2020高考英语增分大二轮讲义：写作部分 专题一解题策略 第2讲 Word版含答案.doc

1、第2讲高分亮点塑造一 吸引眼球的亮点词汇要想写出一篇水平比较高的书面表达，高级词汇的使用必不可少，它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面： (一)使用亮点词汇的四种方法1标新立异“语”众不同在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水平。Our team, besides regular training, will join in a variety of activities.Our team, apart/aside from regular training, will join in a variety o

2、f activities.Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was very popular.Several days later, when the video was played at the graduation ceremony, it was wellreceived.2多样表达避免重复在写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。We may have different opinion

3、s in organizing class activities. We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.Weve built a new experiment building and weve also built a library where the old playground

4、 used to be.Weve built a new experiment building and weve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.3单词短语短语优先在单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.There is no doubt that you

5、are supposed to know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.Firstly, the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it.To begin with, the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it.I hear that he is ill, and I decide to visit him this Sunda

6、y.I hear that he is ill, and I decide to pay a visit to him this Sunday.4用高级词汇取代简单词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应尽量避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with

7、 you on Friday afternoon.So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are sure to achieve success.So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are bound to achieve success.即时练1用高级词汇完成句子Of the two, I think the latter is better.Of the two, the latter _.Quite a few things

8、caused the traffic problem.Quite a few things _ the traffic problem.We can look at this problem in many ways.We can _ this problem in many ways.答案：wins my favorresulted in/led to/gave rise toview (二)必备升级词汇1动词：havepossess; developpromote; replacesubstitute; bearput up with/tolerate; considertake into

9、 account/consideration; understandmake sense of/figure outI sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into account.我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。2名词：chanceopportunity; choicealternative; coursecurriculum; peopleindividuals; resultconsequence; shortcomingdrawbackDifferent individuals have different opinions

10、about the safety of food.不同的人对食品安全问题有着不同的看法。3形容词：enoughadequate/plentiful; usefuladvantageous; difficultchallenging; properappropriate/suitable; importantvital/significant; interestingabsorbing/striking/appealing/attractiveIn the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.在随后的三年里，我们的学校生

11、活将会是具有挑战性的。4副词：finallyeventually; hardlybarely/scarcely/hardly ever; immediatelyin a flash/in no time; nowadayscurrentlyEventually your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent adult.最终，你的孩子会离开家，作为一个完全独立的成年人过她自己的生活。5连词：sotherefore; andas well as/together withTherefore, its b

12、ox office receipts/takings will probably enjoy a slight increase.因此票房收入极可能略有增长。即时练2同义句改写We will try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.Well try our best to _ the traditional friendship between us.This phenomenon may lead to important changes towards environmental protection.Th

13、is phenomenon may lead to _ changes towards environmental protection.答案：promotesignificant (三)必备加分词汇1表达关注的名词：attention, focus, concernMeanwhile, owing to my great interest in sports, I pay close attention to the 32nd Olympic Games to be held in Tokyo in 2020.与此同时，由于我对体育运动很感兴趣，我密切关注2020年将在东京举办的第三十二届奥

14、运会。2表达争论的名词：discussion, debate, argumentFaced with such an argument, different individuals may have different opinions.面对这样的争论，不同的人可能有不同的观点。3表达现象的名词：phenomenonThe sentence suggests a common phenomenon: many teenagers care more about their phones than their friends nowadays.这个句子表明了一种常见现象：当今许多青少年关注他们的

15、手机胜过关注他们的朋友。4表达优缺点的名词：advantage, disadvantage, strength, weaknessBesides, every student may have different weak and strong subjects, so they should learn from each other so that they can have more advantages than disadvantages.此外，每个学生可能有不同的弱科和强科，因此他们应该互相学习以便比起劣势来他们拥有更多的优势。5表达增长或下降的动词：increase, accum

16、ulate, decrease, declineLong hours of surfing the Internet would lead to declining health.长时间上网将导致健康状况下降。6表达导致后果的动词短语：result in, lead to, bring about, contribute to, give rise toComputers have brought about many changes in our daily life.电脑给我们的日常生活带来了很多变化。7表达支持、反对的动词短语：approve of, be in favor of, ob

17、ject toThe majority of the senior citizens dont approve of the proposal of celebrating Western festivals in China.大多数老年人不赞同在中国庆祝西方节日的提议。8表达可能性的形容词：likelyIf you come to our school, you are likely to meet some difficult problems in your life.如果你来我们学校，很可能会在生活中遇到一些难题。9表达有好处的形容词：beneficialFrom my point o

18、f view, our library should buy some popular science books and literary books because they are beneficial to us.按照我的观点，我们的图书馆应该买一些科谱书和文学类图书，因为这些书对我们有益处。10表达强调的副词：particularly, especiallyThe more people earn, the more they seem to want, particularly when others earn more than they do.人们赚得越多，似乎想要的也越多，尤

19、其是当其他人赚得比他们多的时候。即时练3同义句改写The new teaching method will do good to every student.The new teaching method will _ every student.It was his carelessness that caused his failure this time.It was his carelessness that _ his failure this time.Most of us were against his plan, which made him angry.Most of us

20、 _ his plan, which made him angry.答案：be beneficial toresulted inobjected to二 夺人耳目的开头和结尾 (一)引人入胜的开头开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解要谈什么，最好能立刻吸引读者的兴趣。下面介绍几种开头的常见写法：1书信的常用开头法开门见山法Im writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting exhibition.我写信邀请你来观看中国剪纸艺术展。I am writing to tell you some good news.我写信告诉你一些好消息。

21、2记叙文的常用开头法(1)故事背景法交代人物、事件、时间、地点、背景等A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.地球日前的一周，我们学校贴了很多海报，号召我们加入到让地球更绿色环保的行动中。(2)往事追忆法回忆过去发生的某件事I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago,

22、 when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class.我仍旧记得三年前我进入这所学校的第一天，在第一节英语课上我听不懂老师讲课，我是多么紧张。3说明文的常用开头法(1)点明中心法开门见山点明所要介绍的事物The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.鼠标是人们借以使用电脑的一种非常有效的设备。(2)引入数据法运用数据引出所要论证的主题A recent survey shows th

23、at more than 40% of the school kids dont have breakfast.最近的调查表明，有超过40%的学生不吃早饭。4议论文的常用开头法(1)点明主题法提出一个观点，作为文章要阐明或论述的主题Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important to me.多年的学校生活教会我很多东西，其中团队协作对于我来说最为重要。(2)引用名言法摘录或引用某些名人的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开头When it comes to ho

24、w to succeed, many people may think of the proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way.”当谈及如何成功时，很多人或许会想起了谚语“有志者，事竟成”。(3)列举事例法通过一个事例或现象引出话题Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school.三年前我在人生的一次重要考试中失利，成为普通学校的一名学生。5图画作文的常用开头法描述图画法描写图画内容，为下文做好铺垫I

25、n the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.在图画中我们可以看到一个穿着破衣服的男孩，坐在破旧的木头桌子旁，桌子上是一摞书。常见开头句式：As everybody knows/As is known to all 众所周知As the proverb says 正如谚语所说As the saying goes 俗话说As we can see from the table 正如表中所看到的When it comes to

26、. 当提到It is said that . 据说It is generally agreed that . 人们通常认为It is believed/thought that . 人们认为It is reported that . 据报道It is well known that . 众所周知It goes without saying that . 不言而喻/不用说There is no denying that . 不可否认的是There is no doubt that . 毫无疑问即时练1根据提示翻译句子我想请你给我们学校的英语报纸写一篇文章。(开门见山法)_上周日，我和同学们去了香

27、山公园。(故事背景法)_俗话说，“没有努力，就没有收获。”(引用名言法)_人们普遍认为阅读能增长我们的知识，拓展我们的视野。(点明主题法)_每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪，就忍不住感到悲伤。(往事追忆法)_答案：Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to Fragrant Hills Park.As the saying goes, “No pain, no gain.”It is universally a

28、cknowledged that reading increases our knowledge and broadens our horizons.Whenever I think of the clean stream near my home, I cannot help feeling sad. (二)回味无穷的结尾结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调中心思想、升华主题的作用。主要有以下写法：1书信的常用结尾法(1)表示感谢法Id appreciate it if you could reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.如果您尽早给

29、我回信，我会非常感谢。Id appreciate it if you could do me a favor.如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。I must thank you again for your generous help.我必须对你慷慨的帮助再次表示感谢。(2)表示期待法Hope youll have a good time in China.希望你在中国玩得开心。Looking forward to your reply.期待着您的回复。I hope well get together again next year.希望我们明年再聚。2记叙文的常用结尾法(1)主题升华法My ex

30、perience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.我的经历告诉我：决定你成为什么样的人，不是你被给予了什么，而是你怎样利用它。(2)问题设问法通过问答形式总结全文Isnt it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?你在阅读时，内心非常平静不是一种快乐吗？3说明文的常用结尾法总结全文法总结说明的事物，进一步说明其特征In a word, changes

31、 in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort.总之，过去20年里我们生活中的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。4议论文的常用结尾法(1)得出结论法结尾总结全文，得出结论Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.所以，电影业应该做出更大努力来吸引更多观众。(2)深化中心法结尾进一步深化主题In reality, we should learn from the black p

32、encil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.事实上，我们应该向这支黑色铅笔学习：只要我们对自己做过的事情有信心，就不要去介意别人说什么。(3)提出建议法结尾提出建议以及应对措施I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.我认为，我们都应该注意自己

33、在公共场合的行为。只有这样我们才能生活在更舒服和美丽的环境中。(4)引用名言法结尾用名言总结全文Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”， you will enjoy more your stay here.不管怎么说，不同的文化就有不同的习俗。如果你“入乡随俗”，你就会更好地享受这里的生活。(5)照应开头法结尾对开头进行照应Different ways of traveling can make people happy, but I like trave

34、ling by train most.不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快，但是我最喜欢乘火车旅行。常见结尾句式：Id appreciate it if . 如果我将不胜感激It is high time that . 确实到了的时候了In this way, I believe that . 用这种办法，我相信Only with combined efforts can we . 唯有通力合作我们才能We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that . 因此，我们可以得出结论：Therefore, we have the reason to believe

35、that . 因此，我们有理由相信Therefore, we should realize that . 因此，我们应当意识到If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that . 如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问We, therefore, can make it clear from the above discussion that . 因此，从上面的讨论中我们可以明白即时练2根据提示翻译句子我希望你会在中学过丰富多彩的生活。(表示期待法)_如果你能到机场接我，我将不胜感激。(表示感谢法)_找一个伙伴和我们一起去如何？如

36、果这样，我们可以相互帮助并且乐享旅游。(问题设问法)_因此，我们得出结论：世界上没有什么东西和自由一样珍贵。(得出结论法)_总之，成功是重要的，失败也是重要的，因为它是成功之母。(引用名言法)_答案：I hope you will live a rich and colorful life in middle school.Id appreciate it if you could meet me at the airport.How about finding a companion to be with us? If so, we can help each other and be ha

37、ppy during the trip.We, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world.In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because its the mother of success.三 词顺句畅的过渡和衔接衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语归纳如下：

38、(一)表示顺序的过渡性词语firstly， first of all， to begin/start with， then， later， in the end， finally， at last， after that， afterwards， since then， meanwhile等。Firstly, I have always been interested in reading books. Secondly, Id like to share my books with others as well.首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。First of a

39、ll, well try to find a place to live.首先，我们得设法找个住的地方。即时练1用过渡性词语完成句子首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。_， I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. _ I wiped the dust off all the furniture. _， I swept and mopped the floors

40、.答案：FirstlyThenAfter that (二)表示并列转折关系的过渡性词语and， or， but， yet， however， while， otherwise， on the contrary， despite， in spite of， instead of等。Otherwise well have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.否则的话，我们迟早会为我们的自私付出代价。即时练2用过渡性词语完成句子相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。_， smartphones not only

41、take up our valuable time, but also do great harm to our health.答案：On the contrary (三)表示因果关系的过渡性词语thus， because， thanks to， due to， for one reason， so， as a result/consequence， therefore等。Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help as well as professional advice.因此，我写信向你寻求帮助和专业建议。即时练3用过渡性词语完成句子因此，我

42、们没有理由轻视普通的工作。_， we have no reason to look down upon ordinary jobs.多亏当地媒体的协助，他在13个国家找到了32对同年同月同日出生的人。_ the assistance of the local media, he has found 32 time twins across 13 countries.答案：As a result/consequenceThanks to (四)表示递进关系的过渡性词语besides， whats more， furthermore， moreover， whats worse， to make

43、matters worse， still， even， in addition等。The weather was cold and wet. Still, we had a great time.天气又冷又潮，不过我们仍旧玩得很开心。Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many wellknown sightseeing spots.而且，沿河的风景很美，有很多著名景点。即时练4用过渡性词语完成句子另外，我可以看到不同种类的美丽的鸟。_， I can see different kinds of beautiful birds.更糟的是，如果我们在电话上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来所需要的交际技能。_， if we spend too much time on phones, we will lose the communication sk