高中英语高考读后续写参考模板与详解.doc

1、高考英语读后续写参考模板与详解一、套用模板1.情绪-情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。2.细节-进一步描述。3.转折-个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。4.转机-事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。5.失望-问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。6.想法-面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。7.结局-在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。8.点题-呼应前文二、套用词汇1.情绪描写2.细节描写：哭： howling(嚎哭)， sob, weep, burst into tears, burst out cryi

2、ng.(ones eyes) brim with/be filled with tears怕： horror, frightened, scared, speechless, in(a)panic, in a cold sweat, be filled with terror, rooted to the spot, freeze, ones knees feel weak, (hands)sweat高兴、激动：（动词）dance, jump/leap with joy, feel a surge of joy/ excitement, whistle, overcome with happi

3、ness/ delight /joy / excitement, (ones eyes) twinkle,(ones heart) beat/ pound wildly;(形容词）delighted, overjoyed, excited, thrilled, wild with joy伤心、痛苦: feel a surge of sadness, (sadness) surge within sb., ones heart ache, overcome with sadness生气、愤怒：felt/ get angry/furious, feel a surge of anger/rage/

4、fury, eyes blaze, storm out of/into/off, storm/say angrily, sth.makes sb.s blood boil, sth.makes sb.extremely angry, clasp ones fists/teeth, sb.s blood is up3.转折：个人努力或借助外界鼓起勇气：pluck up/take/gather/summon up ones courage毫不犹豫：without even thinking, without delay, without hesitation, without a second t

5、hought4.转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰似乎：as if, seemingly, appear, seem欣慰：breath a sigh of relief, sigh with relief, to ones relief5.失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题:徒劳 : in vain, no use, without success茫然 : at a loss, at sea, blankly, be lost in a fog6.想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）occur to, hit, strike, flash into ones mind, c

6、rowd in ones mind, dawn on7.结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折:过了一段时间not long, shortly afterwards, before long, for an instant/moment令人惊讶的是 to ones surprise, strangely enough8.总结：点题，呼应前文realize, echo, linger, whisper in ones mind, down deep in ones heart三、套用句子哭：1.A lump came to his throat.2.Her eyes were red from cr

7、ying.3.Her eyes brimmed with tears.4.Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.害怕：1.She was too frightened to tell her family what had happened.2.His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened.3.Liza was so frightened that she couldnt make a sound.4.I bowed my head timidly and dared not

8、look at my fathers cloudy face.5.My brain is blank.I just want to leave this horrible place.高兴、激动：1.When she knew.she felt excited/thrilled.2.When she knew.her eyes twinkled with excitement.3.When she knew.her heart was pounding with wild joy.4.When she knew.a wild excitement took hold of her.5.Know

9、ing.she felt a surge of excitement.伤心、痛苦：1.A sadness came over her.2.Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.3.Numb with grief, she became speechless.4.Feeling a surge of sadness, she couldnt help crying bitterly.5.Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.生气、愤怒：1.Sam stood rooted to

10、 the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.2.He felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.3.Boiling with rage, he shook his fist at me.4.Filled with fury, she was unable to utter a single word.转折：个人努力或借助外界鼓起勇气：1.He summoned up his courage and lodged a protest

11、with his father.2.I finally plucked up the courage to ask her for.毫不犹豫：1.She could hardly wait to.2.Hardly thinking/Without even thinking, he ran to.转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰1.It seemed as if/that someone was coming to save us.2.Oftentimes our tears of remorse reveal a glimmer of hope.3.A wave of relie

12、f flooded through me.4.A wave of relief washed over him.1.ltsuddlyoccur1失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题1.But bad luck for me, I failed in my attempt to persuade her.2.She closed her eyes tightly in a vain attempt to hold back the tears.3.All our efforts were in vain.4.She kept pacing, wondering what to do next.5

13、.With tears streaming down her face, she didnt know what to do next.6.With tears streaming down her face, she was unsure of what to do next.7.She was at a loss what to do.8.He was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.想法：突然有了一个想法1.It suddenly occurred to him that.2.It hit me that I had a choice.3.

14、A thought struck her that.4.It dawned that.5.An idea occurred/came to me that6.A ludicrous thought/idea flashed/came through Harrys mind.结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折1.It didnt take long before.2.It took some time before.3.To my surprise enough, it turned out that.总结：点题，呼应前文直到意识到倒装句：Not until+时间状语did sb.realize

15、/notice that+从句强调句：It was only+时间状语that sb.realized that+从句还记得某人的话：1.Ones words echoed/rang out in ones ears.2.Ones words/voice/lingered/whispered in ones mind/head3.Ones head was still full of.经历与教训1.What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lesson she taught me/I learned from her!2.What a/an enjoyab

16、le/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/valuable experience I had!3.Down deep in my heart, it was an interesting experience I had ever had.四、套用范文阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We visit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field, I comp

17、ete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage I carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old

18、 brother, Jason, was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event.Im unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would se

19、ttle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, mynose briefly prevented entry.

20、Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy.“Im going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I

21、 bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head aro

22、und trying to find the right angle, but it was no use.“I cant get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much

23、 longer. Paragraph 2That video was posted the day before Halloween. I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.My head span dizzily as if the world swirled.At my wits end, I felt a stab of fear.(“我”的情绪：慌张、无奈）“Dont panic! Papa, Papa, we need your help, Jason exclaimed.In time over

24、 came my father.(借助外界帮助）He embraced my neck and pulled back with strength while Jason pinned/pressed down the pumpkin.（一系列动作描写）It didnt work, though.(问题未解决）“Why not tear the pumpkin directly? suddenly rang out mothers voice.( 新 想 法 ) In a split second, a creak broke out overhead, followed by a ray o

25、f light, which I seemingly hadnt seen for ages.(问题得到解决）But what did I see? My mother was filming all the way.(衔接句）That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.To my surprise, soon my video was followed by a sea of likes, my mailbox flooded with similar stories.(衔接句）My big red nose and my

26、 sore chin became netizens favorite topic.A little embarrassed as I was, a wave of warmth welled up inside.(细节描写之我的心情）Then a good idea flashed across my mind.(想法）“Isnt it a good idea to share stories online to choose the funniest? I told Jason, jumping with joy.（做法，为结局做铺垫）“Amazing! Lets call it Pump

27、kins Competition.Jason giggled.(Jason的反应，照应开头）五、套用语料精讲情绪刻画 高兴Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。这个表达并不难记。well做名词时有“水井”的意思，up是“向上”的意思，想象一下，水井向上，不就是涌起吗She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。以后想写she smile时，就可以想到这个句子。Wear在此处表示显出，呈现。 恐惧Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。creep upon悄悄爬上，袭来可以自由发

28、挥，把fear替换成其他词，如：I felt a smile creep upon my face.At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.一见到这只凶野的狼，我就吓呆了，丝毫不敢动弹。freeze-froze-frozen冻结too.to.太而不能 愤怒His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。相当妙的比喻，煮沸了。除了形容情绪愤怒，boil over还可以比喻事态的恶化，如：Racial tension finally boiled over i

29、n the inner city riots.种族间的紧张状态最终演化成了市中心贫困区的暴乱。He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。Fuming with rage还可做伴随状语，使描写更加生动，如：Fuming with rage, Hung said, How do you know I bully her? 绝望Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。借酒消愁 drown sadness in wineThey were i

30、mmersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。be immersed in 沉浸于动作描写He took a firm grip of my arm and marched me towards the door.他紧紧抓着我的手臂，快步往门口走去。take a firm grip /hold /grasp of.紧抓;紧握把动词表达变成动名词词组，会更生动也更好凑字数（划掉）。I plucked up the courage to go out by myself.我鼓起勇气一个人走了出去。pluck up the courage to do sth鼓起勇气做.A loud scr

31、eam shattered the silence.一声高声尖叫打破了沉寂。shatter the silence=break the silence 环境描写The sky was a billion pure eyes of lightand the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become onebeautiful moment.Dawn had come.天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。A restaurant overlooking a s

32、tarlit night sprang tomy imagination like something out of an illuminated manuscript from the lateMiddle Ages.一个俯瞰星光灿烂的夜晚的餐馆，就像中世纪晚期一份被照亮的手稿中的某种东西一样，跃然于我的脑海。One point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某处，潺潺的水声在山谷中奏响。冲突制造千钧一发型The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Get into the

33、car. Paul shouted at Mac.Mac jumped off the bike andslid into the car without delay as the wolf was just two steps away and wasabout to tear Mac into pieces.What a narrow escape!翻译：汽车突然停在他前面。“上车吧。”保罗对麦克大喊道。麦克从自行车上跳下来，立刻滑进了车，因为狼离他只有两步远，正要把麦克撕成碎片。真是好险！思路：主人公即将遇险出现了求生的希望险中求生主人公必须克服某障碍But before we jump

34、ed off the horses, wefound that we had been off the beaten track and got lost.We had no idea wherewe were and it got dark.Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find ourway back.翻译：但在我们跳下马之前，我们发现我们已经偏离了常规轨道，迷路了。我们不知道自己在哪里，天都黑了。我筋疲力尽，饿了，不知道能不能找到回去的路。思路：小兔突现马儿受惊草原迷路天色渐黑又累又饿心理恐慌人物描写Mark is a stud

35、ious boy who loves reading.His classmates often tease him for being too hardworking and they call him Mr.Smart.One afternoon, while studying at home马克是个好学的男孩，他喜欢读书。他的同学经常取笑他太努力了，他们叫他聪明先生。一天下午，在家里学习的时候.情感描写The moment she saw how she did for her Science test,tears started welling up in Tinas eyes and falling down her cheeks.当她看到她在科学测试中的表现时，蒂娜的眼泪开始涌出，从她的脸颊滑落下来。背景描写I closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and thesounds of the clashing waves.Gently opening my eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach.我闭上眼睛欣赏微风和海浪的声音。轻轻地睁开眼睛，我看到我的父母在海滩上悠闲地散步。6