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1、industrialgoods概要写作Summary五步法五步法 1.阅读并理解大意阅读并理解大意,把握文章结构把握文章结构 2.找出主题句，要点主题句，关键词。找出主题句，要点主题句，关键词。3.用自己的语言整合信息。用自己的语言整合信息。4.修饰文章使之更有连贯性。修饰文章使之更有连贯性。5.检查语言，语法，和标点。检查语言，语法，和标点。Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investme

2、nt.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars t

3、hat are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great

4、 trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?（例子例子-expensive）（例子例子-such as used cars and the expensive packaging material）.

5、（信息整合（信息整合-后果后果+措施）措施）Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.（例子例子-expensive）._,industrial goods were made _.And they were very expensive.And they cost a larg

6、e sum of money.Some time ago;In the past;to function well for a long time;Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just

7、 think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!Products nowadays cannot last long._ _,_（例子例子-such as used cars and the expensive

8、packaging material）People perferto throw them away rather than repair themwhich is a waste of earths resourcesWhich has led to a great waste of earths resourceshas caused/has resulted in Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we

9、 are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?1.后果后果+2.措施措施 1.This wastefulness _now because we have no resources left.has brought us g

10、reat trouble 2.We should take immediate action to stop wasting resources.（信息整合）（信息整合）has caused great trouble for us step 4.连贯性连贯性 In the past,industrial goods were In the past,industrial goods were made to function well for a long time and they were made to function well for a long time and they we

11、re very expensive.Nowadays,products cannot last very expensive.Nowadays,products cannot last long.People prefer to throw it away rather than long.People prefer to throw it away rather than repair it,which has led to a great waste of earths repair it,which has led to a great waste of earths resources

12、.This Wastefulness has caused great resources.This Wastefulness has caused great trouble for us now because we have no resources trouble for us now because we have no resources left.We should take immediate actions to stop left.We should take immediate actions to stop wasting resources.wasting resou

13、rces.However,Therefore,Step5.Step5.检查检查 In the past,industrial goods were made to function In the past,industrial goods were made to function well for a long time and they were very expensive.well for a long time and they were very expensive.However,products Nowadays cannot last long.However,product

14、s Nowadays cannot last long.People prefer to throw it away rather than repair it,People prefer to throw it away rather than repair it,which has led to a great waste of earths resources which has led to a great waste of earths resources.This Wastefulness has caused great trouble for us.This Wastefuln

15、ess has caused great trouble for us now because we have no resources left.Therefore,now because we have no resources left.Therefore,we should take immediate action to stop wasting we should take immediate action to stop wasting resources.resources.Decades ago,industrial goods were of high quality an

16、d cost a lot.(要点要点1)But this is not a good idea to manufacturers.过渡句过渡句 They advised us to throw them away rather than repair them,which has caused a great waste of the worlds resources.(要点要点2)This wastefulness has brought us great trouble.Now we are running out of resources.Therefore,we should act

17、immediately to save what we have before its too late.(要点要点3)69WModel essayWriting skillsSkill 2:Rewrite sentences.Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.Some time ago,manufacturers made industrial goods last forever.改变语态（主动改变语态（主动被动）被动）2.This wastefulness has got us into great t

18、rouble.We have got into great trouble due to this wastefulness.改变主语（人改变主语（人物）物）3.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them.It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.People would rather throw them away than repair them as

19、it is cheaper to do so.改变主语（形式主语）改变主语（形式主语）正话反说、反话正说正话反说、反话正说Step 1：Step 2:Step 3:Step 4:Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.(Reorganize information.)Organize the key points logically.How to write a good summary?ConclusionBegin to write.Paraphrase some words or phrases.Rewrite sent

20、ences.Use the minimum of words.Read and check.Polish your writingOnce upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever and they were very expensive.Nowadays,however,industrial products cant last long and it is cheaper to throw them away than to repair it.This has led to a great waste of the ea

21、rths resources.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in,so we should try to act immediately and build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue.(78W)Decades ago,industrial goods were made durablepeople would rather throw them awaythan repair it,which has resulted in

22、 brought us great troubleeveryone stops wasting resources(64W)1.wandering 2.account 3.seek 4.scene 5.adventure 6.permits 7.appearance 8.stared 9.spotted 10.contrary 1.seek out 2.account for 3.was brought up 4.stare at 5.earned my passage 6.on the contrary 7.cares about 8.go ahead 9.by accident 10.as

23、 a matter of fact 1.scream 2.envelopes 3.manners 4.unbelievable 5.seeking 5.indeed 7.bowed 8.rude 9.amount 10.genuine 1.account for 2.in rags 3.by accident 4.As for 5.stare at 6.On the contrary 7.go ahead 8.taking a chance 9.brought up 10.a large amount of 此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢