2020年江苏高考英语复习练习课件：专题十六书面表达.pptx

1、Writing 1(2019江苏)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。五年高考自主命题江苏卷题组写作内容1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容;2.在上述场合,你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装?请说明理由(不少于两点)。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案答案写作提示1.题干文章主要讨论学生在欢迎来访的交换生的仪式上的着装问题。有的同学认为要穿中国传统服饰,而有的同学认为穿校服就可以。2.主体写作部分表述自己对此问题的观点及其理由。同不同意均可,但是表达观点一定要论

2、点明确,论据清楚合理。3.文章可以分为三段。第一段概括对话内容,第二段提出自己的观点并加以论述,最后一段进行观点总结。主体时态是一般现在时。Possible version one:Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month.Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.I would be happy to wear tradition

3、al Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony.Firstly,this is pre-cisely what the British visitors are expecting.They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes.Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive.The school uniforms are fine,but not special enough t

4、o give a unique Chinese flavour.Secondly,the inconve-nience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture.It is just the so-called inconve-nience that displays the richness,delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.The traditional Chinese cl

5、othes,it seems to me,will make the occasion very Chinese and inviting to the British guests.Possible version two:Li Jiang and Su Hua dont agree on what to wear when greeting the British students.Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.I prefer th

6、e school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month.Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish,it is a little bit strange to walk around in it.We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day.Whats more,the tradition-al Chinese dress c

7、ant reflect the unique culture of our school.From the design and colour of our uniforms,the British friends will learn more about our school.Besides,the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money,and extra time,for we have to change it back after the event.So the school uniforms are a

8、 better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion.精彩语句精彩语句 出彩结构Firstly,this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting.(what引导表语从句)Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish,it is a little bit strange to walk around in it.(although 引导让步状

9、语从句)Writing 2(2018江苏)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。写作内容1.用约30 个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案答案写作提示本文为读写类作文。主体时态为一般现在时。作文可分三段来写:1.用约30词概述上述利用排名进行消费的现象:材料给出了两个结果完全相反的利用消费排名购物的案例,因此概括要点要含有利用排名消费的不同结果这

10、个概念。2.你对消费排名的看法及理由(23个):在论述自己的观点的时候,不管自己对此持什么观点,一定要注意观点明确。同时列举支持自己的观点的论据。3.小结。写作时应注意语言表述的流畅性和句式的多样性。句子之间要使用合适的关联词连接,同时注意使用合适的高级句式。One possible version:As a major channel of consumption information,the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption.Interestingly,the

11、same rating may have different influences on different consumers.I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase.Firstly,the higher rating means the higher quality of the product,or better service.Based on the ratings,I bought my beloved back-pack,saw interesting films and tasted delicious

12、 foods.Secondly,ratings can save time to make de-cisions in shopping.For example,there are huge quantities of reference books about which I am often confused.In that case,it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend complete

13、ly on the ratings in consumption.The advan-tages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related.It is necessary to hold an objective atti-tude towards ratings.精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇consumption n.消费tend to 倾向于beloved adj.心爱的2.出彩结构I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase.(whatever引导让

14、步状语从句)Writing 3(2017江苏)请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。写作内容1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两点);3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案答案写作提示本文为读写类作文。以第三人称为主,主体时态为一般现在时。文

15、章要点如下:1.用约30词简要概括柱状图的主要内容,注意要体现票房收入与年份的关联。2.你对我国票房收入变化走向的看法及理由(不少于两点)。要利用好两段对话,从中获取重要写作信息。Possible version one:The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015.However,that increase slowed down in 2016.The reasons beh

16、ind this are various.The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income.The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase.However,China saw a decline in its econ

17、omic growth rate last year.And the internet increased options for movie lovers.Consequently,some viewers began to turn away from cinemas,leading to a slower growth.Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years,so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie indus

18、try and the number of quality movies.Therefore,its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.Possible version two:As is indicated in the graph,the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015,but its growth,for one reason or another,slowed down in 2016.The

19、increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors.The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment.Besides,filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer.Moreover,the internet plays an im-portant part.On th

20、e internet,people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well,which is both time-saving and economical.However,the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future.Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the internet and cellphones,and the ticke

21、t price is on the increase.There-fore,the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇slowdown n.减速account for是的原因on offer可买到的2.出彩结构On the internet,people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tick-ets at a discount as well,which is both time-sa

22、ving and economical.(which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing 4(2016江苏)请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。In recent years,Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast on-line votes themselves,but also urge others to vote for competitions like the“Most Beautiful Teacher”and the“Cutest Baby

23、”.Li Jiang,a high school student,is invited to vote in the“Best Police Officer”competition,orga-nized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work.Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.H

24、e is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the“Future Singer”competition.He has already received three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition,the family will win an ov

25、erseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much,but he finds other singers perform even better.To vote,or not to vote?This is a question that troubles him very much.写作内容1.用约30 个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120 个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用23 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连

26、贯,词数适当。答案答案写作提示本文为读写作文,以第三人称为主,时态主要为一般现在时。写作要点1.用约30个词概括原文;2.阐述对网络投票的看法,并提供23个理由或论据。Possible version one:Online voting becomes increasingly popular,and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficial to some people,while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.In my op

27、inion,online voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed,since it is no more than a way to participate in public life.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events,in which candidates go around to seek supports.In addition,the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and

28、 convenient,regardless of time and space.Furthermore,voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.To be honest,voters sometimes feel annoyed,not because they hate voting,but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.Things will turn for the better if we can work out some par-ti

29、cipation rules for people to obey.Therefore,I hold a positive attitude towards online voting.Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays.Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting,although some are quite happy with it,and active in doing it.In my opinion,I

30、nternet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.First-ly,people may feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to.Secondly,voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors,but rather on how many social-networking resources they have

31、.Thirdly,the voters or even the competitors in many cases are pos-sibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short,Internet voting,to some extent,is unfair,if not immoral,and cannot be trusted.Therefore,rules should be worked out and strictly observed.Everyone in our socie

32、ty should help those in need,but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.精彩语句精彩语句 出彩结构It makes no difference from ordinary voting events,in which candidates go around to seek sup-ports.(灵活运用短语make no difference以及in which引导的定语从句)Thirdly,the voters or even the competitors in many cases are poss

33、ibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.(take advantage of在此句中表示“利用,占便宜”)Writing 5(2015江苏)请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。写作内容1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;3.根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

34、3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案答案写作提示本文为图表类读写作文。主体时态为一般现在时。文章可分三段来写,写作时注意句子之间和段落之间衔接词的使用,以使行文流畅。写作要点1.用约30词简要概括材料要点:交通问题不仅影响人们的日常生活,还威胁人们的生命。2.导致交通问题的主要原因:大规模的道路建设;私家车不断增加;开车人、骑车人及行人不遵守交通规则。3.从社会规范和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。One possible version:The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only af

35、fects our everyday life,but may also threaten peoples lives.The three selections presented above are typical examples.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways,there is still much room for improvement,because of the ever increa

36、sing number of cars these years.Whats worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.In fact,traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But r

37、ules alone dont se-cure an orderly society.It is the people who obey the rules that matter.It is everybodys duty to ob-serve them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.精彩语句精彩语句 出彩结构Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.(此句在段首,既承上启下又点明段意;运用短语give rise to“引起”)Without

38、them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.(此句用了虚拟语气。运用短语in chaos“混乱”)Writing 1(2019江苏南通3月联考)阅读下面短文,结合图表内容,按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的短文。The Ministry of Education of the Peoples Republic of China is moving to ban teachers from as-三年模拟A组 20172019年高考模拟考点基础题组signing homework on mobile a

39、pps or asking parents to grade students homework as part of an ef-fort to save students eyesight.Through these efforts,the overall myopia(近视)rate among teenagers reduces by more than 0.5 percentage point per year from 2019 until 2023.Provinces with a high incidence(发生率)of myopia are required to cut

40、at least 1 percentage point per year.By 2030,the myopia rate for 6-year-old children should be below 3 percent,for primary school students,below 38 percent,for middle school students,below 60 percent,and for high school students,below 70 percent.Along with banning app-based homework assignments,the

41、reg-ulation would limit the use of electronic devices to 30 percent of total teaching time and instead encourage homework to be completed by hand on paper.写作内容1.用约30个词概括上述图文内容;2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致学生近视的主要原因;3.请你从社会和个人两方面谈谈如何保护学生的视力(不少于两点)。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯

42、,词数适当。答案答案写作提示本文是一篇图表类读写作文。文章主要谈论我国学生的视力问题,要求考生简要分析导致学生近视的主要原因,以及从社会和个人两方面谈谈如何保护学生的视力。写作时,主体时态应是一般现在时。写作要点1.用约30个词概括上述图文内容:(1)学生中不断上升的近视率引起了社会关注;(2)官方决定禁止老师使用社交媒体布置作业。2.简要分析导致学生近视的主要原因:(1)电子产品的流行使得学生看屏幕的时间过长;(2)学业负担导致学生用眼过度。3.就如何保护学生的视力谈谈看法:(1)社会方面出台相关政策减少学生在校时间等;(2)个人方面不过度使用电子产品;做眼保健操等。One possible

43、 version:The continuously increasing myopia rate among students has caused public concern.Such is the gravity of the situation that the authority has decided to ban teachers from using social media to as-sign homework.Many factors contribute to the myopia problem.With the popularity of digital produ

44、cts,an increas-ing number of students fix their eyes on the screen at least 4 hours every day.Moreover,the aca-demic burden forces students to overuse their eyes,which worsens the situation.Immediate action should be taken to deal with the problem.First,the government should update the relevant rule

45、 to reduce school time,ensuring that students will use eyes less.Second,we stu-dents should say no to too much use of electronic devices.Wed better do eye exercises regularly,easing the tiredness of eyes.Since eyes are the window of our soul,we should take measures to protect them.精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇:ba

46、n.from.禁止做contribute to是的原因,有助于,为做贡献fix ones eyes on注视,把注意力集中在2.出彩结构:Such is the gravity of the situation that the authority has decided to ban teachers from using social media to assign homework.(本句用了such引导的倒装结构及that引导的结果状语从句)Writing 2(2019江苏泰州一模)请认真阅读下面的短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Robots will create d

47、ouble the number of jobs that they will destroy,according to the World Eco-nomic Forum(WEF),but there will be significant shifts in the structure of Americas workforce that may impact everyone.The report says that 75 million jobs will be replaced by artificial intelli-gence(AI),robotics and automati

48、on.But it also suggests that 133 million new jobs may be created as organizations shift the balance between human workers and machines.It is a widely held belief that routine,low-skilled jobs are most at risk for automation,but the re-port shows that many middle-class roles are also at risk.Financia

49、l analysts,accountants and lawyers could all see significant changes by 2022.But manual workers could be among the hardest hit.Meanwhile,there could be a huge change in the structure of the workforce,with the executives surveyed by WEF expecting a shift away from full-time work to flexible employmen

50、t with a focus on productivity.All industries expect big skills gaps,stating that at least 50 percent of their workforce will require reskilling of some degree.The aviation,travel and tourism industry will have the largest demand for reskilling.写作内容1.用约30个词概述短文的主要内容;2.用约120个词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1)这一现象产生的原因