第八章-致谢的写作课件.ppt

1、第8章 致谢的写作 8.1 致谢的写作要点8.2 基金资助项目的英文表达8.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析 致谢的写作 致谢除了表达道义上的感谢外，也是尊重他人贡献的表示，致谢中通常包括以下内容：（1）感谢任何个人或机构在技术上的帮助，其中包括提供仪器、设备或相关实验材料，协作实验工作，提供有益的启发、建议、指导、审阅，承担某性辅助性工作，等等。（2）感谢外部的基金帮助，如资助、协议或奖学金，有时还需要附注资助项目号、合同书编号。7.1 致谢的写作要点 （1）致谢的内容应尽量具体 致谢的对象应是对论文工作有直接和实质性帮助、贡献的人或者机构，因此，致谢中应尽量指出相应对象的具体帮助与贡献。例

2、如：应该使用如“Thanks are due to J.Jones for assistance with the experiments and to R.Smith for valuable discussion.”的表达，避免如“To acknowledge all of the people who have contributed to this paper in some manner”7.1 致谢的写作要点 致谢某人可能暗含着某人赞同论文的观点或结论，如果被感谢的人并不同意论文的全部观点或结论，那么论文公开发表后被感谢的人和作者都会很尴尬，因此，要注意选用适当的词句来表达感谢，如

3、果是感谢一个思想、建议或者解释，就要尽量指明这些内容，以免将被感谢的对象敏感而尴尬地置于为整篇论文承担文责的境地。投稿前应请所有被感谢的对象阅读论文的定稿（尤其是致谢部分），以获得允许或默认。7.1 致谢的写作要点（2）用词要恰当 要注意选用恰当的词句来表达感谢之情，避免因疏忽而冒犯本应该接受感谢的个人或机构。致谢的开始就用“We thank”,不要使用“We wish to thank”“We would like to thank”或“The authors thank”等，尤其是“wish”一词最好在致谢中消失。当表达愿望时，“wish”是很好的词，但是如果说“I wish to tha

4、nk John Jones,”则是在浪费单词，并且也可能蕴涵“I wish that I could thank John Jones for his help but it was not all that great.”(我希望感谢John Jones 的帮助，但这种帮助并不那么大），实际上用“I thank John Jones“显得更为简明和真诚。7.1 致谢的写作要点（3）致谢的形式要遵从拟投稿期刊的习惯和相关规定 参阅期刊的投稿指南的作者需知，尤其是对于感谢有关基金资助的信息，有些期刊要求将其放到“致谢”中，有些则要求将其放到论文的首页的脚注。7.2 基金资助项目的英文表达 国内大

5、部分英文期刊习惯将基金资助项目的信息作为论文首页的脚注，国外期刊则多将其作为“致谢”的一部分。以论文首页的脚注形式注明基金资助项目的案例：Supported by the Major State Basic Research Development Program of China(Grant No.2001GB30940105),the National Natural Science Foundation of China(Grant No.60171009)and the Key Project of Science and Technology of Shanghai(Grant No

6、.02DZ/5002)见：Progress in Natural Science自然科学进展,SCI收录期刊，2004,14(3):269-275该期刊在EBSCO数据库的ASP中有全文7.2 基金资助项目的英文表达 部分科学基金英文表达 国家自然科学基金（面上项目、重点项目、重大项目）National Natural Science Foundation of China(General Program、Key Program、Major Program)国家杰出青年科学基金 National Science Fund for Distinguished Young Scholars 国家科

7、技攻关项目 National Key Technologies R&D Program of China 国家教育部博士点基金助项目 Ph.D.Programs Foundation of Ministry of Education of China公平：SCI高被引论文致谢案例 作为“致谢”的一部分形式注明感谢了提供相关资料以及与其进行启发式讨论的同行们的案例：Acknowledgments This work is supported by the Natural Sciences and Engineering Research Council of Canada.We thank Pr

8、ofessor J.A.Pople and Dr.P.M.W.Gill for a preprint of Ref.13,and Professor T.Ziegler and Professor R.A.Friesner for enlightening discussions.题目：Density-Functional Thermochemistry.3.The Role of Exact Exchange（密度函数的热化学：（密度函数的热化学：3.正解交换的作用）正解交换的作用）作者:BECKE,ADJOURNAL OF CHEMICAL PHYSICS 卷:98 期:7 页:5648-

9、5652 出版年:APR 1 1993 作者首先提供了基金资助方面的信息，接着分别感谢了提供相关资料以及与其进行启发式讨论的同行们。被引4,3619次公平：SCI高被引论文致谢案例作为“致谢”的一部分形式感谢数位同行或朋友让其分享尚未公开发表的文献或数据的案例Acknowledgments My work was supported by National Institutes of Health grants CA31798,CA31799,A131921,DK45104,and HL48675.Many references had to be deleted to shorten thi

10、s review,and I apologize to authors and readers for work that could not be cited.I thank Andrew and Tom Issekutz,Alf Hamann,Eugene Butcher,Mike Brenner,lan Colditz,Adrienne Brian,Ronen Alon,Doug Ringlet,Michelle Cart,and Stephen Roth for sharing preprints or unpublished data and David Chang,Chades M

11、ackay,Walter Newman,and Fred Rosen for critical reviews.题目题目:TRAFFIC SIGNALS FOR LYMPHOCYTE RECIRCULATION AND LEUKOCYTE EMIGRATION-THE MULTISTEP PARADIGM（淋巴细胞再循环和白细胞迁移中的路径信号多步骤范例）作者:SPRINGER,TA期刊：CELL 卷:76 期:2 页:301-314 出版年:JAN 28 1994这是一个唯一作者发表的论文，因而以个人名义表示感谢相关基金资助（My work was supported by）本文是一篇14页

12、的综述有105篇参考文献，作者可能应编辑要求删除了部分参考文献，因而为此向读者和被删除了文献的相关作者表示歉意。作者还感谢数位同行或朋友让其分享尚未公开发表的文献或数据作者还感谢数位同行或朋友让其分享尚未公开发表的文献或数据，并感谢Fred Rosen 的批评性审阅。被引4327次7.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析 Acknowledgments The authors gratefully acknowledge the assistance of Steven Conley and Michele Forrestall in prepaing the photomicrographs.本

13、文多位作者受不同资金资助的信息在首页以脚注的形式表示。致谢中作者们表达了Steven Conley 和 Michele Forrestall 在显微镜照片方面的帮助。T i t l e:A R E V I S E D E U R O P E A N-A M E R I C A N CLASSIFICATION OF LYMPHOID NEOPLASMS-A PROPOSAL FROM THE INTERNATIONAL LYMPHOMA STUDY-GROUP（修正的欧美淋巴瘤分类：国际淋巴瘤研究小组的建议）Source:BLOOD 84(5):1361-1392 SEP 1 1994 血液美

14、国SCI被引4000次7.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析 Acknowledgments The authors thank David Hill and Marilee Burrell for preparing the mouse antisera to WAF1.This work was supported by the Preuss Foundation,the Clayton Fund,and National Institutes of Health grants CA-09071 and CA-43460.作者们感谢了 David Hill 和 Marilee Burrell

15、 在实验材料准备方面的帮助，并给出了三种来源4项基金资助信息Title:WAF1,A POTENTIAL MEDIATOR OF P53 TUMOR SUPPRESSION（WAF1:p53肿瘤抑制作用的一个可能介导因子）Source:CELL 75(4):817-825 NOV 19 1993 SCI被引5174次公平：SCI高被引论文致谢案例Acknowledgments W.M.and Z.Z.are supported by grant Lm05110 from the National Library of Medicine.We thank Dr.Warren Gish for h

16、elpful conversations,Dr.Eugene Koonin for assistance with the the samples,and Dr.Gregory Schuler for producing several of the figures.题目题目:Gapped BLAST and PSI-BLAST:a new generation of protein database search programs（空位BLAST(碱基局部对准检索)和特殊位置重复BLAST：新一代蛋白质数据库检索程序)期刊:Nucleic Acids Research 25(17):3389

17、-3402 SEP 1 1997 核酸研究英国W.M.和 Z.Z.分别是本文的第6和第5作者，二人共同受到来自National Library of Medicine的资助，因此表示感谢。所有作者对与Gish博士的有益讨论、Koonin 博士在样品方面的帮助、Schuler 博士在处理几张图件方面的帮助表示感谢。被引3,5012次作为“致谢”的一部分形式感谢数位博士在讨论、样品、图片帮助的案例7.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析7.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析 作者们明确指出了不同的感谢理由（for baculoviruses,for purified proteins,for Y190,

18、for baculoviruses）并提供了相关作者接受资金资助方面的信息。Title:THE P21 CDK-INTERACTING PROTEIN CIP1 IS A POTENT INHIBITOR OF G1 CYCLIN-DEPENDENT KINASES（p21Cdk作用蛋白(又称Cip1)是G1细胞周期依赖性蛋白激酶的强抑制剂）Author(s):HARPER JW,ADAMI GR,WEI N,KEYOMARSI K,ELLEDGE SJ Source:CELL 75(4):805-816 NOV 19 1993 SCI被引3876次，7.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析Aut

19、hor(s):Hanahan,D;Weinberg,RATitle:The hallmarks of cancerSource:CELL,100(1):57-70 JAN 7 2000 SCI被引3282次Acknowledgements We wish to thank Terry Schoop of Biomed Arts Associates,San Francisco,for preparation of the figures,Cori Bargmann and Zena Werb for insightful comments on the manuscript,and Normi

20、ta Santore for editorial assistance.In addition,we are indebted to Joe Harford and Richard Klausner,who allowed us to adapt and expand their depiction of the cell signaling network,and we appreciate suggestions on signaling pathways from Randy Watnick,Brian Elenbas,Bill Lundberg,Dave Morgan,and Henr

21、y Bourne.R.A.W.is a Ludwig Foundation and American Cancer Society Professor of Biology.His work has been supported by the Department of the Army and the National Institutes of Health.D.H.acknowledges the support and encouragement of the National Cancer Institute.Editorial policy has rendered the cit

22、ations illustrative but not comprehensive.7.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析Author(s):Bartel,DPTitle:MicroRNAs:Genomics,biogenesis,mechanism,and functionSource:CELL,116(2):281-297 JAN 23 2004 SCI被引772次Acknowledgements I thank members of my lab,plus B.Bartel,C.Burge,P.Zamore,T.Tuschl,P.Sharp,and many other colleague

23、s for their input and stimulating discussions over the past few years,and P.Zamore,B.Bartel,C.Burge,M.Lawrence,and others for helpful comments on this manuscript.Work on miRNAs in my lab is currently supported by grants from the NIH and the Alexander and Margaret Stewart Trust.7.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析Ackn

24、owledgementsThis work was partially supported by NNSF of China,Ministry of Education of China,Ministry of Science and Technology of China under grant No.NKBRSFG19990754 and Shanghai Education Commission.Y.Gongs work was supported by NNSFC under grant No.10447008,CSTC under grant No.2004BB8601,CQUPT

25、under grant No.A2004-05 and SRF for ROCS,State Education Ministry.E.Abdallas work was partially supported by FAPESP and CNPQ,Brazil.B.Wang would like to acknowledge the associate programme in ICTP where the work was done.Author(s):Wang,B;Gong,YG;Abdalla,ETitle:Transition of the dark energy equation

26、of state in an interacting holographic dark energy modelSource:PHYSICS LETTERS B,624(3-4):141-146 SEP 29 2005 Wang B(reprint author),Fudan Univ,Dept Phys,Shanghai 200433,Peoples R China7.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析 Acknowledgements The support from EPSRC of the UK for conducting research in manufacture of thic

27、k-walled,tubular components by injection forging is acknowledged(GR/N04706/01).Technicians at the University of Strathclyde who produced specimens and tools for the tests and who helped to conduct the experiments are also acknowledged.International Journal of Mechanical Sciences Volume 48,Issue 10,O

28、ctober 2006,Pages 1172-1185 7.3 SCI高被引论文致谢案例分析 Acknowledgements The authors are indebted to the GOA program(GOA96009)and to the FWO-Vlaanderen(G.O422.98)for financial support.Q.X.thanks the University of Ghent for a grant and is grateful to C.Becu,F.Becu and F.Fant for technical assistance.B.D.is a postdoctoral fellow of the Funds for Scientific Research,Flanders.SCI被引4次Author(s):Xu,QC;Borremans,F;Devreese,BTitle:A useful bicyclic topological decapeptide template for solution-phase combinatorial synthesis of tetrapodal librariesSource:TETRAHEDRON LETTERS,42(41):7261-7263 OCT 8 2001