高考英语看图作文写作技巧2课件.ppt

1、标题：有无标题：有无体裁体裁时态时态 审题审题夹叙夹叙夹议类夹议类 present tense present tense narrative narrative+comment+comment要点：要点：the picture the picturethe theme the theme the comment the comment第二节：书面表达（满分第二节：书面表达（满分30分）分）请你以请你以“Son,Back to School!”为题，用英语写一篇为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词个词的短文，描述的短文，描述漫画内漫画内 容容，并结合生，并结合生活实际，就漫画的活实际，就漫画的

2、主题主题发表发表感想感想。Tips1 人称人称:（第三第三）时态：时态：一组图画一组图画_一一 幅图画幅图画_ Son,Back to SchoolSon,Back to School要点提示要点提示1：看：看图说话类图说话类作文作文-The picture过去式过去式现在时现在时Tips2 夹叙夹叙 :(when where(when where who what why who what why howhow)描述力求全面，简描述力求全面，简洁洁As is shown in the picture above,the new school term approaching,the fath

3、er tries hard to pull the son out of the TV and the mother is anxiously helping her husband with a bag in her hand.第二节：书面表达（满分第二节：书面表达（满分30分）分）2012 高考样卷高考样卷请根据下图写一篇请根据下图写一篇100120个词的短文。你的短文应包括下列要点：个词的短文。你的短文应包括下列要点：1.简要描写图画内容简要描写图画内容；2.说明图画含义；说明图画含义；3.表达你的观点。表达你的观点。Too Much Care Spoils a ChildAs is s

4、hown in the picture above,_ Tips1 人称人称:（第三第三）时态：一般现在时时态：一般现在时Tips2 夹叙夹叙 :(when where (when where who who what howwhat how why)why)描述全面，简洁描述全面，简洁 the plant is being ruined by too much watering.Tips1 人称人称:（第三第三）时态：一般现在时时态：一般现在时Tips2 夹叙夹叙 :(when where(when where who what howwho what how why)why)描述全面，简洁

5、描述全面，简洁2002年上海高考作文年上海高考作文简要简要描述图片内容描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。谈自己的感想。In the picture,we can see that the girls parents and her grand-mother are helping the girl,which makes it impossible for the girl to ride a bicycle on her own.What is more,it is ridiculous that her mother even takes

6、 some medicine with her.根据图画内容，以根据图画内容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题，题，用英语写一篇用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条翻译。词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条翻译。1.简单描述漫画的内容；简单描述漫画的内容；2.作业负担过重；作业负担过重；3.精讲精练；精讲精练；4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。参加体育锻炼和社会活动。We Want Our Schoolbags LighterThe picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glas

7、ses and carrying a big heavy schoolbag,and a woman is doing some exercise.The girl says to the woman,“If you carry the schoolbag for me,Im sure you will lose some weight.”Tips 3 画面描述开头句子：画面描述开头句子：This is a picture about In the picture，we can see From the picture it can be seen that Lets look at the

8、picture.As is vividly described in the picture above,Son,Back to SchoolSon,Back to School要点提示要点提示2：看：看图说话类图说话类作文作文-The theme The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that nowadays a large number of students are seriously addicted to watching TV As is shown in the picture above,_._，ignoring the

9、ir study and responsibility.Tips 1：揭示实质，揭示实质，得出结论得出结论(可用上可用上which 和和doing 结构结构)。eg.1.This picture conveys the message that if team members are self-centered,the team may break up.(Dont be self-centered in a class)eg.2 The message conveyed in the picture is instructive.Everything has its positive and

10、 negative sides.(Inside or outside)3.The drawing does reflect a common social phenomenon that4.The implied meaning/theme of the drawing should be 5.The picture is trying to convince us of a fact thatleaving the shared goal unfinished.which needs further understanding.Tips 2 揭示主题开头句子揭示主题开头句子leaving t

11、he shared goal unfinished.which needs further understanding.eg.1.This picture conveys the message that eg.2 The message conveyed in the picture is instructive.3.The drawing does reflect a common social phenomenon that4.The implied meaning/theme of the drawing should be 5.The picture is trying to con

12、vince us of a fact that（顾）（顾）揭示主题开头句子揭示主题开头句子we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us,.which damages students mental and physical health Tips ：揭示实质，得出结论。揭示实质，得出结论。1.This picture conveys the message that 2.The message conveyed in the picture is i

13、nstructive.3.The drawing does reflect a common social phenomenon that4.The implied meaning/theme of the drawing should be 5.The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that（顾）顾）揭示主题开头句子揭示主题开头句子Tips ：揭示实质，得出结论。揭示实质，得出结论。Perhaps people do this out of good intentions,but good intentions may not nece

14、ssarily bring about good results.要点提示要点提示3：看：看图说话类图说话类作文作文-the commentTips 1：加以联想与引申联系现实生加以联想与引申联系现实生活，活，在画面意义的基础上联想到另，在画面意义的基础上联想到另一层新的内容，发表自己的看法一层新的内容，发表自己的看法.可以提出一些建议和办法。忌空洞说可以提出一些建议和办法。忌空洞说教教(有可操作性有可操作性)Tips 2：应有条理：应有条理(巧用连词巧用连词/关联词关联词)Perhaps people do this out of good intentions,but good inten

15、tions may not necessarily bring about good results.like the plant in the picture,children today receive too much care.Perhaps people do this out of good intentions,but good intentions may not necessarily bring about good results.like the plant in the picture,children today receive too much care.for

16、example,parents tend to do almost everything for their children,from making beds to carrying school bags.By doing this,they are trying to show their love for their children in their best possible way.They believe what they do will make their childrens life easier and better.However,what children rea

17、lly need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that they can grow up to be more independent.Too much water kills a plant,and too much care spoils a child.Tips 1：加以联想与引申联系现实生活，加以联想与引申联系现实生活，在画面意义，在画面意义的基础上联想到另一层新的内容，发表自己的看法的基础上联想到另一层新的内容，发表自己的看法.可以提出一些建议和办法。忌空洞说教可以提出一些建议和办法。忌空洞说教(有可操作性

18、有可操作性)Tips 2：应有条理：应有条理(巧用连词巧用连词/关联词关联词)要点提示要点提示3：看：看图说话类图说话类作文作文-the comment I disagree with what the mother did in the story.I think parents should set a good example to their children.They should not only care for their childrens health,but their minds.They should let their children know it is a p

19、leasure to help others who are in trouble.We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.Everyone should do something good to build up our society,right?Actually,this phenomenon is widespread in the world.I think both children and parents are to blame for it.As children,they should take

20、measures to control the time spent in watching TV,such as making a schedule for the daily activity.Meanwhile,parents also can warn the children of the disadvantages of being lost in watching TV.After all,disciplining a child is a delicate process and is one aspect of parenting.Only when children and

21、 parents work hard together can the family lead a harmonious life.要点提示要点提示3：看：看图说话类图说话类作文作文-the comment Dont be self-centered in a class .This picture conveys the message that if team members are self-centered,the team may break up.A class is actually a team.All the students in the class share the s

22、ame goal-to make the class an excellent team and to help everyone develop fully and healthily.In order to achieve this goal,students should cooperate and support each other even if sometimes someone may have to make sacrifices.Only if they work as one can they achieve success.However,if some student

23、s are self-centered and only care about themselves,the teamwork will surely be negatively affected or even destroyed.I believe,there is no“I”but“we”in a team.要点提示要点提示3：看：看图说话类图说话类作文作文-the comment The message conveyed in the picture is instructive.Everything has its positive and negative sides.For ex

24、ample,some students around us are tired of the peaceful life in school and long for the one outside.They think the life outside must be colorful and exciting enough.But have they considered the difficulties?So when a person is frustrated by his unfavorable condition,he should never lose sight of his

25、 own advantages.要点提示要点提示3：看：看图说话类图说话类作文作文-the comment As is shown in the picture,the new school term approaching,the father tries hard to pull the son out of the TV and the mother is anxiously helping her husband with a bag in her hand.The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that nowadays a l

26、arge number of students are seriously addicted to watching TV.Actually,this phenomenon is widespread in the world.I think both children and parents are to blame for it.As children,they should take measures to control the time spent in watching TV,such as making a schedule for the daily activity.Mean

27、while,parents also can warn the children of the disadvantages of being lost in watching TV.After all,disciplining a child is a delicate process and is one aspect of parenting.Only when children and parents work hard together can the family lead a harmonious life.Son,Back to SchoolSon,Back to School

28、In the picture,we can see the parents are toughly pulling their kid out of the TV,and the kid is just like a fool,without any emotion.Its just a picture,but everyday,in some families,it does happen.Its obvious that watching TV too long is harmful to us students because it really takes up much time a

29、nd disturbs our regular schedule.Secondary,the happiness is temporary but the cost is the permanent damage to out health and morality.Whats more,we will have no chance to develop our social skills and friendship with others if we seldom go out to experience the rich and lively world.In brief,we must

30、 bear in mind that we should be responsible for ourselves and never be addicted to anything that does harm to us physically and mentally.范文范文Son,Back to SchoolSon,Back to SchoolSon,Back to SchoolSon,Back to School As we can see from the picture,the parents are making their effort to pull their son o

31、ut of the TV,hoping he can go back to school while the son is struggling against his parents with the swollen eyes.The picture shows some students are addicted to TV too seriously to take any notice of their study.In my opinion,as is often the case with students,they are lost in watching TV for the

32、lack of self-control.Actually,interesting and attractive as the TV programs may appear,there are still some potential problems like wasting time and energy,which may be bound to affect their study and weaken their body.So its high time that parents and schools played the leading role in educating st

33、udents to balance interests and study.Only in this way can the students enjoy a happy and meaningful life to the fullest.140朱静静朱静静 Inside or outside The picture shows different conditions of two birds,the bird in the cage and the bird outside.Locked in a small spaces,the bird in the cage lives an un

34、happy life.Although it is fed every day,it is bored to death.It dreams of freezing itself and flying in the sky.On the other hand,the bird outside has a strong desire to get into the cage because it suffers a lot from starvation.It has completely forgotten the advantage of being able to enjoy freedo

35、m.Dont be self-centered in a class As is shown in the picture above,a helicopter is going to put the letter“I”into the word“team”.But if so,the word will no longer exist.This picture conveys the message that if team members are self-centered,the team may break up.A class is actually a team.All the s

36、tudents in the class share the same goal-to make the class an excellent team and to help everyone develop fully and healthily.In order to achieve this goal,students should cooperate and support each other even if sometimes someone may have to make sacrifices.Only if they work as one can they achieve

37、 success.However,if some students are self-centered and only care about themselves,the teamwork will surely be negatively affected or even destroyed.I believe,there is no“I”but“we”in a team.常用句型常用句型;1.开头开头：This is a picture about/In the picture we can see/From the picture it can be seen that/Lets lo

38、ok at the picture 2.结尾段结尾段：It is not right that/If they do like that/We can draw a conclusion that/The story tells us that/It teaches us a lesson 3.承接词汇及句型承接词汇及句型：in my opinion/in our daily life/nowadays/As the proverb says/Im sure/meanwhile/however/at the same time/but/so/as a result/Do you think so?.4.另外，漫画作文在揭示实质后往往会有另外，漫画作文在揭示实质后往往会有精彩的谚语精彩的谚语，格言，成语等出现，给文章添彩不少。如：格言，成语等出现，给文章添彩不少。如：No pains,no gains./All work and no play makes Jake a dull boy./Dripping water wears through rock./Constant effort brings success.（滴水能穿石，功（滴水能穿石，功到自然成）到自然成）/Use“one stone”to kill“two birds”（一石击双鸟）（一石击双鸟）