高考英语二轮复习-(名师诊断+专案突破+对点集训+决胜高考)第二部分-能力技巧板块-专题五-书面表达课件.ppt

1、QG英语英语英语英语【诊断平台】(一)名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(2012石家庄质检)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Belinda 来信请你在寒假教她学习汉语。请根据以下要点,用英语给她写封回信。时间:每周二下午3:005:00 地点:李华家书房内容:1.日常会话;3.中国节日。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头已写好;不计入总词数。Dear Belinda,Glad to hear from you.Id like to tell you what I have planned for your Chinese study.

2、2.中文歌曲;名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考 Best wishes.Li Hua名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(二)(2012武汉调研)请你根据提示并结合生活中的一个事例,就“包容”这一话题,用英语写一篇短文。Theres no denying that forgiveness is a noble quality.With forgive-ness people will live in a harmonious way;with forgiveness,people can overcome any difficulty

3、;with forgiveness.注意:1.无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;2.除诗歌外,文体不限;3.内容必须结合生活中的一个事例;名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考4.词数120左右。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考下面是一张新闻照片。请描述照片内容,并谈谈你的看法。注意:1.可参照文章开头所给的提示,作必要的发挥想象;(三)(2012南京考前模拟)名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考2.词数150左右。开头已写好,不计入总词数。Here is a photo taken in the street

4、.In it,we can see an old man lying on the ground.There were several people standing around and looking at him,but none of them gave him a hand.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考 名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考距离高考的时间不多了,但是很多同学还不知如何处理学习、健身(四)(2012四川南充模拟)名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考和休息与高考备考之间的关系。请根

5、据图中的内容写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你对这一问题的建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams 名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考 名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考 【误区诊断】1.语篇方面:考生审题不清,要点缺失,次重点遗漏,人称混用,段落层次不清,时态混乱。2.句法方面:主谓不一致,语序错位,语态混淆,句子基本结构错误,汉语式表达,句式单一。3.词法方面:拼写错误,词性功能概念不清,忽略词的

6、感情色彩,词汇搭名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考配错误。4.其他方面:字数不够,书写潦草,大小写不分,标点使用错误,卷面不整洁。【误区警示】易错类型一:汉式英语错误不少考生在英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯影响,所写句子虽然语法正确,却不符合英语表达习惯,造成不少汉式英语病句。要减少汉式病句,考生必须做到:1.养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达方式。2.平时多归纳总结,纠正汉式英语。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考3.多收听对外广播、收看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书籍、报纸及其他材料。例如:错误:That fa

7、ctory broke out a fire last Sunday.正确:A fire broke out in that factory last Sunday.错误:This building likes a school.正确:This building looks like a school.错误:He will able to write articles in English next year.正确:He will be able to write articles in English next year.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考错误:

8、Recently our village have taken place great changes.正确:Recently great changes have taken place in our village.错误:Professor Lee comes from Beijing University will give us a lec-ture tomorrow.正确:Professor Lee from Beijing University will give us a lecture to-morrow.易错类型二:句子结构不完整或结构错误 一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(

9、祈使句除外)。如果把句子的某一个部分当成一个句子,就会导致句子不完整。两个各含有主名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考语和谓语的分句不能写在一起,也不能只用逗号隔开。例如:错误:China is no longer what used to be.正确:China is no longer what it used to be.错误:You practise more reading,you will improve your reading abil-ity.正确:If you practise more reading,you will improve your

10、 reading abili-ty.错误:They finished the homework,they went out.正确:Since/As they finished the homework,they went out.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考错误:China is still a developing country,most people cant afford a car.正确:China is still a developing country,so most people cant afford a car.错误:The woman

11、 talked to you just now is our English teacher.正确:The woman who talked to you just now is our English teacher.错误:I cant imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets.正确:I cant imagine what life would be like if we have not any TV sets.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考易错类型三:重复累赘有些英语单词本身自带某种意

12、思,或由于语法规则不能再出现某个单词,而考生基本功不够扎实,常常出现累赘现象。例如:错误:The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it.正确:The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.错误:We hope to improve our work better.正确:We hope to improve our work.错误:I seldom go to the Shanghai Library due to the reason it is far away from my home.名

13、师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考正确:I seldom go to the Shanghai Library because it is far away from my home.错误:Yous class was interesting.正确:Your class was interesting.错误:I returned back the book to you yesterday.正确:I returned the book to you yesterday.易错类型四:句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性一个句子必须要表达一个完整的、前后语意一致的意思。如果把不相干的

14、意思放在一个句子里或一个句子表达不完整,就会出现逻名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考辑问题。句子无论长短,在安排上要合乎逻辑,衔接自然,使句内语意关系明确。而考生在习作过程中常出现指代不明、缺少过渡词语、非平行结构或语意不完整的分割句等错误。例如:错误:Being an honest man,Tom worked very hard.正确:Being an honest man,Tom never tells a lie.错误:Liu Hua is a kind-hearted girl.She will be successful in any-thing sh

15、e tries.正确:As she has a strong will and confidence in herself,Liu Hua may be successful in anything she tries.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考错误:Rose is in love with John,John like Mary.正确:Rose is in love with John,but John likes Mary.易错类型五:语法、词法错误许多考生写作中易犯主谓不一致、词性混用、选词或搭配不当,时态语态错误、指代不清、语序不当等方面的错误。例

16、如:错误:In the bedroom there are a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.正确:In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.错误:He closed the door and hurries away to class.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考正确:He closed the door and hurried away to class.错误:60%of the students against the idea of entrance

17、fees.正确:60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.错误:2 days past before his letter arrived.正确:2 days passed before his letter arrived.错误:In order to learn English well,I should increase/raise the method of study.正确:In order to learn English well,I should improve the method of study.名师

18、诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考易错类型六:拼写错误及标点符号误用考生出现单词拼写错误的原因:一是因为发音错误导致拼写错误,如:strick(strict);二是因为不知道动词的不规则变化所导致的,如:teached(taught)等。标点符号是一种变相文字,是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段,很多考生不了解不同标点符号的用途或英汉标点差异,结果出现错误。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考Glad to hear from you.Id like to tell you what I have planned for your Chinese

19、 study.We can begin our Chinese class in my study at 3 pm every Tuesday during the winter holiday.The class lasts two hours until 5 oclock.In the class,we will practice spoken Chinese.Besides,I will teach you some beautiful Chinese songs,including popular and folk ones,which can help you learn and r

20、emember Chinese words more easily.Whats more,Id like to introduce some Chinese festivals to you,such as the【参考范文】(一)Dear Belinda,名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考above during this winter holiday.I believe you can improve your Chinese and well have a good time to-gether.Best wishes.Li HuaSpring Festiv

21、al,the Lantern Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival.Luckily,we will celebrate two important Chinese festivals mentioned 名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(二)Forgiveness is what I learned from my class teacher,which has had a great influence on my growth.Two years ago,I,together with David,who was rega

22、rded as the best basketball player in my class,took part in the basketball final of our school on behalf of our class.With only 20 seconds left,our team still took a lead by two points.To our favor,the ball was in Davids hand!Had David passed it in time,we would certainly have won.But David chose to

23、 break through.Suddenly our rival stole the ball,and shot a three point!After the match,we all demanded the teacher fire David.But our teacher told us to forgive him,saying forgiveness is a good medicine for some diseases.After that,David did learn teamwork.It was forgiveness rather than pity that c

24、hanged David.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考Here is a photo taken in the street.In it,we can see an old man lying on the ground.There were several people standing around and looking at him,but none of them gave him a hand.Other people were just walking by,showing no concern for the old man at all.W

25、hy were these people so cold-hearted when the old man was badly in need of help?Maybe they were afraid of being misunderstood by the old mans family that it was one of them who had knocked him down on the ground.This shows that some people just dont want to get into trouble,espe-cially when they hav

26、e nothing to do with it.My opinion is that,what we really need is not only to have a loving heart of helping others but(三)名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考also try to create an atmosphere of doing a good deed.Everyone should take it into consideration that if the old man was their grandfather or even

27、 one of them,what they would hope for from others.Helping oth-ers is helping oneself.(四)How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance ExamsWe are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one year.However,many students still dont know how to organize their study,rest and physical exerci

28、se when preparing for the Exams.They 名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考usually devote too much time to their study,which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.As the proverb goes,early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.Wed better leave ourselves enough time

29、to sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficiently.Whats more,being strong and healthy is the base for our further study,our future work and creative activities.Therefore,as we are preparing for the Exams,dont forget that rest,exercise and study are equally important.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破

30、对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考【考情报告】书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考“体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应用性,提高考生的综合语言运用能力”的要求。书面表达旨在考查考生的英语表达能力,运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行写作。该题要求考生根据所给图表、提纲等,应用所学知识将所提示的信息组成行文连贯、内容完整、语言得体的文章。从下表中我们可以看出,2012年高考各地英语书面表达题的命制坚名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考持了英语测试改革“突出语篇、强调应用、注重交际”的总体方向。其测试目标进一步优化,考试目的更加明确,测试内容的筛选更加科学,更多样化。在如何考查考生

31、语言能力运用问题上也作出了不懈的探索和努力,具有较好的导向性与前瞻性。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考版本体裁题材提示形式类型要求词数2012全国卷应用文(电子邮件)夏令营文字半开放100左右2012全国卷应用文(书信)邀请外教参加生日聚会文字半开放100左右2012安徽卷应用文(发言稿)文、理科的选择文字半开放120左右2012北京卷1.应用文2.议论文1.日记:做好事2.铅笔快用完了!1.图片2.漫画1.半开放2.开放1.不少于602.不少于50名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考2012重庆卷应用文(网站发帖)交换物品文字半开放

32、100左右2012福建卷议论文乱扔垃圾漫画开放120左右2012广东卷1.说明文2.议论文1.介绍 Allan Stewart2.老师影响学生文字半开放1.5个句子2.120左右2012湖北卷议论文利用所拥有的东西文字开放120左右2012湖南卷记叙文找回失物文字开放不少于1202012江苏卷记叙文和同学冲突表格半开放150 左右2012江西卷议论文喜欢读书文字半开放120左右(续表)名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考版本体裁题材提示形式 类型要求词数2012辽宁卷应用文(书信)对使用的英语材料的看法文字半开放100左右2012山东卷说明文学习经验文字半开放120

33、1502012上海卷应用文(日记)绘画课体会漫画半开放1201502012陕西卷记叙文教师节活动图文半开放不少于1002012四川卷应用文(书信)教学建议文字半开放100左右2012天津卷应用文(电子邮件)邀请Chris看越剧 文字半开放不少于100(续表)2012浙江卷议论文名言佳句交流文字开放100120名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考主要体现了以下特点:1.交际应用文是主要命题形式,其他体裁百花齐放。具体说来应用文仍是主打体裁,18篇书面表达中,应用文有9篇,和去年的相比,书信类逐渐减少;其他类型,如议论文等逐渐增加。2.贴近学生生活,时代感强。2012年

34、高考书面表达题贴近学生实际生活,紧密联系热点话题,写作话题真实,同学们有话可写。书面表达情景实用性程度高,每一份试卷都符合同学们认知水平和日常生活经历;题目设计关注同学们成长,注意培养良好的道德品质和健全的人格(如江西、江苏和湖北卷等);另外,所涉及话题,富有新时代特色,能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感(如北京卷的做好事、陕西名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考卷的教师节活动)。这种贴近生活、立足基础、发扬个性、关注环境的设题理念仍将是近几年高考书面表达的基本思路。3.提示型、半开放型是主流,但开放型作文日渐增多。各篇文章都提示简明,完全摒弃纯粹“翻译型”命题,不

35、再禁锢考生的思维空间。题目设置一般都提供图画、图表、提纲等情景,如北京卷提供了图画和漫画等,都给出了必要的内容,有一定的控制性,但又给考生留出了足够的空间供其发挥。此外,还常要求考生发表建议与看法,如辽宁卷:表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法;浙江卷针对摘录句中的观点谈看法,都有很大的开放性,为考生留出了足够的发挥余地,而且张扬个性。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考【考向预测】今后高考对书面表达的考查会逐步增加试题的开放性,充分体现新课程倡导的“有利于学生个性和潜能的发展”的理念。这与新课标要求的“在教学中应增加开放性的任务型活动和探究性的学习内容,使学生有机会表

36、达自己的看法与观点”相一致。同时,结合考生熟悉的题材,通过半开放或开放的命题形式,体现新课程所倡导的满足不同学生发展需要的理念。【典例评析】题目:联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况:1.规模:近100户人家,约500口人。2.变化:过去很穷,1978年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3.教育:原来的学校很小,现已改建。新建的教学楼有4层,是村里最美的建筑物。村里所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意:(1)要点齐全,前后连贯;(2)词数:10

37、0120。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考挖掘要点(1)依据要点,草拟提纲,将所需要的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型。暂不考虑动词的时态、语态、单数第三人称等词形变化。100 families and 500 people used to be very poor/change a lot/richer than before/take on a new lookwas very small/have been rebuiltnewly-built/have 4 storeys/the most beautiful building名师诊断

38、名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考school-age children/enjoy free education(2)扩展成句,连句成篇。本文为一篇发言稿,其格式与口头通知大体相同。因此,短文应有称呼、开场及结束语。既然介绍的是小村,所使用的人称为it。要注意时态、语态的正确运用,并适当使用一些连接成分将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑,前后连贯。认真创作Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our village!This village is very small.It has nearly 100 名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破

39、对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is tak-ing on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small.Now it has been re-built.The newly built teaching buildinghas 4 storeys and it is the mo

40、st beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.这篇书面表达要点齐全,表达也没语法错误,但语言平淡,表达方式单一,逻辑性不够清晰,因此很难在考试中得到较高分数。如果使用一些恰当的连接词,并尽量使用较高级的词汇和较复杂的语法结构,这名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考篇平淡的文章就会有很大改观,甚至会非常精彩。深入修改Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome

41、to our village!This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast.People here have/live a much better life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past,the sch

42、ool here was very small and most children couldn名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考t afford to go to school.But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school-age children can study here.Whats more/Also,they enjo

43、y free education.May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.总体评价用介词短语作定语或用含定语从句的主从复合句代替两个单独的句子。语句间缺少连接成分However。表现作者对现在乡村名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考发展的喜悦心情,也起到承上启下作用。需使用较高级词汇。作者对过去孩子们上不起学表示遗憾和同情。语句间缺少连接成分,添加But。语句间缺少承上启下连接成分and。用含定语从句的主从复合句代替两个并列的分句。此处应添加一个承接上下文的过渡

44、性词语,如“Whats more/Also”。这样,前后就更加连贯了。如能适当发挥,在结尾处添加像“May you enjoy your stay here!/May you have a pleasant time here!”的表示希望、祝愿的语句,会使全文更加完整,使文章读起来更亲切,完全达到与读者进行交流的目的,从而收到更佳的表达效果。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考通过分析高考阅卷情况看,考生需要在书面表达中注意以下几个问题:1.注重审题和抓要点。要做好书面表达题,首先要注重常规的审题和抓要点,认真审清题目要求,按照题目要求,列出要点,表达应做到全面、

45、清楚、准确、得体。2.用句子表达要点。要点可用不同的方式表达,但前提条件是一定要用句子表达,要注意句子的多样性。有些学生不了解英语句子结构的规律,根据汉语思【解题技巧】名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考维逐字直译,专家点评时笑称为childrens English。考生应加强对英语句子结构的推敲,在平时学习时要建立一个自己的“句库”,将自己觉得有用的各种题材的好句都放进去。3.打实单词基本功。阅卷中发现不少考生不会表达“关心”、“诚信”、“能源”、“环境”、“爱惜”等词,基本功非常薄弱。有考生将protect写成 prevent,将honest表达为believe

46、 each other,将energy sources表达为gold。有的考生甚至在作文中大量采用汉语拼音或全部采用汉语拼音,这些当然逃不过阅卷老师的“火眼金睛”。考生要将考纲中所列的常用词汇一一过关,并掌握常见的搭配用法。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考4.学会使用连接成分。英语是显性连贯,要采用连接成分体现上下文的逻辑关系,而汉语是语义连贯,常常无须连接成分甚至可以不是句子。考生平时训练时应有意识地使用一些表示上下文逻辑关系的标志词(连接成分)。如:表示例证的for example,for instance,such as,in ones opinion;表

47、示次序的firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally;表示强调的 especially,oth-erwise;表示附加的besides,in addition,whats more,whats worse;表示对比或妥协的but,however,on the contrary,in spite of,instead(of);表示结论的as a result,thus,generally speaking;表示原因的because(of),thanks to;表示时间的when,before,after等。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考5.书

48、写要饱满、清晰。高考阅卷因为采用的是“电脑阅卷”,考生要注意卷面整洁,字体工整,层次清晰,要让阅卷老师一目了然。书写训练非一日之功,考生平常对书写就要严格要求,要使用指定的0.5mm黑水笔书写,绝对不要使用圆珠笔或铅笔。只有平时慎重对待书写,才能在最后的高考中书写规范。【高分策略】考生要写出一篇好的书面表达,不仅应要点齐全,基本语法和常用句型无严重错误,意思表达清楚,更重要的是句式多样化,巧用连接词,名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考学会使用高级词汇和表达方式。1.巧用非谓语动词,使句子简单明了,严密紧凑。例如:(1)There are a variety of

49、books for us to choose from,like history books,science books,literary books and so on.(to choose from不定式作定语)(2012江西卷)(2)Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I found the teachers patient and considerate.(Disappointed as I felt过去分词结合as引起倒装,表示让步)(2012湖北卷)(3)Then

50、 they started shouting and yelling,and it turned into a horrible 名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考quarrel.(shouting and yelling动名词作宾语)(2012江苏卷)(4)I also find it useful to keep English diaries.(不定式to keep English diaries作真正的宾语)(2012山东卷)2.巧用连接词,增加句与句之间、段与段之间的连贯性。高考大纲中常用的连接词归纳如下:(1)表示并列补充关系:besides,also