高中英语读后续写高分作文专练课件.pptx

1、高考英语新型作文高考英语新型作文读后续写专练一读后续写专练一原文原文 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。There is a farm not far from the coastline.It belongs to a man called Tom.Tom couldnt do everything by himself on the farm.Thus,he needed to hire one man to help him run the farm.However,no one worked on his farm fo

2、r long.Why？Because the work was too tiring.Since the farm is near the sea,there are often storms from the sea that strike his farm.When a storm comes,Tom and the man he hired have to get up quickly and try to reduce the losses caused by the storm.Therefore,no one liked working there.Tom had to look

3、for people to work for him all the time.One day,a man called Henry read the poster that Tom had put up and then came to his farm.“Sir,I can work for you,”said Henry.Tom looked at Henry.This young man was neither strong nor tall.“Are you sure?”asked Tom.“Yes,sir.I can do the work well.But you must pa

4、y me twice what you paid others before,”said that young man.Tom was surprised.He didnt really believe such a man could do the work well.But it was really hard for him to find someone else to work for him.At last,he decided to give Henry a try.However,before hiring him,he said,“Can you really be a go

5、od helper？The work on the farm is hard and tiring.And there are often storms.”Henry smiled and said,“Dont worry.I can be a good helper.Youll see.And storms wont be a problem.They wont even disturb our sleep.We can sleep very well even on stormy nights.”And then Henry stayed on the farm.To Toms joy,H

6、enry worked hard and did his work well.It was obvious that he hadnt lied.However,one night,there was a big storm.Tom was woken up by the strong wind.He was worried that the storm would cause great losses for his farm.And he saw his helper nowhere.Paragraph 1 Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping.

7、_Paragraph 2 Tom thought he had hired the wrong man._写作提示 Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping._（Tom非常着急，使劲地敲非常着急，使劲地敲Henry的门）。的门）。_（令他感到吃惊（令他感到吃惊的是的是),Henry was still lying in his bed._（很明显（很明显,Henry没有意识到情况多么严重）。没有意识到情况多么严重）。_（Tom 生气地喊道）生气地喊道）“Get up!There is a big storm.We must work right now.

8、”_(Henry平静地回答平静地回答)“Sir,have you forgotten I told you that storms wouldnt disturb our sleep?Why not just go back to sleep?”_（听到这些话，（听到这些话，Tom 感到很感到很失望失望)。Tom thought he had hired the wrong man._(感到无助感到无助)，he rushed out to work on his own._（然而（然而，他刚到户外就看到意外的场景，房顶都被遮盖好了，所有的鸡，马和牛都，他刚到户外就看到意外的场景，房顶都被遮盖好

9、了，所有的鸡，马和牛都被安置妥当。）被安置妥当。）_(Tom松松了一口气，眼泪流下来了一口气，眼泪流下来)_（是（是Henry提前把所提前把所有的工作都做好了）有的工作都做好了）He realized he had hired the best man.参考范文Paragraph 1 Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping.So anxious was he that he knocked at the door of Henrys room violently.To Toms astonishment,Henry was still lying in

10、 his bed.It was extremely evident that Henry didnt realize how serious the situation was.Filled with rage,Tom shouted,“Get up!There is a big storm.We must work right now.”Calm and peaceful,Henry responded,“Sir,have you forgotten I told you that storms wouldnt disturb our sleep?Why not just go back t

11、o sleep?”Hearing the words,a wide disappointment took hold of Tom.Paragraph 2Tom thought he had hired the wrong man.Feeling helpless,he rushed out to work on his own.Nevertheless,no sooner had he gone outside than an unexpected scene came into his sight,all the roofs covered and all his chicken,hors

12、es and cows settled.Tom was seized by a strong sense of relief,tears streaming down his cheeks.It was Henry that did all the work well in advance before the storm came.He realized he had hired the best man.文章分析和写作指导文章分析和写作指导主旨大意主旨大意：这篇文章主要说的是主人公Tom在靠近海边的地方有一个农场。因为海边暴风雨比较多，当暴风雨来的时候，需要巨大的工作量。Tom雇佣的工人因

13、为受不了繁重的劳动而辞职。后来，Henry来应聘，他提出双倍工资，但是，他很能干，是个好助手。续写思路续写思路：一个风雨交加的晚上，Tom需要Henry一起去防护农场，但是看不到Henry的人影。段首指导语第一段Tom以为Henry在睡觉，第二段Tom认为自己雇佣错了人。这两句话基本设定了故事发展的主题。我们可以大胆的想象出：当Tom去Henry房间找他的时候，他的确在睡觉，而且拒绝和Tom一起去抵御暴风雨。而当Tom对Henry很失望，正准备自己去工作时，发现Henry早在暴风雨来之前已经做好了准备工作。农场上的东西井然有序，他们不需要在暴风雨中再做什么了。其实，他找到的是一个很好的员工。写

14、作风格写作风格：注意语言、动作、心理、情感等细节描绘。尝试使用动词、形容词、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、非谓语动词以及被动语态来刻画人物的语言、动作、心理、神态以及环境氛围。注意运用恰当的代词、逻辑衔接词把句子连接成文。重点词汇：重点词汇：anxious adj.焦急的 violently adv.暴力地rage n.狂怒 calm adj.镇静的 peaceful adj.平静的respond v.回复 disappointment n.失望 nevertheless adv.然而unexpected adj.意外的 seize v.抓住重点短语：重点短语：take hold of 抓住

15、filled with sth.充满in advance 提前重点句型：重点句型：1.so.that.结果状语从句的倒装结构。2.It be extremely evident that.that引导的主语从句。3.no sooner.than.时间状语从句的倒装。4.It be.that.强调句。Paragraph 1 Tom thought Henry must still be sleeping.So anxious was he that he knocked at the door of Henrys room violently.（描写（描写Tom 在暴风雨来临的时候，找在暴风雨来

16、临的时候，找不到帮手那种焦急的情绪。）不到帮手那种焦急的情绪。）To Toms astonishment,Henry was still lying in his bed.（令人意外的情况，与（令人意外的情况，与Tom的极其焦虑相比较，的极其焦虑相比较，Henry好像没事好像没事一样。）一样。）It was extremely evident that Henry didnt realize how serious the situation was.（Henry在这样严重的暴风雨天气还在坦然的睡觉，很明显在这样严重的暴风雨天气还在坦然的睡觉，很明显他没有意识到情况有多么糟糕。）他没有意识到情

17、况有多么糟糕。）Filled with rage,Tom shouted,“Get up!There is a big storm.We must work right now.”（看到这个场景，（看到这个场景，Tom更加愤更加愤怒）怒）Calm and peaceful,Henry responded,“Sir,have you forgotten I told you that storms wouldnt disturb our sleep?Why not just go back to sleep?”（然（然而，而，Henry却异常平静，无动于衷。）却异常平静，无动于衷。）Hearin

18、g the words,a wide disappointment took hold of Tom.(此情此景，留给此情此景，留给Tom的只有失望。的只有失望。)Paragraph 2Tom thought he had hired the wrong man.Feeling helpless,he rushed out to work on his own.（孤身作战，（孤身作战，Tom感到很无力。）感到很无力。）Nevertheless,no sooner had he gone outside than an unexpected scene came into his sight,a

19、ll the roofs covered and all his chicken,horses and cows settled.（然而，当他到室外正准备干活时，看到了意外的场景，一切都井（然而，当他到室外正准备干活时，看到了意外的场景，一切都井然有序。）然有序。）Tom was seized by a strong sense of relief,tears streaming down his cheeks.（这种强烈的转折令他如释重负。）（这种强烈的转折令他如释重负。）It was Henry that did all the work well in advance before the storm came.（此时此刻（此时此刻金他才明白，原来是金他才明白，原来是Henry 早在暴风雨来之前就把农场整理好了。）早在暴风雨来之前就把农场整理好了。）He realized he had hired the best man.（结局皆大欢喜，（结局皆大欢喜，Tom找到了最找到了最好的员工。）好的员工。）