2020年7月浙江高考英语读后续写讲评教学课件.pptx

1、Polar bearsWhen?When?Where?Where?Who?Who?What?What?Why?Why?Elli and I;a polar bear one fallthe town of Churchill,Manitoba,Canada A bear came to our camp and tried to get in.Read for the basic information The bear was hungry.Know the parts of a story Resolution冲冲突解决突解决EndingDevelopment发展发展BeginningCl

2、imax 高潮高潮 Read for the plot(情节情节)Resolution冲突解决冲突解决Endingcooked dinnertried defense.kept tearing.sprayed.ran.Development发展发展BeginningClimax 高潮高潮smelled.bread;to camp.bit the wire.？Predict the end 1：A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.2：At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.save

3、d Resolution冲突解决冲突解决Endingcooked dinnertried defense.kept tearing.radioed.sprayed.ran.Development发展发展BeginningClimax 高潮高潮smelled.bread;to camp.pulled the fence;bit.1：A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.2：At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.headed backmomenthelicopter arrived

4、Analyze the 2 given sentences savedsavedResolution冲突解决冲突解决Endingcooked dinnertried defense.kept tearing.radioed.sprayed.ran.Development发展发展BeginningClimax 高潮高潮smelled.bread;to camp.pulled the fence;bit.headed backmomenthelicopter arrivedPara.1Para.2？What happened in the middle of each paragraph?save

5、dsaved.bear headed backbear headed back Design the main pointsParagraph 1：Paragraph 2：.savedsavedhelicopter helicopter arrivedarrived.1.What did the bear do after heading back?2.What object(物品物品)did we use to prevent the bear?3.What was the bears reaction?.1.What did we do then?2.What about the bear

6、?3.How did we feel after we were saved?.Tip 1 生动的动词描写生动的动词描写1.它（熊）的吼叫声（roar）在我们周围回响（echo）The bears roar echoed all around us.2.他用后腿站立，推着木栅栏的柱子(post)。It stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.3.在仔细地观察了这片区域之后，熊向前小跑(trot)了几步。After carefully observing the area,the bear trotted forwa

7、rd a few steps.Tip 1 Tip 1 生动的动词描写生动的动词描写4.在我意识到她的意图之前，她把包扔过栅栏，落在远处的灌木丛里Before I realized her intentions,she tossed tossed the bag across the fence,which landedlanded in a bush far away.5.我抓起相机，拍下了最后一张熊的照片 I snatched my camera and snapped one last shot of the bear.Tip 2 Tip 2 ing+ing+主谓结构主谓结构1.我们紧紧地

8、抱在一起，害怕地直打哆嗦（shiver）。ShiveringShivering with fear with fear,we huddled together.,we huddled together.2.听说我们没有受到任何身体伤害，飞行员让我们待在原地，捂住耳朵。HearingHearing that we had not suffered any physical injury,that we had not suffered any physical injury,the pilot told us to stay put and cover our ears.the pilot to

9、ld us to stay put and cover our ears.3.听到直升飞机的声音，我们迅速跑回营地，用颤抖(tremblingtrembling)的声音呼叫我们的救主HearingHearing the helicopter,we ran back to the camp swiftly,and the helicopter,we ran back to the camp swiftly,and radioed our savior in a trembling voice.radioed our savior in a trembling voice.4.看到北极熊逼近，我吓

10、得呆住了，吓得不敢动。Seeing Seeing the approaching of the polar bear,I froze with terror,too scared to move.Tip 3 -Ed+-Ed+主谓主谓 1.被熊的吼叫声惊吓住，埃利和我尝试了我们所知道的所有应对熊的防卫措施。Terrified by its roar,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.2.那只熊被喷雾激怒了，怒吼着迎接我们 Irritated by the spray,the bear greeted us with a h

11、owl of rage.3.熊被面包的气味所吸引，向放面包的地方跑去。Attracted by the smell of the bread,the bear run towards where the bread lay.4.一种强烈的恐惧感抓住了我，我能感觉到手心冒汗。Seized by a strong sense of horror,I could feel my palms sweating.Tip 4 With Tip 4 With 的复合结构的复合结构1.熊跑远了，我叹了口气，如释重负。WithWith the bear running away running away,I s

12、igned with relief.2.照了这张照片，我感到既轻松又幸运WithWith the picture snappedsnapped,I felt both relieved and fortunate.3.我一只手放在栏杆上，向那只熊喷射喷雾。WithWith one hand on the barson the bars,I he fired the spray at the bear.Tip 5 Tip 5 倒装句倒装句 1.我吓得喉咙发紧，双膝发软(so that的倒装)SoSo scared was I thatthat my throat tightened and my

13、 knees felt weak 2.我的心跳得如此之快以至于我几乎喘不过气来。(so that的倒装)SoSo fast did my heart beat thatthat I could hardly take a breath.3.尽管我很害怕，但我还是鼓起勇气把喷雾器拔了出来。（as 的倒转）Scared asas I was,I collected my bravery to pull out the spray.4.无论我们怎么努力，我都无法摆脱那只熊。（as 的倒转）Try asas we might,I could not get rid of the bear.范文1 A

14、few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.The noises turned Elli and I pale with horror.I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence.He roared repeatedly,shattering what was left of the silence.Elli seized this oppor

15、tunity to take some pictures of the bear.The animals noises echoed all around us.We betrayed our feelings by huddling together,shivering with fear.After thoroughly scrutinizing the area,he trotted forward a few steps.At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.My heart leaped with joy as I knew we we

16、re likely to be saved.Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time.But this time the bear became more alert.He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger,so we throw all the food we have.He then turned away and started devouring.As we were climbing the rope ladder,Elli prayed like thou

17、sand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound.范文2 A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.The furry giant must have gathered his wits,for he suddenly reared up and attacked the fence with ferocious strength,leaving a narrow opening on it.Behind me,Elli muffled a cry of terror.

18、My eyes were fixed on the intruder.My mind raced like flash as my hands groped for anything that might keep us safe from the bears rampage.Thats when I felt the camera.With little hesitation,I shoved the equipment through the opening as the polar bear closed his jaws on the lens and then pulled my w

19、hole camera out and smashed it.At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.I ran back to the camp,stumbling a hundred times in my haste.Elli contacted the pilot over the radio.Hearing that we had not suffered any physical injury,the pilot told us to stay put and cover our ears.The harsh whooshing noi

20、se of the approaching helicopter spooked the young bear.The animal took a few hesitant steps back and eventually disappeared back towards the lake.Although my camera has met its glorious end,and though all our pictures were lost,our memory of this unexpected encounter remains fresh till this day.1.1

21、.史铁生虽然自身残疾史铁生虽然自身残疾,可是对生活的热爱却无时不流露于笔端。如果没有爱可是对生活的热爱却无时不流露于笔端。如果没有爱,他不会发现地坛的内在他不会发现地坛的内在;2.2.如果没有博爱如果没有博爱,他就无法观察数年来地坛的变迁他就无法观察数年来地坛的变迁,以及每一位进出地坛的人的特点以及每一位进出地坛的人的特点,只有对生活充满热爱只有对生活充满热爱,情感升华到博爱的人情感升华到博爱的人,才能那么细致地观察一切才能那么细致地观察一切,精心地记载一切精心地记载一切,用美丽的文字描述一切用美丽的文字描述一切;3.3.只有心底有爱的人只有心底有爱的人,才能感悟出人生的意义才能感悟出人生的意

22、义,从痛苦境地爬过从痛苦境地爬过,走向光明走向光明;只有心底有爱的人只有心底有爱的人,他才会如此懂得感恩他才会如此懂得感恩,知道忏悔知道忏悔,才能勇敢面对自己年轻时犯下的错才能勇敢面对自己年轻时犯下的错,才能把一切写出来才能把一切写出来,让世人得到教育与启迪。让世人得到教育与启迪。4.4.人的一生会遇到很多事很多人人的一生会遇到很多事很多人,不可能事事称心不可能事事称心,处处如意处处如意,需要我们坚强需要我们坚强,需要我们都有一颗平常心需要我们都有一颗平常心,一种平和的心态一种平和的心态,学会面对学会面对,懂得感恩。懂得感恩。5.5.记得有句禅语道记得有句禅语道，当你抱怨自己的鞋不好时当你抱怨

23、自己的鞋不好时,却发现有人竟没有脚。所以却发现有人竟没有脚。所以,不管你是谁不管你是谁,不管你在做什么不管你在做什么,都有存在的理由都有存在的理由,都要尽心尽力地去付出都要尽心尽力地去付出,这样才可以拥有无怨无悔的快乐人生这样才可以拥有无怨无悔的快乐人生6.6.作者曾这样解释自己的名字作者曾这样解释自己的名字-心血倾注过的地方不容丢弃心血倾注过的地方不容丢弃,我常常觉得这是我的姓名的昭示我常常觉得这是我的姓名的昭示,让历史铁一样地生着让历史铁一样地生着,以便不断地去看它以便不断地去看它,不是不断地去看这些文字不是不断地去看这些文字,而是借助这些蹒跚的脚印不断看那一向都在写作着的灵魂而是借助这些

24、蹒跚的脚印不断看那一向都在写作着的灵魂,看这灵魂的可能与去向。这也可以看作是对他作品的最好的诠释。看这灵魂的可能与去向。这也可以看作是对他作品的最好的诠释。7.7.因为这个故事体现了中华民族的优良传统因为这个故事体现了中华民族的优良传统,是地坛成就了一位卓越的作家是地坛成就了一位卓越的作家,在他身上体现了我们这个民族的自强不息的精神在他身上体现了我们这个民族的自强不息的精神;也是地坛成就了一位伟大的中国母亲也是地坛成就了一位伟大的中国母亲,她身上散发着母爱的光芒。她身上散发着母爱的光芒。8.8.不会讲述。史铁生的故事只是我们生活中的一个个例不会讲述。史铁生的故事只是我们生活中的一个个例,与地坛

25、传统的文化风格不相符合与地坛传统的文化风格不相符合,参观地坛的人参观地坛的人,大多只是想了解中国丰厚的文化底蕴和历史知识大多只是想了解中国丰厚的文化底蕴和历史知识,讲史铁生的故事与地坛本身所代表的旅游文化出入太大。讲史铁生的故事与地坛本身所代表的旅游文化出入太大。9.9.会讲述会讲述,但不会讲得太多。毕竟史铁生的故事与地坛本身的文化、历史结合不太大但不会讲得太多。毕竟史铁生的故事与地坛本身的文化、历史结合不太大,只是借史铁生的故事提高一下地坛的知名度只是借史铁生的故事提高一下地坛的知名度,并借此表现自己知识的丰富并借此表现自己知识的丰富,以引起游客的兴趣以引起游客的兴趣,使自己的导游工作做得更好。使自己的导游工作做得更好。10.10.散文中的物象散文中的物象,就是倾注了作者的思想与主观情感的生动鲜明的形象就是倾注了作者的思想与主观情感的生动鲜明的形象,它是作者抒怀言志的凭借与依据它是作者抒怀言志的凭借与依据,命题者常常从散文的物象入手设题命题者常常从散文的物象入手设题,常见的提问方式有联系全文常见的提问方式有联系全文,指出某物象的含义和它在结构上的作用。指出某物象的含义和它在结构上的作用。