概写公开课 （ppt课件）-2022新人教版（2019）《高中英语》选择性必修第一册.pptx

1、Hey，bro!How beautiful your yard is!I wish a yard like yours!No!Look at your yard.There is a swimming pool!How great it is!I hope to live in such a house!普通高等学招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要.What is a summary?Steps for summary writing1)Read the passage for the style,structur

2、e and main ideas.2)Rewrite the main ideas in our own words.3)connect(连接连接)the main ideas with proper（恰当的）（恰当的）words.4)write a draft(草稿草稿)and polish(润色润色)it.What makes you confused most in this title?Pre-reading:If you have cold,you may _,have a _ and have a _.coughfeverrunny nose the syndrome of a b

3、ad coldStep 1:Read for the style:Whats the style of the passage?A.Narration(记叙文记叙文)B.Argumentation（议论文）（议论文）C.Exposition(说明文说明文)The structure of an exposition The topic-what The reason-why The effects-how The solution/conclusion Read for the structure:Para.1 Para.2&3 Para.4 Para.5 How to Get Key Poi

4、nts?1.段落大意经常会出现在段落大意经常会出现在首句或尾句首句或尾句；2.段落中的转折段落中的转折but,yet,however,让步让步though,as,although，结果，结果as a result,so,therefore等要等要点提点提示词；示词；3.如有设问，与答案合并成为要点；如有设问，与答案合并成为要点；4.如有例证，简要归类概括成为要点；如有例证，简要归类概括成为要点；Read for main idea：why do people have such syndrome?Read for main idea：para 1:para 2&3:para 4:para 5:

5、what is Greener Grass Syndrome?1.uncertainty and curiosity play a big part in creating the greener grass syndrome.2.Humans are also curious by nature and we love new things.What is the effect of the syndrome?If you have this syndrome,chances are you are missing out lots of things you currently have

6、now.solution?1.recognize you current job is your best choices right now.2.always apply your best efforts in your current job.3.choose a side,stick to it and make the best out of it.It means the situation where you kept thinking that there are better opportunities out there compared to your current o

7、ne you are having.What is the topic of the passage?Read for main idea para 1:What is it?the“greener grass”syndromeThe situation where you kept thinking that there are better opportunities out there compared to your current one you are having.para 2-3:Why do people have greener grass syndrome?uncerta

8、inty and curiosity play a big part in creating the greener grass syndrome.Humans are also curious by nature and we love new things.supporting ideasmain ideapara 4:Whats the effect of this syndrome?If you have this syndrome,chances are you are missing out lots of things you currently have now.para 5:

9、topic sentence:1.recognize you current job is your best choices right now.2.always apply your best efforts in your current job.supporting ideasSo what can you do to cure the“greener grass”syndrome?3.keep this truth in mind.3.choose a side,stick to it and make the best out of it.cureRewrite the key p

10、oints in our own words:Para 1:What is greener grass syndrome?This is the situation where you kept thinking that there are better opportunities out there compared to your current one you are having.Para 2-3:Why do people have greener grass syndrome?uncertainty and curiosity play a big part in creatin

11、g the greener grass syndrome.Humans are also curious by nature and we love new things.Para 4:Whats the effect of this syndrome?If you have this syndrome,chances are you are missing out lots of things you currently have now.Para 5:what can you do to cure the“greener grass”syndrome?1.recognize you cur

12、rent job is your best choices right now.2.always apply your best effoets in your current job.3.choose a side,stick to it and make the best out of it.How can we rewrite the key points in our own words?1.Use similar words or phrases(同义词或短语同义词或短语).2.Change the part of speech 改变词性改变词性3.Combine two or mo

13、re sentences by using clause(从从句句),with-structure,non-predicate verbs(非谓语动词非谓语动词)and so on.4.Turn long sentences into simple ones by cutting out unnecessary parts.Tips for rewriting:practice for rewriting:Para 1:What is the Greener Grass Syndrome?It is the situation where you kept thinking that ther

14、e are better opportunities out there compared to your current one you are having.Tip 1:connect question&answer:The greener grass syndrome refers to/means.Tip 2:Use similar words or phrases(同义词或短语).prefer unknown chances to present ones.think highly of.The greener grass syndrome _ someone _ unknown c

15、hances _ present ones.meanspreferringtoGroup Work-Have a try!Para 1:What is greener grass syndrome?This is the situation where you kept thinking that there are better opportunities out there compared to your current one you are having.Para 2-3:Why do people have greener grass syndrome?uncertainty an

16、d curiosity play a big part in creating the greener grass syndrome.Humans are also curious by nature and we love new things.Para 4:Whats the effect of this syndrome?If you have this syndrome,chances are you are missing out lots of things you currently have now.Para 5:what can you do to cure the“gree

17、ner grass”syndrome?1.recognize you current job is your best choices right now.2.always apply your best effoets in your current job.3.choose a side,stick to it and make the best out of it.Step 3:connect1.原因:as,because of,the problems are caused by,the reason behind it is that,account for,result from,

18、be connected with2.结果:as a result,lead to(result in,contribute to),is likely to cause,therefore3.承接:In addition(to),besides,apart from,moreover,whats more.4.转折:Although/though,however,but,in spite of,despite(尽管).The greener grass syndrome refers to someones tendency to prefer unknown chances to pres

19、ent ones.(point 1)The reason behind it is that people are unsure of whether therere better alternatives and curious about new things.(point 2)If affected by it,people are likely to lose what they have now.(point 3)Therefore,to overcome it,people should pay attention to current choice,stick to it and

20、 make full use of it.(point 4)Step 3:connect The greener grass syndrome means someone thinking highly of unknown chances instead of present ones.people are unsure of whether therere better choices and curious about new things.people are likely to lose what they have now.to deal with it,people should

21、 pay attention to current choice,stick to it and make full use of it.assessment of writing:completeinclude main points&supporting ideas by using your own wordsconcise(简洁简洁)delete unimportant details like examples and explanationscoherent(连贯连贯)make the summary flow by using linking wordscorrectbe wri

22、tten without grammatical mistakesobjective(客观的客观的)do not put your own ideas into the summaryThe greener grass syndrome refers to someone preferring unknown chances to present ones.(point 1)The reason behind it is that people are unsure of whether therere better alternatives and curious about new things.(point 2)If affected by it,however,people are likely to lose what they have now.(point 3)Therefore,to overcome it,people should pay attention to current choice,stick to it and make full use of it.(point 4)The possible version:Homework:Polish your own writing according to your partners comment.