1、 写作话题:写作话题:Feelings and moods (情感与情绪情感与情绪)一、一、Language Aims.(语言知识目标语言知识目标)1.学会使用本单元所学的词块和句型来表达自己的思想、情绪和行为。2.学习写作的策略,掌握本单元的写作思路与技巧。二、二、Ability Aims.(能力目标(能力目标)培养学生的合作探究能力、阅读与写作和赏析能力。三、三、Emotional Aims.(情感目标情感目标)尝试学习勇敢面对自己的内心情感需求,监控自己的行 为,努力实现自己的需求。培养学生积极向上的心态,珍 惜所有人对自己的爱,努力学习让自己变得更加优秀回报 父母与社会!Do they
2、 feel happy?-Birthday cake.What will we eat?What will she receive?-Some birthday giftsWhat is he eating?Does he receive any gifts?-Noodles and eggs.-No,he doesnt.Share your happiness.happinessstaying with my parents travelling around the worldgetting good grades readinggetting more moneyliving in a
3、comfortable houseeating delicious food.going to a good high schoolThe Happiest Life As we know,both happiness and sadness are part of our life.As for me,studying,playing and sharing something with my friends is happiness.Happiness is for everyone.When I have difficuties in study at school,my friends
4、 will help me.My parents are worried about my study,I hope I can get good grades on the exams,so all of us will feel very happy.I like playing basketball afterschool,I plan to join a sports club in order to keep healthy.I must continue to exercise to make this dream come true.I can share not only ha
5、ppiness but also sadness with my friends.When Im happy,we often chat together.But when I feel sad,they often cheer me up and make me laugh.A happy heart makes a blooming visage.Now,what I need to do is to be kind and active in my daily life.Beginning(开头开头)Main body(主体主体)Ending(结尾结尾)Topic 1:StudyingT
6、opic 2:PlayingTopic 3:SharingEnjoy the beautiful chunks and sentences.The Happiest Life As we know,both happiness and sadness are part of our life.As for me,studying,playing and sharing something with my friends is happiness.Happiness is for everyone.When I have difficuties in study at school,my fri
7、ends will help me.My parents are worried about my study,I hope I can get good grades on the exams,so all of us will feel very happy.I like playing basketball after school,I plan to join a sports club in order to keep healthy.I must continue to exercise to make this dream come true.I can share not on
8、ly happiness but also sadness with my friends.When Im happy,we often chat together.But when I feel sad,sad,they often cheer me up and make me laugh.A happy heart makes a blooming visage.Now,what I need to do is to be kind and active in my daily life.众所周知众所周知对我而言对我而言为为.而担心而担心我希望我能我希望我能为为了了继续继续.使这个梦想实
9、使这个梦想实现现不但不但而且而且心中快乐,容光焕发。心中快乐,容光焕发。Paragraph1 C:Happiness is studying,playing and sharing.A:Enjoy the happiness with parents and friends.B:How to do in the daily life.Paragraph2 After ReadingParagraph31.get good grades2.be worried about3.too much pressure4.win a competition5.in the future6.feel hap
10、py7.make it better e true/realize/achieve太多压力太多压力使它变得使它变得更好更好赢得一场赢得一场比赛比赛感到开心感到开心取得好取得好成绩成绩在将来在将来实现实现为为而担而担心心根据箭头指向的汉语说出英根据箭头指向的汉语说出英语短语。语短语。match the meaning with the patterns and use them to make sentences.A:I believe that B:As for me C:learnfrom.D:To ones surprise E:As a matter of factF:If we con
11、tinue toG:I hope I can()1.我希望我能我希望我能.()2.令某人吃惊的是令某人吃惊的是()3.事实上事实上()4:我相信我相信()5.如果我们继续如果我们继续()6.对我而言对我而言()7.从从中学习中学习GDEAFBC Example:I believe that I can get good grades on the exams.根据根据Free talk 或参考或参考Reading的信息的信息,请你以请你以“The Happiest thing of my life”为题,写为题,写一篇一篇80词左右的短文词左右的短文和大家分享一下和大家分享一下你你的的快乐生活
12、。快乐生活。内容包括:内容包括:1.在生活中在生活中,你你认为最认为最快乐快乐的事情是什么;的事情是什么;2.你你怎样实现这件快乐的事情怎样实现这件快乐的事情(至少写出至少写出2 个要点个要点);3.你对这件快乐的事情的感想。你对这件快乐的事情的感想。Steps of writing审题审题(examine)提纲提纲(list)成文成文(write)修改修改(correct)美化(美化(beautify)Step1 Think and Fill(想一想,填一填)(想一想,填一填)审题审题(examine)体裁:体裁:_人称:人称:_时态:时态:_第一人称第一人称 一般现在时态、一般过去时态一般
13、现在时态、一般过去时态 记叙文记叙文以以“The Happiest thing of my life”为题为题1.在生活中在生活中,你你认为最认为最快乐快乐的事情是什么;的事情是什么;2.你你怎样做这件快乐的事情;怎样做这件快乐的事情;3.你对这件快乐的事情有什么感想。你对这件快乐的事情有什么感想。beginningEndingStep2 list(列一列(列一列)Main bodyExample:reading/going shopping/getting good gradesHow to achieve the happiest thing?Share your feelings.Ste
14、p3 Write(写一写)(写一写)Famous saying,proverbs and classical sample sentences(名言、谚语与经典例句)(名言、谚语与经典例句)1.Happiness consists in contentment.知足常乐知足常乐.2.Happy is the man who is living by his hobby.以爱好为生的人是幸福的。以爱好为生的人是幸福的。3.Happiness is form courage.(H.Jackson,British writer)幸福是勇气的一种形式。幸福是勇气的一种形式。(英国作家英国作家 杰克逊杰
15、克逊.H.)4.A happy heart makes a blooming visage.心中快乐,容光焕发。心中快乐,容光焕发。5.To young people,learning means more opportunities for better job.对年轻人来说,学习就意味着好工作的机会。对年轻人来说,学习就意味着好工作的机会。请与小组的伙伴们交换习作请与小组的伙伴们交换习作,依据以上提示和下列评价表依据以上提示和下列评价表相互分享与赏析习作相互分享与赏析习作,然后给对方的习然后给对方的习作打分作打分,并推荐出一并推荐出一篇佳作和大家分享。篇佳作和大家分享。【互评互学】作文等级
16、作文等级13-15分分10-12分分7-9分分 4-6分分0-3分分学生签名学生签名老师评分老师评分勾选勾选Step 4 中考作文评分标准第一档(13-15分)信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档(10-12分)信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表达。第三档(7-9分)能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。第四档(4-6分)只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。第五档(1-3分)只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。【评分标准】要点要点内容表达内容表达10分分文章结构文章结构1分分人称时态人称时态2分分
17、句子衔接句子衔接1分分卷面书写卷面书写1分分总分总分 15分分Step 5The Happiest thing of my life I am a middle school student.The happiest thing of my life is staying with my parents in some festivals.As for me,I am very happy because the people around me all love me and they are always kind and helpful to me.In order to keep he
18、althy,my mom cooks delicious food for me every day.I can share the housework with her in my free time.I can share not only happiness but also sadness with my parents.They are worried about my study,but as a matter of fact I can get good grades on the exams.I hope that I can stay with my parents in t
19、he future,I will be very happy.I love them,and they also love me.I must study hard so that I can do more interesting things for my parents.Summary How to write an article about the happiest thing of my life.HomeworkRewrite your article and hand it in.Happiness comes from your heart,not from your surroundings.幸福来自于你的内心世界,幸福来自于你的内心世界,而不是你周围的事物。而不是你周围的事物。
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