中文论文中的英文写作问题学习培训课件.ppt

1、中文论文中的英文写作问题中文论文中的英文写作问题题目题目题目题目太繁太繁 二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7 细胞凋亡细胞凋亡的实验的实验及其机制及其机制研究研究 二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7 细胞凋亡及其作用机制细胞凋亡及其作用机制题目题目不全不全 儿童单纯性肥胖模型的制作儿童单纯性肥胖模型的制作 儿童单纯性肥胖儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠小鼠模型的制作模型的制作不好的中文题目不好的中文题目 去垂体幼鼠生物特性及激素水平的去垂体幼鼠生物特性及激素水平的观察观察 去垂体去垂体幼年大鼠幼年大鼠的生物学特性与激的生物学特性与激素水平素水平不好的中文题目不好的中文

2、题目 中药松友饮对体内化疗后残余肝中药松友饮对体内化疗后残余肝癌作用的实验研究癌作用的实验研究 中药松友饮对中药松友饮对裸鼠裸鼠体内化疗后残体内化疗后残余肝癌的作用余肝癌的作用不好的中文题目不好的中文题目 IRP对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠IgG+和和SIgA+细胞表达的影响细胞表达的影响 板蓝根多糖板蓝根多糖对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠IgG+和和SIgA+细胞表达的影响细胞表达的影响题目题目错误错误 基因工程大鼠研究进展基因工程大鼠研究进展 Process in Rat Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic eng

3、ineering题目题目太大太大 不同测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压不同测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压 A comparison of different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animals Comparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in rats不好的英文题目不好的英文题目 儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作 Establishment of childhood simple obesit

4、y animal model Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity 题目题目滥用缩写滥用缩写 哺乳动物哺乳动物 ES 细胞与细胞与 EG 细胞研究细胞研究进展进展 哺乳动物哺乳动物 胚胎干细胞胚胎干细胞与与 胚胎生殖胚胎生殖 细胞细胞研究进展研究进展 ES embryonic stem cells EG embryonic germ cells不好的中文题目不好的中文题目 滥用缩写滥用缩写 反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大鼠鼠AMI模型方法对比研究模型方法对比研究 反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎

5、法制作大反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大鼠鼠急性心肌梗死急性心肌梗死模型方法的模型方法的比较比较题目题目滥用缩写滥用缩写 乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞NF-B信号通路信号通路的研究的研究 Lactic acid inhibits NF-B signaling pathways in RIMMVECs 读者看不懂读者看不懂 RIMMVECs题目题目 拼写错误、大小写拼写错误、大小写 Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig Comparison

6、 of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig不好的中、英文题目不好的中、英文题目 LPS和石墨粉诱导小鼠急性肺损伤病和石墨粉诱导小鼠急性肺损伤病理形态学比较理形态学比较 Pathological comparison of LPS and Graphite power-induced acute lung injury 中文：应写明中文：应写明 脂多糖脂多糖 英文：英文：LPS Lipopolysaccharide 英文：英文：power powder英文题目英文题目拼写错误拼写错误 Gong H,S

7、hu L,Xu H,Chen B,Mao R,Zhang F,Wang Y.Bilateral internal carotid arteries ligation temporary impairs brain vasculaturev in young rats.Auton Neurosci.2013,173(1-2):39-44.此文已在国外正式发表此文已在国外正式发表不好的英文题目不好的英文题目 清脑方对缺血性眩晕大鼠脑损伤的清脑方对缺血性眩晕大鼠脑损伤的保护作用保护作用 Protective effect of QNF on brain injury in ischemic vert

8、igo rats Protective effect of the Chinese medicine Qingnaofang on brain injury in ischemic vertigo rats英文题目英文题目 错误错误 改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神经改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神经根压迫模型的研究根压迫模型的研究 The study on rat model of lumbar never nerve root compression via modified unilateral hemilaminectomy approach 啰嗦、缺建立、拼写错误啰嗦、缺建立、拼写错误英文题

9、目英文题目单复数单复数 非人灵长类局部脑缺血动物模型研非人灵长类局部脑缺血动物模型研究现状述评究现状述评 Review of focal cerebral ischemia model in non-human primate Review of focal cerebral ischemia models in non-human primates英文题目滥用缩写 小型猪体外循环下心脏手术的麻醉小型猪体外循环下心脏手术的麻醉 Anesthesia of Cardiac Surgery Under CPB on Swine Anesthesia in Cardiac Surgery Under

10、 Cardiopulmonary Bypass on Pigs英文题目 拼写错误 Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig Comparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig很很错误的英文题目 基因工程大鼠研究进展基因工程大鼠研究进展 Process in Rat Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic engineer

11、ing英文题目错误用词 The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of There Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of Three Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled 英文题目很大很大错误 常压缺氧致常压缺氧致大鼠大鼠小脑浦肯野细胞急小脑浦肯野细胞急性病理改变的研究性病理改变的研究 Acute

12、pathology changes of Purkinje cells in mouse cerebellum under normobaric hypoxia署名与单位署名与单位署名署名大小写大小写 He bao-ming,wang zhizhong，liu xiaofei，yao hao,ouyang xiaohui,su jiagui He Bao-ming,Wang Zhizhong，Liu Xiaofei，Yao Hao,Ouyang Xiaohui,Su Jiagui 姓名大写、标点符号姓名大写、标点符号单位单位错词、错名、大小写错词、错名、大小写 The forth Applic

13、ated Hospital of Suzhou University the Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University单位单位不全不全 Academy of Military Sciences Academy of Military Medical Sciences单位单位大小写大小写 Department of,The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin,Tianjin 300162,china.Department of,the Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin,Tian

14、jin 300162,China.署名、单位署名、单位 Bai aiguo*，Zheng chuansheng，Zhou guofeng，Liang huiming，Feng gansheng.Wantwanthospital,Changsha 410016,China(Wang Wang Hospital)人名的大小写。单位名称错误人名的大小写。单位名称错误署名、单位署名、单位大小写、拼写错误、标点符号大小写、拼写错误、标点符号 WEI Bing-yan,LIU Tian-fu,GUO Yong-chang,ZHANG Yin-hong (the center of Laboratory a

15、nimal of Shan Xi Mendical University,taiyuan 030001,China)英文摘要中英文摘要中滥用缩写滥用缩写英文摘要英文摘要滥用缩写滥用缩写 Objective：To observe the affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and RGZ rosiglitazone ATRA all-trans-retinoic acid affect effect滥用缩写滥用缩写英文摘要英文摘要 IHC analysis on TMA revealed t

16、hat Immunohistochemical analysis on tissue microarray revealed that 英文摘要英文摘要滥用缩写滥用缩写 To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma(RCC)cell lines using SSH.To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma(RCC)cell lines using suppression subtrac

17、tive hybridization(SSH).（摘要首句）用错词用错词错词错词 大鼠给予药液灌胃大鼠给予药液灌胃 All rats were lavaged with KFL solution.All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.错词错词 神经上皮移植神经上皮移植 Neuralepithelial transplantation Neuroepithelial transplantation错词错词 巴马小型猪巴马小型猪12只只 12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 12 Bama mini-p

18、igs were randomly divided into 错词错词 Low does Low dose High does High dose通篇如此错词错词 RT-PCR was used to amplification the full-length sequence of RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of 错词错词 Other adverse reactions include atrial premature,oral mucositis,fatigue et al.Other adverse react

19、ions include atrial premature,oral mucositis,fatigue,etc.错词错词 GeneBank GenBank 错词错词意思反了意思反了 正常、特异抗原正常、特异抗原批内批内变异系数分别为变异系数分别为8.3%和和6.4%，批间批间平均变异系数分别平均变异系数分别为为9.7%和和11.5%.The inter-assay coefficient of variation of normal antigen and special antigen was 8.3%and 6.4%,and the intra-assay average coeffic

20、ient of variation was 9.7%and 11.5%,respectively 错词错词 评价其抗癌作用评价其抗癌作用 To access the anti-tumor effect To assess the anti-tumor effect 错词错词 探讨其作用机理探讨其作用机理 To explicit the molecular mechanism of To explore the molecular mechanism of 英文摘要首句错词错词 脂质体脂质体 Lipidosome Liposome （该文论述基因治疗的主要手段）错词错词 系统性感染系统性感染 S

21、ystematic infection Systemic infection错词错词 was analysised was analyzed 错词、单复数错词、单复数 The sequence were comparised with the The sequences were compared with the 单复数单复数 The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant were tested continuously.The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant was tested continuous

22、ly.频繁的频繁的错误注释错误注释滥用注释滥用注释 糖尿病糖尿病(diabetic mellitus)糖尿病糖尿病(diabetes mellitus)一篇关于小型猪糖尿病模型的论文错误注释错误注释 腺病毒（腺病毒（adenoviral）腺病毒（腺病毒（adenovirus）错误注释错误注释 单纯疱疹病毒单纯疱疹病毒（herpes simple virus）单纯疱疹病毒单纯疱疹病毒（herpes simplex virus）错误注释错误注释 无特定病原体无特定病原体 (special pathogen free，SPF)无特定病原体无特定病原体 (specific pathogen free，

23、SPF)错误注释错误注释 独立通风笼具独立通风笼具(Individually wentilate cagesdul，IVC)(Individually ventilated cages，IVC)错误注释错误注释 热休克蛋白热休克蛋白(Hot shock protein,HSP)(Heat shock preotein,HSP)错误注释错误注释 C反应蛋白（反应蛋白（C-reactionprotein，CRP）C反应蛋白（反应蛋白（C-reactive protein，CRP）错误注释错误注释 集落形成抑制法集落形成抑制法 (human tumor cell cloning assay,HTCA

24、)(colony formation inhibition assay)错误注释错误注释 自然杀伤细胞自然杀伤细胞(natural kill cell，NK)自然杀伤细胞自然杀伤细胞(natural killer cell，NK)错误注释错误注释 神经生长因子神经生长因子（never growth factor，NGF）神经生长因子神经生长因子（nerve growth factor，NGF）全文多处，一律错错误注释错误注释 表皮生长因子受体表皮生长因子受体2（human epidermal growth factor-2，HER-2）（human epidermal growth facto

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39、rdick J,Gardner TJ,Sweeney HL.其他其他不好的文章首句不好的文章首句 MG患者通常有眼肌受累，患者通常有眼肌受累，重症肌无力（重症肌无力（myasthenia gravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累，患者通常有眼肌受累，不好的摘要首句不好的摘要首句 To Investigate the mechanism of NAFLD in gerbils To Investigate the mechanism of non-alcoholic fatty liver disease(NAFLD)in gerbils 中英文的语气应该一致中英文的语气应该一致 结论结论 Ezr

40、in、E-cadherin和和CD44V6在在NSCLC的生长和转移的生长和转移过程中发挥着重要的调控作过程中发挥着重要的调控作用，用，Ezrin,E-cadherin and CD44V6 probably play an important role in the regulation ofgrowth and meastasis of lung cancer.材料与方法材料与方法 Methods Rats were divided randomly into 2 groups.Methods One hundred and twenty healthy adult male rats w

41、ere randomly divided into two groups.Respectively,英文无顿号英文无顿号The values of Ri,Re,Cl,MVV,FVC,Fev0.2,Fev0.2/FVC,FEF25-75%,PEF were 1.81(0.94-4.10)cm H2O/mLs、1.83(0.71-3.57)cm H2O/mLs、0.15（0.05-0.29）mL/cm H2O、144.65(77.28-256.20)mL/min、8.49(5.82-12.70)mL、5.72(3.62-7.01)mL、68.12(39.14-85.28)%、34.11(28.25

42、-46.87)mL/min、38.28(30.75-50.25)mL/min,respectively.（9个参数）英文无顿号拼写错误拼写错误 主要组织相容性复合体主要组织相容性复合体II类类(majorhistocompatibilitycomplex II,MHC II)主要组织相容性复合体主要组织相容性复合体II类类(major histocompatibility complex II,MHC II)大小写错误大小写错误 20 mg/Kg 20 mg/kg 1 KDa100 KDa分子量分子量 1 kDa100 kDa分子量分子量 ALT(u/l)ALT(U/l)未写明箭头和圆圈说明什

43、么问题。未写明箭头和圆圈说明什么问题。讨讨 论论SCI拒稿十大原因拒稿十大原因1.可读性差，英文书写太差、与杂志内容或格式不符可读性差，英文书写太差、与杂志内容或格式不符2.原创性不足，证据和逻辑不清原创性不足，证据和逻辑不清3.摘要与正文不一致摘要与正文不一致4.文体杂乱，序言太长，缺乏完整性文体杂乱，序言太长，缺乏完整性5.应按照应按照CONSORT指南书写，不可缺项指南书写，不可缺项6.结果凌乱结果凌乱7.统计学处理错误统计学处理错误8.讨论离开正题，进行无关的议论讨论离开正题，进行无关的议论9.结论未充分结合观察结果结论未充分结合观察结果10.未引用最新进展的文献，过时了未引用最新进展

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