读后续写微技能课件.pptx

1、I love three things in the world，Sun,moon and you.Sun for morning，Moon for night，And you forever.Step 1:Read and analyze the given passage (Main idea,plot,feelings,coflict.).Step 2:Infer the plot development and the ending by the given sentences.Step 3:Writing and polishing.Continuation Writing Step

2、s：1.Reading for the main idea On Christmas Eve,Della cried for not having enough money to buy her husband,Jim a .Then,she her only possession-her long beautiful to buy her Jim a -perfect for Jims gold .giftsoldhairchainwatch 1.What did Della do?(actions)2.How did Della feel at the beginning of the s

3、tory?(feelings)3.Why？（Problem/conflict）1.Count,sob,howl.2.Reading for the plot and feelings(Para1）DellaJim 2.Sad/Frustrated.3.They lived in extreme poverty.,her cheeks burned with the silent scold of meanness.There was clearly nothing to do but sob on the shabby couch and howl.a gray cat walking alo

4、ng a gray fence in a gray yard.How did the writer vividly show these feelings?1233.Reading for the Languagevivid use of language to form an image/a pictureHer eyes were shining brilliantly,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.It suddenly occurred to her that she could sell the hair

5、to buy an expensive gift for Jim.She was sorrowful because she would buy the gift at the expense of her beloved hair.sacrifice3.Reading for the language(Para2）Para 3Staring into the mirror,she found her hair reached below her knees,shining like a brown waterfall.She stood still while a few tears fel

6、l/splashed/dripped/streamed down on the floor.body language/expressionssurpriseeyes wide open;mouth in the shape of an“O”;jaw droppinglips curving into a smile;face lighting up;grin from ear to earhappinessbeing movedred-rimmed eyes;hug/embrace sb.tightly;tears splashing/welling 4.Infer the plot dev

7、elopment and ending by the given sentences.Para1:The door opened and Jim stepped in.Para2:Inside Jims package were the expensive combs something special to hold her hair that Della had wanted ever since she saw them in a shop window.1.Suppose you were Jim,seeing Dellas short hair,how would you feel?

8、.surprised.frustrated.2.Suppose you were Della,what would you do and say?Jim3.How to connect with the second paragraph?Jim took out a package.delightedly presented the gift to Jim and told the truth.Jim was deeply moved and hugged her in his arms.第七档（22-25分）1.创造了新颖，丰富，合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情景融洽度高。2.使用

9、了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误少，且完全不影响理解。3.自然有效地使用了段落间，语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。Criteria(评价标准):Use“interaction”to design your plot;Use“imagery”to make your language more vivid.5.Writing vividly Appreciate your classmates articles,learn from each other and polish your writing.6.Showing and polishing A poss

10、ible version for referencePara1：The door opened and Jim stepped in.Staring at Dellas eyes shining with anticipation,Jim widened his eyes at the sight of her new haircut and squeezed out a faint smile to hide his inner sadness./Della danced towards him at a brisk pace and spread out her palm with the

11、 shiny chain inside,saying gently Merry Christmas,honey!./Realizing Della bought the gift at the expense of her beloved hair,Jim was reduced to tears with red-rimmed eyes and embraced her tightly in his arms./While mildly stroking her short hair,he murmured in a choked voice,“Ive also got a gift for

12、 you!”as he reached for a package and unwrapped it.Para2：Inside Jims package were the expensive combs something special to hold her hair that Della had wanted ever since she saw them in a shop window.LoveSacrificeWealth123It is love and sacrifice that make people truly wealthy.Use“interaction”and“imagery”to finish the second part of the writing a n d h a v e t h e theme highlighted.Learn more:http:/