人教版高一英语必修一作文写作《How-to-write-a-letter-of-advice》课件.ppt

1、How to write a letter for advice建议信写作建议信写作 卷面整洁 结构合理 要点全面 拼写正确 条理清楚 语法多样化 表达地道 词汇高级 句型高级polish 1 You should talk with your close friends.Let yourself relax.2 You should go out to play.And dont stay at home all day.3 You must be optimistic about life.Life will also smile to you.1 You must be optimist

2、ic about life.Life will also smile to you.As we all know,an active heart is the secret to success,so please be more brave to face life with smiles.2 You should go out to play.And dont stay at home all day.Why not play outdoors instead of staying at home all day?3 If you keep doing this,you will be i

3、n good health and get stronger and stronger.如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。条理清楚。要要点点全全词汇词汇,句型句型（高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道多样化（较复杂）语言地道连连接接词词假如你叫李华，是为民高中的学生，要给市长假如你叫李华，是为民高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括写一封信，反映学校

4、门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：以下要点：参考词汇参考词汇:穿行穿行 thread ones way 天桥天桥 overpass 问题问题建议建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小之孩子小,家长接送。交通家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。穿行危险。政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。第一步第一步:What must we pay attention to when writing an article?题材题材：人称人称 Person (The first/third

5、person)时态：时态：Tense(the simple present tense)要点：要点：a letter第一步：审题第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态)(when)第一人称第一人称一封信一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交建议

6、政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性说理逻辑性一般现在时一般现在时建议信篇章结构建议信篇章结构 说明建议的内容；说明建议的内容；提出具体建议的原因；提出具体建议的原因；指出采纳建议的益处。指出采纳建议的益处。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。方感受。适当运用模板适当运用模板Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题引出主题).Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to

7、.Then,it also helps to .Besides,it should be a good idea to .You can also .(此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建议的句式提出建议)As to ,I suggest (有时根据需要有时根据需要具体到某一反面具体到某一反面).In addition,(其他建其他建议议).Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心方以行动的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaDear_,You have asked me

8、for my advice with regard to _,and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion(以我拙见以我拙见),you would be wise to take the following actions:_.I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good luck with you.You

9、rs,XXX 第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议学校和一所小学毗学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小之孩子小,家长接家长接送。交通更拥挤；送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。穿行危险。政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。学校与一所小学毗邻学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街对着大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheres a primary school near our school,and both

10、 schools face the main street.Our school stands next to a primary school,faced with/facing the main street.推荐句型：推荐句型：There be+并列句并列句非谓语结构非谓语结构Standing next to a primary school,our school is faced with/faces the main street.润色润色小建议小建议Next to a primary school将介词短语提前（全倒装）将介词短语提前（全倒装）stands/lies/is our

11、school,faced with/facing a main street.可将可将stand next to替换为高级词汇替换为高级词汇/短语短语be located next to(near/beside/by)border/adjoin vt.be adjacent to与与毗邻毗邻在在对面对面 be opposite to The traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙高峰期交通繁忙.traffic.during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours,there are so many cars a

12、nd buses going on the road thatDuring the rush hours,there is a lot of traffic.so.thatwith结构结构With so many cars and buses going on the road,润色润色小建议小建议“高峰期高峰期”可意可意译译:at peak time，a large current of cars and people“交通繁忙交通繁忙”可译为可译为:traffic jamcongestion 交通堵塞交通堵塞be choke up withbe crammed with 被被堵塞堵塞/塞满

13、塞满 加之孩子小加之孩子小,家长接送家长接送,交通更拥挤交通更拥挤 sendto,fetch.,非谓语结构非谓语结构.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,which makes the traffic heavier.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,making the traffic heavier.,which.加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤Whats

14、 more,pick up.make.To make things worse/whats worse,many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.In addition/Additionally,many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,which makes the traffic heavier.Whats more,parents often attend their kids to s

15、chool,resulting in more serious traffic jams.What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.making the situation more serious.making the traffic heavier可意译为：可意译为：so.that.=tootoThe children are so young that parents have to send them to school

16、and fetch them home,which makes/making the traffic heavier.making 可替换为：可替换为：causing,leading to,resulting in“sendfetch”可替换为短语：可替换为短语：pick up润色润色小建议小建议 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险学生过街在车辆中穿行危险thread ones way，when doingIt is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.固定句

17、型固定句型It is+adj.for to do.1.Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.润色润色小建议小建议2.Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/sea of cars.灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：适当增加形容词和副词：适当增加形容词和副词：it is extremely dangerous，it is of great/tremendous danger政府应采取措施政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等

18、。suggest/suggestion,take steps/measures/action to do such asMy suggestion is that the government should表语从句表语从句固定句型固定句型 It is high time that(虚拟语气虚拟语气)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass

19、.简单句简单句1.In order to release the stress of traffic problems,润色润色小建议小建议2.Aimed at solving these problems,the government shouldA.适当添加一些意思（过渡句）适当添加一些意思（过渡句）The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.B.语义的意译语义的意译3.Seeing these matters,never will I stop urging our government to ta

20、ke some measures.For the sake of improving the quality of traffic,it is significant to buildC.添加形容词和副词添加形容词和副词I strongly suggest,active/effective measures第三步第三步.连句成文连句成文但要注意：篇章的连贯性但要注意：篇章的连贯性Next to a primary school stands our school,facing a main street._,its crammed with cars during the rush hour.

21、_ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age._,its of great danger for the students to go through the traffic._,it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.A.As a consequence B.According to the phenomenon stated above C.When it

22、comes to traffic jamsD.What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例不推荐字体不推荐字体优秀作文范例优秀作文范例1优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例2优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be句型，介词短语，从句，

23、非谓语，套用句式等来句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例3优点：考生运用倒装句，优点：考生运用倒装句，so that句式，精彩的句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。显内涵和语言功底。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例4优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。蕴。优秀作文范例优秀作文范例5优

24、秀作文范例优秀作文范例6Congestion n.阻塞阻塞,拥挤拥挤,充血充血适当运用模板适当运用模板Dear_,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _,and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion(依我拙见依我拙见),you would be wise to take the following actions:_.I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be read

25、y to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good luck with you.Yours,XXX Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题引出主题).Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to .Then,it also helps to .Besides,it should be a good idea to .You can also .(此三句此三句不同

26、不同的句式提出建议的句式提出建议)As to ,I suggest (有时根据需要有时根据需要具体到某一反面具体到某一反面).In addition,(其他建其他建议议).Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心方以行动的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li Hua 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨询来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点：参加中文学习班；参加中

27、文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ well._ _ _Best wishe

28、s,Best wishes,Li HuaLi HuaDear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to wat

29、ch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua