2022年广东省深圳中考写作专项指导ppt课件.pptx

1、 精确瞄准，直中靶心 深圳中考写作指导深圳中考深圳中考书面表达书面表达 How:怎样考？1 1书面表达书面表达Score:15分2 23 3What:考什么?书 面表 达What?What?PART 01能根据写作要求，独立起草短文、书信等能用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系能简单描述人物或事件；能根据图示和表格写出简单的段落或操作说明围绕话题恰当理解与运用相关的语言表达形式20162016为外籍人士安排采摘荔枝活动为外籍人士安排采摘荔枝活动活动通知活动通知20172017给外国同学写毕业留言给外国同学写毕业留言感谢信感谢信20182018在欢迎会上致感谢词在欢迎会上致感谢词演讲稿演讲稿2019

2、2019介绍中国红介绍中国红书信书信20202020深圳创建文明城市深圳创建文明城市倡议书倡议书应用文 PracticalWritingAnnouncementSpeechesPostersinvitationsLettersNotices 英国某中学邀请你校学生代表团英国某中学邀请你校学生代表团7 7月中旬前往访问交流。假定你是成员之一，请你月中旬前往访问交流。假定你是成员之一，请你代表访问团在欢迎会上致答谢辞，内容包括：代表访问团在欢迎会上致答谢辞，内容包括：1.1.感谢邀请和接待；感谢邀请和接待；2.2.希望在文化习俗、创新与发明等方面进行交流；希望在文化习俗、创新与发明等方面进行交流；

3、3.3.重点介绍一个中国传统节日；重点介绍一个中国传统节日；4.4.邀请他们访问深圳。邀请他们访问深圳。要求：要求：1.1.词数词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.2.致辞必须要点齐全，可适当发挥；致辞必须要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.3.致辞中不得出现真实姓名和校名；致辞中不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。参考词汇：参考词汇：接待接待receptionreception 习俗习俗customcustom 创新创新innovationinnovationLadies

4、 and gentlemen,Ladies and gentlemen,Good evening!ItGood evening!Its really a great honour for me to speak s really a great honour for me to speak here.here.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友TonyTony来信说他对来信说他对“中国红中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解一词很感兴趣，想了解“中中国红国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请根据以下表格中的要点提示给他写一封回信。在中国人日常生活中的体现。请根据以下表格中的要点提示给他写一

5、封回信。地位最受欢迎的颜色之一含意代表幸福，给人们带来好运使用场合春节、婚礼等表现形式红包、中国结、红灯笼、剪纸（选写两项）要求：要求：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。参考词汇：参考词汇：代表stand for；婚礼wedding；红包red packet；中国结Chinese knotDear Tony,Its great to hear from you.Im writing to tell you something about Chinese Red.试题特点：控制+

6、半开放信息表述（控制）+适当的自由发挥（半开放）书 面表 达How?How?PART 02Before Writing2.2.列：正确表述要点列：正确表述要点 1.1.审：明确写作要求审：明确写作要求3.3.连：连句成文连：连句成文4.4.美：完善、美化短文美：完善、美化短文How?How?近年来，越来越的外国人开始学习中文近年来，越来越的外国人开始学习中文,了解中国文化。假定你是李华，你正了解中国文化。假定你是李华，你正在教你的美国朋友在教你的美国朋友JustinJustin学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知他下次上课的计划。学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知他下次上课的计划。内容包括：内容包括：(1)(1

7、)时间、地点；时间、地点；(2)(2)内内 容：容：中国书法；中国书法；(3)(3)课前准备：有关书法的知识；课前准备：有关书法的知识；(4)(4)你对此的看法：（至少写出两点）你对此的看法：（至少写出两点）注意：注意：1.1.词数词数8080左右；左右；2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：参考词汇：calligraphy(calligraphy(书法书法)；Dear Justin,April 10._ Li Hua Example 1 写作要点：上课的时间&地点；上课的内容；课前要准备什么；你的两点看法step 2step 3step 4Step

8、 1 审题 Genre:an emailWhat to write?step 3step 4Step 2 信息表述审题 Pattern:Im writing to tell you that.;not only.but also;.Words and phrases:next class;Chinese calligraphy;basic knowledge of;in my opinion;Chinese culture;.step 3step 4Step 2：信息表述审题 上课的时间&地点 I m writing to tell you that we will have our next

9、 class in the classroom of Class 12,Senior Three of our school,at 4:00p.m.Friday afternoon.上课的内容 The content of this class will be about Chinese Calligraphy.课前要做的准备I hope you can search some information about Chinese calligraphy before class.你的两点看法a.In my opinion,learning Chinese calligraphy can hel

10、p you know more about Chinese culture.b.It can also help you enjoy the beauty of Chinese characters.step 3审题Dear Justin,April 10.I m writing to tell you that we will have our next class in the classroom of Class 12,Senior Three of our school,at 4:00p.m.Friday afternoon.The content of this class will

11、 be about Chinese Calligraphy.I hope you can search some information about Chinese calligraphy before class.In my opinion,learning Chinese calligraphy can help you know more about Chinese culture.It can also help you enjoy the beauty of Chinese characters.（71words）时间时间&地点地点step 4 step 3 连句成文审题 信息表述

12、step3 连句成文Dear Justin,April 10.I m writing to tell you that we will have our next class in the classroom of Class 12,Senior Three of our school,at 4:00p.m.Friday afternoon.The content of this class will be about Chinese Calligraphy.I hope you can search some information about Chinese calligraphy bef

13、ore class.In my opinion,learning Chinese calligraphy can help you know more about Chinese culture.It can also help you enjoy the beauty of Chinese characters.（71words）表述了全部内容。表述了全部内容。上课的内容step 4 step 3 连句成文 信息表述审题Dear Justin,April 10.I m writing to tell you that we will have our next class in the cl

14、assroom of Class 12,Senior Three of our school,at 4:00p.m.Friday afternoon.The content of this class will be about Chinese Calligraphy.I hope you can search some information about Chinese calligraphy before class.In my opinion,learning Chinese calligraphy can help you know more about Chinese culture

15、.It can also help you enjoy the beauty of Chinese characters.（71words）课前要做的准备审题step 4 step 3 连句成文 信息表述Dear Justin,April 10.I m writing to tell you that we will have our next class in the classroom of Class 12,Senior Three of our school,at 4:00p.m.Friday afternoon.The content of this class will be ab

16、out Chinese Calligraphy.I hope you can search some information about Chinese calligraphy before class.In my opinion,learning Chinese calligraphy can help you know more about Chinese culture.It can also help you enjoy the beauty of Chinese characters.（71words）我的两点看法审题step 4 step 3 连句成文 信息表述Dear Justi

17、n,April 10.I m writing to tell you that we will have our next class in the classroom of Class 12,Senior Three of our school,at 4:00p.m.Friday afternoon.The content of this class will be about Chinese Calligraphy.In order to have a better effect,I hope you can search some information about Chinese ca

18、lligraphy before class.In my opinion,learning Chinese calligraphy can help you know more about Chinese culture.It can also help you enjoy the beauty of Chinese characters.Im sure you will enjoy it.See you then!(85words)Transition words审题连句成文 信息表述 step4 加工美化审题连句成文 信息表述 step4 加工美化Dear Justin,April,10t

19、h Im just writing to tell you that our next class will be arranged in the English teachers office on the 4th floor of the teaching building from 5:00-6:00pm.Friday.This class will be focused on Chinese calligraphy.So you are hoped to find some background information about it beforehand.Through the l

20、esson,personally,you can not only know something about our traditional culture but appreciate the beauty of Chinese characters as well.Surely youll enjoy it.See you then.（83 words）Yours,Li HuaDear Justin,April,10th Im just writing to tell you that our next class will be arranged in the English teach

21、ers office on the 4th floor of the teaching building from 5:00-6:00pm.Friday.This class will be focused on Chinese calligraphy.So you are hoped to find some background information about it beforehand.Through the lesson,personally,you can not only know something about our traditional culture but appr

22、eciate the beauty of Chinese characters as well.Surely youll enjoy it.See you then.（83 words）Yours,Li HuaPossible Version“一粥一饭，当思来处不易；半丝半缕，恒念物力维艰。”习近平总书记一直提倡“厉行节约，反对浪费”的社会风尚。请以此为题，写一封“节约粮食，反对浪费”的倡议书。包括以下要点：1.粮食浪费随处可见；2.节约是传统美德；3.节约粮食的具体措施；注意：注意：1.1.词数词数8080左右；左右；2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参

23、考词汇：参考词汇：美德 virtue;节约 save;号召 call on More Practice 信 息 表 述1.粮食浪费随处可见；Food wasting is quite common can be seen everywhere nowadays.2.节约是传统美德；Food saving has been the traditional virtue of the Chinese poeple.3.节约粮食的具体措施；When we eat out,remember to order properly and try to eat up.Educate the teenager

24、s to form the habit of saving food.Dear friends,Nowadays food wasting is quite common and it happens everywhere as in restaurants,at school and even at home.As we know,food saving has been the traditional virtue of the Chinese poeple just as what general secretarty Xi jinping advocates.So Im here to

25、 call on everyone to pay much attention to food saving.Its time we took actions now.When we eat out next time,remember to order properly and try to eat up.Meanwhile,educate the teenagers to form the good habit of saving food.So,dont hesitate to join us.Small actions make a big difference.(100 words)

26、Possible Version 为了培养学生们爱劳动的意识，校学生会上周末组织了全体初三同学农场劳动。请根据以下提示为“StudentsDaily”写一篇报道。写作内容：注意：注意：1.1.词数词数8080左右；左右；2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：培养：培养：cultivatecultivate；果园果园 orchardorchard；包装：包装：packpack More Practice The students union of our school organized an interesting activity for

27、 the students of Grade Three last Saturday.We gathered at our school gate at 8:00 and took a bus to Xili Orchard.We began working when we got there immediately.Some climbed on the ladders to pick lichees.Some put them into baskets,packed and carried them onto the trucks.Up to 5:00 pm,we finished our

28、 work and picked nearly 500 baskets.Though feeling tired,we were quite pleased with our work.Through the activity,we realize that working can not only make us grow stronger but also cultivates our awareness of working,which I think is of great importance for us young generation.（98words）第一档：第一档：15-1

29、315-13分分语言准确无误，表达得体，行文流畅，要点齐全。语言准确无误，表达得体，行文流畅，要点齐全。第二档：第二档：12-1012-10分分内容较完整，表达较流畅，内容较完整，表达较流畅，意思较连贯，但有少意思较连贯，但有少量语法错误。量语法错误。第三档：第三档：9-79-7分分意思表达尚清楚，但有一些错误。意思表达尚清楚，但有一些错误。第四档：第四档：6-46-4分分部分意思表达尚清楚，但有较多错误。部分意思表达尚清楚，但有较多错误。第五档：第五档：3-03-0分分能写出与文章相关的词，但不能表达完整的意思。能写出与文章相关的词，但不能表达完整的意思。精选词块精选词块various fa

30、ntastic performances 各种精彩的表演各种精彩的表演hold a music festival 举办音乐节举办音乐节enrich someones life 丰富某人生活丰富某人生活 make a speech 发表演讲发表演讲 show up 露面露面add color and fun to.为为.增添色彩和乐增添色彩和乐趣趣精选句式精选句式时间、地点：我们学校将在时间、地点：我们学校将在.举办举办.活动活动。Our school will hold 我写信是想邀请你加入我们我写信是想邀请你加入我们 。I m writing to invite you to join us

31、.接下来是接下来是.，然后是，然后是.;.;Following is,after which 特别欢迎你特别欢迎你.You are particularly welcome 第一档：第一档：15-1315-13分分语言准确无误，表达得体，行文流畅，要点齐全。语言准确无误，表达得体，行文流畅，要点齐全。第二档：第二档：12-1012-10分分内容较完整，表达较流畅，内容较完整，表达较流畅，意思较连贯，但有少意思较连贯，但有少量语法错误。量语法错误。第三档：第三档：9-79-7分分意思表达尚清楚，但有一些错误。意思表达尚清楚，但有一些错误。第四档：第四档：6-46-4分分部分意思表达尚清楚，但有较

32、多错误。部分意思表达尚清楚，但有较多错误。第五档：第五档：3-03-0分分能写出与文章相关的词，但不能表达完整的意思。能写出与文章相关的词，但不能表达完整的意思。建议：建议：1 1）认真审题，明白要表达的信息；）认真审题，明白要表达的信息；2 2）哪些内容需要有所扩展发挥，尽量在一到两句之内；）哪些内容需要有所扩展发挥，尽量在一到两句之内；3 3）先口头表达，再过渡到笔头；）先口头表达，再过渡到笔头；4 4）考虑行文的规范性、逻辑性和美感，适当使用高级词汇和句型，加）考虑行文的规范性、逻辑性和美感，适当使用高级词汇和句型，加 上必要的过渡词语使文章顺畅；上必要的过渡词语使文章顺畅；5 5）养成写好后反复读的习惯，及时发现文中错误并加以纠正。）养成写好后反复读的习惯，及时发现文中错误并加以纠正。6 6）书写工整，保持卷面整洁。）书写工整，保持卷面整洁。12345