新人教版九年级上册英语 Unit 7 写作专题训练课件.ppt-(纯ppt课件,无音视频素材)

1、写作专题训练写作专题训练Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.“没有规矩不成方圆”，每个学校、每个家庭都有自己的行为准则，规范人们该做什么，不该做什么。假如你叫李华。你的父母为了能让你更好地学习，制定了一些规定，其中包括周末不能出去和朋友玩。你对此规定不是很赞同。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文表达你的观点和想法。要点提示：1.青少年应该和同龄人多交流；2.周末适当出去玩，放松一下；3.朋友可以相互鼓励努力学习，共同进步；4.我认为这个规定应该适当修改。1.谋篇布局：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。谋篇布局

2、：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。2.遣词造句：就结构图中的要点写出句子。遣词造句：就结构图中的要点写出句子。(1)为了让我更好地学习，我的父母给我制定了一些规定。In order to let me study better,_.(2)他们不让我周末外出和朋友一起玩。They dont allow me _.my parents make somerules for meto go out to play with my friendson weekends(3)青少年应该和同龄人多交流。Teenagers should_.(4)适当外出玩能让我感到放松。Going out to play fo

3、r a proper time can_.communicate more with their peersmake me feelrelaxed(5)朋友可以相互鼓励努力学习，共同进步。Friends can_.(6)如果我被允许这样做的话，我就能在学习中做得更好。If Im allowed to do so,_.encourage each other to study hard andmake progress togetherI can do even better in mystudies3.巧妙衔接：利用连词和副词，使句子意思连贯。巧妙衔接：利用连词和副词，使句子意思连贯。在文章中

4、由对规定的介绍过渡到我对此规定的看法时，用到了however，过渡自然。在陈述观点时也可用and,also,moreover（而且，此外）,in addition（除此之外；并且）等起承上启下的作用。4.佳句妙用：添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。佳句妙用：添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。(1)All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。(2)No rules,no standards.没有规矩不成方圆。5.连句成篇：连句成篇：In order to let me study better,_【范文赏析范文赏析】In order to

5、let me study better,my parents make some rules for me.I dont agree with one of them,which doesnt allow me to go out to play with my friends on weekends,because they think its a waste of time.However,I think teenagers should be allowed to go out with their friends because teenagers should communicate

6、 more with their peers.Moreover,going outto play at the weekend for a proper time can make me feel relaxed.I can also learn the advantages of my friends,and this is helpful to my studies.In addition,friends can encourage each other to study hard and make progress together.As far as I am concerned,th

7、is rule should be changed properly.If Im allowed to go out to play with my friends on weekends,I can do even better in my studies.现在，很多中学生都携带手机上学，由此引发了一些问题。是否应该禁止学生在学校使用手机，人们对此见解不一。某英文报社就此话题征稿，请你根据提示写一篇稿件简述下列两种观点并表明你的看法。词数不少于100。支持反对方便父母和子女联系耽误学习提供多种娱乐，如听音乐、上网等一些学生考试时用手机作弊_With the development of sc

8、ience and technology,more and more students have a mobile phone of their own.Should students be allowed to use mobile phones at school?Some people give a yes answer.They say with mobile phones,parents can get in touch with their children at any time.Students can also do fun things on their mobile ph

9、ones,like listening to music and surfing the Inter._Others are against the idea.They say mobile phones can make students pay little attention to their study.Some even use mobile phones to cheat in exams.In my opinion,its OK to have mobile phones at school,but schools must have rules about using mobile phones,for example,when and where to use them.Mobile phones can be a great help if they are used properly.