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1、 完型填空完型填空 15 语法填空语法填空 10 阅读理解阅读理解 35 信息匹配信息匹配 5-10 基础写作基础写作 15 读写任务读写任务 25注意答题顺序：试卷顺序（先易后难；作文最后）注意答题顺序：试卷顺序（先易后难；作文最后）时间就是分数，时间就是金钱，时间就是前途时间就是分数，时间就是金钱，时间就是前途高金海高金海莫小梅莫小梅刘荣杰刘荣杰黄欣黄欣许杏许杏杨天生杨天生梁媚梁媚罗洪慧罗洪慧林进娣林进娣廖柏鸿廖柏鸿126126123123120120120120119119119119118118117117113113113113120:4 110:10 100:16 90:18 89

2、:23 班平均分班平均分:95.24级平均分：级平均分：96.03理科排理科排：13 名名邓数红邓数红何伟何伟杨富美杨富美李彬李彬黄振凤黄振凤何月琳何月琳陈秋孟陈秋孟黄馨莹黄馨莹黄晓青黄晓青梁可兵梁可兵125125122122120120119119119119118118118118118118117117114114120:3 110:10 100:12 90:17 89:32班平均分班平均分:92.05级平均分：级平均分：96.03理科排理科排：23 名名基础写作基础写作存在问题：存在问题：1.词汇严重缺乏，词汇严重缺乏，很多内容无法表达很多内容无法表达2.中式英文中式英文,逐字翻译，不

3、按文法。逐字翻译，不按文法。3.时态错误：时态错误：4.书写潦草，书写潦草，卷面不整洁。卷面不整洁。5.有相当部分的学生没写作文或写一两句。有相当部分的学生没写作文或写一两句。我国首次对高速公路行驶的小汽车实行免费运行政策Our country is first time to carry out the policy that cars drive on the highway are free.第一句要用一般过去时，第一句要用一般过去时，而误用了一般现在而误用了一般现在时，陈述观点本来要用一般现在时或一般将来时，陈述观点本来要用一般现在时或一般将来时的，时的，但学生误用了一般过去时等。但学

4、生误用了一般过去时等。十一黄金周十一黄金周小汽车实行免费通行小汽车实行免费通行刺激消费刺激消费第三产业第三产业亲友驾车相聚亲友驾车相聚人与人距离拉近了人与人距离拉近了车流量猛增车流量猛增事故发生率上升事故发生率上升the National Day holidayfree passage was given to cars on the highwaycars can run on the highway for freeyou can drive cars on the highway for freestimulate consumptionthe third industryfriends

5、 and relatives reunite with each other by carbring people closerthe traffic flow will increase tremendouslyhigher accident rate好句子：好句子：1.Some people are in favor of it for the reason that not only can it stimulate consumption,which is beneficial to the development of the third industry such as touri

6、sm,but also it contributes a lot to our getting closer to our relatives and friends by driving to visit them often.2.Whats more,sharing cars with friends or relatives can make each other closer.During the last National Day holidays,free passage was given to cars on the highway for the first time eve

7、r,which caused a heated discussion nationwide.On the bright side,some believe that it is good to stimulate consumption and boost the third industry,such as tourism.To some extent,this policy brings people closer,for those who were reluctant to visit their friends are somehow seduced to reunite by ca

8、r.However,with cars flocking to the highways,others are concerned that the traffic flow will increase tremendously,resulting in worse traffic jam and higher accident rate.Personally,free passage is what the public have been longing for,but more following measures should be taken,for example,some con

9、tingency plans should be made to deal with the potential problems and more clear road signs are needed to give drivers precise guidance.读写任务读写任务存在问题：存在问题：A.A.概括部分：概括部分：1 1、概括要点不全、概括要点不全2 2、概括的表述错误：、概括的表述错误：The passage tells us that a nation survey about the sense of happiness.1).CCTV did a survey ab

10、out whether you were happy2).most people gave a positive answer while some didnt 3).the Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan said he didnt know whether he was happy or notB.正文部分：正文部分：1.书写潦草，涂改太多，书写潦草，涂改太多，卷面不整洁。卷面不整洁。2.每段段首空格不够，每段段首空格不够，全卷分段不明显，影响卷全卷分段不明显，影响卷面效果。面效果。3.时态错误。时态错误。在正文部分第二段描述一件幸福的在正文部分第二段描述一件幸福的事时

11、，有些学生全没有应该用一般过去时的概念，事时，有些学生全没有应该用一般过去时的概念，或者有的学生忘了谓语动词的相应词尾变化。或者有的学生忘了谓语动词的相应词尾变化。4.内容不够充实。内容不够充实。5.存在一些表述错误。如：谓语都是存在一些表述错误。如：谓语都是be+动词原动词原形（形（my parents is love me.）、词性乱用）、词性乱用（happy is very simply.）等）等,尤其中式英文出尤其中式英文出现率很高。现率很高。好句子：好句子：1.As far as I am concerned,I firmly believe that I do live happi

12、ly for the reason that I have so many people to love and to be loved.2.Although I will face some challenges sometimes,I feel satisfied as they are too small compared with the people who are suffering from hunger,cold and all kinds of illness.3.As far as I am concerned,happiness lies in the process of pursuing our dreams and the moment when we achieve them.