英语记叙文的写作的结构课件.ppt

1、英语记叙文的写作的结构英语记叙文的写作的结构 Beginning Topic sentence 主题句主题句Ending Conclusion 结论句结论句Middle Supporting sentence 支持句支持句(举例说明、分层描写、解释原举例说明、分层描写、解释原因等因等)1谢谢欣赏2019-8-2写作基本要求写作基本要求仔细研读汉语及英文提示词，仔细研读汉语及英文提示词，千万不要漏项千万不要漏项列出可能用到的列出可能用到的句型句型，注意，注意关联词关联词的使用，如：的使用，如：and,but,so,although,because等等语法方面：语法方面：时态，人称时态，人称的准确

2、使用的准确使用形成整个文段，想好形成整个文段，想好“开头，中间，结尾开头，中间，结尾”（发发表议论，谈感受表议论，谈感受）可以适当可以适当分段分段写完后要通读写完后要通读检查检查2谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 每个人都需要朋友。你的朋友叫什么？每个人都需要朋友。你的朋友叫什么？来自哪里？你们是怎样认识的？谈谈来自哪里？你们是怎样认识的？谈谈你们之间的友谊以及你的看法。你们之间的友谊以及你的看法。everyone,friend,come from,get to know,be sure.3谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 Everyone needs friends.But different people

3、 have different ways to make friends.My friend is an American girl.Her name is Linda.We got to know each other on the Internet.We talk about what we are interested in through the Internet.Though we live in different countries,I think we have known each other well.We only wish to see each other one d

4、ay.People often say few friends can last long.But if we can really understand and help each other,we are sure that we can be friends all the time.4谢谢欣赏2019-8-2假设你是李平，已在初中学习大约三年。你假设你是李平，已在初中学习大约三年。你的学习生活很紧张，但在课余时间你还是参的学习生活很紧张，但在课余时间你还是参加了许多体育运动，如足球、乒乓球、跑步、加了许多体育运动，如足球、乒乓球、跑步、游泳、谈谈游泳、谈谈你最喜爱的一项体育运动，你最喜

5、爱的一项体育运动，为什么喜欢，运动的情况和感受等为什么喜欢，运动的情况和感受等、name,Liping,study,busy,spare time,healthy,think.5谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 My name is Li Ping.Im a student of Grade Three.Although Im very busy with my study,in my spare time,I take part in several kinds of sports,such as,playing football,pingpong,running,swimming and so o

6、n.They can help me keep strong and healthy.Of all the sports,running is my favourite,because its very easy to do.Now Im in our school running team.I practise very hard every day at any place when Im free.With my practice and the teachers help,I have made great progress.I think Ill try my best to win

7、 some prizes for our great country like Liu Xiang in the future.Im sure I can make it.6谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 学校要组织课外活动丰富同学们学校要组织课外活动丰富同学们的业余生活的业余生活,你想参加哪项体育活动呢你想参加哪项体育活动呢?1)请你写出参加的活动请你写出参加的活动,2)并说明你参加的理由并说明你参加的理由3)以及在活动中你都做了什么以及在活动中你都做了什么,4)同时谈谈你对课外活动的看法同时谈谈你对课外活动的看法.7谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 There are many after-class

8、activities in our school,such as running,playing tennis,playing basketball and so on.I like playing basketball very much,so I want to take part in the basketball activity.I think playing basketball can not only make us strong,but also help us keep healthy.I often play basketball with my friends afte

9、r class.While Im playing basketball,I often practise passing the ball,shooting at the basket and some other basketball skills,8谢谢欣赏2019-8-2sometimes we have a basketball match.I have also made many new friends.After-class activities can help us relax our body and mind.I hope everyone can take part i

10、n after-class activities,because its good for us.9谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 你曾经去过长城你曾经去过长城.请你描述一下去长城的请你描述一下去长城的经历经历,如如:1)你什么时间去的你什么时间去的 2)怎样去的怎样去的 3)和谁去的和谁去的 4)做了什么及感受如何做了什么及感受如何 the Great Wall,wonder,about 6700 kilometres,happy,proud10谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders in the world.Its a

11、bout 6,700 kilometres long.As far as I remember,I went to the Great Wall in 2002 for the first time and I went there with my parents by bus.Standing at the foot of the Great Wall,I found the Great Wall looked like a huge dragon on the mountains.It took us about two hours to get to the top.Then we to

12、ok some photos and had a picnic.11谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 We didnt come back until it was very late.Although I felt very tired,I was very happy.Im proud of being a Chinese because of the Great Wall.I hope that more and more people can visit the Great Wall and enjoy the beautiful scenery.12谢谢欣赏2019-8-2Dear Jack

13、,Thank you for your letter.Im sorry to hear that you often get sick.Here Id like to give you some advice on how to stay healthy.First,have enough sleep every day.Secondly,eat a balanced diet.You can eat more fruit and vegetables.Thirdly,wash your hands before you have meals.Fourthly,take enough exer

14、cise every day.Finally,13谢谢欣赏2019-8-2drink more water,and you can drink a glass of milk before you go to bed.I hope my advice will be useful to you.Best wishes!Yours,Henry14谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 Take picture 拍照片 to ones surprise 令某人感到惊讶的是 throw litter仍垃圾 pourinto把倾倒入 produce harmful gases 产生有害的气体 as a result

15、 结果 protect the environment 保护环境 范文 This term I take part in the research of our school geography study group.The topic is Environmental Pollution and Protection.We took many different kinds of pictures.They showed the present pollution conditions of our city.To our surprise,there are still many peo

16、ple doing harm to the environment.Some people throw litter everywhere,some cars produce harmful gases,and waste water is poured into rivers by some factories by some factories.As a result,the environment is polluted badly.How important it is to prtect the environment!I think everyboby must do someth

17、ing to save our world.If we dont,our future will be hopeless.15谢谢欣赏2019-8-26、学校要组织课外活动、学校要组织课外活动(after-class activities)丰富同学们丰富同学们的课余生活，既有体育类的又有英语角活动，你想参加的课余生活，既有体育类的又有英语角活动，你想参加(take part in)哪一项活动？庆任选其一，说明你先参加的理由，并哪一项活动？庆任选其一，说明你先参加的理由，并谈谈你对课外活动的看法。谈谈你对课外活动的看法。Sports activitiesEnglish corner1.basck

18、etball football2.strong3.keep healthy4.relax1.Interesting 2.practise spoken 3.Like talking 4.good for16谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 There are all kinds of after class activities in our school,such as sports activities,English corner and so on.I think after-class activities can make our life rich and interesting.At

19、the same time,we can learn a lot of knowledge that we cant learn in class.I want to take part in English corner,I like English very much.I think its very interesting and useful.As we all know,the Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in 2008.I want to be a member of serving the 2008 Olympics,I also

20、want to help the foreign friends from all over the world.I will talk with them and show them around the places of interest in Beijing.So now I should try my best to practise my spoken English so that I can talk with them.17谢谢欣赏2019-8-27.随着网络的发展，电子贺卡得到越来越多的人的青随着网络的发展，电子贺卡得到越来越多的人的青睐，请根据以下提示，阐述电子贺卡的优越

21、性，睐，请根据以下提示，阐述电子贺卡的优越性，纸质贺卡纸质贺卡电子贺卡电子贺卡(animations)1传递速度传递速度慢慢2单调单调3浪费纸浪费纸1、传递速度快、传递速度快2、网上提供很多贺卡供你使用，你、网上提供很多贺卡供你使用，你不仅可获得图片，而且可以获得动不仅可获得图片，而且可以获得动画和声音画和声音3、电子贺卡的普及可以减少直至贺、电子贺卡的普及可以减少直至贺卡的使用，有助于保护森林，保护卡的使用，有助于保护森林，保护环境。环境。18谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 With the development of the Internet,more and more people have

22、 begun to send electronic cards instead of paper ones Electronic cards have some advantages.First,its much faster to send an electronic card than to send a paper one.Secondly,compared with paper cards,electronic cards are more interesting.There are many kinds of electronic cards for you to choose on

23、 the Internet.You can get not only pictures but also sounds and animations.Thirdly.this can help protect forests and environment.19谢谢欣赏2019-8-2作文：随着阳光体育运动在全国开展作文：随着阳光体育运动在全国开展“每天锻炼一小时，每天锻炼一小时，健康工作健康工作50年，幸福生活一辈子。年，幸福生活一辈子。”的理念深入人心，校园里出现了可喜的变化：运动时间的理念深入人心，校园里出现了可喜的变化：运动时间延长了，延长了，运动项目增加了，学生体质增强了，运动项目增

24、加了，学生体质增强了，校园生活丰富了。清以为题给校刊写一份报道。校园生活丰富了。清以为题给校刊写一份报道。内容要点提示：内容要点提示：80词左右，可适当发挥。词左右，可适当发挥。1：time for sports 2:kinds of sports3:change of students health and study4:change of school life20谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 Sports in our schoolSports in our school have changed a lot,now we have more than three P.E classes a

25、 week,and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.Students get so excited at these changes.More and more students take an active part in the ball games,running,and jumping on the playground.our school life is becoming more wonderful.Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What more,

26、a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.21谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 My mother My mother is very kind and easygoing.She helps me a lot.She takes good care of my daily life.For example,every morning,she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me.When Im in trouble,she always encourages me to fa

27、ce my difficulities and cheers me up.I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and was sad.My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem.With her help,I became a top student in my class.Im very thankful for all that she has done for me.I believe she w

28、ill be proud of me in the near future.22谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 My teacher My English teacher Miss Li is very kind and easygoing.She helps me a lot.She takes good care of us.She often helps me with my English.When Im in trouble,she always encourages me to face my difficulities and gives me good advice.I still

29、remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was sad.With her help,I made great progress in English and became interested in it.Im very thankful for all what she has done for me.Ill try my best to live up to her expectations.23谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 在你学习过程中，你的老师、同学或者在你学习过程中，你的老师、同学或者朋友一定曾经给过你很

30、多的帮助。请你以朋友一定曾经给过你很多的帮助。请你以“My Best”为题，写一篇为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，词左右的短文，来参加英语周报的征文比赛。内容应包括：来参加英语周报的征文比赛。内容应包括：对你的老师或朋友的简单介绍；对你的老师或朋友的简单介绍；谈谈他谈谈他/她是怎样帮助你的以及你的感受及想法。她是怎样帮助你的以及你的感受及想法。所所给英文提示词语供选用。给英文提示词语供选用。注意：请不要写出真实校名和姓名。注意：请不要写出真实校名和姓名。best friend,kind,help，encourage，cheer up 24谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 My best friend i

31、s Liu Mei.She is very kind and easygoing.She helps me a lot.When Im in trouble,she always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers me up.I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and became upset,she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.With h

32、er help,I made great progress in English and became interested in it.Im very thankful for all what she has done for me.Ill never forget her.(91words)25谢谢欣赏2019-8-2文段文段你一定有不少美好的经历你一定有不少美好的经历.请你把其请你把其中有意义的一天描述出来中有意义的一天描述出来.谈谈那天谈谈那天的天气如何的天气如何?发生了什么事发生了什么事?你有什你有什么心情、感受或体会？么心情、感受或体会？a good time,invite,en

33、joy,relaxation26谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 That day I had a good time.It was sunny and hot,and you know sunny days always make me happy.My friends invited me to go to the beach to have fun.There we did a lot of things.In the morning we all went out boating in the sea.In the afternoon,some were playing beach volle

34、yball joyfully,while others were swimming in the sea.As for me,I especially enjoyed the sunshine.So I lay on the beach and read my favourite novel under my umbrella.It was so relaxing.Study is important,and so is relaxation.27谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 现在网络在人们的生活中越来越现在网络在人们的生活中越来越重要，人们可以在网上做很多事情。重要，人们可以在网上做很多事情。你

35、经常上网吗？你是如何看待中学你经常上网吗？你是如何看待中学生上网的？请谈谈你的看法。生上网的？请谈谈你的看法。（要求（要求80100个单词）个单词）Internet，important，make good use of28谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 The Internet is becoming more and more important to us.Without it,we cant do work better.We can go shopping without going out of our houses.And we can listen to music or watch

36、movies on the Internet.It can also help a lot with our study.We can learn much knowledge on different subjects,and get information as soon as possible.29谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 But now,some of us study or play on the Internet for a long time.Its bad for our eyes and health.Some students spend too much time pla

37、ying computer games.As a result,they cant get good marks although they are very clever.I think if we make good use of the Internet,it will be our best friend and help us a lot.30谢谢欣赏2019-8-231谢谢欣赏2019-8-2作文练习作文练习(Module 6)李明是北京一所绿色学校的学生，他非常李明是北京一所绿色学校的学生，他非常关心保护环境每周六他都去他家附近的公园，关心保护环境每周六他都去他家附近的公园，街道

38、捡拾垃圾街道捡拾垃圾请你就李明的事迹，以请你就李明的事迹，以”Learn from Liming”为题，给学校投稿为题，给学校投稿内容包括内容包括:李明的李明的事迹简介，你对这件事的感受，以及你对环保事迹简介，你对这件事的感受，以及你对环保的一些想法的一些想法student,a green school,Beijing,care about,protect,go,rubbish,moved(受感动受感动的）的）,learn from,from now on,earth.32谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 Liming is a student at a green school in Beijing

39、.He cares about protecting the environment.Every Saturday he goes to the park and the streets near his home to pick up rubbish.I was deeply moved by his story.I think he is a good student because what he did shows that he is always careful of the environmental problems.I should learn from him.From n

40、ow on,I will also do something for our environment,such as,using things for as long as possible,opening a window 33谢谢欣赏2019-8-2instead of turning on air conditioning,taking my own cloth bag when shopping instead of using plastic bags and so on.The earth is our home,so everyone should try to protect

41、our environment.Now lets all do something for our Earth.Please remember:a better environment lies in our hands.34谢谢欣赏2019-8-2汶川地震汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生发生后，后，9岁学生林浩救了两名同学，然后步行岁学生林浩救了两名同学，然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。个小时到达安全地点。请你就林浩同学的事迹，以请你就林浩同学的事迹，以“Learn from the hero”为题，给你校英语专刊投稿。内容为题，给你校英语专刊投稿。内容包括林浩同学事迹简

42、介，你对这件事的感受，包括林浩同学事迹简介，你对这件事的感受，以及你要想他学习什么。以及你要想他学习什么。提示词语：提示词语：a student,nine years old,happen,save,walk,to safety,be deeply moved,brave,give up 35谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 Lin Hao is a student.He is nine years old.After Wenchuan Earthquake,he saved two of his classmates.Then he walked for seven hours to safety.

43、I was deeply moved by his story.I think he is a brave boy.He did his best when he faced great danger.I should learn from him.I will think of others first and help them as much as possible.I will never give up when I face difficulties.36谢谢欣赏2019-8-2假如你们班将举行一次以假如你们班将举行一次以“sports andHealth”为主题的班会。请你根据自

44、己为主题的班会。请你根据自己的实际情况，写一篇介绍自己体育锻炼情的实际情况，写一篇介绍自己体育锻炼情况的文稿，说明喜欢体育锻炼的原因、感况的文稿，说明喜欢体育锻炼的原因、感受和建议。受和建议。提示词语：提示词语：love,sports,becausegood,play,enjoy,strong,keep,take part in,37谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 假设你是新华中学的学生假设你是新华中学的学生,简要介绍一下你简要介绍一下你自己自己,包括个人情况、业余爱好以及今后在包括个人情况、业余爱好以及今后在学习英语方面的打算。学习英语方面的打算。提示词语：提示词语：I，student,XinHu

45、a MiddleSchool,old,like,in my spare time,often,learn English,listen,speak,inThe future.38谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 Im a student in XinHua Middle school.Im fifteen years old.I like listening to music in my spare time,I often read English in the morning and try to talk with others in English,Im interested in Engli

46、sh and Im good at it,too.From now on,I will learn English harder than before.I plan to listen to English half an hour every day and speak English as much as possible.39谢谢欣赏2019-8-2In the future I will go abroad to study.So its important for me to study English well.40谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 保护我们的环境是十分重要的保护我们的环

47、境是十分重要的,它有利于我它有利于我们的身体健康们的身体健康.世界上仅有一个地球世界上仅有一个地球,我们就我们就生活在这个地球上生活在这个地球上,所以保护环境是我们的责所以保护环境是我们的责任任.在生活中在生活中,我们应该做些什么呢我们应该做些什么呢?我们该怎我们该怎么做呢么做呢?important environment necessarypick up dustbin(垃圾箱垃圾箱)plant shouldshouldnt41谢谢欣赏2019-8-2学校英文校刊正在征集有关保护环境的文学校英文校刊正在征集有关保护环境的文章。假如你是李华，请你为校刊写一篇文章。假如你是李华，请你为校刊写一篇

48、文章，内容包括：介绍你的个人信息；你平章，内容包括：介绍你的个人信息；你平时是如何保护环境的；你的感受以及建议。时是如何保护环境的；你的感受以及建议。name,LiHua,No.Middle School,careabout,save,rubbish,dustbin,be good forhope,earth42谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 My name is Li Hua.I study at No.6 Middle School.Although I am busy with my study,I always care about the environment.When I see so

49、me rubbish in the street,I pick it up and put it into the dustbin.I never throw the waste things everywhere.I think everyone should protect the environment.We mustnt throw rubbish everywhere.and we can plant more trees and flowers.Its good for our environment.43谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 There is only one earth i

50、n the world.Sowe should try our best to protect it and make it more and more beautiful.44谢谢欣赏2019-8-2 Everyone wants to keep healthy.It,s important for us stay healthy.In order to make myself strong,I often take part in some kinds of sports,such as running,playing basketball,swimming and so on.I als