Unit 1 People of Achievement Using language 写作（ppt课件）-2022新人教版（2019）《高中英语》选择性必修第一册.pptx

1、Introduce someone you admireUnit 1 People of AchievementLearning objectives：学习目标1 By the end of the class,you wil be able to.1.know the life story and achivements of Einstein;2.learn how to write a profile of a great person.Question leading：问题导学1:4Read the text quickly and silently,try to find the a

2、nswers to the following questions:Look and discussWhat do you know about Einstein?不要努力成为一个成功者，不要努力成为一个成功者，要努力成为一个有价值的人。要努力成为一个有价值的人。The man who changed our understanding of the universePresentation 点拨应用1:185Video Time:Albert Einstein From the title and the structure of this passage we can infer that

3、 the passage is a biography(自传，传记).1.Whats the genre(/nr/体裁)of the text?2.How does the writer develop the text?The organization feature:While-reading8BodyHow does the writer develop the text?In chronological order/in time order (按年代按年代/时间时间次序次序)2.Read the text and complete the timeline.Introduce Ein

4、steins life story and achievements in your own words.While-readingBorn in Germany 1879189619551933Failed to enter university1895Entered universityGraduated from university 1900Took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office19021905Entered research full-time at a university1909Awarded the Nobel Priz

5、e for Physics1922Fled GermanyPassed awayRead the text and complete the timeline.Then introduce Einsteins life story and achievements in your own words.Make a timelineMaking a timeline that shows when different events happened can help you understand how the events are connected to each other.P8 1Ear

6、ned a doctorate in physics and published four extraordinary physics papersTimeEventsHe was born in Germany.He Failed to enter university.He passed the entrance exam and entered university in Switzerland.He graduated from the university.He took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office.He earned a

7、doctorate in physics and published four extraordinary physics papers.He entered research full-time at a universityHe was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physics.He had to flee Germany to America.He passed away.In 1879In 1896In 1900In 1905In 1922In 1933In 1955In 1895In 1902In 1909General introduction to E

8、instein(evaluation).His early life and education.His work experience and achievements.His middle-life crisis.His appearance and Stories showing his personalities.Einsteins death14 After reading-Summary What aspects are included while writing a biography or introduction of a certain person?Personalit

9、yAppearanceBrief introduction AchievementsImpressive storyComments on the person He had a thick moustache received an electric shock.Although he was a genius,his friendsbirthdays.But despite loved by his friends and neighbours.There is even a story with her homework.Infact,help explain things.After

10、many such “Pardon me!Sorry!Always I am mistaken for Professor Einstein!”Find the descriptions that tell us what Einstein looked like and what kind of person he was.The language feature:analogy(类比):Following this,he gradually became famous throughout the world as the new Isaac Newton.The language fea

11、ture:What rhetorical devices are used in the passage?Give examples.修辞手法修辞手法metaphor暗喻，simile明喻，personification拟人，repetition重复，quote引用，analogy类比simile（明喻）:He had a thick moustache and long white hair,which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.In pairs,discuss the fo

12、llowing questions.Apart from his remarkable achievements,what does the passage tell us about Einsteins life?【Group work】Apart from his remarkable achievements,what does the passage tell us about Einsteins life?Though he was brilliant,he was also a person who faced struggles when he failed to pass hi

13、s university entrance examwhen he failed to get a good job when he had to flee Germany Whatever happens,dont lose heart.I believe you can improve it.What impressed you most about Einstein?State your reasons.I am impressed most by how friendly and easy he was to approach.Even when he was busy and did

14、 not want to be bothered,he still found a way to deal with people in gentleness and good humour.He was too modest and didnt want fame.Question leading：问题导学2:2Read the text quickly and silently,try to find the answers to the following questions:如何写一篇人物简介如何写一篇人物简介【文体感知】【文体感知】伟人总是给我们榜样的力量伟人总是给我们榜样的力量,那

15、么那么,我们如何对伟人做人物简介呢我们如何对伟人做人物简介呢?人物介绍是高中生基础写作任务中常见的一种话题类型。它涉及人的出生、人物介绍是高中生基础写作任务中常见的一种话题类型。它涉及人的出生、家庭背景、教育、生平经历、成就和评价等。同学们要注意其文体应该是家庭背景、教育、生平经历、成就和评价等。同学们要注意其文体应该是记记叙文叙文,同时还要注意人称和时态的合理使用。同时还要注意人称和时态的合理使用。Presentation 点拨应用2:人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为5个字个字:概、貌、育、平、概、貌、育、平、评。评。1.概指概况概指概况:age,sex,birth-

16、place,background2.貌指外貌貌指外貌:appearance,character,hobby3.育指教育育指教育:education process4.平指生平平指生平:big events in ones life(in order of time)5.评指评价评指评价:evaluation1.1.人物简介的写作步骤：人物简介的写作步骤：概，貌，育，平，评概，貌，育，平，评2.52.5个句子整合语言点：个句子整合语言点：1 1）姓名）姓名+性别性别+教育经历教育经历 2 2）个人特点）个人特点+爱好爱好 3 3）工作表现，特点）工作表现，特点 4 4）业绩（荣誉）业绩（荣誉）5

17、 5）评价）评价【典题演练】【典题演练】根据下列提示，写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平的文章。根据下列提示，写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平的文章。1.1.袁隆平，袁隆平，19301930年年9 9月月7 7日出生在北京的一个贫困农民家庭。日出生在北京的一个贫困农民家庭。2.19532.1953年毕业于西南农学院，毕业后被分配到湘西农校任教。年毕业于西南农学院，毕业后被分配到湘西农校任教。3.19643.1964年开始从事水稻研究。年开始从事水稻研究。19811981年荣获我国第一个国家发明特等奖，被年荣获我国第一个国家发明特等奖，被国际上誉为国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父杂交水稻之父”。4.4

18、.尽管很出名，但是生活简朴，从不计名利。尽管很出名，但是生活简朴，从不计名利。5.20215.2021年年5 5月去世，全国人民哀悼这位农业专家的去世。月去世，全国人民哀悼这位农业专家的去世。注意注意：介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。：介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。写作要求写作要求：只能使用：只能使用5 5个句子表达全部的内容。个句子表达全部的内容。西南农学院西南农学院 Southwest Agriculture College湘西农校湘西农校 Agriculture School in the west of Hunan.第一个国家发明特等奖第一个国家发明特等奖 t

19、he First National Special Prize for Invention“杂交水稻之父杂交水稻之父”Father of Hybrid Rice【谋篇立意】明确体裁话题明确体裁话题人物介绍：袁隆平人物介绍：袁隆平确定时态人称确定时态人称第三人称，一般现在第三人称，一般现在/过去时过去时布局文章结构布局文章结构开头：人物概况开头：人物概况展开：事迹，生平展开：事迹，生平结尾：评价结尾：评价 Yuan Longping Born on September 7,1930 in Beijing,Yuan Longping was from a poor farmers family.H

20、aving graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953,he was assigned to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan.He began his research on rice in 1964 and won the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981.Consequently,he was honored as“Father of Hybrid Rice”in

21、the world.Famous as he is,he lived a simple life and cared little for money and fame.He died in May in 2021 at the age of 91,and the whole nation mourned the great loss of the agricultural expert.Yuan Longping Born on September 7,1930 in Beijing,Yuan Longping was from a poor farmers family.Having gr

22、aduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953,he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan.He began his research on rice in 1964 and got the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981.Consequently,he was honored as“Father of Hybrid Rice”in the world.Although he was famous,he lived a simple life and cared little for money and fame.He died in May in 2021 at the age of 91,and the whole nation mourned the great loss of the agricultural expert.