浙江新高考作文概要写作summarywriting课件.pptx

1、Summary writingWhat is a summary?A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth,not the details.It is a brief,complete and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.第五档(21-25)理解准确,涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的言语。c

2、ompletecorrectcoherentconcise;no copyStep1.Read for the style and structure of the passage.How to write a summary?ArgumentationExpositionNarration Recently,a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin,northeast Chinas Heilongjiang Province.As a result,the owner of the restaurant faced a

3、 fine of 500,000 yuan.Chen Yan,a tourist from Changzhou,east Chinas Jiangsu Province,complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fishrestaurant in Songbei District of Harbin.Worse still,he claimed that his family members were beaten a

4、nd threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout.Chens complaint immediately spread on Chinas social media.The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault,since they had already tagged the price,which raised doub

5、t among netizens again.Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served,Huso,was not the real wild species,but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price.Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers,the restaurant got its due punishment.Meanwhile,relevant gove

6、rnment departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.Similar cases of fraudulent(欺骗的)pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China.In October 2015,for instance,a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp

7、(虾)in the coastal city of Qingdao,east Chinas Shandong Province,when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish,but for each shrimp!Authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished.NarrationWhen Who What WhyWhere How5W+1HHow to write a summary?Step 2.

8、Find the topic sentences or key words of each part.Leave out details and reduce the examples.Recently，a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin,northeast Chinas Heilongjiang Province.As a result,the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.face a heavy finewhen where what

9、 Chen Yan,a tourist from Changzhou,east Chinas Jiangsu Province,complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fish restaurant in Songbei District of Harbin.Worse still,he claimed that his family members were beaten and threatened by the

10、 restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout.Chens complaint immediately spread on Chinas social media.The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault,since they had already tagged the price,which raised doubt among netizens aga

11、in.whowhat Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served,Huso,was not the real wild species,but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price.Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers,the restaurant got its due punishment.Meanwhile,relevant government depar

12、tments that have stood by the side of therestaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.why Similar cases of fraudulent(欺骗的)pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China.In October 2015,for instance,a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp(虾)in the

13、 coastal city of Qingdao,east Chinas Shandong Province,when the restaurantclaimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish,but for eachshrimp!Authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished.howStep 3.Organize your own passage.1.Use your own words.2.To be concise.*omit th

14、e details *reduce the examples *simplify the descriptions *eliminate all repetitionsAdd transitional expressions to make your summary coherent.How to write a summary?Skill1:_词性转换法词性转换法 Skill2:_同义替换法同义替换法Skill3:_改变语态法改变语态法Skill4:_句式转换法句式转换法Skill5:_压缩长句法压缩长句法1.Recently,a wild fish restaurant was order

15、ed to shut down in Harbin and faced a heavy fine.Lately,a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a heavy fine.lately/not long ago require/commandclose down 2.Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff.Chens complaint immediat

16、ely spread on Chinas social media.A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public.Chens complaint that spreadviolent treatmentexpose to the public3.The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government departments would also b

17、e investigated and punished.as well as/together with/along withThe restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment.received4.Similar cases have also been reported elsewhere and authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished.happened/took

18、 placegovernmentwill be seriously punishedwill receive serious/severe punishmentSimilar cases also happened elsewhere and the government are determined to fight them.1.Lately,a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a heavy fine.2.A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcha

19、rged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public.3.The restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment.4.Similar cases also happened elsewhere and the government are determined to fight them.One possible version：Lately,a wild fish restaurant in

20、Harbin faced being shut down and a heavy fine,after a customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public.Ultimately,after investigation,the restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment.In fact,similar cases also happened elsewhere and the government are determined to fight them.