英语中招考试作文专项复习课件.ppt

1、 所谓十句作文并非一定是所谓十句作文并非一定是1010句，高分作文的句子数量句，高分作文的句子数量都在都在8 8至至1010句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。每个句子平均每个句子平均812812个单词计算，用个单词计算，用710710个句子便能完个句子便能完成一篇要求在成一篇要求在8080词左右的作文。其基本模式为：词左右的作文。其基本模式为：第二段第二段（正文）（正文）主题句主题句扩展句扩展句（要视内容而决定扩（要视内容而决定扩 展句展句 的多少）的多少）扩展句扩展句扩展句扩展句扩展句扩展句扩展句扩展句扩展句扩展句第三段（结尾）第三段（结尾）第一段（

2、开头）第一段（开头）主题句主题句扩展句扩展句 结尾句结尾句根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你的同学关于你们郊游的计划。时间时间星期日（月日）星期日（月日）地点地点人民公园人民公园交通工具交通工具坐公共汽车前往坐公共汽车前往出发时间出发时间早上：早上：到达公园时间到达公园时间 早上：早上：活动安排活动安排上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐下午：英语角活动（下午：英语角活动（English corner English corner activitiesactivities）；照相）；照相返回时间返回时间下午：下午：要求：、词数：个词左右；题目及文章的 开头已给

3、出，但不算在词数内。、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当加 细节，使行文连贯。、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称，否则答案作废。Notice Good morning,everyone!Ill tell you a piece of good news.We are planning an outing._ Good morning,everyone!Now Ill tell you a piece of good news.(主题句主题句)We are planning an outing.(主题句主题句)We are going to the Peoples Park by bus on Ju

4、ly 10th,Sunday.Well leave at 7:00 a.m.at the school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m.in the morning.Then you can go boating and swimming.Lets have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon.If you would like to take photos,youd better take a camera.The time to return is 4:30

5、 p.m.Please get ready for the outing.(扩展句扩展句)Wish all of us have a good time.(结尾句结尾句)点点 评评 本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀作文。文章围绕秀作文。文章围绕“Notice”Notice”展开，把表展开，把表格所提供的格所提供的信息陈述清楚信息陈述清楚，要点齐全要点齐全。文。文章中章中语句简练语句简练，语句语句变化变化多样多样，有简单句，有简单句和复合句相结合，也用上了祈使句，和复合句相结合，也用上了祈使句，过渡过渡自然自然，结尾表明作者自己对这次郊游活动，结尾表明作者自己对

6、这次郊游活动的祝愿，增强了感染力。的祝愿，增强了感染力。2018中考英语作文9大预测+范文！1.人物介绍预测题目预测题目“一带一路一带一路”（The Belt and RoadThe Belt and Road）有利于促进沿线各国经济繁荣与）有利于促进沿线各国经济繁荣与区域经济合作，同时也让我们结识了很多异国朋友。假设你叫王区域经济合作，同时也让我们结识了很多异国朋友。假设你叫王铭，铭，SoniaSonia是你新认识的波兰朋友。请根据以下表格中有关她的是你新认识的波兰朋友。请根据以下表格中有关她的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍一下信息，写一篇英语短文介绍一下SoniaSonia。要求：要求：1.1.

7、短文包含以上表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；短文包含以上表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；2.2.8080词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Hello,my name is Wang Ming.I have a new friend called Sonia Hello,my name is Wang Ming.I have a new friend called Sonia who comes from Poland.Now let me tell you more about who comes from Poland.Now let me tell

8、 you more about her.her.年龄15岁家人及其职业爸爸：警察 妈妈：医生性格活泼、乐于助人爱好运动、旅游、拍照经历及愿望当过志愿者；希望能游历中国，品尝美食Hello,my name is Wang Ming.I have a new friend called Sonia who comes from Poland.Now let me tell you more about her.Sonia is 15.Her father is a policeman and her mother is a Sonia is 15.Her father is a policeman

9、 and her mother is a doctor.She is a lively girl who is always ready to help doctor.She is a lively girl who is always ready to help others.She has lots of hobbies like doing sports,taking others.She has lots of hobbies like doing sports,taking photos and travelling.Of all her hobbies,she likes trav

10、elling photos and travelling.Of all her hobbies,she likes travelling most because she wants to learn new things and have fun.most because she wants to learn new things and have fun.She has been to many countries.And she used to work as a She has been to many countries.And she used to work as a volun

11、teer.She thinks these experiences can help her a lot.volunteer.She thinks these experiences can help her a lot.In a word,sIn a word,she hopes to travel around China and eat he hopes to travel around China and eat good food one good food one day.day.2.2.对中国的看法对中国的看法预测题目 随着中国经济的发展，越来越多的外国人对我们国家有了更好的了解

12、。几位外国友人正在谈论对中国的看法，请根据表格中的提示信息，写一篇英语短文。要求：1.短文必须包含以上表格提示的所有内容，可以适当发挥；2.80词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词 数。With the rapid development of Chinas economy,more and more foreigners have a better understanding of our country.Three foreign friends are expressing their opinions on China.NameCountryOpinions on ChinaBruce

13、AmericaBeautiful school，smart studentsCarolEnglandMany places of interest and delicious foodDavidCanadaProducts made in China are cheap and of good qualityWith the rapid development of Chinas economy,more and more foreigners have a better understanding of our country.Three foreign friends are expres

14、sing their opinions on China.Bruce comes from America.He once studied in China.He thinks there are lots of beautiful schools in China and most students are smart.Carol is an English woman.She has visited China many times.She thinks China is a great country with lots of places of interest.Whats more,

15、people can taste all kinds of delicious food in China.As for David,he lives in Canada.He enjoys shopping in China.He thinks products made in China dont cost so much and are of very high qualities.All in all,mobile payment in China is quick and convenient.3.3.健康问题健康问题预测题目 根据相关研究预测，如果缺乏有效干预措施，到2025年，中

16、国将有5000万超重儿童，居世界首位。假如你是校园网的一名小记者，针对这一问题，请根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文。提示：1.我国青少年肥胖问题日益严重；2.吃太多的高脂肪食品和不运动是导致青少年肥胖的主要原因3.建议青少年健康饮食，多运动，养成良好的生活习惯。要求：1.写作内容必须包含以上提示的所有内容，可以适当发挥；2.80词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：肥胖 obesity；高脂肪食物 fatty foodA study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by

17、 2025 if anything isnt done.A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isnt done.In China,the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they hardly exercise.How should we solve the pr

18、oblem?Firstly,children must have healthy eating habits.They should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat and junk food.Secondly,they should exercise often.Itll make them healthy and feel good.Finally,keep some good living habits such as getting up early and going to bed early.In a word,healthy

19、 eating,proper exercise and good living habits can keep children from getting fatter.4.4.梦想梦想预测题目 每个人都有属于自己的梦想，而梦想让我们对未来充满希望。你的梦想是什么？在毕业来临之际，你们班准备召开以“My Great Dream”为主题的英语班会。请结合以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的发言稿，谈谈你的梦想。（发言稿开头已经给出，不计入总词数）提示：提示：1.Whats your dream?2.Why do you have such a dream?3.How are you going to

20、achieve your dream?4.What else would you like to say about your dream?My Great Dream Everyone has a dream and so do I.My Great Dream Everyone has a dream and so do I.As we all know,the computer and the Internet have become part of our life.And we depend heavily on the computer.So my dream is to be a

21、 computer engineer in the future.Ill teach people some safe ways to use the Internet.At the same time,Ill develop some apps to make peoples life easier and better.Of course,being a good computer engineer is not easy,but I will do whatever I can to achieve my dream.To achieve it,I need to study scien

22、ce,math and English well.All I have to do is to focus on my studies and never give up.Im sure my dream will come true.5.5.最爱的人、事物最爱的人、事物预测题目预测题目 初中的三年是你人生经历中的一个重要阶段，你肯定遇到了初中的三年是你人生经历中的一个重要阶段，你肯定遇到了最喜欢的人或事物吧！请以最喜欢的人或事物吧！请以“My Favorite.”为题，根据下面为题，根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇英语短文来描述自己心中的最爱吧！的提示和要求，写一篇英语短文来描述自己心中的最爱吧

23、！提示：提示：1.Is your favorite a person or a thing?2.Why do you like this person or the thing best?3.Describe one or two stories about your favorite.要求：要求：1.将题目补充完整；将题目补充完整；2.所写内容必须包含所给的提示要点；所写内容必须包含所给的提示要点；3.80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。My Favorite How time flies!Nearly three years of junio

24、r high school life is coming to an end.My Favorite Teacher How time flies!Nearly three years of junior high school life is coming to an end.During these years I have met many teachers and Mr.Wang is my favorite teacher.In fact,hes of medium build with glasses.He is funny and kind.He can teach math v

25、ery well by making his classes interesting.I used to hate math because it was difficult and boring.But he was always patient enough to tell me how to learn math well.As a result,I showed more and more interest in math.Thanks to Mr Wang,I could get good grades in all my math exams.And I wish to be a

26、math teacher like him in the future.6.6.手机的利弊手机的利弊预测题目 如今越来越多的中学生拥有了自己的智能手机。然而，无论是在课堂还是在休闲时间，都会见到一些学生玩手机。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈中学生使用智能手机的利与弊，并提出你自己的看法。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）提示：提示：利：利：1.方便与朋友或家人保持联系；方便与朋友或家人保持联系；2.很容易获取信息。很容易获取信息。弊：弊：1.太多时间花费在手机上，没有时间与朋友或家人面对面交流；太多时间花费在手机上，没有时间与朋友或家人面对面交流；2.不能把注意力集中在学习上；

27、不能把注意力集中在学习上；3.过度使用智能手机对健康有害。过度使用智能手机对健康有害。Nowadays smartphones play an important role in our lives.A number of middle school students have owned them.No matter where we are,we can see students playing with their smart phones.Nowadays smartphones play an important role in our lives.A number of middl

28、e school students have owned them.No matter where we are,we can see students playing with their smart phones.Smart phones are really good for students.They make students keep in touch with their friends or family conveniently.And they help students get information more easily.However,everything has

29、two sides.When students spend too much time on smart phones,they dont have time to communicate face to face with their friends or family.Smart phones may take their attention away from their studies.More seriously,using smart phones too much may cause health problems.In my opinion,students should us

30、e smart phones wisely.And its necessary for them to take part in more outdoor activities.7.7.社会文明社会文明预测题目 随着社会经济的发展，出国旅行的人们越来越多，但随之而来的是旅行中的种种不文明行为，给国家形象带来很大的负面影响。请你根据以下提示要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，并提出你的建议，呼吁人们文明出行。提示：1.不高声喧哗；2.不随地吐痰或乱扔垃圾；3.不乱涂乱画。要求：1.80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文章应覆盖所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。参考词汇：spit 吐痰；

31、behavior 行为With the development of economy,more and more Chinese people travel abroad.With the development of economy,more and more Chinese people travel abroad.However,along with the increase of the number of people traveling abroad,reports about peoples bad manners flood in.How can we be good tour

32、ists?Firstly,we should keep our voice down in public places.Secondly,we should wait in line when we want to take a bus or have dinner.Thirdly,we cant drop litter everywhere or spit in public places.Finally,we should never draw anything on the buildings.As middle school students,we should pay more at

33、tention to our behavior.And we should keep some dos and donts in our mind to guide our behavior in public.涌入，大量地涌到有关人们不良举止的报道层出不穷8.传统美德预测题目 乐于助人是中华民族的传统美德。在你成长的过程中，你一定帮助过不少人并且也得到过他人的帮助。请根据下面的英文提示，写一 篇英语短文，谈谈你得到过的一次帮助。提示：提示：1.Who used to help you when you were in trouble?2.When and how did he or she

34、help you?3.What is your opinion about the help?要求：要求：1.结合所给提示内容可以适当发挥；结合所给提示内容可以适当发挥；2.90词左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。词左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Almost everyone needs help in their lives.Helping others is a great pleasure.I still remember this person who used to help me.Almost everyone needs help in their lives.Hel

35、ping others is a great pleasure.I still remember this person who used to help me.One morning,my mother got ill and I quickly rode my bike to buy some medicine for her.I was in such a hurry that my bike hit a tree and I fell onto the ground.Just then,a man saw what was happening when driving past.He

36、stopped to take me to the nearest hospital.Luckily,the doctor said I wasnt badly hurt.Then the man took me to the drugstore and helped me buy some medicine for my mother.And finally,he drove me home.How kind he was!Since then,I have started to help others in need.I think a little help can make a big

37、 difference to others.9.9.人际交往人际交往预测题目预测题目 每个人都有自己的朋友圈，朋友圈里的人因为各种原因走每个人都有自己的朋友圈，朋友圈里的人因为各种原因走在一起。你的朋友是什么样子的？你们经常一起做什么？你们在一起。你的朋友是什么样子的？你们经常一起做什么？你们之间有矛盾吗？你是如何处理你们之间的矛盾的？之间有矛盾吗？你是如何处理你们之间的矛盾的？要求：请写一篇不少于要求：请写一篇不少于90词的短文介绍你的朋友圈。词的短文介绍你的朋友圈。I like playing table tennis,so I have a few friends who also li

38、ke this sport.After school,we play table tennis for an hour almost every day.Sometimes we go to see a film after that.We talk to each other and have fun.However,there are also some problems.One day a friend wanted me to smoke with him.I know smoking is bad for our health.So I told him about it.He fe

39、lt very angry,but I knew I was doing the right thing.I think if your friends try to make you do things you dont want to do,youd better say“no”to them.【预测话题】假设今天是父亲节，你有什么话想和父亲说？你给父亲准备了什么礼物呢?何不给父亲写一封信，感谢他的疼爱与照顾呢？Dear Dad,Today is fathers day,for so many years Ive been seeking a way to express my heart

40、felt thanks for all you have done for me.Here comes it!Thank you for always being there sharing my life when I need you most.Whenever I encounter difficulties,I never feel alone and vulnerable,because you will keep me on the right path.Im blessed to have you.Thank you for offering me education and t

41、eaching me how to be a man.You always inspire me not by words,but by what you have done!Your efforts in the work,your loyalty to your friends,your responsibility for the family and your persistence in the life have already set me good examples in my own life.Thank you for always appreciating my work

42、,no matter how tiny it is!You have made me realize that its capacity not scores that really counts.Dad,I love you and I will love you forever!Yours,Li Ming作文万能短语pass the(final)examstick to doingkeep you mind on your goalsmake up ones mind to do sth.(on sth.)make a decision to dowork hard at Englisho

43、nce in a while/at times/now and thenfrom then onin the future（将来）/in future（从今以后）increase our knowledge/enlarge our vocabularyin fact/as a matter of factin the beginning/at firstfeel like giving uphave trouble/difficulty in(doing)sth.have(no)time to do作文万能短语have experience in(doing)sth.follow ones a

44、dvice/suggestions master some basic skillsbe required to doask sb.for helpcant wait to dobe supposed to doencourage sb.to dodeal/do with work out/solve the problemsall sorts/kinds ofat home and abroadone of be full oflearn sth.by oneself作文万能短语come up with good ideasbe surprised at sth.(to do sth.)in

45、 order to keep healthy/fita good way to vkeep(on)tryingworry about/be worried aboutin ones spare/free timebe kind/friendly tobe strict withhelp otherssay thank you tohave fun/enjoy oneself/have a good timeplenty of+C/U作文万能短语worry about/be worried aboutask sb.for help/turn to sb.for help/call sb.for

46、helpbe popular withshare sth.with sb.know little/much about do/try ones best to vbe/feel sorry forhelp sb.(to)do sth./with sth.in/during classbefore/after classteach sb.to do sth.词数词数8080左右，不少于左右，不少于7070词，不多于词，不多于100100词。不能使用其他颜色笔、修正词。不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被液等可被 视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真实信息。视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真实信息。中考英语书面

47、表达应对技巧(一）初中生写作“现状”初中生写作“六大病症”：1)审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯；2)单词拼写错误；frist,belive,ture,buzy,quite&quiet 3)动词缺失；Eg:I happy I can go to Peking.4)前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）Eg:All people has their own dream.He said he wants to have a good rest.5)中式英语（Chinglish）Eg:I very like sports.6)综合性错误。包括单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用

48、、句子结构不完整等。中考英语作文评分标准满分档满分档1515分：长度符合要求（分：长度符合要求（80-9080-90字），书写规范，涵盖所有要字），书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。法错误。第一档：符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，第一档：符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。语言无误。13-15 13-15分。分。第二档：基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表第二档：基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表 达较清楚，语言有少量错误。达较清

49、楚，语言有少量错误。9-129-12分。分。第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够 清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。4-84-8分。分。第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个 词语。词语。0-3 0-3分。分。中考英语高分作文的特点 1 1、开头言简意赅，迅速引入主题。、开头言简意赅，迅速引入主题。（注意标题）（注意标题）2 2、分段合理、分段合理。老师易找出写作要点。注意结构中首尾呼应。老师易找出写作要点。注意结构中首尾呼应。3.3.句句子段落子段落之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。4 4、能够恰当使用谚语、格言给文章添彩。、能够恰当使用谚语、格言给文章添彩。5 5、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。6 6、多多使用了高级词汇和句型。使用了高级词汇和句型。