高三英语写作专题5祝贺信课件.ppt

1、5.祝祝 贺贺 信信 祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、结婚、过新年或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、结婚、过新年或重大节日等时，给对方祝贺的信件。书写时重大节日等时，给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信通常应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信通常包括以下内容：祝贺事由包括以下内容：祝贺事由所取得的成绩所取得的成绩被祝贺人过去的努力被祝贺人过去的努力被祝贺人的优点被祝贺人的优点表表达自己的愿望。达自己的愿望。文体概述文体概述1.恭喜恭喜/祝贺祝贺 _2.实现实现/成真成真 _3.很高兴听到很高兴听到 _4.很高兴知道你很高兴

2、知道你1._2.5.我想表达我对我想表达我对的祝贺的祝贺 _I would like to express my congratulations oncome trueHow happy I am to hearI have learned with delight that you常用语块常用语块 congratulations on/congratulate(sb on sth)6.我为你我为你感到非常高兴感到非常高兴 _7.是相当令人振奋的消息！是相当令人振奋的消息！_8.我知道这肯定是因为我知道这肯定是因为 _9.这是你这是你而非常应得的奖赏而非常应得的奖赏 _10.我希望我希望 _I

3、t is a reward that you richly deserve for yourI feel very happy for you(r)is quite exciting news!I know this is surely owing toI hope11.请接受请接受 _12.赢得第一名赢得第一名 _13.祝你一切顺利祝你一切顺利!_14.祝你心想事成祝你心想事成!_15.祝你年年有今日，岁岁有今朝。祝你年年有今日，岁岁有今朝。_I wish you many happy returns of the day.Please acceptwin(the)first prizeWi

4、sh you all the best!May all your wishes come true!套用句式套用句式1.我很高兴你梦想成真。我很高兴你梦想成真。I feel very happy that your dream has come true.2.我写信是对你表示衷心的祝贺。我写信是对你表示衷心的祝贺。Im writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.3.我写信是为了表达我对你收到北京大学录取通我写信是为了表达我对你收到北京大学录取通知书衷心的祝贺。知书衷心的祝贺。Im writing to convey my heartf

5、elt congratulations on your receiving the offer from Peking University.4.得知你被推选为学校篮球队队长我很开心。得知你被推选为学校篮球队队长我很开心。I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team.5.请接受我最诚挚的问候。请接受我最诚挚的问候。Please accept my warmest regards.习作修改习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文做短文改错，背经典范文)De

6、ar Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!Im Li Hua,a student in Sichuan.Ive been a panda lover when I was a child.About three years ago I am delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth for her daughter Sulin and Ive been watched her grow on your website.Now that shes going to be three.since was to watchingId

7、 like to wish him a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard works,because which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and health life in the US.By the way,could I have a photo of Sulin taking on her third birthday?Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly,Li Huataken healthy

8、 ofworkher 本文讲了熊猫爱好者李华写信向远在美国的本文讲了熊猫爱好者李华写信向远在美国的大熊猫一家表达祝福。大熊猫一家表达祝福。1.when since 主句出现了现在完成时，应将主句出现了现在完成时，应将when改成改成since，表明时间从过去持续到现在。，表明时间从过去持续到现在。2.am was 由时间状语由时间状语three years ago可知谓可知谓语要用过去时。语要用过去时。3.for to 因因give birth to为固定搭配，意为为固定搭配，意为“分娩，生产分娩，生产”。4.watched watching 因因watch这个动作是由主这个动作是由主语语I发

9、出，应将表示被动的发出，应将表示被动的watched改为改为watching。5.去掉去掉Now后的后的that 上文说三年前看到小熊猫出上文说三年前看到小熊猫出世世,这句话说她即将这句话说她即将3岁岁,应该是指现在应该是指现在,去掉去掉that。6.him her 上文熊猫是用上文熊猫是用she代替代替,上下文指代上下文指代应该一致。应该一致。7.works work 表示工作表示工作,work为不可数名词。为不可数名词。8.在在because和和which之间加之间加of 这里是非限制性定这里是非限制性定语从句，表示因为工作人员的辛苦语从句，表示因为工作人员的辛苦,大熊猫一家才大熊猫一家才

10、过得平安快乐。而过得平安快乐。而which指代的是指代的是hard work，故，故用用because of。9.health healthy 修饰名词修饰名词life应用形容词。应用形容词。10.taking taken 此处此处take与与photo形成被动的形成被动的关系，即关系，即a photo that is taken on her birthday，应，应用过去分词形式。用过去分词形式。课堂练习课堂练习 假定你是李华，得知你的英国朋友假定你是李华，得知你的英国朋友Tom刚被刚被北京大学中文系录取。请你写封邮件表示祝贺，北京大学中文系录取。请你写封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：内容包括：

11、1.表示祝贺；表示祝贺；2.肯定努力；肯定努力；3.表达祝愿。表达祝愿。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,Yours,Li HuaDear Tom,Im writing to convey my heartfelt congratulations on your receiving the offer from Peking University.I feel more than delighted for you as its a golden chance to learn from the gr

12、eat minds.But indeed no one could have been more deserving of it than you,because I know you have been studying Chinese for years.It is your diligence and persistence that stand you out in the crowd.It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off and I do hope you can understand China and it

13、s splendid culture better.Wish you still further success in Chinese study and make preparations for the coming challenge.Yours,Li Hua课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信告来信告诉你他被推选为学校篮球队队长。请你给他回诉你他被推选为学校篮球队队长。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：一封邮件，内容包括：1.对他表示祝贺；对他表示祝贺；2.你对此事的看法；你对此事的看法；3.对他的祝愿。对他的祝愿。注意：注意：1.词数词数1

14、00左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,Yours truly,Li HuaDear Peter,I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team.This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of you.Please accept my sincerest congratulations!As we a

15、ll know,the leader plays an important role in the basketball team.Leading such a team,youll meet great challenges.But I think you can manage them,because you are not only hard-working but also you have a strong sense of responsibility.I believe this position will be a new beginning,and a chance for you to achieve more.May all your wishes come true!Yours truly,Li Hua