energy.For a creative mind and better judgment school students should start their day with a regular breakfast.三、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。1、标题标题:What Can We Do for the Olympics of 2008?2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。(1)2008年奥运会是年奥运会是21世纪重大体育比赛之一，世纪重大体育比赛之一，包括中

11、国在内的每个国家都在为此做准备。包括中国在内的每个国家都在为此做准备。(2)奥运会的作用。奥运会的作用。(3)中国为举办奥运会，将要做些什么？中国为举办奥运会，将要做些什么？(4)你个人该做些什么？你个人该做些什么？1.The Olympic Games of 2008 will be held in Beijing.2.It is one of the most important events in the history of sports.3.Every country in the world,including China,is preparing for it.4.It will

12、 do good to the friendship between China and any other country in the world.5.We should try to improve our environment and build enough stadiums as well as widening the roads in Beijing.6.As a student,I must try to learn English well and try to do something for the Olympic Games.三、三、The Olympic Game

13、s of 2008 The Olympic Games of 2008,which is one of the most important events in the history of sports,will be held in Beijing.Every country in the world,including China,is preparing for it.It will do good to the friendship between China and any other country in the world.We should try to improve ou

14、r environment and build enough stadiums as well as widening the roads in Beijing.As a student,I must try to learn English well and try to do something for the Olympic Games.四、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。1、标题标题:Its No Good using Mobile for Students 2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短

15、文。将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。学生不宜使用手机的理由：学生不宜使用手机的理由：手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且加重经济负担。手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且加重经济负担。若课堂接听手机会影响听课，若课堂接听手机会影响听课，也会影响老师和其他同学。也会影响老师和其他同学。学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。手机会引起学生之间的相互攀比，带来不好的影响。手机会引起学生之间的相互攀比，带来不好的影响。1.It cannot bring convenience but adds to the students burden in finance.2

16、.Some students make a call with their mobile phones in the classroom.3.It stops the other classmates from fixing on their study.4.They cant pay attention to their teachers teaching in class by sending messages to others or playing the mobile phone games.5.It may lead to students showing off themselv

17、es by owning nice and expensive mobile phones.四、Its No Good using Mobile for Students The answer to“Is it good using mobile phone for students?”is“No”for the following reasons:Firstly,it adds to the students burden in finance together with its side effects,such as their not paying attention to their

18、 teachers teaching in class by sending messages to others.It may lead to students showing off themselves by owning nice and expensive mobile phones.Some students make a call with their mobile phones in the classroom,which stops the other classmates from fixing on their study.So I dont think it good for students to use mobile phone at school.I think its not wrong to follow the fashion,but the most important thing is to use the mobile phone in a right way.