1、a Meaningful Thing 主要特点记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明能力要求主要问题要点不全线索不清原因：步骤不对书面表达书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣1-2分课堂练习请用六步法写一篇短文五个五个 “WW”一个一个 “H H”第一步 审题认真读题然后找出把答案
2、写在题中相应的位置第二步 抓要点时态直达 语态到位介/副词紧随第三步 扩展成句把要点变成完整的句子。注意使用介/副词第四步 连句成文增加细节 呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第五步 查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？第六步 誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！小试牛刀在生活中我们会经历许多的事，请以a meaningful thing 为题写一篇作文。要求：1.词数不少于60词。2.文中不得出现真实校名、地名。提示：可以参考第二、三单元相关内容A Meaningful Thing Ill say bye to my junior school life.Durin
3、g the four years many things happened to me.But there is one thing that Ill never forget.nOne afternoon,I was leaving school when it began to rain.I saw my new classmate walking slowly in front of me.He didnt have an umbrella with him,and he was wet all over.I went up to him and held the umbrella fo
4、r him.Soon we get to his house.He was very thankful and said,“Its very kind of you.”With a smile,I said bye to him and went away happily.From then on we became good friends and I got a lot from him.nFrom the experience I learn that helping others is helping ourselves.Everyone in the world needs help and everyone can offer help to others who are in trouble.小结n审题，抓点n造句，成文n改错，誉写作业n复习本课要点n背诵精彩范文
