（公开课课件）高中英语概要写作：Summary-Writing.pptx（纯ppt,可能不含音视频素材文件）

1、Summary WritingBy the end of this period,you will be able to:1.be clear about the steps of writing a summary;2.know how to get the topic sentence;3.write a summary by using some techniques.普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）评分标准评分标准 第五档（第五档（21-2521-25分分）1.Rea

2、d for topic and structure 2.Combine topic sentence and key words 3.Rewrite/paraphrase 1Read for Topic and Structure How could we possibly think that keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments-mostly for entertainment purposes-is fair and respectful?Zoo officials say they are concerned about

3、animals.However,most zoos remain“collections”of interesting“things”rather than protective habitats.Zoos teach people that it is acceptable to keep animals bored,lonely,and far from their natural bones.Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species,but visitors leave zoos without having lea

4、rned anything meaningful about the animalsnatural behavior,intelligence,or beauty.Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages,and most signs only mention the species name,diet,and natural range.The animals normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos dont usually take care of the animalsnatural nee

5、ds.The animals are kept together in small spaces,with no privacy and little opportunity for mental and physical exercise.This results in unusual and self-destructive behavior called zoochosis.A worldwide study of zoos found that zoochosis is common among animals kept in small spaces or cages.Another

6、 study showed that elephants spend 22 percent of their time making repeated head movements or biting cage bars,and bears spend 30 percent of their time walking back and forth,a sign of unhappiness and pain.Furthermore,most animals in zoos are not endangered.Captive breeding of endangered big cats,As

7、ian elephants,and other species has not resulted n their being sent back to the wild.Zoos talk a lot about their captive breeding programs because they do not want people to worry about a species dying out.In fact,baby animals also attract a lot of paying customers.Havent we seen enough competitions

8、 to name baby animals?Actually,we will save endangered species only if we save their habitats and put an end to the reasons people kill them.Instead of supporting zoos,we should support groups that work to protect animals natural habitats.Read for Topic and Structure 2Read for Topic Sentence and Key

9、 Words How could we possibly think that keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments-mostly for entertainment purposes-is fair and respectful?Zoo officials say they are concerned about animals.However,most zoos remain“collections”of interesting“things”rather than protective habitats.Zoos teach

10、 people that it is acceptable to keep animals bored,lonely,and far from their natural homes.Read for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.1&2?How could we possibly think that keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments-mostly for entertainment purposes-is fair and respectful?Zoo officials say th

11、ey are concerned about animals.However,most zoos remain“collections”of interesting“things”rather than protective habitats.Zoos teach people that it is acceptable to keep animals bored,lonely,and far from their natural homes.Read for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.1&2 提出问题提出问题 导入导入?动物园观点动物园观点事实说明事

12、实说明 How could we possibly think that keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments-mostly for entertainment purposes-is fair and respectful?Zoo officials say they are concerned about animals.However,most zoos remain“collections”of interesting“things”rather than protective habitats.Zoos teach pe

13、ople that it is acceptable to keep animals bored,lonely,and far from their natural homes.Read for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.1&2?动物园观点动物园观点 主题句主题句事实说明事实说明 How could we possibly think that keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments-mostly for entertainment purposes-is fair and respectf

14、ul?Zoo officials say they are concerned about animals.However,most zoos remain“collections”of interesting “things”rather than protective habitats.Zoos teach people that it is acceptable to keep animals bored,lonely,and far from their natural homes.Read for Topic Sentences and Key Words?Para.1&2 作者观点

15、作者观点 Keeping animals.is unfair because Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species,but visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals natural behavior,intelligence,or beauty.Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages,and most signs only mention the spec

16、ies name,diet,and natural range.The animals normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos dont usually take care of the animals natural needs.Read for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.3 Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species,but visitors leave zoos without having learned anything

17、 meaningful about the animals natural behavior,intelligence,or beauty.Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages,and most signs only mention the species name,diet,and natural range.The animals normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos dont usually take care of the animals natural needs.Read for

18、 Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.3?分析原因分析原因 Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species,but visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals natural behavior,intelligence,or beauty.Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages,and most signs only mention t

19、he species name,diet,and natural range.The animals normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos dont usually take care of the animals natural needs.Read for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.3 主题句主题句 The animals are kept together in small spaces,with no privacy and little opportunity for mental an

20、d physical exercise.This results in unusual and self-destructive behavior called zoochosis.A worldwide study of zoos found that zoochosis is common among animals kept in small spaces or cages.Another study showed that elephants spend 22 percent of their time making repeated head movements or biting

21、cage bars,and bears spend 30 percent of their time walking back and forth,a sign of unhappiness and pain.Read for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.4 The animals are kept together in small spaces,with no privacy and little opportunity for mental and physical exercise.This results in unusual and self

22、-destructive behavior called zoochosis.A worldwide study of zoos found that zoochosis is common among animals kept in small spaces or cages.Another study showed that elephants spend 22 percent of their time making repeated head movements or biting cage bars,and bears spend 30 percent of their time w

23、alking back and forth,a sign of unhappiness and pain.Read for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.4事实论证事实论证 The animals are kept together in small spaces,with no privacy and little opportunity for mental and physical exercise.This results in unusual and self-destructive behavior called zoochosis.A wor

24、ldwide study of zoos found that zoochosis is common among animals kept in small spaces or cages.Another study showed that elephants spend 22 percent of their time making repeated head movements or biting cage bars,and bears spend 30 percent of their time walking back and forth,a sign of unhappiness

25、and pain.Read for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.4事实论证事实论证 主题句主题句主题句的标志主题句的标志:however,but,yet,anyhow,therefore,so,thus,all in all,whats more,furthermore,actually,instead of.for example,first,second.Furthermore,most animals in zoos are not endangered.Captive breeding of endangered big cats,Asian e

26、lephants,and other species has not resulted in their being sent back to the wild.Zoos talk a lot about their captive breeding programs because they do not want people to worry about a species dying out.In fact,baby animals also attract a lot of paying customers.Havent we seen enough competitions to

27、name baby animals?Read for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.5 主题句主题句补充解释补充解释 Actually,we will save endangered species only if we save their habitats and put an end to the reasons people kill them.Instead of supporting zoos,we should support groups that work to protect animals natural habitats.Read

28、for Topic Sentences and Key WordsPara.6 主题句主题句 How could we possibly think that keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments-mostly for entertainment purposes-is fair and respectful?Zoo officials say they are concerned about animals.However,most zoos remain“collections”of interesting“things”ra

29、ther than protective habitats.Zoos teach people that it is acceptable to keep animals bored,lonely,and far from their natural bones.Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species,but visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals natural behavior,intellige

30、nce,or beauty.Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages,and most signs only mention the species name,diet,and natural range.The animals normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos dont usually take care of the animals natural needs.The animals are kept together in small spaces,with no privacy an

31、d little opportunity for mental and physical exercise.This results in unusual and self-destructive behavior called zoochosis.A worldwide study of zoos found that zoochosis is common among animals kept in small spaces or cages.Another study showed that elephants spend 22 percent of their time making

32、repeated head movements or biting cage bars,and bears spend 30 percent of their time walking back and forth,a sign of unhappiness and pain.Furthermore,most animals in zoos are not endangered.Captive breeding of endangered big cats,Asian elephants,and other species has not resulted n their being sent

33、 back to the wild.Zoos talk a lot about their captive breeding programs because they do not want people to worry about a species dying out.In fact,baby animals also attract a lot of paying customers.Havent we seen enough competitions to name baby animals?Actually,we will save endangered species only

34、 if we save their habitats and put an end to the reasons people kill them.Instead of supporting zoos,we should support groups that work to protect animals natural habitats.Read for Topic Sentences and Key Words?however.but.,Furthermore.Instead of.How could we possibly think that keeping animals in c

35、ages in unnatural environments-mostly for entertainment purposes-is fair and respectful?Zoo officials say they are concerned about animals.However,most zoos remain“collections”of interesting“things”rather than protective habitats.Zoos teach people that it is acceptable to keep animals bored,lonely,a

36、nd far from their natural bones.Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species,but visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals natural behavior,intelligence,or beauty.Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages,and most signs only mention the species nam

37、e,diet,and natural range.The animals normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos dont usually take care of the animals natural needs.The animals are kept together in small spaces,with no privacy and little opportunity for mental and physical exercise.This results in unusual and self-destructive b

38、ehavior called zoochosis.A worldwide study of zoos found that zoochosis is common among animals kept in small spaces or cages.Another study showed that elephants spend 22 percent of their time making repeated head movements or biting cage bars,and bears spend 30 percent of their time walking back an

39、d forth,a sign of unhappiness and pain.Furthermore,most animals in zoos are not endangered.Captive breeding of endangered big cats,Asian elephants,and other species has not resulted n their being sent back to the wild.Zoos talk a lot about their captive breeding programs because they do not want peo

40、ple to worry about a species dying out.In fact,baby animals also attract a lot of paying customers.Havent we seen enough competitions to name baby animals?Actually,we will save endangered species only if we save their habitats and put an end to the reasons people kill them.Instead of supporting zoos

41、,we should support groups that work to protect animals natural habitats.Read for Topic and Structure P 1P 2P 3P 4P 6P 5议论文写作模板议论文写作模板论论点点论论据据结结论论3Rewrite/ParaphrasePara 1&2.Keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments.is fair and respectful?.most zoos remain“collections”of interesting “things”

42、rather than protective habitats.Para 3.Visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals natural behavior,intelligence,or beauty.Para 4.The animals are kept together in small spaces,.This results in unusual and self-destructive behavior called zoochosis.Para 5.Most ani

43、mals in zoos are not endangered.Para 6.Instead of supporting zoos,we should support groups that work to protect animals natural habitats.unfairsignificantabnormaldying outorganizations that animalsdisrespectfulPara 1&2.Keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments.is fair and respectful?.most z

44、oos remain“collections”of interesting “things”rather than protective habitats.Para 3.Visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals natural behavior,intelligence,or beauty.Para 4.The animals are kept together in small spaces,.This results in unusual and self-destruc

45、tive behavior called zoochosis.Para 5.Most animals in zoos are not endangered.Para 6.Instead of supporting zoos,we should support groups that work to protect animals natural habitats.unfairsignificantabnormaldying outorganizations that collect destroy destruction disrespectful animals do harm to cau

46、se destruction/damage to damage/harm/hurt (vt.)Para 1&2.Keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments.is fair and respectful?.most zoos remain“collections”of interesting “things”rather than protective habitats.Para 3.Visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the anima

47、ls natural behavior,intelligence,or beauty.Para 4.The animals are kept together in small spaces,.This results in unusual and self-destructive behavior called zoochosis.Para 5.Most animals in zoos are not endangered.Para 6.Instead of supporting zoos,we should support groups that work to protect anima

48、ls natural habitats.unfairsignificantabnormaldying outorganizations that collect destroy destruction in zoos They failed to learn something causeThey destroy themselves.They cause destruction/damage to themselves.animalsdisrespectful lead to They do harm to themselves.They havent increased their kno

49、wledge Para 1&2.Keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments.is fair and respectful?.most zoos remain“collections”of interesting “things”rather than protective habitats.P 3.Visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals natural behavior,intelligence,or beauty.

50、P 4.The animals are kept together in small spaces,.This results in unusual and self-destructive behavior called zoochosis.P 5.Most animals in zoos are not endangered.P 6.Instead of supporting zoos,we should support groups that work to protect animals natural habitats.Paraphrase -unfairabnormaldying