教编版雅思写作-课件.ppt

1、欢迎来到环球雅思海口分校欢迎来到环球雅思海口分校 IELTS WRITING COURSE精选环球雅思环球雅思基础写作课程基础写作课程By:Nancy XUBy:Nancy XU精选精选4精选精选Whyare we soworried?精选雅思写作雅思写作:试题结构试题结构 20 ms /40 msPart 2Part 1 精选Task 1:The chart shows student expenditure over a three-year period in the United Kingdom.Task 2:Some people believe the range of techn

2、ology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between poor people and rich people.Others think it is having an opposite effect。Discuss these points of view.What is your opinion?精选链接链接:剑七剑七TEST 2&4精选雅思写作雅思写作 :试题内容试题内容Task1 Charts:A.Flow B.line;table;column/bar.Task2 Arguments;DiscussionT

3、ask 1:20分钟o 根据图表进行数据描述和分析，如根据图表进行数据描述和分析，如流程图、流程图、剖面图、曲线图剖面图、曲线图;(A)o 社会功能信函社会功能信函.(G)Task 2:40分钟 o 针对某一有争议说法针对某一有争议说法&社会现象社会现象,写一篇写一篇议论性议论性文章文章.(A&G)精选精选精选精选 1 2 3 4个小时个小时 篇文章篇文章 分评分分评分 百字数百字数 精选英国英国/欧盟英语雅思最低要求欧盟英语雅思最低要求:o 大本预科大本预科 5分分o 本科课程本科课程 5.5或或6分分o 研究生课程和研究式课程为研究生课程和研究式课程为6.5或或7 6.5分是研究生的英语资

4、格分分是研究生的英语资格分精选:Task Achievement(任务完成任务完成)-1:Task Response(任务回应任务回应)-2:Coherence&Cohesion （内容连贯与篇章衔接）（内容连贯与篇章衔接）GRA:Grammatical Range and Accuracy（语法范围与精确性（语法范围与精确性)1.2 IELTS 写作写作新新评分标准：评分标准：LR:Lexical Resource（词汇资源（词汇资源)精选Paragraph Frameworko The Topic Sentenceo(if possible with link to previous pa

5、ragraph)o Followed byo Paragraph Development Sentenceso(expansion/explanation/comment/illustration)o Followed byo The ending Sentenceo(if possible with link to next paragraph)精选 Essay FrameworkEssayBody(reason/example)Topic1+supporting Topic2+supportingTopic3+supportingIntroduction(thesis statement)

6、Conclusion(thesis restatement)确立论点确立论点原因（例证）原因（例证）重申论点重申论点 TS1+SSTS2+SSTS3+SS精选:Task Achievement-1:Task Response-2精选:Coherence&Cohesion （内容连贯与篇章衔接）（内容连贯与篇章衔接）精选oLR:Lexical Resource（词汇资源（词汇资源)精选oGRA:Grammatical Range and Accuracy（语法范围与精确性（语法范围与精确性)精选5分分5分分6分分 TF/TA结构结构 CC内容内容 LR词汇词汇 GRA语法语法7分分精选15课时课

7、时 15 课时课时排列排列 组合组合 1.3 雅思写作雅思写作课程设计课程设计基础阶段基础阶段 强化阶段强化阶段 连词成句连词成句 连句成篇连句成篇 精选The Bible to IELTS Writing策略总则策略总则-雅思写作圣经雅思写作圣经o 知己知彼,百战不殆-明确英汉思维模式差异o 重拾自信的来源-写作基于表达,而非翻译o 带着镣铐做最好的舞者-用最好的框架及内容,语言应对规定式作文o 笔记为王o 写和不写,差距不是一点点精选 情感分段和逻辑分段情感分段和逻辑分段 中文中文:情感分段情感分段 英文英文:逻辑分段逻辑分段 文章中心思想是读者体会还是作者交代文章中心思想是读者体会还是作

8、者交代 中文中文:自己体会自己体会 英文英文:作者交代作者交代 引言段是开门见山还是层层拨开引言段是开门见山还是层层拨开 中文中文:层层拨开层层拨开 英文英文:开门见山开门见山 每段有没有主题句以及位置每段有没有主题句以及位置 中文中文:不一定不一定 英文英文:段首段首 线性段落或螺旋式段落线性段落或螺旋式段落 中文中文:螺旋式段落螺旋式段落 英文英文:线性段落线性段落 人证与法证人证与法证 中文中文:人证人证 英文英文:事实事实,数据数据,普通人的事例普通人的事例 段内连贯段内连贯(过渡词汇过渡词汇/词义重复词义重复)中文中文:意合意合 英文英文:形合形合 段落和段落之间段落和段落之间(形和

9、意形和意)林语堂林语堂 结尾部分是概括还是训导结尾部分是概括还是训导 语言运用差异：。语言运用差异：。精选o 写出大于等于写出大于等于 个单词的句子和个单词的句子和8个字母的个字母的o 写出大于等于写出大于等于18个单词的个单词的 o 所有的知识点都属所有的知识点都属IELTS写作考点；写作考点；o 所有的话题都源于所有的话题都源于IELTS真题题库；真题题库；o 所有例句摘自所有例句摘自 IELTS范文原文范文原文&考生真实原创考生真实原创 英国原版期刊英国原版期刊EconomistTimes等等 精选o 写出大于等于写出大于等于 个单词的句子和个单词的句子和8个字母的个字母的o 写出大于等

10、于写出大于等于18个单词的个单词的 o 所有的知识点都属所有的知识点都属IELTS写作考点；写作考点；o 所有的话题都源于所有的话题都源于IELTS真题题库；真题题库；o 所有例句摘自所有例句摘自 IELTS范文原文范文原文&考生真实原创考生真实原创 英国原版期刊英国原版期刊EconomistTimes等等 精选基础阶段基础阶段：Contents:Contents:2.1 构建构建9个单词的简单句个单词的简单句2.2 掌握掌握8个字母的单词个字母的单词2.3 轻松驾驭轻松驾驭18个单词的复杂句个单词的复杂句精选2.1简单句的写作思路简单句的写作思路精选2.1.1五种基本句子结构五种基本句子结构

11、 主语主语 不及物动词不及物动词 （S+Vi）主语主语 及物动词及物动词 宾语宾语(S+Vt+O)主语双宾动词主语双宾动词+间宾间宾+直宾直宾(S+Vt+O.indir+O.dir)主语主语 宾补动词宾补动词 宾语宾语 宾语补语宾语补语(S+Vt.+O+O.compl)主语主语 系动词系动词 表表(S+LV+predicative)精选9个单词简单句成分分析个单词简单句成分分析:定语定语?状语状语?精选2.1.2 简单句写作思路简单句写作思路-精选(1)一个公式：一个公式：o 将以下句子从将以下句子从1-2-3模式一直到模式一直到1-2-3-4-5模式，请大家逐个模式，请大家逐个翻译一下，仔细

12、对比英语顺序与汉语顺序的差异。翻译一下，仔细对比英语顺序与汉语顺序的差异。英汉相似点：英汉相似点：我们应该促进我们应该促进在环境问题上贫国和富国在环境问题上贫国和富国的交流的交流.我们应该促进交流我们应该促进交流.英文学术文体里英文学术文体里,定语定语,状语的位置状语的位置!Writing skills 精选o adj.(前置定语前置定语)+n.合格的合格的毕业生毕业生 学习成绩合格的学习成绩合格的毕业生毕业生学习成绩合格但缺乏社交技能的学习成绩合格但缺乏社交技能的毕业生毕业生qualified graduates graduates who are qualified in academic

13、 record but are lack of social skillsothe ability to survive falls(不定式不定式)graduates qualified in academic record精选o Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.o Radio programs contribute to the cultivation of the capacity of the imagination of the listeners,especially the adolescents.

14、o Overall,I disagree with the opinion expressed.o Yet,a father accepting responsibility for behavior problems is linked with positive outcomes.o Education is of vital importance for the development of individual and well-being of societies.What should education consist of to fulfill both functions?T

15、ask 2 真题真题剑桥范文例句剑桥范文例句精选英语直线型思维方式的表现英语直线型思维方式的表现.o 是地道的学术写作的特色是地道的学术写作的特色.精选B.B.添加次信息添加次信息-状语随便置状语随便置如今如今Nowadays,going abroad has become a social currency.Going abroad,nowadays,has become a social currency.Going abroad has become,nowadays,a social currency.Going abroad has become a social currency,

16、nowadays.精选o 高分副词：高分副词：o Mainly=primarily=chiefly=mostly,主要地 properly=appropriately,适度地 understandably 可以理解,占绝对优势地,instantly 快速地,clearly,radically 基本上,merely=just=only,unnecessarily 没必要,impulsively 冲动地,especially 特别地,entirely=totally=entirely,全部地 merrily 愉快地 happily,keenly 急切地,seemingly 表面上看,strikin

17、gly 明显地,Utterly=completely,somewhat=alittle,intensely=considerably 大量地,fiercely=severely 激烈地,，vexingly 烦人地，greatly=highly 非常，大大地,精选,we can see that not only are there very large differences between the two economies but that these gaps are widening.(Cambridge 3),technology can positively contribute

18、to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life.(Cambridge3),I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars.(Cambridge 6),France spends more on CDs and photo graphic film but less on tennis racquets than Italy does.(Cambrid

19、ge 3)精选9个单词简单句成分分析个单词简单句成分分析:定语定语后置定语后置定语状语状语精选状语状语定语定语定语定语写任何写任何IELTS句子时建议具备的构思框架：句子时建议具备的构思框架：精选练习练习:翻译翻译.1.不幸的是不幸的是,现有的证据不能证明抽烟和癌症之间有直接的联系现有的证据不能证明抽烟和癌症之间有直接的联系.2.不可否认地不可否认地,由社会提供的商品和服务变得多样化由社会提供的商品和服务变得多样化.精选 A.A.写作的基本单位永远是句子写作的基本单位永远是句子;(2).(2).简单句四大写作经验简单句四大写作经验:精选o*Beneficial(It is beneficial

20、,否则没有主语否则没有主语了了)to childrens growth.o*They show two things to their kids.“coins”and“pencil”almost,the children choice to touch the pencil(这里不是句子这里不是句子).精选o*In Hainan,including tower hall,Wugong temple and Nanshan temple etc.(这里写的不是这里写的不是句子句子,改为改为In Hainan,such buildings include).o*Indeed,(this is,写作

21、的基本单位是句子写作的基本单位是句子,这里是短这里是短语语)to avoid affect adolescents growth.o*For example,(during)the Olympic Games,the football World Cup,most of country(countries)in the world get together with one dream,Higher,Faster and Stronger.精选B.B.如果句子里写出动词原型如果句子里写出动词原型:.80%是写错了是写错了 .20%是写得不精彩的是写得不精彩的 5分分即即:务必千万力求务必千万力

22、求回避写出动词原型回避写出动词原型(尤其是句首尤其是句首)精选o*The view is vary(varies)from individual to individual.o*Finally,children are provided an relate(relative)more health and easier environment to grow up.精选o*They will have a normative behave(behavior)in everything.o*Usually,watch(watching)television is a personal activ

23、ity.o*Only in this way that face problems and solve troubles by your own means(of facing problems and solving troubles by ones own means)can a person truly learn something practical.精选 C.C.英文注重头轻脚重英文注重头轻脚重(后置修饰语后置修饰语;);)o 尽量把修饰性的结构放至句子后半部分尽量把修饰性的结构放至句子后半部分:使用被动使用被动精选精选 若一个句子中有多个动词，有三种处理方式：若一个句子中有多个动

24、词，有三种处理方式：*I sat down beside her said nothing.o 并列并列：I sat down beside her and said nothing.o 从句：从句：When I sat beside her,I said nothing.o 非谓语：非谓语：I sat down beside her,saying nothing.永远不可能出现永远不可能出现:_,_.的情况的情况.(run-on sentences)精选o*Several years ago not everyone knew how to use computer or Internet,

25、now every body has to use it on studies or in work.o*I can ask the local association and organization,also I can search the information online.精选o*Happiness is not an end,(but)it is a process.o*Actually,the society is a big school,(and)we can learn more from it.o*Parts of them are origin from local

26、people,(and)others are come(删除删除)of the special life style.o*To sum up,following local customs abroad does not mean losing oneself,(but)on the opposite,it means understanding people all around world and widening our views.精选o*Hundreds of innocent citizens have death and(we will have,and后面也要是一句话后面也要是

27、一句话)millions of homeless persons and orphans in the wars.精选 不如写成两句不如写成两句:后面一句经常用后面一句经常用代词代词和前面一句呼应和前面一句呼应o*They must choose their subjects depend on their hobby and the market.o*Some information and contents were on the Internet and in TV programs should be prohibited.o *Females more like security c

28、areer rather than like the male(the male like,用陈述语气用陈述语气).精选o*Children of age is limited in order to numerous problem cannot resolved by themselves(the experiences of children are limited,and numerous problems cannot be resolved by themselves.不要急着都写到一句话里，把中文意思不要急着都写到一句话里，把中文意思想好了再一句一句写想好了再一句一句写).精选正确特例:oWhat is worse/moreWhat is worse/more,some people have,some people have acquired the habit of gambling on the acquired the habit of gambling on the Internet.Internet.精选精选