求助信写作HowtowriteALetterofRequest课件.pptx

1、How to writeA Letter of Request2011-2016全国全国卷高考作文卷高考作文年份年份写作话题与体裁写作话题与体裁具体内容要求具体内容要求2011请求辅导中心帮助（请求辅导中心帮助（求助信求助信）咨询预约咨询预约2012竞争参加夏令营（申请信）竞争参加夏令营（申请信）自我推荐自我推荐;参加意图参加意图2013请求他人接机（请求他人接机（求助信求助信）人物描写人物描写2014询问暑假学习计划（咨询信）询问暑假学习计划（咨询信）活动信息说明活动信息说明2015给美国朋友约稿给美国朋友约稿（求助信求助信）稿件内容篇幅稿件内容篇幅2016请求外教帮忙请求外教帮忙（求助信求

2、助信）修改所附材料文字和修改所附材料文字和格式格式Pre-writing:Task 1 Read,underline and identify the main structures(mostly 3 parts)of the letter.（课标卷）（课标卷）假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介本人简介 2.求助

3、内容求助内容 3.约定时间约定时间 4.你的联系方式你的联系方式 （Email:;Phone:12345678)注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.结束语已为你写好。结束语已为你写好。Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.Im writing to ask for help.I came here last month and found my courses interesting.Bu

4、t I have some difficulties with note-making and I have no idea of how to use the library.I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you.I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is ok with you.You may email o

5、r phone me.Here are my email address and phone number:;12345678.Thanks for your kindness in advance.Look forward to your reply.yours,Li hua 自我介绍自我介绍写信目的写信目的困难困难联系方式联系方式道谢道谢Common structure of a request letter1.Opening:Introduce yourself&_ politely.2.Body:Describe your _&_ again.Try to be specific if

6、 possible.3.End:Give _ to the person who will help you.ask for helpdifficultiesask for helpthanksA.Useful expressions for an opening：写信来寻求帮助：(用至少两种方式表达)(a)Im writing _.(b)Im writing _.to ask for/seek your helpto ask whether you can give me a handMore expressions:1.Im writing this letter,with the hop

7、e that you will be kind to give me a hand.2.I wonder if you could do me a favor.3.Sorry to bother you but I really need your help.Im in desperate need of your help.*adj./adv.persuasiveB.Useful expressions for describing the difficulties:高二学生，学习英语有困难(用至少两种方式表达)(a)_(b)_.(c)_.As a Senior two student,I

8、have（met/encountered）some difficulties/trouble in learning English.English frustrates me a lot as I just cant take so many different aspects into my consideration at a time.Now Im in Senior 2,I find it extremely hard for me to learn English well.*reasons persuasive 虽然努力过，人际交往仍有问题(用至少两种方式表达)(a)_,inte

9、rpersonal relationship is still a headache for me.(b)_,interpersonal relationship is still an obstacle(障碍)for me to overcome.(c)_,interpersonal relationship is still an obstacle(障碍)for me.Although I have tried many timesHard as I triedIve tried to participate in some activities/share my hobbies with

10、 my classmates,but I find*facts,data persuasive C.Useful expressions for feelings,request&appreciation：(1)Having failed for so many times,I _.（描述情绪）（描述情绪）(2)请求帮助，表示谢意（用至少两种方式表达）请求帮助，表示谢意（用至少两种方式表达）_ _feel very depressed/disappointed/frustrated(c)Thank you in advance.(a)I would appreciate it if you c

11、an share your thoughts with me.(b)I would be grateful/delighted if you could give me some suggestions.*politeness persuasive While-writing:Task 2Practice writing（山东卷）（山东卷）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：a询问Tom的生活和学习情况；b谈谈你的困难并请To

12、m帮忙；c告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：a词数：100左右；b可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,Its a month since you studied in Beijing.How are you doing in Beijing?(求助)Im writing to ask for help.I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer.(我要认真准备）_ _ _.However,（搜集资料困难）_

13、 _.Meanwhile,（语言运用困难）_ _（求助并感谢）_ _.I also hope that the great effort I am making will pay off.Hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.Yours,Lihuawell-preparedhave some trouble in collecting useful materialsI find it hard to useI would appreciateI think the chance is of great importancei

14、t if you could offer me a handfor me.In order to get good performance,I need to be I still English properly.Post-writing:Task 3 The draft letter below is written by a student.Find out four sentences that need to be improved,paying attention to their styles and tones.Dear teacher,My name is Li Hua.I

15、wanna you to help me.I have met many difficulties in learning English.First,I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember.Besides,the texts are too long for me to recite.Whats more,grammar is also very difficult to learn.Faced with so many difficulties,I have to ask y

16、ou for some help.You should introduce us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily？In the meanwhile,I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you.Also,I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar

17、.Im sure that I can make great progress in my English study if you can answer my question and follow my advice.Yours,Li Hua1.too casual2.repetition3.impolite tonesDear teacher,My name is Li Hua.Im writing this letter to seek some help.I have met many difficulties in learning English.First,I find our

18、 texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember.Besides,the texts are too long for me to recite.Whats more,grammar is also beyond my reach.Faced with so many difficulties,I have to ask you for some help.Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that w

19、e can remember them more easily？In the meanwhile,I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you.Also,I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar.Im sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.Yours,Li Hua Homework:Two of your classmates broke up with each other because some misunderstandings.Help your them to write a letter or request to their friends to ask for help.