高中英语作文写作指导-建议信课件.ppt

1、Lead inWatch a video about some students in our school and find out_What is bothering them lately.Some students problems quarrelled with My weightlaught atmy EnglishHow to write a letterfor adviceTeaching goalTask1 Structure of writing a letter for adviceshow the _ of the letter(1)understand the _(2

2、)put forward specific_(3)explain the _ or _express your _ _注意：语言要礼貌，顾及对方感受。注意：语言要礼貌，顾及对方感受。problemspurposesuggestionsreasonsbenefitsexpectaionthe Structure of a letter for adviceGreeting,Body:1st part:2nd part:3rd part:Complimentary close(结束语结束语),Signaturethe purposesuggestions and reasonshope the r

3、eceiver to considerthe suggestions Dear ,Yours sincerely,Robert 假如你是某英文周报假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME”专栏的专栏的编辑编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最因最近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：内容要点如下：1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解对该同学存在的问题表示理解2、提出建议并给出理由提出建议并给出理由注意

4、：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。实际操练实际操练Task 2.Understand the problems and propose practical suggestions1.学习压力大学习压力大2.成绩下降成绩下降3.和父母经常吵架和父母经常吵架1.保持乐观，放松心情。保持乐观，放松心情。2.分析成绩下降的原因，与老师分析成绩下降的原因，与老师沟通，弄懂错题沟通，弄懂错题3.和父母常交流沟通，相互理解。和父母常交流沟通，相互理解。原因：是释放压力的好办法。益处：逐渐取得进步方法：遇困难求助师生Task 3.Come u

5、p with key words 1.1.给某人提建议给某人提建议 2.2.向某人征求意见向某人征求意见 3.3.和和相处好相处好4.4.这是一个普遍的问题这是一个普遍的问题5.5.把把考虑在内考虑在内 give sb.some advice on ask sb.for advice get along/on well with This is a common problem take sth.into consideration Helpful phrases Say aloud!Say aloud!6.压力山大压力山大7.成绩下降成绩下降8.8.和父母经常吵架和父母经常吵架9.9.释放压

6、力释放压力10.10.建议某人做某事建议某人做某事 feel stressful decrease in grades/performance decline quarrel with my parents release pressure advise/recommend sb.to do sth.suggest/advise/recommend doing sth.Say aloud!Say aloud!Helpful phrases 1.1.给某人提建议给某人提建议 2.2.向某人征求意见向某人征求意见 3.3.和和相处好相处好4.4.这是一个普遍的问题这是一个普遍的问题5.5.把把考虑

7、在内考虑在内 6.压力山大压力山大7.成绩下降成绩下降8.8.和父母经常吵架和父母经常吵架9.9.释放压力释放压力10.10.建议某人做某事建议某人做某事1.give sb.some advice on 2.ask sb.for advice 3.get along/on well with 4.This is a common problem 5.take sth.into consideration6.feel stressful7.decrease in grades/performance decline8.quarrel with my parents9.release pressu

8、re10.advise/recommend sb.to do sth.suggest/advise/recommend doing sth.Read togetherRead togetherTask4.Recite the key sentence structures You have asked for my advice how to get along well with your parents and I will try to make some suggestions.I am quite delighted to hear that you want to ask some

9、 advice/suggestions about.I am writing to express my views on/concerning 1.1.建议信建议信开头开头常用句式：常用句式：1.For one thing for another2.on the one hand on the other hand3.To begin/start with last but not least 4.In a word/In conclusion2.常见连词 You are supposed to/ought to do.It would be a good idea to do.I woul

10、d like to suggest that Youd better do sth I think it would be more beneficial if you could.If I were in your position,I would.It is high time that sb did/should do sth.3.3.表达建议表达建议常用句式：常用句式：1.I hope that my suggestions are of help to you,and please feel free to contact me for more questions.2.I am l

11、ooking forwards to your consideration about my proposals/suggestions.I will be more than happy to see improvements later.3.If you could take what I suggest seriously,I would appreciate it very much.4.4.建议信建议信结尾结尾常用句式：常用句式：Task 5.Beautify your sentences例句：例句：Actually,it is common for most students to

12、 be anxious about the busy and tough school life of Senior Three,which always makes us stressful.句型仿写：句型仿写：学习英语是非常重要的。学习英语是非常重要的。It is very important(for you)to learn English.It is of great importance(for you)to learn English.It is adj./n.(for sb).to do sth.例句：例句：There is no denying that There is no

13、 denying that your parents your parents love you and care about you.love you and care about you.There is no denying that friendship is of There is no denying that friendship is of great significance to teenagers.great significance to teenagers.句型仿写：句型仿写：毫无疑问，友谊对青少年非常重要。毫无疑问，友谊对青少年非常重要。例句例句：You can n

14、ot only ask for the teachers for help,but also you can learn from your fellow students to improve your study.句型转换：使用倒装句型句型转换：使用倒装句型Not only can you ask for the teachers for help,but also you can learn from your fellow students to improve your study.你不仅应该集中精力学习，你还应该注意运动。你不仅应该集中精力学习，你还应该注意运动。句型仿写：句型仿写

15、：You You should should not only not only concentrate on your study concentrate on your study but also but also you are supposed to pay attention to you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.doing sports.Not only Not only should you concentrate on your study should you concentrate on your stu

16、dy but also but also you are supposed to pay attention to you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.doing sports.例句：例句：Actually,it is common for most students to be anxious about the busy and tough school life of Senior Three,which always makes us stressful.扩充句子扩充句子 You are supposed to get u

17、p early in the morning,which_ It would be a good idea to have a talk with your friend and explain the misunderstanding to him,which _ Dear Xu meili You have asked for my advice on how to improve your grades and get along well with your parents and I will try to make some suggestions.Actually,it is c

18、ommon for most students to be anxious about the busy and tough school life of Senior Three,which always makes us stressful.Besides,I think it would be more beneficial if you could carefully analyze the reason why your performance declined.Furthermore,not only can you ask for the teachers for help,bu

19、t also you can learn from your fellow students to improve your study.Last but not least,there is no denying that your parents love you and care about you.If I were in your position,I would communicate with them about your problem.I hope that my suggestions are of help to you,and please feel free to

20、contact me for more questions.Y My advice to Xu meiliTask 6Group work：Task allocation First and last paragraphs are given to you.Please write the main part with 4 pieces of advice on the paper!You should try to use as many sentence structures as possibble.Now,6 minutes.Please do it.Task6 Give advice

21、 to the other three studentsS4:I cant get on well with my friends and I dont know how to improve our friendshipS1:I quarrel with my parents and feel they only care about my study I am worried about my English and I want to improve my writing.S2:My weight keeps gaining and my classmates often laugh a

22、t meWe need your help!Xu meili Xiao duan Xiao yang Xiao ze Li hua Group work：Task allocation I hope that my suggestions are of help to you,and please feel free to contact me for more questions.You have asked for my advice on how to get along with your.and I will try to make some suggestions.your adv

23、iceMany teenagers have difficulty getting along with their parents.Your PresentationAdviceAdviceAdviceAdviceFly to them Life is full of ups and downs.When we feel down,we can cheer ourselves up by asking others for help.Whenever you are in Trouble,rembember you can turn to me for help,and I am alway

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