高中英语写作模块特训课件.pptx

1、 辜鸿铭辜鸿铭辜鸿铭：祖籍福建省惠安县，生于南洋英属马来西亚槟榔屿。学博中西，号称清末怪杰，精通英、法、德、拉丁、希腊、马来亚等9种语言，获13个博士学位，是满清时代精通西洋科学、语言兼及东方华学的中国第一人他翻译了中国四书中的三部-论语、中庸和大学，创获甚巨;并著有中国的牛津运动(原名清流传)和中国人的精神(原名春秋大义)等英文书，热衷向西方人宣传东方的文化和精神，并产生了重大的影响，西方人曾流传一句话:到中国可以不看三大殿，不可不看辜鸿铭林语堂林语堂林语堂：早年留学美国、德国，获哈佛大学文学硕士，莱比锡大学语言学博士。回国后在清华大学、北京大学、厦门大学任教。1945年赴新加坡筹建南洋大学

2、，任校长。曾任联合国教科文组织美术与文学主任、国际笔会副会长等职。林语堂于1940年和1950年先后两度获得诺贝尔文学奖提名。曾创办论语人间世宇宙风等刊物，作品包括小说京华烟云啼笑皆非。散文和杂文文集人生的盛宴生活的艺术以及译著东坡诗文选浮生六记等。主持编撰林语堂当代汉英词典。keys英语写作基本技能分成合理三段想到简单内容造出正确句子进行句式升级keys 三段排列主题句+1；2；3内容梗概头脑风暴简单句式是，干句式升级万能套话123常见问题4词汇量不足；句式单一组织结构不清 中式思维表达语法结构混用词汇量不足；句式单一句式；短语表达多样化高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特

3、训课件(共58张)Key 1同义词替换goodBecauseimportant=perfect=excellent=amazing=fantastic=brilliant=great=because of=due to=thanks to=owing to=as a result of=crucial=essential=key=significant=decisive=indispensable高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 1同义词替换butStart think=however =by contrast=conversely =otherw

4、ise=nevertheless=get cracking on doing=set out to do=set/be about doing=commence doing=harbor the idea that=take the attitude that=hold the view that高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 1表达多样化我喜欢英语I like English I am crazy about EnglishI am fond of Englishmy favorite language is EnglishI fall in

5、love with English at the first sight.高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 1表达多样化她是一个她是一个多么多么漂亮的女孩漂亮的女孩.She is such a nice girlWhat a good-looking girl she is What an eye-catching girl she is How beautiful she is 高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 1表达多样化学好英语对于我们来说是重要的学好英语对于我们来说是重要的.Studying E

6、nglish is important for usIt is important for us to learn EnglishI think it crucial for us to study EnglishIt is necessary for us to study English well高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 1表达多样化 医生尽他最大努力拯救病人医生尽他最大努力拯救病人The doctor tries his best to save the patientThe doctor manages to save the pa

7、tientThe doctor spares no effort to save the patientThe doctor does his level best to save the patient高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)组织结构不清逻辑连接词；开头；结尾万能公式高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 3逻辑连接词First secondto begin withfirst of allfirst and foremostat the outsetthenfurthermoremoreoverwhat

8、s more高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 3逻辑连接词thirdSolast but not leastlastlyas a final pointlast of allhencethusthereforeas a result高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 3逻辑连接词becauseverybecause ofin thatduo tofor the reason thatextremelyacutelyhighlygreatly高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共5

9、8张)Key 3万能开头句当谈到当谈到；涉及到；涉及到When it comes toWhen it comes to getting things done,hes uselessWhen talking about When we talk about how teenagers are getting worse and worse now,most young people dont agree.When we talk about When talking about the Mid-autumn Festival,we think of mooncakes and family r

10、eunion.高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 3万能开头句古语有云古语有云.As an old saying goes,It goes without saying that.Well goes an old saying，It is an old saying that.As an old saying goes，knowledge is power高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 3万能开头句据报道据报道;据研究据研究;显示显示According to a survey/study/report，

11、According to a new survey,students safety has become a big problemA survey/study/report shows thatA survey/study/report shows that exercise is important for us 高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 3万能开头句随着随着的发展；进步的发展；进步 With the development/advance ofWith the development of technology,smartphone

12、is becoming more and more popular and important in peoples daily life.As science and technology develop,As science and technology develop,we can enjoy more conveniences.高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 3万能开头句.扮演重要角色play an important role/part inReview plays an important role in learning成为了热点话

13、题成为了热点话题has become a hot topic among peopleOnline shopping has become a hot topic among people高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)Key 3万能开头句很明显.It is obvious thatIt is obvious that he has been at home(because she phoned us with his home telephone）很清楚；很明显It is clear thatIt is clear that the effects o

14、f these environmental pollutants are very real.Key 3万能开头句毫无疑问的是.There is no doubt thatThere is no doubt that we will be successful.不容否认的是No one can deny thatNo one can deny that the fact that smokingcould lead to cancer.Key 3万能开头句不用说 Needless to say,.Needless to say,theory and practice sometimes div

15、erged.Key 3ExampleExample我们要多读书There is no doubt that we are supposed to read more books.As for the reasons,first and foremost,it is obvious that books are useful,which can cultivate our interests,broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life.Additionally,it goes without saying that reading b

16、ooks is not only meaningful but also interesting.Last but not least,no one can deny that we need to pass a lot of exams;as a result,we need the knowledge learned from books.Key 3ExampleExample我们要适当地玩手机 There is no doubt that using telephones has some disadvantages,first and foremost,it is obvious th

17、at it may gradually get you addicted to it if you use it improperly.Additionally,It is clear that not only our precious time but also our energy will be wasted.Last but not least,no one can deny that We may forget the true meaning of studying;as a result,It may end up with some unexpected troubles a

18、nd problems.Key 3万能结尾句 我认为，我认为，As far as I am concerned，.From my point of view,In my opinion，As far as I know，To my mind，In my opinion，keeping healthy is of great importance Key 3万能结尾句总而言之总而言之;in short；to make a long story short；in brief；in a word；to sum up；all in all；In short,we cannot please every

19、one all the timeKey 3万能结尾句因此，可以得出这样的结论：因此，可以得出这样的结论：Hence,it can be concluded that.因此因此,我们能够发现我们能够发现;Therefore,we can find that.我们可以得出结论我们可以得出结论;we can draw the conclusion that.Key 3万能结尾句(书信）我希望我希望 Hopefully,sb would do sth.我相信我相信I have the confidence that sb will do sth.感谢你感谢你Thanks for reading my

20、letter in such a hot summer.请回信请回信I am looking forward to your earliest reply.只有才只有才Only in this way/by doing so can you have the chance of achieving your dreams/living a better life.难避免难避免 With the suggestions carried out,a much brighter future will be not only possible but also inevitable Key 3万能扩

21、充句因为因为,for,in that,considering that 以防（以备）以防（以备）,in case 所以所以;as a result,;therefore,;consequently,;accordingly,为了为了,so that,in order that 如果如果.,if 只要只要,as long as 这件事儿这件事儿,which Key 3ExampleExample 这是一些学英语的建议这是一些学英语的建议Here are some useful,practical and effective suggestions on English study.To begi

22、n with,you can read some English magazines.Besides,you may listen to some English songs and watch some English movies.Whats more,you should learn as many English words as possible.Finally,youd better make an American friend.Key 3AdvantagesAdvantages1.1.挣钱挣钱We can earn some pocket money to buy our fa

23、vorite books.2.2.利用好时间利用好时间 We can make good use of our spare time to do some valuable things.4.4.交朋友交朋友Not only our English but also our interpersonal skills can be improved.3 3.提高能力提高能力We can make some close friends with common interests to share our life experience with each other.Key 3Advantages

24、Advantages 5.有益于身心健康有益于身心健康 It is beneficial for our physical and mental health.6.既有意义又有趣既有意义又有趣 It is not only meaningful but also interesting.7.培养兴趣，开阔视野，丰富课余生活培养兴趣，开阔视野，丰富课余生活 It can cultivate our interests,broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life.8.面对困难，克服挑战，达成目标，实现梦想面对困难，克服挑战，达成目标，实

25、现梦想 It can enable us to face difficulties,overcome challenges,achieve our goals and realize our dreams.Key 3DisadvantagesDisadvantages 1.浪费时间，浪费精力浪费时间，浪费精力 Not only our precious time but also our energy will be wasted.2.浪费金钱浪费金钱 It costs so much money that many ordinary families cannot even afford i

26、t.3.影响身心健康影响身心健康 It never fails to do a lot of harm to our physical and mental health.4.影响学习 Our study also be negatively affected.5.影响人际关系 It is also bad for our interpersonal relationship.Key 3DisadvantagesDisadvantages 6.6.让人上瘾让人上瘾 It may gradually/eventually get you addicted to it.7.7.污染环境污染环境 I

27、t may cause serious air pollution to this world,which is already far from perfect.8.导致无法预测的麻烦和问题导致无法预测的麻烦和问题 It may end up with some unexpected troubles and problems.9.让我们忘记让我们忘记XXX 的真正意义的真正意义We may forget the true meaning of XXX.Key 3paragraphparagraph（1 1）重要性）重要性 Needless to say,XXX is of great si

28、gnificance/importance for our life/society.As for the reasons,first and foremost,.Additionally,Last but not least,（2 2）我的观点）我的观点 As far as I am concerned,.The reason is simple:just as an old saying goes,Key 3paragraphparagraph(3(3）解释原因）解释原因 There are three main reasons why sb do sth.First and foremo

29、st,Additionally,Last but not least,.（4 4）建议措施）建议措施 Here are some suggestions.1 2 3 Practical and effective measures must be put into practice immediately to improve the current situation.1 2 3.语法结构混用先写主干；再添枝叶Key 4语法结构 我喜欢他我喜欢他I like himI like him very muchI like him very much because he is very live

30、ly and lovely.Key 4语法结构 他正在画画他正在画画He is drawing.He is drawing in the class.He is drawing in the English class.He is drawing a horse seriously in the English class.Key 4语法结构 我们老师将给我们做演讲我们老师将给我们做演讲our teacher will give us a speech.our Chinese teacher will give us a lesson about how to write a good pas

31、sage.our Chinese teacher with two big eyes and a pair of glasses will give us a lesson about how to write a good passage.中式思维表达 培养英文表达习惯Key 4破除中式思维用英语怎么说用英语怎么说How to say?How do you say this in English?你是做什么工作的呢你是做什么工作的呢?Whats your job?Whats your occupation?Where are you working these days?Key 4破除中式思

32、维他的身体很健康他的身体很健康His body is healthyhe is healthy=he is in good health我很喜欢他我很喜欢他I very like himI like it very muchI really like itKey 4破除中式思维我没有英文名我没有英文名I havent English name.I dont have an English name.我想我不行我想我不行I think I cant.I dont think I can.真题练手 孰能生巧Key 5真题练手如今，在我们身边有很多父母在外打工的留守儿童如今，在我们身边有很多父母在外

33、打工的留守儿童(left-behind children)。他们面临很多的家庭以及学习问题，急需社会的关爱，请。他们面临很多的家庭以及学习问题，急需社会的关爱，请你给你给China Daily写一封倡议信，呼吁大家关注留守儿童。内容要点如写一封倡议信，呼吁大家关注留守儿童。内容要点如下：下：1.1.留守儿童正面临很多难题，很容易感到孤独；留守儿童正面临很多难题，很容易感到孤独；2.2.与他人交朋友有困难，在学习上需要有人帮助；与他人交朋友有困难，在学习上需要有人帮助；3.3.大多数由爷爷奶奶照顾，对孩子的要求不是很严格；大多数由爷爷奶奶照顾，对孩子的要求不是很严格；4.4.我们应该计划志愿者项

34、目帮助他们，我们应该计划志愿者项目帮助他们，；5.5.留守儿童的父母应留守儿童的父母应 Key 5真题练手提纲提纲=（分段（分段+内容）内容）-提出建议型提出建议型1.1.现状现状+以及问题概述（套话）以及问题概述（套话）2.2.存在问题存在问题+解决方法解决方法1.2.31.2.33.3.结尾升华（为了和谐社会，社会主义核心价值观）结尾升华（为了和谐社会，社会主义核心价值观）Key 5真题练手when it comes to the left-behind children，there is no doubt that they are facing many differenties.Th

35、ese children who faced problems are as follows.first of all，It is easy for them to feel lonely and they also have some trouble making friends with others sometimes.whats more，They also need help with their study.last but not least，Most of them are looked after by their grandparents.They are not stri

36、ct with their grandchildren.I hold the view that we should plan a volunteer project to help them.And we can donate our money and clothes to them.We should care more about them.And the parents should return to their children as often as possible.Its really of importance to do something for left behin

37、d children，only in this waycan we build a better society and give them a warm family.Key 5真题练手随着科技的发展和社会的进步，快速更新的智能手机受到全民热爱，随着科技的发展和社会的进步，快速更新的智能手机受到全民热爱，人们的生活似乎已经离不开手机；智能手机的出现确实给人们的生活人们的生活似乎已经离不开手机；智能手机的出现确实给人们的生活带来了很大的便利，但同时也带来了许多问题，作为中学生的我们，带来了很大的便利，但同时也带来了许多问题，作为中学生的我们，该如何正确及使用手机呢？该如何正确及使用手机呢？要点

38、：要点：1.1.智能手机带来的便利智能手机带来的便利 2.2.智能手机带来的问题智能手机带来的问题.3.3.我的观点我的观点Key 5真题练手提纲提纲=（分段（分段+内容）内容）-利弊分析型利弊分析型1.1.总总-xxx-xxx（随着（随着发展，发展，xxxxxx受欢迎受欢迎/引发讨论）引发讨论）2.2.分分-赞同的观点赞同的观点+理由理由1.2.31.2.3 反对的观点反对的观点+理由理由1.2.31.2.3 3.3.总总-我的观点（套话）我的观点（套话）Key 5真题练手 With the development of technology and society，There is no

39、doubt that telephones play an important part in our daily life.Whether students can take telephone to school,different people have different opinions about this question.On the one hand，Some people think its great for students to use telephones,because they can make some close friends with common in

40、terests to share their life experience with others.Whats more，their parents can get to us quickly when they need.On the other hand,some other people do not agree with them.They hold the view that the students who use the telephone will play games,watch movies,send messages and so on,even during the

41、class,which will do harm to them.and It never fails to do a lot of harm to our physical and mental health.as far as Im concerned,bringing phone to school is not a bad idea,if we use it properly.To some extend,it would be good for our study.If we take it to school,we must sure that we wont use it dur

42、ing the class.Key 5真题练手假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Mary将去中国朋友家里做客，发邮件将去中国朋友家里做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1 1、到达时间、到达时间2 2、合适的礼物、合适的礼物3 3、餐桌礼仪、餐桌礼仪Key 5真题练手提纲提纲=（分段（分段+内容）内容）1.1.问候问候+我听说我听说+写信目的写信目的2.2.根据问题根据问题,我给的建议我给的建议+加理由加理由1,2,31,2,3a.a.到达时间到达时间-早点到早点到-准备食材准备食材-有趣有意义有趣有意义b b、

43、合适的礼物、合适的礼物-xxx-xxx-增进关系增进关系c c、餐桌礼仪、餐桌礼仪-吃饭不出声吃饭不出声-不礼貌不礼貌3.3.我希望我希望,我相信我相信,（我感谢（我感谢）,请回信请回信.Key 5真题练手 Dear Mary,How are you doing?In your last letter,you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friends home.Now,I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.To begin with,according to our tr

44、adition,you are supposed to arrive early,so that you can help the family prepare the dinner,which is not only meaningful but also interesting.Besides,youd better bring some gifts,such as a book or a Chinese knot.last but not least,when you are enjoying the meal,you need to avoid making noises while

45、chewing food.Hopefully,these suggestions would be helpful for you.I have the confidence that you will have a great time.I am looking forward to your good news.Yours,LiHuaKey 5summarysummary但凡应试书信，逃不出三种段落：（一）开头段：四大内容 1、问候；2、自我介绍；3、写信背景；为什么会写这封信 4、写信 目的；写这封信想达到什么目的（二）中间段：具体问题+具体分析；（三）结尾段：客套话。口诀：开门见山说意图，咨询建议123，感谢客气不可少，期待回信成老套