中考英语写作精讲课件.pptx

1、中考英语写作精讲中考英语写作精讲第一部分考情分析PART One01第十届第十届“21世纪杯世纪杯”全国英语演讲比赛冠军发言稿全国英语演讲比赛冠军发言稿Building Bridges for the FutureIm studying in a city thats famous for its walls。People who visit my city are amazed at the imposing sight of its walls,especially when silhouetted against the setting sun with gold,shining str

2、eaks。The old,cracked bricks are covered with lichens and the walls are weather-beaten guards standing still for centuries。Our ancestors liked to build walls。They built walls in Beijing,Xian,Nanjing and many other cities,and they built the G KIDS HAVE AN OPINIINION TOO!Hi!Im Sigmund Friend,the editor

3、(编辑)of a new magazine KIDVOICE.We like hearing from kids.We know youve got things to say.We want t to hear from you.Here is a topic you might have an opinion about.假如你是在南京学习的英国交流学生假如你是在南京学习的英国交流学生MaxMax，你的英国同学，你的英国同学Simon Simon 给你写了一封电子邮件请你根给你写了一封电子邮件请你根据邮件内容，用英语给据邮件内容，用英语给Simon Simon 回一封电子邮件回一封电子邮件

4、Hey MaxHey Max，I havent heard from you since you in NanjingI havent heard from you since you in NanjingHow are you getting onHow are you getting on？Is Is everything OK with the school you study ineverything OK with the school you study in？What are your English classes likeWhat are your English class

5、es like？Write soon!Write soon!YoursYoursSimonSimon注意：注意：1 1文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2 2语言通顺，意思连贯，条例清楚，书写规范；语言通顺，意思连贯，条例清楚，书写规范；3 3词数词数8080左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数Hi SimonHi Simon，Sorry I havent written till nowSorry I havent written till nowYoursYours，MaxMax 第二部分高频话题PA

6、RT One021.人物介绍类人物介绍类 2.语言学习类语言学习类3.环境保护类环境保护类 4.介绍介绍北京北京类类5.传统文化类传统文化类 6.活动活动邀请邀请类类7.人际关系类人际关系类 8.科技创新类科技创新类9.描述事件类描述事件类第三部分方法解读PART One03Dear friends,do you know how to express the following things?paper cuttingcalligraphyChinese knot话题解读之传统文化类话题解读之传统文化类 涉及对象涉及对象传统节日、风俗传统、特色文化等传统节日、风俗传统、特色文化等涉及内容涉及

7、内容1.传统节日的时间和意义，如春节传统节日的时间和意义，如春节、端午节、端午节、中秋节等中秋节等2.传统节日的庆祝活动和风俗传统，如贴春联、赏花灯、舞龙狮等传统节日的庆祝活动和风俗传统，如贴春联、赏花灯、舞龙狮等3.传统文化的简单介绍，如京剧、剪纸、书法、品茶传统文化的简单介绍，如京剧、剪纸、书法、品茶等等命题形式命题形式1.邀请邀请外国朋友一起过中国传统节日外国朋友一起过中国传统节日，2.邀请外国朋友体验中国传统邀请外国朋友体验中国传统文化活动文化活动，3.讨论开设中国传统文化的综合实践课程的讨论开设中国传统文化的综合实践课程的意义意义假如你是李华，你们学校开设了有关中国传统文化的综合实假

8、如你是李华，你们学校开设了有关中国传统文化的综合实践课。请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈为什践课。请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈为什么有必要开这门课，在课上你通常做什么以及你的感受。么有必要开这门课，在课上你通常做什么以及你的感受。提示提示词语：词语：show,make tea,learn,paper cutting,help,dumplings,proud 提示提示问题问题：Why is it necessary to have classes about traditional Chinese culture?What do you usually do in the

9、se classes?How do you feel?1.基本基本信息信息人称人称时态时态体裁体裁话题话题2.文章文章要点要点Why is it necessary to have classes about traditional Chinese culture?What do you usually do in these classes?How do you feel?词义词义普通词汇普通词汇高级词汇高级词汇有必要的有必要的necessary有意义的有意义的usefulmeaningful沏茶沏茶make tea 剪纸剪纸paper cutting 简单简单easysimple折叠折叠

10、fold书法书法 calligraphy优雅的优雅的beautifulelegant自豪的自豪的proud 要点一：要点一：Why is it necessary to have classes about traditional Chinese culture?要点词汇要点词汇necessary;a good chance;know;Chinese culture练习版练习版升级版升级版Its necessary for us to know Chinese culture.Its a good chance to know Chinese culture.The reason why it

11、 is necessary to have these classes is that it is a good chance for us to know more about Chinese culture.要点二：要点二：What do you usually do in these classes?要 点 词要 点 词汇汇tea;history;make;paper cutting;simple;difficult;fold;calligraphy;art练习版练习版升级版升级版First,we usually learn how to make tea.Second,we usual

12、ly learn paper cutting,its difficult but interesting.In the classes,weve learned something interesting and meaningful.The first we learn is the history of tea and how to make tea perfectly.We also learn paper cutting,which seems simple but is actually difficult to make,for it needs to be folded care

13、fully before it is cut with scissors.要点三：要点三：How do you feel?要点词汇要点词汇proud练习版练习版 升级版升级版Im proud of Chinese culture.In a word,the traditional Chinese culture gives me a chance to feel the beauty of our culture and embrace the traditional customs.I am proud of being a Chinese and proud of our wonderfu

14、l culture.表并列表并列表对比表对比表条件表条件表原因表原因表结果表结果表列举表列举表强调表强调表顺序表顺序表总结表总结 表目的表目的and,also,too,as well,as well as,both and,not only but also,either or,neither nor,in addition(另外另外),besides(而且而且),Whats more(而且而且),but,however,yet,although,though,while,compared withif,unless because,because of,for,since,as,so,the

15、refore,as a result,sothat,suchthatlike,such as,for example surely,certainly,in fact,there is no doubt,no wonder,neverfirst(ly),second(ly),lastlyfirst of all,then,next,afterwards,finally in a word,in all,in my opinion,to concludein order to,so that,in order that 为下篇文章填写恰当为下篇文章填写恰当的词的词whyWhats morewhi

16、chWe have classes about traditional Chinese culture this term.The reason _ it is necessary to have these classes is that it is a good chance for us to know more about Chinese culture.In the classes,weve learned something interesting and meaningful.The first we learn is the history of tea and how to

17、make tea perfectly._,we also learn paper cutting,_ seems simple _ is actually difficult to make,for it needs to be folded carefully before it is cut with scissors._ many practice and with my teachers help,I can cut some beautiful paper flowers now._,what I like most is calligraphy,the art of elegant

18、 handwriting.While learning calligraphy,I find myself become more quiet and patient._,the traditional Chinese culture gives me a chance to feel the beauty of our culture and embrace the traditional customs.I am proud of being a Chinese and proud of our wonderful culture.butAfter In additionIn a word

19、检查要点检查要点1.要点是否全面要点是否全面2.时态、人称是否一致时态、人称是否一致3.句子结构是否清晰句子结构是否清晰4.短语使用、单词拼写是否准确短语使用、单词拼写是否准确5.表达是否符合英语习惯表达是否符合英语习惯修改以下修改以下文章文章We have classes about traditional Chinese culture this term.The reason why it is necessary to have these classes that it is a good chance for us to know more about Chinese cultur

20、e.In the classes,weve learned something interesting and meaningful.The first we learn is the history of tea and what to make tea perfectly.Whats more,we also learn paper cutting,which seems simple but is actually difficult make,for it needs to folded carefully before it is cut with scissors.After nu

21、merous practice and with my teachers help,I can cut some beautiful paper flowers now.In addition to,what I like most calligraphy,the art of elegant handwriting.While learning calligraphy,I find myself become more quiet and patiently.By having these classes,we not only has fun but also learn a lot.An

22、d I am proud of being a Chinese and proud of our wonderful culture.ishowtobeIn additionispatienthave如果你让老师眼疼，老师会让你心疼哦第四部分实战演练PART One04视频链接网址：https:/ 涉及对象涉及对象自己与他人；英语学习与汉语学习自己与他人；英语学习与汉语学习涉及内容涉及内容1.语言学习的语言学习的“方法策略方法策略”-向他人介绍学习方法向他人介绍学习方法2.语言学习的语言学习的“情感态度情感态度”-说明自己对语言学习的认识说明自己对语言学习的认识3.语言学习的语言学习的“困惑质

23、疑困惑质疑”-倾诉自己语言学习的困惑，希望得到他人的帮助倾诉自己语言学习的困惑，希望得到他人的帮助4.语言学习的语言学习的“学习经历学习经历”-结合自己学习的经历，分享学习心得体会结合自己学习的经历，分享学习心得体会命题形式命题形式1.建议信建议信-建议他人如何学好英语或是汉语建议他人如何学好英语或是汉语2.向他人表达自己英语学习的现状向他人表达自己英语学习的现状3.介绍自己学习上取得的进步介绍自己学习上取得的进步4.对学习发表自己的看法对学习发表自己的看法假如你是红星中学高一新生李华，开学之初，你的英语外教假如你是红星中学高一新生李华，开学之初，你的英语外教Peter希望了解每位同学的英语学

24、习情况，请你写一封电子邮件希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，请你写一封电子邮件告诉他你对英语学习的认识，英语学习存在的主要问题以及希告诉他你对英语学习的认识，英语学习存在的主要问题以及希望老师给予何种帮助。望老师给予何种帮助。提示词语：提示词语：remember,new words,reading,speaking,listening,writing,practice,grammar,nervous提示问题：提示问题：How do you like English?What problems do you have in English learning?What do you expect t

25、he teacher to do to help you with your English?1.基本基本信息信息人称人称时态时态体裁体裁话题话题2.文章文章要点要点How do you like English?What problems do you have in English learning?What do you expect the teacher to do to help you with your English?要点一要点一：How do you like English?要点词汇要点词汇练习版练习版升级版升级版要点要点二二：What problems do you h

26、ave in English learning?要点词汇要点词汇练习版练习版升级版升级版要点要点三三：How do you feel?要点词汇要点词汇练习版练习版升级版升级版Dear PeterIm very happy to have you as our English teacher.As the world is becoming a global village,English is getting more and more important,so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

27、My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.Thank you!Yours,Li Hua