中考英语作文指导教学课件(共46张).ppt

1、河北省中考作文评分标准河北省中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读1.审题不清，要点不全2.单词拼写、标点符号、字体等低级错误多 3.句子结构、用词不地道，不准确4.缺乏好的句式，词汇不丰富5.卷面脏乱，字体不规范，书写太拥挤，勾画 过多6.开头罗嗦

2、，不能直入主题。层次不分明，主 体部分内容欠充实，不生动，结尾草率书面表达中学生常有的问题书面表达中学生常有的问题一、掌握正确的写作技巧非常重要一、掌握正确的写作技巧非常重要 据报道韩国将用电子课本取代学校的纸质课本。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正就“Paper Books or E-books?”这一话题征文。请你根据下面提供的信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿，并谈谈你的看法。E-books1.Easy to take2.Protect environment3.Look up easily Paper books1.Take notes2.Practice handwriting3.Bad fo

3、r eyes注意：1.短文应包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；2.词数不少于80。题目和开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。Its reported that all schools in Korea will use e-books instead of paper books at school.Example 1Before writing一、审一、审.认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心1.Use right subjects (明确主语尤其是人称人称)2.Use proper tense（使用正确的时态时态）3.How many par

4、ts（分成几部分）they(books)we一般现在时三个部分时态，人称时态，人称时态，人称时态，人称 二、列列.用简单的句子或短语列出用简单的句子或短语列出提纲提纲Part One.Part One.电子图书的优点。1.1.携带轻便携带轻便,2.,2.利于环保利于环保,3.,3.容易查询容易查询 Part Two.Part Two.纸质课本纸质课本的优点。的优点。1.1.方便做笔记方便做笔记,2.,2.有利于书写有利于书写,3.,3.不会伤眼睛不会伤眼睛。Part ThreePart Three.自身观点。自身观点。时态，人称时态，人称时态，人称时态，人称时态，人称时态，人称 三、加加.加首

5、尾，使结构完整。加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。开门见山式开门见山式回忆回忆式式开头开头疑疑问问式式开头开头倒叙式开头倒叙式开头 三、加加.加首尾，使结构完整。加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。自然结尾，点明主题自然结尾，点明主题首尾呼应，升华主题首尾呼应，升华主题反问结尾，引起深思反问结尾，引起深思表达祝愿，阐述愿望表达祝愿，阐述愿望三、加加.加首尾，使结构完整。加首尾，使结构完整。Its reported that all schools in Korea will use E-boo

6、ks instead of paper books at school.Many people think this is good news because e-books have many advantages.-But e-books makers should do a lot of things to improve them so that they wont do harm to our eyes.四、连连.恰当运用关联词句，恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。各个部分衔接自然。But e-books makers should do a l

7、ot of things to improve them so that they wont do harm to our eyesight.1.表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折:but,however,although,though,after all,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,notbut,on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解释

8、:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words;8.表示顺序:firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end;9.表示强调:also,besides,whats more,actually,in fact,10.表示结论:in a word,generally speaking,五、五、美美1.Use the familiar words and structures1.Use the fa

9、miliar words and structures （使用熟悉的词句）（使用熟悉的词句）2.2.Use beautiful words and structuresUse beautiful words and structures(选好的词句，选好的词句，美化美化文章文章)在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。3.Write neatly and correctly.3.Write neatly and correctly.书写规范书写规范,卷面整洁卷面整洁。We can use e-books to finish our homework quickl

10、y.So I think if we use e-books,we can save a lot of time to rest.Whats more,we can find out anything we need in them quickly.First,paper books are more convenient.And we can write notes in them.We should use e-books because we live in modern cities and we should share the result of the development o

11、f the technology.检查并修改错误检查并修改错误 看词数是否达到要求。看有无遗漏要点 看文体格式是否正确规范 检查时态是否正确，主谓语人称是否一致，代词使用是否正确，单词拼写，标点符号是否正确 句子形式是否符合英语的表达习惯 Remember:Remember:Please scratch if you get enough time.打草稿打草稿六、查六、查 In Korea,e-books will instead of paper books.Use the e-books dont have pollution.If we use e-books,we neednt to

12、 take a big heavy bag to school.If you want,you should bought it.take the place ofIn Korea,people will use e-books instead of paper books in South Karea.E-books dont cause pollution.dont need to take/neednt take want it buy查查美美连连加加列列审审作文作文用关联词句用关联词句美化文章美化文章审清题意审清题意加上首尾加上首尾列出要点列出要点检查错误检查错误 Writing sk

13、illssix steps Paper Books or E-books?Its reported that all schools in Korea will use e-books.Many people think this is good news because e-books have many advantages.First of all,they are good for the environment,since they can save lots of paper and trees.Besides,they are very convenient.To get a p

14、aper book,We have to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop.But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.With e-books,our teachers neednt write on the blackboard and we neednt clean the blackboard every day.However,paper books also have some advantages.With paper books,we can mak

15、e notes easily.It is good for us to practice handwriting.It wont do so much harm to our eyes as e-books do.I prefer e-books.It can make us enjoy life better.But e-books makers should do a lot of things to improve them so that they wont do harm to our eyes.二、重视模仿二、重视模仿 善于积累善于积累brainstormphysical prob

16、lemsWhat words or phrases can you think of when you see the word“physical problems”?Example 2教材文本有利于学生写作教材文本有利于学生写作have a stomachachehave a feverhave a cold have a cough have a sore back have a sore throathave a headachehave a toothacheillnessphysical problems 身体健康问题身体健康问题1.It is very important to k

17、eep healthy.2.How can we keep healthy？3.We cant go to sleep too late.4.We cant get up too late.5.We should eat the food healthily.6.We should do more exercise.关于健康问题常用句关于健康问题常用句春天来了，容易患感冒，为了保持健康，某英语网春天来了，容易患感冒，为了保持健康，某英语网站正在征集有关保持健康建议的稿件，请结合以下站正在征集有关保持健康建议的稿件，请结合以下图表写一篇应征短文。图表写一篇应征短文。How to keep hea

18、lthyeatothersdrinkmore vegetables and fruitdo more exerciseless junk foodrun and do morning exercisePlay basketball and footballmore water How to keep healthy Spring is coming.Its easy for us to get a cold during this time.Here is some advice about how to keep healthy.First,we should drink more wate

19、r.Wed better drink hot tea with honey.Second,we must eat more vegetables and fruit.Were supposed to eat less junk food.Third,we should do more exercise,such as running,doing morning exercises and so on.Whats more,we all should have enough sleep.Staying up late is bad for our health.Besides,wed bette

20、r go to bed early and get up early.Health is so important for everyone.I hope everyone will have a healthy lifestyle and stay healthy.We should/shouldntWe are supposed toWed betterWed better notIts good toWhy not doDoing sth.is 提建议提建议 had better(not)do.最好(不)做.how about/what about doing 怎么样?I think y

21、ou should do.我认为你应该 I suggest/advice that you should do.我建议你做 If I were you,I would do.我要是你的话，我会做 Its best to do.最好做 Why not do/Why dont you do?为什么不典型句型和美句积累 水水环环境境 1.Its our duty to save water.2.As we know,water is very important to man.3.we cant live without water.4.The amount of water which is su

22、itable to drink is less and less.5.But some people dont care about it.典型句型和美句积累典型句型和美句积累 中考满分作文必背中考满分作文必背7类句型类句型 1).Its adj for sb to do 做对某人来说2).so that 如此 以至于 too to do 太 而不能 such that 如此 以至于3).notuntil 直到才 4).That is why+句子 那是的原因5).That is because+句子 那是因为6).It is said that+句子 据说 It is reported th

23、at+句子 据报道7）as we all know,+句子 据我们所知语言学习语言学习 1.My favorite subject is English。2.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。3.It is used by travelers and business people all over the world.典型句型和美句积累 My Hobby I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3.Though I am always

24、 busy with my study,I would like to spend time on my hobbies，such as playing the piano，surfing the Internet.兴趣爱好兴趣爱好典型句型和美句积累 1.His name is Jack.2.He was born in London in 1982.3.He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52kilos.写人记事写人记事典型句型和美句积累旅游和介绍地方旅游和介绍地方 1.Last Sunday（Saturday，），it was sunny（rainy，win

25、dy，foggy，）2.I got up very early（late）。After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike，bus,.典型句型和美句积累新生事物评价新生事物评价 1.Computer is becoming more and more important 2.we should make good use of it.3.It maybe get in the way of（妨碍）our study.4.We can do lots of things with it.典型句型和美句积累梦想与未来梦想与未来 Recently

26、we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students ideal jobs.Heres a report about my group members ideas.Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing.Kate wants to be a gardener,she lives plants,and she wants to make the cities better.Mik

27、e would like to be a writer.Hed like to share his wonderful stories with others.Tom would like to be a cook.Hed like to cook delicious food for others.I would like to be a policeman.I want to protect the people safe.Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.典型句型和美句积累中考作文结尾得出结论的五种万能句中

28、考作文结尾得出结论的五种万能句 1、Taking all these factors into consideration，we naturally come to the conclusion that把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论2、Taking into account all these factors，we may reasonably come to the conclusion that 考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论3、Therefore，wed better come to the conclusion that 因此，我们最好得出这样的结论4、The

29、re is no doubt that has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问，有优点也有缺点。5、All in all，we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之，我们没有是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。典型句型和美句积累中考英语作文必备的中考英语作文必备的10个谚语个谚语1.Every coin has two

30、sides.每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物的两面性。2.The winter is coming and the spring is not far.冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗?3.Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。4.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。5.Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。6.A fall into a pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。7.A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。8.Dont

31、put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日9.Time and tide wait for no man.时不我待。10.How time flies.时光如梭。典型句型和美句积累2016热点话题 1.全民读书活动；2.乐于助人、德育的话题；3.学生们喜欢的明星以及电视节目等；4.“低头族”；5.家庭、人口问题：中国实行二孩政策，6.安全自救问题（校园安全等）；7.环保问题；8.家乡的变化；Practice makes perfect!Example 3 水是万物之源，没有水，人类、动植物都不能存活。因此，人人都有保护和节约用水

32、的职责。某英文报开展了以“水”为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面图表信息写一篇短文参加征文。短文内容包括水的重要性、水的用途、水的现状及我们应该如何保护和节约用水。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计词数。Water importance usage(用途用途)Situation（现状）（现状）Water protectionWhat can we use it for?Less and less,pollutedHow can we save water?How can we stop water po

33、llution?.Water is very important for humans,animals and plants.Importance:Do you think water is important for us?If there was no water,What would happen?Usage:What can we use water for?Before writingBefore writing SituationSituation（现状）（现状）Less and less clean water.Water pollutionWater pollution Wat

34、er protectionHow can we save water?How can we stop water pollution?.Turn off the taps.Reuse and recycle.Call on people to save waterWe should/shouldntWe are supposed toWed betterWed better notIts good toWhy not doDoing sth.is Water is very important for humans,animals and plants.Humans and animals d

35、rink water every day.Plants need water to grow.No living things can live without water.But there is less and less clean water on the earth.Some people waste water in their daily lives.They even throw rubbish everywhere.It pollutes water seriously.Some factories pour waste water into rivers or lakes.

36、More and more water is polluted.So we should do something to protect water.We must save erery drop of water.We are supposed to turn off the taps after we use them.Wed better reuse and recycle the water we used.Whats more,we can call on more people to save water.Lets takeactions now.1.关于人们有不同的观点。一些人认

37、为There are different opinions among people as to _。Some people suggest that_。2.俗话说（常言道），它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying_。Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.3.现在，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是。Today，_，which have brought a lot of

38、 harms in our daily life.First，_ Second，_。What makes things worse is that_。4.现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外（而且）。Nowadays，it is common to _。Many people like _because _。Besides，_。5.任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and _is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.6.关于人们的观点

39、各不相同，一些人认为（说），在他们看来，Peoples opinions about _ vary from person to person.Some people say that _。To them，_。7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problem _which is becoming more and more serious.8.已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。_ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the y

40、oung and heated debates are right on theirway.9.在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。_ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？A

41、ccording to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the/chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that_while.Obviously，_，but why？11、最近，问题已引起人们的关注。Recently，the problem of has aroused peoples concern.12、互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。Internet has been playing an increasingly import

42、ant role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.13、如今，（人口过剩）已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。Nowadays，（overpopulation）has become a problem we have to face.14、随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为 With the development of science and technology，more and more people believe that