中考英语作文公开课课件.pptx

1、 中中 考考 专专 题题 复复 习习 课课Writing书面表达书面表达:是中考英语中的必考是中考英语中的必考题，占卷面总分的题，占卷面总分的12.5%，分，分值为值为15 分分。文章的形成过程：文章的形成过程：单词单词 短语，结构短语，结构+符号符号 句子句子 段落段落 文章文章如何把这些组织一篇文章？如何把这些组织一篇文章？分析文章的形成过程首先，我们必须在头脑中构成一幅mind map.在map的帮助下，我们就能有效的到达我们的目的地。分析结构分析结构 Mike is crazy about football!He loves watching football matches.Of c

2、ourse,he loves playing football too.He often spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school.His parents dont like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30.He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies.He wishes his parents could give him their sup

3、port for his hobbies.IntroductionMain bodyConclusionDiscussion中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】抄抄组组集集连连抓抓审审作文作文集句成段集句成段组段成篇组段成篇审清题意审清题意连词成句连词成句抓住要点抓住要点抄写规范抄写规范 Writing skillssix steps中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】自从实施教育新政策，中学生有了更多自主支配的时自从实施教育新政策，中

4、学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声校园英语之声”栏目就栏目就“如如何更好地利用课余时间何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇参考词汇:make good use of,interest groups social activities,do sports,net bar 不良

5、现象和行不良现象和行为（至少为（至少3点）点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游迷恋网吧，上网打游 3.看法看法我认为我认为建议（至少建议（至少3条）条）1.合理安排时间合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组参加兴趣小组 3.中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】Hello,everybody!Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program.Todays topic is“How to Make Better Use of Our Sp

6、areTime”._中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】第一步第一步:审清题意审清题意认真审题认真审题，明确写作，明确写作主题主题、体裁体裁、人称人称、字数字数、结构结构、时态时态、提示、提示要点要点和和补充信息补充信息具体做法：具体做法：用笔勾画用笔勾画中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，的时间，但有些同学不知如何

7、利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声校园英语之声”栏目就栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：包括：不良现象和不良现象和行为（至少行为（至少3点）点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.看法看法我认为我认为 建议（至少建议（至少3条）条）1.合理安排时间合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组参加兴趣小组 3.注意注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入词左右，广播的开头已给出，不

8、计入总词数总词数主题主题体裁体裁人称人称结构结构时态时态字数字数已知信息已知信息未知信息未知信息以一般以一般现在时现在时为主为主中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】第二步：第二步：列出写作提纲（列出写作提纲（Outline）。）。具体做法：具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏不要遗漏要点！要点！中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】Introduction Main body Conclusionproblemsop

9、inionssuggestionsWrite an outline1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏3.-1.合理安排时间合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组参加兴趣小组3.-中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】1.List some keywords about problems.Phrases:_ _2.List some keywords about opinions.Phrases:_ _ 3.List some keywords about suggest

10、ions.Phrases:_ _ 第三步：抓住要点，列关键词第三步：抓住要点，列关键词中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】1.List some keywords about problems.spend too much time on their hobbies be crazy about play computer games watch too much TV refuse to do homework2.List some keywords about opinions.not good for our

11、 health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to 1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏迷恋网吧，上网打游戏.中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】3.List some keywords about suggestions.plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after-sch

12、ool activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework1.合理安排时间合理安排时间2.参加兴趣小组参加兴趣小组 中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】spend too much time on their hobbies refuse to do homeworkwatch too much TV be crazy about play computer games Whats worse,1.Make sentences with

13、the keywords about problems.sothatMany students spend much time on their hobbies they cant finish their homework on time.some of them watch too much TV,others students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games.Nowadays,we students have much more free time than before.But qui

14、te a number of students dont know how to use the time properly.We dont think its good for their study and health.2.Make sentences with the keywords about opinions.第四步：连词成句第四步：连词成句第五步：集句成段，组段成篇第五步：集句成段，组段成篇中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】第五步：集句成段，组段成篇第五步：集句成段，组段成篇 we can pla

15、n our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies.can set up and join different kinds of interest groups,and take part in some good social activities.we can do some sports.If we have time,we should help parents do some housework.However,how can we make better u

16、se of our spare time?For exampleBesides these,And alsoWe注意添加注意添加主题句，主题句，连接词！连接词！plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after-school activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework3.Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions.The

17、re are many things we can do.中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】How to give this writing an end?Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!Why not put our free time to better use?It is a good way to have a more colorful future.范文展示范文展示Hello,every

18、body!Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program.Todays topic is“How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.Nowadays,we students have much more free time than before.But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly.They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant f

19、inish their homework on time.Also some of them watch too much TV,Whats worse,some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games.We dont think its good for their study and health.However,how can we make better use of our spare time?There are many things we can do.For exa

20、mple,we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies.And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups,take part in some good social activities.Besides these,we can do some sports.If we have time,we should help parents do some house

21、work.Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!how to write a goodcomposition开头开头:开门见山开门见山中间中间结尾结尾:抓要点抓要点,列短语列短语短语扩句短语扩句找连接词找连接词连句成段连句成段与主题相呼应，与主题相呼应，紧扣主题紧扣主题1.压线压线 2.斜度一致斜度一致3.扁扁 4.饱满饱满 5.间隔间隔常见错误常见错误时态是否正确时态是否正确主谓是否一致主谓是否一致要点是否全面要点是否全面人称是否正确人称是否正确语序是否有问题语序是否有问题语言是否符

22、合习惯语言是否符合习惯固定短语是否恰当固定短语是否恰当如今，中国掀起了广场舞(public square dancing)热潮。对于这种现象，人们褒贬不一。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文，谈谈广场舞的利与弊，并提出解决措施。要求：1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；尽量运用本讲的重点句子。2词数：80100词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：遭受suffer from；音量volumeNowadays，public square dancing is becoming more and more popular.Most of the public squares are

23、 crowded with dancers，especially in the morning and evening.We all agree that public square dancing is a good way to keep healthy，especially for the old.Besides，it is money saving.But it also causes noise pollution.Many people suffer from the noise caused by the loud music.They cant work，study or sl

24、eep well.They feel very angry and some even argue with the dancers.In my opinion，the dancers should turn down the volume while dancing.In addition，our government should build more public places for them，such as squares and parks.We hope that people can have fun dancing without disturbing other peopl

25、e.范文展示范文展示Hello,everybody!Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program.Todays topic is“How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.Nowadays,we students have much more free time than before.But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly.They spend so much time on their hob

26、bies that they cant finish their homework on time.Also some of them watch too much TV,Whats worse,some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games.We dont think its good for their study and health.However,how can we make better use of our spare time?There are many thi

27、ngs we can do.For example,we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies.And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups,take part in some good social activities.Besides these,we can do some sports.If we have time,we should help

28、parents do some housework.Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!The structure of the article IntroductionMain body ConclusionSummary ProblemsSuggestions opinions 写作：写作：第一步就是要第一步就是要认真审题认真审题，明确写作，明确写作主题主题、体裁体裁、人称人称、字数字数、结构结构、时态时态、提示、提示要点要点和和补充信息补充信息第二步就是要第二步就是要列出写作提

29、纲列出写作提纲（列关键（列关键词词、连词成、连词成句句、集句成、集句成段段、组段成、组段成篇篇）写作前：写作前：确定确定人称、时态人称、时态写作后：写作后：查错改错查错改错中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。写作实践写作实践你的烦恼你的做法个头不高，相貌平常 不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少 学会沟通，友善待人学习压力大，课外活动少（自主发挥，至少两点）变换句式变换句式并列句并列句复合句复合句结果状语从句结果状语从句Some students spend too much time on their

30、hobbies.They cant finish their homework on time.Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on timeSome students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time思路构建思路构建构思列纲提出问题Im not tall and Im not goodlooking.My parents ca

31、nt understand what I do and say.I have few friends at school.I have too much pressure in study.I have few afterschool activities.提出建议I dont care about these,and I believe in myself.I communicate with them and Im friendly to my classmates at school.I relax myself:I do sports or listen to music.I go s

32、hopping with my parents or friends.自我展示自我展示Hello everyone,Im Li Hua.Id like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.Im not tall and Im not good-looking.But I dont care about these.I always believe in myself.My parents sometimes cant understand what I do and say.I have few friends at schoo

33、l.So I often communicate with them and Im always friendly to my classmates at school.I have too much pressure in study too and often have few after-school activities.So I often relax myself.When I have free time,I often do sports or listen to music.Sometimes I go shopping with my_Thats all.Thank you

34、!parents or friends.In this way,we can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.高分点评：高分点评：本文采用本文采用“总总分分总总”的写作结构。首先提出了分享问的写作结构。首先提出了分享问题与解决方法的意愿，然后谈论每个问题及解决的方法，题与解决方法的意愿，然后谈论每个问题及解决的方法，最后用礼貌性的语言作出总结。本文作者能够较好地处理最后用礼貌性的语言作出总结。本文作者能够较好地处理表格中所提供的写作信息，并能发挥自主性，提出自己的表格中所提供的写作信息，并能发挥自主性，提出自己的合理建议。合理建议。短

35、语：短语：care about,believe in,communicate with,be friendly to;relax oneself;go shopping句型：句型：When I have free time,I often do sports or listen to music.时间状语从句的运用，使文章中的句子显得不那时间状语从句的运用，使文章中的句子显得不那么单调。么单调。In this way,we can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.这句是给出高分的精彩句子。这句是给出高分的精彩句子。抓住要点，列关键词抓

36、住要点，列关键词Problemsbe crazy about be interested in play computer games watch too much TV spend too much time on their hobbies refuse to do homework Opinionsnot good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to Suggestionsplan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobb

37、ies take part in different after-school activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework1.Make sentences with the keywords about problems.Sentences:_ _2.Make sentences with the keywords about opinions.Sentences:_ _3.Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions.Sentences:_ _第四步：连词成句第四步：连词成句 Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and cant finish their homework on time.I dont think its good for our study and health.Step by stepStep by step 1.审审 2.构构 3.列列 4.连连 5.美美文体_ 时态_ 人称_连字成句，连句成段在有把握的情况下在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，使文增色把握文章框架结构，必要时必要时适当增加细节列出要点