高考英语作文复习课件.ppt

1、高考作文复习高考作文复习英语连接词英语连接词一、表递进：一、表递进：valso,then,besides,further,furthermore,moreover,next,in addition等等 v Jason teaches diligently.Besides,he writes a lot.English is a useful language.For one thing,it is an official language in the UN.Then,it is widely used in business,science and technology.二、表解释：二、表解

2、释：vthat is to say,in other words,or rather vEg.These animals are all used to their environment;that is,they have learned how to live successfully in their habitat.vEg.We stayed at my friends house,or rather at my friends parents house.三、表示三、表示“反意见反意见”：vbut,however,still,yet,after all,in spite of,on

3、the contrary,on the other hand等等 vEg.Jim is intelligent but lazy.Singapore is not a big country.On the contrary,it is very small.四、表示四、表示“因果关系因果关系”：vtherefore,so,thus,consequently,as a result,now that,because(of),hence等：等：v Some people are over-ambitious.As a result,they are usually unhappy.v Tom di

4、d not work hard;hence,he failed.五、表示五、表示“举例示范举例示范”：vFor example,for instance,such as,like,namely,etc.vThere are some common errors in his composition.For instance,it is wrong to use he to replace the queen.六、表示六、表示“结束结束”或或“总结总结”：vIn a word,to sum up,in short,on the whole,in brief,to conclude,etc.v S

5、ome say Singapore is a nice place to live in.Others say it is not so nice.It is too competitive.In short,some like Singapore;some do not.七、表见解：七、表见解：vIn my opinion,personally(speaking),vas far as I am concerned,etc.八、表让步：八、表让步：vThough,although,as,despite,in spite of,v引用名人名言及谚语时，可使用如下句引用名人名言及谚语时，可使用如

6、下句型：型：Just as the saying goes:“No pains,no gains”.正像常言所说正像常言所说:“不劳无获不劳无获.vAs the proverb goes:“Every coin has its two sides”.正像谚语所说：正像谚语所说：“任何硬币都有两面任何硬币都有两面”.第一步，审题。第一步，审题。v拿到题目后，手中拿铅笔，手脑拿到题目后，手中拿铅笔，手脑眼嘴并用，开始审题眼嘴并用，开始审题.看题目的要求看题目的要求是什么，要点是什么，特殊要求是是什么，要点是什么，特殊要求是什么什么,最好用铅笔划下来，以免出错最好用铅笔划下来，以免出错 第二步，草稿

7、。第二步，草稿。v1.结构就是你打算分几段写，每段都写什么？结构就是你打算分几段写，每段都写什么？哪段转哪段承哪段起合？心里都要是有谱的。哪段转哪段承哪段起合？心里都要是有谱的。v2.关键词：结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写关键词：结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主主要是动词和名词。要是动词和名词。v3.句式：词写下来了，其实你构建这篇句式：词写下来了，其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了，下步就是要作文的建筑材料就到位了，下步就是要把它们盖成漂亮的作文。

8、把它们盖成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的先用最普通的陈述句陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍，然后看把它们在头脑中过一遍，然后看看都看都能改成什么句式能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句？能不能用上一个双重否述句改成问句？能不能用上一个双重否定句？能不能用一个主语从句套定语从定句？能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句？能不能用一个插入语？等等。句的长句？能不能用一个插入语？等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来 第三步：正式写。第三步：正式写。v注意，英语作文的卷面简直太重要了，注意，英语作文的卷面简直太重要了，一定要把字写整齐，写大。一定要把字写整齐，写大

9、。没有把握的没有把握的词和句子不用。词和句子不用。别忘了遵守你最初用铅别忘了遵守你最初用铅笔划下的题目的规定。笔划下的题目的规定。第四步：检查。第四步：检查。v尽管很小心，可是我们写英语作文还是尽管很小心，可是我们写英语作文还是会犯下很多错误。如，会犯下很多错误。如，单词拼写，大小单词拼写，大小写等等。写等等。这些错误会极大破坏我们在阅这些错误会极大破坏我们在阅卷老师心目中的形象，一定要坚决誓死卷老师心目中的形象，一定要坚决誓死消灭。消灭。即使时间再紧，请务必留下即使时间再紧，请务必留下12分钟检查作文的时间，消除隐性错分钟检查作文的时间，消除隐性错误。误。v需要说明的是，英语的需要说明的是，

10、英语的开头开头和和结尾结尾是最关键的，尤其是开头。基本上，是最关键的，尤其是开头。基本上，不跑题，遵守题目要求，一个漂亮不跑题，遵守题目要求，一个漂亮的开头，一个还过得去的结尾，的开头，一个还过得去的结尾，2-3个高级词汇，个高级词汇，1-2个漂亮的句子，加个漂亮的句子，加上整齐的字迹，作文的分就不会低上整齐的字迹，作文的分就不会低了哦。所以，精心为你的作文想个了哦。所以，精心为你的作文想个漂亮的开头吧。漂亮的开头吧。NMET2007浙江省书面表达：浙江省书面表达：第三节：书面表达（满分第三节：书面表达（满分30分）分）在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授

11、课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕中学生发表看法。请你围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题，这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。文。注意：注意：1词数词数100120，短文开头已给出（不计词数），短文开头已给出（不计词数）2参考词汇：参考词汇：atmosphere

12、 氛围氛围I prefer my English classes to be taught in I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only._1_ we all know,a good learning environment is of vital importance_2_ we want to study more effectively in English._3_,students will have more opportunities to practice listening and speaking._4

13、_,everything has two sides._5_ English is the only language used in classes,some students cant better understand_6_ the teacher means._7_ many slow learners may even lose interest in learning English._8_,I like my English classes to be taught in English only.Young people have been shown to suffer fr

14、om a lack of sleep.Statistics show that in cities like Beijing and Shanghai,80 percent young people suffer from fatigue because of poor quality sleep.There are,however,a couple of tricks for getting a good sleep,such as maintaining an optimistic attitude as well as a healthy diet,or find time for sp

15、orts.Keep the bedroom clean and avoid tea,coffee,or wine before tucking in.Young people have been shown not to have_1_ sleep.Statistics show that in cities _2_ Beijing and Shanghai,80 percent young people are rather tired_3_poor quality sleep._4_,if you hope to have a good sleep,you can still follow

16、 a couple of tricks._5_,you can maintain an optimistic attitude and _6_ a healthy diet,or find time for sports.Keep the bedroom clean and avoid tea,coffee,or wine before _7_to bed 正反观点正反观点/前后对比的议论文前后对比的议论文 一、一、构思文章结构构思文章结构开头：提出问题开头：提出问题主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由结尾：说明自己观点结尾：说明自己观点 二、表示不同观点的套语二、表示不同

17、观点的套语1.Different people hold different opinions.2.Opinions are divided.3.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards 4.People have different opinions on this problem.5.People take different views on this question.三、表达不同观点三、表达不同观点:1.of them hold the opinion that.2.of them are in favor of th

18、e idea that 3.People who are for/against the idea think 4.Some people believe that.Others argue that 四、不同观点之间的衔接四、不同观点之间的衔接:1.However,of them hold a different view.2.People who are against it dont think so.3.However,each coin has two sides.4.On the other hand,people object that.五五.篇章模式篇章模式 1.Recentl

19、y,we had a discussion on whether.Different people hold different opinions.2.of them are in favor of the idea that 3.However/On the other hand,of them hold a different view.They say that 4.In my opinion/As for myself,Its wrong/right to because例一：正反观点例一：正反观点（2005年高考江西卷年高考江西卷)人们对于学生网上交友持不同人们对于学生网上交友持不同

20、意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成理由：赞成理由：1.广交朋友广交朋友 2.可自由表达思想可自由表达思想 3.利于外语学习利于外语学习 反对理由：反对理由：1.浪费时间浪费时间 2.影响学习影响学习 3.可能上当受骗？可能上当受骗？你的看法：你的看法：Should students make friends on line?Some people say yes.The internet helps make many friends.Chatting on

21、 line,students can more freely express their feelings and opinions,and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others,however,think students should not.They say making friends on line is a waste of time,which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides,some students get cheated on l

22、ine.It is my opinion that students should place their study,health and safety before other things.As for friendship,we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.例二例二:前后对比前后对比 记者采访了你校记者采访了你校“争做好学生好公民争做好学生好公民”活动活动,并邀请你就活动前后同学们言行变化写一篇英文报道并邀请你就活动前后同学们言行变化写一篇英文报道,同时同时发表你个人看法发表你个人看法

23、.活动前活动前 活动后活动后1.上课迟到上课迟到,作业拖拉作业拖拉1.准时到校准时到校,作业认真作业认真2.不问候老师不问候老师,课后喧哗课后喧哗 2.尊敬师长尊敬师长,帮助他人帮助他人3.乘车插队乘车插队,上车抢座上车抢座3.乘车排队乘车排队,上车让座上车让座活动活动 campaign 抢座位抢座位 scramble for seats At the beginning of the term,a campaign“to be a good student and a good citizen”was launched in our school,and great changes have

24、 taken place since then.Before the campaign,we used to be late for school and failed to hand in our homework in time.Often,we forgot to greet our teachers and after class we made loud noises.Worse still,we jumped the queue when waiting for buses and scrambled for seats no board.However,the campaign

25、has changed us a lot.We are no longer late for school and are more careful in our homework.We have learned to show respect for the elders,help others,wait in line for buses and give up seats to other passengers.I think the campaign is very meaningful,from which we have learned a lot.More importantly

26、,we have got rid of many bad habits and have become better students at school and better citizens in society.应用文（提纲类作文）应用文（提纲类作文）一、一、倡议书倡议书例一：例一：(2005年江苏卷年江苏卷)，假设你是李晓平，是江苏，假设你是李晓平，是江苏中学的学生。请你围绕中学的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会建设和谐社会”的主题，的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一份倡议书。要点如下：写一份倡议书。要点如下：1、人与社会：

27、祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心。、人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心。2、人与人：家长、师长、同学，诚信互助。、人与人：家长、师长、同学，诚信互助。3、人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护。、人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护。4、你的态度你的态度A letter to High School Students in Jiangsu:Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build a“harmonious society”.I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to ach

28、ieve this goal.As high school students,what should we do?_,we should love our motherland.Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometown and _our school and class activities._,lets _ the world _ love.We should show our respect for old people,our parents,and our teachers.First of alltak

29、e an active part inSecondlyfillwithWe should also_each other and help those in need._,all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life._,lets work together to _energy and _ our natural envirnment,and we must learn to live in harmmony with nature around us._,I will study _ harder and try our b

30、est to do all the above.care forMost improtant of allFinallysaveprotectAs for myselfeven例二：例二：假如你是某校学生会主席，请你以该校学生会主假如你是某校学生会主席，请你以该校学生会主席的名义以席的名义以“校园拒绝零食校园拒绝零食”为主题，根据下面的内容，为主题，根据下面的内容，给全校学生写一封倡议书。给全校学生写一封倡议书。1）目前学校吃零食现象很严重，有些学生每天花很多钱）目前学校吃零食现象很严重，有些学生每天花很多钱买零食吃；买零食吃；2）吃零食是一种浪费的坏习惯；）吃零食是一种浪费的坏习惯；3）零食

31、大多数为非健康食品，容易使人发胖，甚至生病；）零食大多数为非健康食品，容易使人发胖，甚至生病；4）还有同学乱扔包装袋；）还有同学乱扔包装袋；5）作为高中生，应当养成良好的饮食习惯，拒绝零食。）作为高中生，应当养成良好的饮食习惯，拒绝零食。参考词汇：零食参考词汇：零食snacks；现象；现象phenomenon；包装袋；包装袋wrapper Dear fellow students,our school is preparing to help students develop good habits._ there is a serious phenomenon in our school s

32、ome students are spending _ money on snacks.Eating snacks is a waste of a money.Its _ a bad habit that we should get rid of._,most snacks have too much fat and sugar.They are unhealthy food.Eating too much may _ fatness and illness._,some students throw the wrappers everywhere._ high school students

33、,we shouldt act like children any more.Dear fellow students,lets form good eating habits and say no to snacks.Buttoo muchalsoIn additionlead toWhats worseAs例三：例三：假如你是假如你是某校学生会主席，你校学生假如你是假如你是某校学生会主席，你校学生会畅饮开展会畅饮开展“捐赠二手书捐赠二手书”活动。请你根据下表内容，活动。请你根据下表内容，以学生会名义给即将离校的高三毕业生写一封以学生会名义给即将离校的高三毕业生写一封100字左字左右的倡议书

34、，发至校园网论坛，陈述该活动的要求和右的倡议书，发至校园网论坛，陈述该活动的要求和意义。意义。捐赠时间捐赠时间2008年年6月月12日日捐赠地点捐赠地点学生会办公室学生会办公室捐赠意义捐赠意义1、旧物利用，减少浪费、旧物利用，减少浪费2、书中的笔记利于学弟学妹进、书中的笔记利于学弟学妹进入高三的学习入高三的学习3、帮助他人是一种快乐、帮助他人是一种快乐 A voluntary donating activity is called for here.It wont be long _ we leave school.Once we graduate,most of our books and

35、magazines will become useless for us._,giving away the second-hand books is a good way for us to deal with them.It has many advantages._,making the used things reused is a good method to reduce waste._,many notes that we took when we studied are good for lower students to study well after they enter

36、 senior three._,helping others also makes us feel happy.We hope as many people as possible will take part in it.Its on June 12,2008 in the office of the student Union _ the activity will be held.beforeFor one thingFor anotherThereforeBesidesthat 倡议书：倡议书：假如你是李华，是某一中学高三（）班的学生，请你假如你是李华，是某一中学高三（）班的学生，请你

37、根据以下倡议书的内容写一封英文倡议书，谈谈作为中学生如何遵根据以下倡议书的内容写一封英文倡议书，谈谈作为中学生如何遵行网络文明公约。行网络文明公约。各位同学：各位同学：为了创造良好的网络环境，我提倡大家文明上网，做文明网民。为了创造良好的网络环境，我提倡大家文明上网，做文明网民。、汲取有益的信息，拒绝不良的网站；、汲取有益的信息，拒绝不良的网站；、合理安排时间，不沉醉于网络；、合理安排时间，不沉醉于网络；、友好聊天，不随意约见网友；、友好聊天，不随意约见网友；、互相尊重，不侵害他人隐私。、互相尊重，不侵害他人隐私。让我们共同携手让网络更好地为我们的学习和生活服务。让我们共同携手让网络更好地为我

38、们的学习和生活服务。注意注意:、词数：、词数：100字左右。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；字左右。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；2、参考词汇：网络环境、参考词汇：网络环境 network environment 文明网民文明网民 civilized NetizenMy dear friends,I am Li Hua from Class Six,Grade Three.In order to create a favorable network environment,I think we should be civilized Netizens.First,we should only v

39、isit useful websites and refuse harmful information.Second,we ought to make good use of our time and not to become addicted to the Net.Third,we should be friendly to our e-pals and we shouldnt agree to meet strangers in case we may get cheated.Fourth,we should respect each other and others privacy.I

40、t is our duty to do what we can to make sure the Net plays a positive part in our study and life.二、呼吁信二、呼吁信 近年来，近年来，我们目睹了人类对地球造成的各种各我们目睹了人类对地球造成的各种各样的破坏。假如你是一名中学生，名叫李华，根样的破坏。假如你是一名中学生，名叫李华，根据下面所给的三个提示给地球公民写一封关于环据下面所给的三个提示给地球公民写一封关于环境保护的呼吁信。境保护的呼吁信。1.列举目前地球所面临的严重问题（列举目前地球所面临的严重问题（floods,droughts,land

41、slides and dust-storms etc.)2.呼吁全社会关注环境呼吁全社会关注环境 3.提出你的建议提出你的建议 A Letter of Appeal To everyone on our planet,Over the past years,floods,droughts,landslides and dust-storms have frequented our planet the only habitat of human beings.We wont forget the tsunami(海啸海啸)that swept Southeast Asia,which caus

42、ed enorous damage.All these have sounded an alarm to human beings.Man has damaged the environment almost to the extent of ruining his own living space.If we pay no attention to the present destructive human activities,our planet will become a tomb instead of a comfortable home.Whats more,we should r

43、ealize that only from our planet can we obtain what we need for survival.If we want to continue to live in this world,we had better try our best to protect our natural environment.Countermeasures(对应手段，对策）对应手段，对策）must be taken to stop the destruction caused by human beings.Most importantly,laws must

44、be established to punished those who are involved in destructive conducts.Sincerely yours,LiHua 假如你是班长，请根据下列内容在班级做一假如你是班长，请根据下列内容在班级做一次为四川汶川地震的捐款活动做一次动员演讲：次为四川汶川地震的捐款活动做一次动员演讲：要求：可适当增加细节。要求：可适当增加细节。字数：字数：100字左右字左右事件：地震事件：地震时间：时间：2008年年5月月12日以来日以来地点：中国西南地区四川省汶川地点：中国西南地区四川省汶川后果：汶川地震已造成后果：汶川地震已造成19509人

45、死亡，遇难人数人死亡，遇难人数估计在估计在5万人以上，汶川八县夷为平地万人以上，汶川八县夷为平地援助：上海已经募捐援助：上海已经募捐9千万人民币支援灾区人们千万人民币支援灾区人们Dear fellow students:Im here in front of you with a heavy heart.Because I was shocked by the terrible loss of lives from the earthquake in southwest of China,which hit Wenchuan County of Sichuan Province on May

46、12,2008.The number of the death toll in the disaster has climbed to 19509.Whats worse,it is said that the victims is up to 50000.What astonished me most is that there is almost nothing left except ruins after the earthquake in Wenchuan County.Facing such a severe disaster,the governments and people

47、all over our country have displayed great confidence,courage and effort to rescue those from danger.Shanghai has donated 90000 yuan to those people.As a member of the great Chinese people,we have the responsibility and duty to work with the governments and the people in earthquake-stricken region hand in hand and shoulder to shoulder to help people there to rebuild their beautiful homes.So what do you wait?Lets save the pocket money and donate it to this great war against nature.Thats all.Thanks!