1、 1.学会写建议信。2.提高分析和解决问题的能力。Learning objectivesuIf your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online,what will you do to help him/her?活动一:活动一:Thought shower活动二:活动二:Read and answer2.Do you think Ms Luos advice is useful?Why or why not?1.What is Worried Friends problem?3.What oth
2、er kinds of advice would you give?u Learn computer programming and other skills instead.u Make a plan and list about everyday life.u Take some outdoor activities.活动三活动三:Focus on organization活动四活动四:BrainstormWhat problems are you facing?Share and lets give you some advice.Im shy and I want to make so
3、me friends.Its hard to study.I cant finish my homework on time.I have no plan for my life.I miss my parents far away._Show the reader you know a problem is.Dear_ You wrote that _I understand that_I think_Because_.I am sure_ Best Wishes,(close and sign the letter)._Tell the reader you understand he/s
4、he feelings.Tell the reader what you think he/she should do.Explain your reasons.Tell the reader what you think will happen.write the date and greet the reader活动五活动五:Compose your writing写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给某个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容和提出建议的理由。提出的理由要入
5、情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或to begin/start with,then,later,last but not least等依次陈述建议,具体为:建议信首段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。主体段落:先肯定对方优点,然后指出需要改进的地方或提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让对方认为是投诉,而不是建议。结尾段:对提出的建议进行总结。注意要有礼貌,使对方容易接受。建议信常用句式:1段首常用语(照
6、应材料,表明写作意图):I am writing to express my views concerning关于.After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that.You have asked for my advice about.and I will try to make some suggestions.I am very glad to hear that you want to.2表达建议常用语:I think the most suitable.for you is.I would like to
7、 suggest that.Youd better./Its better to.As far as I am concerned./In my opinion/.It seems to me that you could.I think it would be more beneficial if you could.3段尾常用语:In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.I hope you
8、will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.【参考范文参考范文】Dear editor,Im glad to know from your paper that you are asking readers for suggestions on your new section,Environmental Protection.Mine are as followsIt is helpful
9、that the section covers包含 many environmental concerns and,each report should include causes,effects and more importantly,effective measures,thus因此 making the public aware意识到 that everyone should and can do something to deal with environmental problems.Besides,reports should be written in simple English in order to attract as many readers as possible.Id appreciate it if you could take my tips into account and I do hope that your paper will make a difference to environmental protection.Yours truly,Li Hua
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