人教版九年级全册《英语》写作—文明中学生ppt课件.pptx

1、2022年人教版英语年人教版英语九年级下册九年级下册写作写作文明中学生文明中学生能省则省，我不说，你懂的。感悟写作那些事2.我很开心收到你的来信。I am so happy/glad to receive your letter.英文讲究rules，主、谓、连不能省哦。1.北京下星期天气炎热。It is going to be very hot in Beijing next week.3.保护环境，不要乱丢垃圾。Protect the environment and dont throw litter here and there.翻译题目假如你是北京的李丽，下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹李兰要

2、来北京旅游。请根据以下提示，给她写一封信，并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的（well-mannered）中学生。写作要点：1.欢迎她来北京。2.介绍北京的情况。(1)下周天气：白天最高温度超过 33;(2)交通方式：最好乘坐地铁;(3)必去的名胜：长城。3.对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议。写作要求:1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；2.可适当加入细节使内容充实，行文连贯；3.字迹工整语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰；4.至少 80 词。Step 1 审题找关键信息 Step 2 列提纲确定结构 Step 3 遣词造句写作文基本步骤假如你是北京的李丽，下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹

3、李兰要来北京旅游。请根据以下提示，给她写一封信，并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的（well-mannered）中学生。写作要点：欢迎她来北京。介绍北京的情况。下周天气：白天最高温度超过33;交通方式：最好乘坐地铁;必去的名胜：长城。对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议。审什么？1.审人称2.审时态3.审体裁4.审话题囗第一人称 囗第二人称 囗第三人称 囗过去时 囗现在时 囗将来时 囗现在完成时囗记叙文 囗议论文 囗说明文 囗应用文 文章属于哪类常考话题？_旅游与交通Step 1 审题假如你是北京的李丽，下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹李兰要来北京旅游。请根据以下提示，给她写一封信，

4、并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的（well-mannered）中学生。写作要点：欢迎她来北京。介绍北京的情况。下周天气：白天最高温度超过33;交通方式：最好乘坐地铁;必去的名胜：长城。对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议。Part 3.建议做文明中学生建议Part 1.引入Part 2.介绍寒暄问好及引出下文介绍北京：天气；交通；景点。Step 2 列提纲收到来信很开心Part 1.引入收到来信表达开心，并欢迎她来北京。表示开心：除了happy还有哪些表达?收到某人的来信：receive ones letter还有什么更地道的表达？I am so happy/glad to

5、receive your letter.Welcome to Beijing.Its a great pleasure to hear from you and I am glad to know that youre going on a trip to Beijing.I give you my warmest welcome!优化 升 级 Step 3 遣词造句 Step 3 遣词造句Part 1.引入从欢迎过渡到介绍北京的情况。优化升级北京多次出现，考虑替换成别的词。To help you get ready for the trip,let me tell you something

6、 about this city.为了帮助你为旅行做好准备，请让我告诉你一些关于北京的事情。to help you get readylet me tell youabout Beijingfor the tripsomethingTo help you get ready for the trip,let me tell you something about Beijing.Dear Li Lan,How are you doing?Its a great pleasure to hear from you and I am glad to know that youre going on

7、 a trip to Beijing.I give you my warmest welcome!To help you get ready for the trip,let me tell you something about this city.Part 2.介绍介绍北京的情况。下周天气：白天最高温度超过33;交通方式：最好乘坐地铁;必去的名胜：长城。下周天气炎热：It is going to be very hot in Beijing next week.在白天：in the daytime 最高气温：the highest temperature 结果：建议带太阳镜It is go

8、ing to be very hot in Beijing next week,with the highest temperature over 33 in the daytime.So youd better wear sunglasses.Step 3 遣词造句Part 2.介绍介绍北京的情况。下周天气：白天最高温度超过33;交通方式：最好乘坐地铁;必去的名胜：长城。最好乘坐地铁出游As we all know,Beijing is a crowded city.So I advise you to take a travel by it.原因：大城市拥堵I advise you to

9、take a travel by subway.Beijing is a crowded city.Step 3 遣词造句Part 2.介绍介绍北京的情况。下周天气：白天最高温度超过33;交通方式：最好乘坐地铁;必去的名胜：长城。好句积累1：.is a lively city with a long history,where you can enjoy ancient and modern cultures.Beijing is a lively city with a long history,where you can enjoy ancient and modern cultures.

10、Step 3 遣词造句Part 2.介绍介绍北京的情况。下周天气：白天最高温度超过33;交通方式：最好乘坐地铁;必去的名胜：长城。好句积累2：There are so many places of interest in.,but the one you cant miss is.There are so many places of interest in Beijing,but the one you cant miss is the Great Wall.Step 3 遣词造句Dear Li Lan,How are you doing?Its a great pleasure to he

11、ar from you and I am glad to know that youre going on a trip to Beijing.I give you my warmest welcome!To help you get ready for the trip,let me tell you something about this city.It is going to be very hot in Beijing next week,with the highest temperature over 33 in the daytime.So youd better take s

12、unglasses.As we all know,Beijing is a crowded city.So I advise you to take a travel by subway.Beijing is a lively city with a long history,where you can enjoy ancient and modern cultures.There are so many places of interest in Beijing,but the one you cant miss is the Great Wall.Part 3.建议3.对她在北京旅游期间如

13、何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议。1.不要乱丢垃圾。2.公共场合保持安静。3.有序排队。逻辑词首先at first;first of all;in the beginning其次besides;whats more;in addition最后finally;in the end;last but not least总之in a word;all in all Step 3 遣词造句首先at first;first of all;in the beginning其次besides;whats more;in addition最后finally;in the end;last but not le

14、ast总之in a word;all in all题目来源题目展示2020年吉林省中考试卷假如你是李华，你所在的学校即将开展以“文明礼貌伴我行争做文明中学生”为主题的英语演讲比赛。2020年湖南省怀化市中考试卷文明礼貌表现的不仅是个人形象、城市形象、市民素质，也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。为配合我市开展“创建文明城市”（build a civilized city）活动，学校号召学生在校内校外做一个文明的中学生，特举办“How to behave well”为主题的英文征文比赛。2020年山西省太原市小店区中考模拟试卷“喜迎二青会，共建文明城”的标语随处可见，作为一名即将毕业的中学生，你

15、会去做一名志愿者吗？你将为此次盛会的顺利召开做些什么呢？相信这个暑假，你一定会有别样的收获。2019年江苏省扬州市期末考试社会不断在发展进步，成绩好已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校英文校刊正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生”的大讨论，请写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你觉得除了学习课本知识之外，我们还应该做些什么？2019年江苏江苏省江阴市联考试卷江阴市最近发布了好学生指南，其分为个人生活篇、学校生活篇、家庭生活篇、社会生活篇四部分。该指南说明成绩优秀已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校正围绕好学生指南，开展“走进新时代，争当好学生”的大讨论，请根据以下要点，以“We act,we impro

16、ve”写一篇英语文章，文明中学生考情文明中学生话题文明中学生话题文明中学生话题Part 3.建议在你旅游期间，我有几点建议。过渡I have some suggestions for you during your trip.具体建议：First of all;Whats moreLast but not least Step 3 遣词造句Part 3.建议 Step 3 遣词造句Part 3.建议1.保护环境，不要乱丢垃圾。Protect the environment and dont throw litter here and there.First of all,its importa

17、nt for us to protect the environment so please dont throw litter here and there.加逻辑词和句型 Step 3 遣词造句Part 3.建议2.公共场合保持安静。You should keep quiet in public.Whats more,if I were you,I would keep quiet in public.加逻辑词和句型 Step 3 遣词造句Part 3.建议好句积累3：You must be patient when waiting in line because.is home to m

18、illions of people who come from different cities and countries.Last but not least,you must be patient when waiting in line because Beijing is home to millions of people who come from different cities and countries.3.耐心排队。Step 3 遣词造句Dear Li Lan,How are you doing?Its a great pleasure to hear from you

19、and I am glad to know that youre going on a trip to Beijing.I give you my warmest welcome!To help you get ready for the trip,let me tell you something about this city.It is going to be very hot in Beijing next week,with the highest temperature over 33 in the daytime.So youd better take sunglasses.As

20、 we all know,Beijing is a crowded city.So I advise you to take a travel by subway.Beijing is a lively city with a long history,where you can enjoy ancient and modern cultures.There are so many places of interest in Beijing,but the one you cant miss is the Great Wall.I have some suggestions for you d

21、uring your trip.First of all,its important for us to protect the environment so please dont throw litter here and there.Whats more,if I were you,I would keep quiet in public.Last but not least,you must be patient when waiting in line because Beijing is home to millions of people who come from differ

22、ent cities and countries.Best wishes!Yours,Li Li成文 开头 正文.is a lively city with a long history,where you can enjoy ancient and modern cultures.There are so many places of interest in.,but the one you cant miss is.结尾Sentence Structures Its a great pleasure to hear from you and I am glad to know that.Y

23、ou must be patient when waiting in line because.is home to millions of people who come from different cities and countries.万能句型 天津是一座历史悠久、生机勃勃的城市，在这里你可以欣赏古代和现代的文化。Tianjin is a lively city with a long history,where you can see ancient and modern cultures.好句积累.is a lively city with a long history,wher

24、e you can enjoy ancient and modern cultures.万能句型 在西安有很多名胜古迹，但你不能错过的是兵马俑。(TerraCotta Warriors)There are so many places of interest in Xian,but the one you cant miss is the Terra Cotta Warriors.好句积累There are so many places of interest in.,but the one you cant miss is.万能句型 你必须耐心等待排队，因为上海是来自不同城市和国家的数百万人的家。You must be patient about waiting in line or large crowds because Shanghai is home to millions of people who come from different cities and countries.好句积累You must be patient when waiting in line because.is home to millions of people who come from different cities and countries.万能句型