1、Life in the Future Writing Lead in My life in ten years:Pre-writing:life in ten years Family/personal life jobfree time activitiesFinish the mind map?years oldbe single/get marriedhave a happy/harmonious familyhusband/wife/child/kidteacher,doctor,vet,social workers architect writer guide engineer.li
2、ve with名词名词形容词形容词短语等短语等work inascolleaguesget along well withbusy/meaningful/well-paidread booksTravel around the worldTake exercisecook/dance/drawcolorful/wonderfulThomasEmmaKenMaryRead what four students predict for the future:Sentence structures:1.Im not really sure what I will be doing in ten ye
3、ars from now.2.I guess that Ill be/do 3.Ill probably be(doing)4.I hope Ill/I imagine that Ill5.I can definitely tell you that Ill be5.I will definitely do/be.6.There is one thing I really want to dounsuresureWriting Task:15mins 一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我十年后的我”、请、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文:根据下列要求和你
4、的想象完成短文:1.1.家庭家庭 2.2.工作工作 3.3.业余生活业余生活注意:注意:1 1、字字数数100100字字左右;左右;2 2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯贯 3.3.开头语已为你写好开头语已为你写好I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.1.Is the handwriting good?2.Is it well-organized?3.Is it all about
5、 the topic?4.Are there any mistakes in the article?5.Are there any beautiful sentences in the article?Post-writing:Group-assessment(组内互评)组内互评)(Choose the best one)Rubrics(评价准则)评价准则)Who is the best writer?Post-writing:全全班班展展示示One Possible VersionI often imagine what my life will be like in the future
6、.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family.Probably with a lovely child.I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues,I will do a good job in whate
7、ver I do.In my free time,I will continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I will travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.(118words)Post-writing:Para1:Para2:Para3:Structure(结(结构)构)(Introduction)(Main body)d
8、etails1.family 2.job3.free time activities(summary)Person(人称)(人称)Tense(时态)(时态)Details(细节)细节)+comments(评价)(评价)I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.All in all,I think I will have a wonderful and meaningful life in ten years.I think my life will be very different in ten years.Details
9、(细节)细节)+comments(评价)(评价)Details(细节)细节)+comments(评价)(评价)Pay attention to the 3 tips:第一人称第一人称一般将来时/将来进行时 I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family.Probably with a lovely child.I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.I will enjoy my work and get along wel
10、l with my colleagues,I will do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I will continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I will travel around the world.linking words(衔接词):(衔接词):and,furthermore,besides,in addition1.Share your essay with your c
11、lassmates2.Rewrite your essayPre-writing:life in ten years Family/personal life jobfree time activitiesMy life in ten years:36 years oldget marriedhave a harmonious(和谐的)(和谐的)familyhusband/childA teacherwork in a kindergartenget along well withmeaningfultravel around the worlddo yogacook for my familycolorful life in ten years
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