人教版八年级上册英语unitSectionBa作文优质公开课课件.pptx（纯ppt,可能不含音视频素材）

1、 Unit 6Im going to study computer science.Section B 3A1.一种一种2.收拾我的房间收拾我的房间3.在新年伊始在新年伊始4.改善我们的生活改善我们的生活5.写下写下6.一些一些.其他的其他的7.告诉某人关于告诉某人关于a kind oftidy my room at the beginning of the yearimprove our liveswtite downsome.otherstell sb aboutReview:important phrases1.不同种类的不同种类的2.吃更少的吃更少的快餐快餐3.和和有关系有关系4.开始

2、从事开始从事 5.为为制定计划制定计划different kinds of eat less fast food have to do with+n/v-ing take up+n/v-ing make a plan for sth/v-ingimportant phrases1.有共同点有共同点2.几乎不几乎不3.关于这个有一些好关于这个有一些好的原因的原因4.太太难了而不能保持难了而不能保持have one thing in commonhardly everThere are some good reasons for it.too difficult to keepimportant

3、phrases3atake,listen,make,is,help,learn,are Resolutions _ promises to yourself.They may _ to make you a better person and to make your life easier.I am going to _ four resolutions.arehelpmakeThe first resolution is about my own personal improvement.Next year,or maybe sooner,I am going to _up a new h

4、obby.I think singing _a great activity so I am going to _ to sing.I think this will also make my family happy because they love to _ to music and sing together.takeislearnlistenown adj.“自己的；本人的自己的；本人的”own还可以做代词，用在所有格之后，强还可以做代词，用在所有格之后，强调某事物为个人所有调某事物为个人所有,搭配搭配sbs own sthsbs own sth常常见短语：见短语：sth of sb

5、s own “自己的自己的”=sbown sth=sbown sthon ones own “独自地独自地”=by oneself=by oneself【例例】This is my own bagThis is my own bag =This is the bag of my own =This is the bag of my own 这是我自己的书包。这是我自己的书包。You should finish the work on your own/by yourself.你必须独自完成工作你必须独自完成工作。own v.“占有；拥有占有；拥有”owner n.“所有人；物主所有人；物主”【

6、例例】He is the owner of the house.他是这房子的主人。他是这房子的主人。Who owns the race car?这辆跑车归谁所有？这辆跑车归谁所有？决定是对你自己的承诺。它可以帮助你成为一个决定是对你自己的承诺。它可以帮助你成为一个更好的人。请写一篇短文，描述你的一些决定并更好的人。请写一篇短文，描述你的一些决定并且做这些决定的原因。且做这些决定的原因。内容要点如下：内容要点如下：1.明年你的三个决心明年你的三个决心 2.对某些决心说出理由对某些决心说出理由 2.表达你会坚持下去，保持决心表达你会坚持下去，保持决心。文章文章中不得出现真实的个人信息，中不得出现真

7、实的个人信息，字数字数0字。字。写作在线写作在线写作流写作流程程审审关于这个有一些好的原因请写一篇短文，描述你的一些决定并且做这些决定的原因。at the beginning of the year【例】This is my own bagTip:适当运用谚语，可以对作文进行美化。have one thing in commonThe first resolution is about my own personal improvement.（but 但是 however 然而 后有逗号 转折关系）important phrasesI will try my best to keep my o

8、wn resolutions.They may help to make me a better person and to make my life eaiser.I think this will also make my family happy because they love to _ to music and sing together.Success depends on detailsimportant phrasesimportant phrasesI will try my best to keep my own resolutions.I will try my bes

9、t to keep my own resolutions.Ideas for improving my physical health（besides除此之外 also 也 两者后有逗号 顺承关系）审题审题体裁：体裁：人称：人称：时态：时态：短文短文Ibe going to/decide to do/plan to do/make a plan to do sth表表计划计划表原因用一般现在时表原因用一般现在时连接词是作文逻辑通顺的关键，连接词是作文逻辑通顺的关键，也是得高分的关键！也是得高分的关键！（first/second/besides/finally)1.Ideas for impro

10、ving my physical health get more exerciseeat more vagetables and fruit;because they are goood for my health列列2.Ideas for improving my relationships with my family and friends help mom cook meals;spend more time sharing my lives with family and friends help my friends with their English listen to the

11、m carefully3.Ideas for doing better at schoolmake a weekly plan for schoolwork;work harder at math and Englishask teachers for help Resolutions are promises to myself.They may help to make me a better person and to make my life eaiser.I am going to make three resolutions.(摘摘自自3a)第一个决心是关于改善我的个人健康。第一个

12、决心是关于改善我的个人健康。我将要去得到更多的锻炼，以及吃更多的水果和我将要去得到更多的锻炼，以及吃更多的水果和蔬菜。蔬菜。The first resolution is about improving my physical healthI am going to get more exercise and eat more vagetables and fruit.因为它们对我的健康有益因为它们对我的健康有益。because they are good for my health第二个建议是关于改善我和我朋友家人的关系第二个建议是关于改善我和我朋友家人的关系。我认为和他人沟通很重要。我认为

13、和他人沟通很重要。所以我打算去花费时间和我家人和朋友分享我的生活。所以我打算去花费时间和我家人和朋友分享我的生活。除此之外，我会认真倾听他们的话。除此之外，我会认真倾听他们的话。The second resolution is about improving the relationship with my parents and family.I think it is important to talk with othersso I am going to spend time sharing lives with parents and friends.Besides,I am goi

14、ng to listen to them carefully.为了在学校学的更好，我做了第三个决心为了在学校学的更好，我做了第三个决心。我决定更加努力学习以及寻求老师帮助。我决定更加努力学习以及寻求老师帮助。To do better in school,I make the third resolution.I decide/plan to study harder and ask the teachers for help.俗话说的好，行动大于语言。俗话说的好，行动大于语言。我会尽我最大努力去保持我自己的决心。我会尽我最大努力去保持我自己的决心。As the old saying goes,

15、“actions speak louder than words.”I will try my best to keep my own resolutions.Tip:适当运用谚语，可以对作文进行美化。适当运用谚语，可以对作文进行美化。Success depends on details1.写作前可列写作前可列简单的简单的提纲（提纲（key points),防止写作防止写作错误太多，涂改严重错误太多，涂改严重；2.写作时注意写作时注意连接词连接词的使用。好处：老师能快速理清要的使用。好处：老师能快速理清要点；文章富有逻辑性。点；文章富有逻辑性。（because;so;first;second;

16、third;finally;）（besides除此之外除此之外 also 也也 两者后有逗号两者后有逗号 顺承关系顺承关系）（but 但是但是 however 然而然而 后有逗号后有逗号 转折关系转折关系）3.写作中有错误，划一行。写作中有错误，划一行。stric strict衡水字体衡水字体衡水字体衡水字体Success depends on details1.书写喜欢上串下跳的人学会书写喜欢上串下跳的人学会顶格顶格写。写。2.写完检查写完检查 a.是否离题，要点是否全部提到是否离题，要点是否全部提到 b.单词拼写单词拼写 c.名词单复数名词单复数 d.动词人称，时态，形式动词人称，时态，形

17、式(ing)Writing time决定是对你自己的承诺。它可以帮助你成为一个决定是对你自己的承诺。它可以帮助你成为一个更好的人。请写一篇短文，描述你的一些决定并更好的人。请写一篇短文，描述你的一些决定并且做这些决定的原因。且做这些决定的原因。内容要点如下：内容要点如下：1.明年你的三个决心明年你的三个决心 2.对某些决心说出理由对某些决心说出理由 2.表达你会坚持下去，保持表达你会坚持下去，保持决心决心参考词汇：参考词汇：be about improving.关于改善关于改善 it is important for sb to do sth spend time doing sth share lives with sb 和某热吧分享生活 improve the relationship with sb