中考英语作文写作指导精华版教学课件.ppt（纯ppt,无音视频）

1、English writing Dear Dr.Know，I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study.First，some of us arent interested in English.We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing.And then its sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots

2、 of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.Whats moreWhats more,there are so many new words we havent,there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage.I dont k

3、now what to do.meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alonelet alone(更不更不用说用说)answer the questions about them.But the most answer the questions about them.But the most difficult thing is to write.We

4、often use wrong words and difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and sentences.sentences.Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Please Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Pleasegive us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Please give us some useful advice.Thank you

5、 very much.Please write soon.write soon.Mary(the beginning)(the ending)the body（正文）（正文）健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大

6、家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel列列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。简单的句子列出文章的要点。A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.

7、A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.列列(list)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your

8、vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）加加(add)加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,a lot of people travel.And some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.Also some other peo

9、ple visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.连连(connect)方法一方法一:善用词汇善用词汇 甚至善用甚至善用高级词汇高级词汇Which is better?A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Which is better?我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I wish yo

10、u can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.Which is better?他们很早就到了。他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.Which is better?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.A I think learnin

11、g English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English.A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.方法二方法二:活用多种句型活用多种句型方法三方法三:妙用关联词妙用关联词1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror3.表示转折表示转折:but,howeve

12、r,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin wit

13、h,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short _ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert

14、 _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt last How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,a lot of people travel.And some people s

15、tay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.连连(connect)美美(beautify)We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.According to

16、it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.Peo

17、ple who relax well work well.美美(beautify)According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.However,a few people have to work.As the saying goes,“All work and n

18、o play makesJack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.Peoplewho relax well work well.美美(beautify)And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.Proverb（谚语）（谚语）/saying锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exerciseAs the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull bo

19、y.”It is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to

20、learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。失败是

21、成功之母。失败是成功之母。6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs 7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn.方法四方法四:妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子（多用于（多用于“the bodythe body”）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should

22、do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes,folding

23、the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.Lets Do it now!/Dont do it again!As students,we should start from ourselves.Dont wait.Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off!Become a volunteer today!How amazing!I cant wait!Save animals!Save Ourselves!Save our planet!Dont hesitate(犹豫犹豫).It will b

24、e great fun!书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧列列加加连连美美 First，some of us arent interested in English.We think studying English is such a boring thing.And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And And we are always afraid t

25、o join the group discussion.we are always afraid to join the group discussion.Whats more Whats more,there are so many new words we,there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage.I dont know havent met before in the passage.I dont know what to do.what to do.SometimesSometimes we cant

26、 understand the we cant understand the main idea,main idea,let alonelet alone(更不用说更不用说)answer the questionsanswer the questions about them.about them.ButBut the most difficult thing is to the most difficult thing is to write.write.We often use wrong words and sentences.We often use wrong words and s

27、entences.Lets go for it!1 12 23 34 46 65 5 Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is some advice for you.Yours _,I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can join the English club to practice English.You know,“Practic

28、e makes perfect.”_,it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improve your listening skill._,English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.Your turn to go for it!（试填一填）（试填一填）Dear Mary,I heard you didnt do well in English.Here is som

29、e advice for you.Yours _,I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._,you can join the English club to practice English.You know,“Practice makes perfect.”_,it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning.It can improv

30、e your listening skill._,English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.To begin withOf courseIn factThenThenYour turn to go for it!（check）1 12 23 3 The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies!Now Im in Grade Nine.Actually I feel the life is quite different from it

31、 used to be.Now Im as busy as a bee.Theres a lot of homework and exams.The only feeling I have is:The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging!Theres an old saying:He who fails to plan plans to fail.I dont want to fail,so I create a plan for the following days.Since nothing is diffi

32、cult if I put my heart into it,I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now.Ill spend the rest time efficiently.As theres no elevator to success,Ill try my best to do everything step by step!I believe that I can do it!Its your turn!（请分析以下的文章请分析以下的文章）Your turn to go for

33、it!Good words:Good sentences:Connection words:随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀许多动物遭到猎杀所有这些都导致了越来越所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。

34、请根据上述内容写一篇不少于请根据上述内容写一篇不少于8080词的英语短文。词的英语短文。要求：要求：1.1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；2.2.提示的内容要全部用上。提示的内容要全部用上。Its your turn!(练练笔练练笔)Lets Help Our Friends With the increasing population,human needs more places to live in and more food to eat.As a result,we change the forests into farmland.I feel pity

35、 for the animals.More and more new cities and roads are built on animals habitat.A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur.There used to be lots of animals,but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly behavior.For example,there are onl

36、y 2500 manatees in the USA now.Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear?Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future?Dont you think animals are our lovely friends?I know your answer is“No”.So its our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them.Dont pu

37、t it off！Lets try our best to help our friends today!Your turn to go for it!Good words:Good sentences:Connection words:模板作文模板作文开头公式一：名人名言开头公式一：名人名言 1.A proberb says/As an old saying goes,“You are only young once.”2.As everyone knows/As is known to us,no one can deny that 开头公式二：数字统计开头公式二：数字统计 1.Accor

38、ding to a recent survey,about 78.9%of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.2.A recent statistics shows that 附附 结尾公式一：结论结尾公式一：结论1.Obviously,we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.2.to sum up/in conclusion/in brief

39、/on account of this/thus结尾公式二：建议结尾公式二：建议1.Accordingly,I recommend that some measures be taken.2.Consequently,to solve the problem,some measures should be taken.写作的写作的“五项基本原则五项基本原则”一、一、长短句原则长短句原则 As a creature,I eat;as a man,I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the ot

40、her is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind,they are in a way quite similar.二、二、主题句原则主题句原则 To begin with,you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparation,you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、三、一二三原则一二三原则 1）first,

41、second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）the first,the second,the third,the last4）in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly5）to begin with,then,furthermore,finally6）to start with,next,in addition,finally7）first and foremost,besides,last but not least8）most importan

42、t of all,moreover,finally 9）on the one hand,on the other hand10）for one thing,for another thing四、四、短语优先原则短语优先原则 I cannot bear/stand it.I cannot put up with it.I want it.I am looking forward to it.五、多变句式原则五、多变句式原则 I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.Not only the fur coat is soft,but it is

43、also warm.The car was quite old,yet it was in excellent condition.hen,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,as a result,for this reason,so that This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I dont enjoy that book you are read

44、ing.Mr liu,our oral English teacher,is easy-going.Whether your tastes are modern or traditional,sophisticated or simple,there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays,energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil,coal,natural gas,solar heat,the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard,to enlarge our scope of knowledge,to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.THANK YOU!