2022年人教版中考英语写作专题ppt课件.pptx

1、中考英语作文专题中考中考作文作文考查考查范围范围话题话题类型类型文章文章类型类型写作写作技巧技巧评分评分标准标准范文范文赏析赏析有话有话可说可说教教育育类类实践实践生活生活类类记记叙叙文文议议论论文文说说明明文文五五档档五大写作五大写作小技巧小技巧不同类不同类型文章型文章一、考查范围 根据新课标和中考说明，作文考查的范围基本上与学生日常生活、学习生活息息相关。做到有话可说。例如：Live a life without much pressure.How to improve English?美丽校园，健康生活 二、话题类型 1、教育类话题 如：如：How to improve English?

2、How to deal with the books and notebooks?(2019年陕西中考英语年陕西中考英语)2、实践生活类 如:暑假计划、周末旅行、走亲访友的经历等 （2018年陕西中考英语）3、热点话题 如：新型冠状病毒、环保 （2020年陕西中考英语)三、文章类型 1.记叙文记叙文:2018年陕西中考作文 2.说明文：说明文：3.议论文：议论文：2019、2017年陕西中考作文四、评分标准 第一档第一档（14-15分）分）符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完整，语言

3、无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完整，语言流畅。流畅。第二档第二档（10-13分）分）符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。第三档第三档（7-9分）分）基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，但表达疑似清顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，但表达疑

4、似清楚。楚。第四档第四档（4-6分）分）基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。第五档第五档（0-3分）分）能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。五、写作小技巧写作小技巧写作小技巧学生例句学生例句更改例句更改例句1.用两个词而不用一个用两个词而不用一个词。词。My family and I had a good trip

5、.My family and I had a good and relaxing trip.2.适当添加副词或者介适当添加副词或者介词短语。词短语。Students like chatting on the phone.Most students like chatting on the phone after school/in the free time.3.同义替换，避免重复。同义替换，避免重复。I like reading books.I love reading.I enjoy reading.4.使用关联词表示文章使用关联词表示文章的逻辑。的逻辑。I should talk wit

6、h my good friend,and I should listen to music.I fail in the math.I am upset.First,I can talk with my good friend.Second,I can listen to music to relax myself.I fail in math so I am upset.5.学会使用简单的句子，学会使用简单的句子，避免过度重复。避免过度重复。We should improve pronunciation as well by listening to the conversation in E

7、nglish movies.We should improve pronunciation by listening to the conversation from English movies.学生：老师，我还是不会写作文怎么办啊？1记叙文2议论文记叙文写前“4W+1H”:what,who,where,when,how人称、时态subject,tense头脑风暴:brainstorming列提纲:组织、提取信息写中组织信息添加内容选取信息自我检查写后检查内容（主要信息）检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构等审题书写检查假如你是李华，上周你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容，写一篇

8、短文。(2018年陕西中考作文)活动活动上午上午讲故事，唱歌讲故事，唱歌,中午中午煮面煮面(cook noodles),休息休息(have a seat),下午下午玩游戏，玩游戏，看动画片看动画片(watch cartoons),感受感受 要求：1.参考表格内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，疑似连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等）4.词数：不少于70个词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home

9、._whowhenwhatwhere记叙文whatlooked after my sister Nanawho my sister Nana and I whenlast weekwhereat homeStep 1写前审题记叙文whatlooked after my sister Nanawho my sister Nana and I whenlast weekwhereat homeStep 2写前第一人称一般过去时审题记叙文whatlooked after my sister Nanawho my sister Nana and I whenlast weekwhereat homeS

10、tep 3写前第一人称一般过去时read bookshappy,tiredclean the rooma sense of responsibility审题写前上午上午/中午中午/下午下午in the morning/afternoon/evening讲故事、唱歌讲故事、唱歌told stories,sang songs煮面、休息煮面、休息玩游戏、看动画片玩游戏、看动画片cooked noodles,had a rest played games,watched cartoonsbrainstormingread books,cleaned the roomfeelinghappy,tired

11、,a sense of responsibilityStep 4搜集、提取信息 Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning,I told stories to my sister.We sang songs.In the afternoon,I cooked noodles for my sister.I had a rest.In the evening,We played games and watched cartoon

12、s.I was very tired but very happy.写中组织信息Step 1draftPOINT9技巧1和技巧2添加信息和技巧2 Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning,I told_stories to my sister._ We sang songs_.In the afternoon,I cooked noodles for her._ _ _We had a rest_.In the evenin

13、g,We played games,_,and watched cartoons_ I was very tired but really happy,写中many interesting and funnyAfter thattogetherShe said the noodles were very delicious,so I felt very happy.After a while,for about an houruntil my parents came back home.read books 添加信息（写作技巧）Step 2Because I could look after

14、 my little sister by myself andI had a sense of resposibility.brainstorming和添加信息技巧3，添加信息 Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning,I told many interesting and funny stories to my sister.After that we sang songs,together.In the afternoo

15、n,I cooked noodles.She said the noodles were very delicious,so I felt very happy.After a while,we had a rest for about an hour.In the afternoon,we played games,read books and watched cartoons until my parents came back.I was very tired but really happy,because I could look after my little sister and

16、 I had a sense of responsibilty.写后 检查主要内容 检查词数 检查语法 拼写、标点、结构Step3Self-check最终呈现 Last Sunday,my parents were not at home,so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.In the morning,I told many interesting and funny stories to my sister.After that we sang songs,together.In the afternoon,I cooke

17、d noodles.She said the noodles were very delicious,so I felt very happy.After a while,we had a rest for about an hour.In the afternoon,we played games,read books and watched cartoons until my parents came back.I was very tired but really happy,because I could look after my little sister by myself an

18、d I had a sense of responsibility.八年级八年级上册的上册的难度难度POINT15议论文写前“2W+1H”:what,why,how(人称、时态subject,tense)头脑风暴:brainstorming列提纲:搜集、提取信息写中组织信息添加内容选取信息自我检查写后检查内容（主要信息）检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构等审题书写检查议论文WhatWhyHow(Advice)简单的解释现象分析原因（2-3条）给出意见或建议（2-3条）写前Step 1审题议论文WhatWhyHow（Advice)简单的解释现象分析原因（2-3条）给出意见或建议（2-3条）写前提取

19、topic sentence1.教育类话题可从学生、家长、教师、学校角度出发2.政府角度依据题目而定Step 2审题enough ideasexamples议论文WhatWhyHowAdvice简单的解释现象分析原因（2-3条）给出意见或建议（2-3条）写前Step 3添加、提取信息添加、提取信息审题假如你是李华，你们学校要开展主题为假如你是李华，你们学校要开展主题为“live a life without much live a life without much pressure”pressure”的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要点提示，准备一篇英语演的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要点提示，准备一

20、篇英语演讲稿。讲稿。提示：提示：1.1.中学生常面临的压力有哪些？中学生常面临的压力有哪些？2.2.你的压力是什么？你的压力是什么？3.3.你是如何战胜你的压力的。你是如何战胜你的压力的。要求：要求：1.1.参考提示语，可适当发挥参考提示语，可适当发挥；2.2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.3.文中不得出现真实人名和地名；文中不得出现真实人名和地名；4.4.不少于不少于7070词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）Live a life without much pressure Good morning,ever

21、yone.Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure._ _ I hope we can live a happy life without much pressure.WhatWhatHow第一人称一般现在时议论文WhatWhyHowAdvice写前Nearly person in the world live a life without some pressure.Step 1students have too much homework;dont have enough time to sleep;.

22、talk with others;ask teachers for help;lower pressure by listening to music;.审题should talk with others;ask teachers for help;lower pressure by.小对象：自己议论文WhatWhyHowAdvice写前Nearly peson in the world live a life without some pressure.根据提示语提取topic sentence举例解释支持论据Step 2students have too much homework;don

23、t have enough time to sleep;.大对象：学生群体学生老师家长审题topic sentenceMany students have different pressures in a daily life 议论文WhatGood morning,everyone!Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure.Whydont have enough time to sleep;too much homework to do;be not good at math;HowI can talk

24、with parents;We should learn to lower pressure by listening to music;Wed better ask teachers for help.写前Step 3搜集信息 We can/should/could.We are supposed to.Wed better.Why dont.Lets.What/How about doing.Many students have different pressures in a daily life 大对象：学生群体小对象：自己详略得当议论文写中Live a life without mu

25、ch pressure I hope we can live a happy life without much pressure.组织信息Good morning,everyone!Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure.WhatFor example,some of students dont have enough time to sleep.Other students think that they have too much homework to do.As for me,I am not

26、good at math.In order to deal with this problem,I talk to my parents.We can lower pressure by listening to music.We can ask our teachers for help.What+WhyHowStep 1draftMany students have different pressures in a daily life.What+topic sentence议论文写中 添加信息（写作技巧）Good morning,everyone!Nearly every person

27、in the world lives a life with some pressure.WhatFor example,some of students dont have enough time to sleep.Other students think it takes 4 hours to fininsh it.It is so tiring.As for me,I am not good at math.What+WhyStep 2Many students have different pressures in a daily life.topic sentencethemThey

28、 have to finish homework on time.具体化具体化I fail in math again and again.(They have to spend at least 4 hours finishing homework after school.)同义句同义句具体化具体化Live a life without much pressure内容、结构、语法、拼写、标点Most students think the biggest pressure comes from schoolwork.Why部分的的topic sentenceIn order to deal

29、with this problem,I talk to my parents.I can lower pressure by listening to music.I can ask our teachers for help.I hope we can live a happy life without much pressure.How议论文添加信息(写作技巧)写中Step 2(I tell them I am under too much pressure,I hope they can support and understand me.)(My teacher encourages

30、me a lot and her words help me build up confidence.)具体化具体化具体化具体化内容、结构、语法、拼写、标点Live a life without much pressure Good morning,everyone!Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure.Many students have different pressures in a daily life.Most students think that the biggest pressure

31、come from schoolwork.For example,some of them dont have enough time to sleep,because they have to finish homework on time.Other students think it takes them at least 4 hours after school.It is so tiring.As for me,I am not good at math and I fail in math again and again.In order to deal with this pro

32、blem,I talk to my parents.I hope they can support and understand me.I also ask my teacher for help.She encourages me a lot and her words help me build up confidence.议论文写中Step 3写作技巧2写作技巧4写作技巧3写作技巧1选取信息(写作技巧)议论文写后Live a life without much pressure Good morning,everyone!Nearly every person in the world

33、lives a life with some pressure.Many students have different pressures in a daily life.Most students think that the biggest pressure comes from scoolwork.For example,some of them dont have enough time to sleep,because they have to finish homework on time.Other students think it takes them at least 4

34、 hours after school.It is so tiring.As for me,I am not good at math and I fail in math again and again.In order to deal with this problem,I talk to my parents.I hope they can support and understand me.I also ask my teacher for help.She encourages me a lot and her words help me build up confidence.St

35、ep 4回答第一个问题：中学生常面临的问题(What)回答第二个问题：你的压力是什么？(What+Why)回答第三个问题：如何战胜压力？(How)主要内容 检查词数 检查语法 拼写、标点、结构议论文最终呈现Live a life without much pressure Good morning,everyone!Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure.Many students have different pressures in a daily life.Most students think t

36、hey that the biggest pressure comes form schoolwork.For example,some of them dont have enough time to sleep,because they have to finish homework on time.Other students think it takes them at least 4 hours after school.It is so tiring.As for me,I am not good at math and I fail in math again and again

37、.In order to deal with this problem,I talk to my parents.I hope they can support and understand me.I also ask my teacher for help.She encourages me a lot and her words help me build up confidence.八年级八年级的难度的难度POINT151记叙文2说明文说明文写前“2W”:what,why,人称、时态subject,tense头脑风暴:brainstorming列提纲:搜集、提取信息写中组织信息添加内容选

38、取信息（根据内容而定）自我检查写后检查内容（主要信息）检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构等审题书写检查说明文1.背景信息2.Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2.Why do you like it?How 根据提示信息扩展内容Other.写前审题即将毕业的你，将如何处置初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢？假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英文报纸写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。(2019年陕西省中考英语作文)put into different kindsgivetohave a book sale要求:1.参考提示语，可适当发挥；2.语

39、句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等）4.词数:不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）Dear Editor,My name is Li Hua.Im going to graduate soon.Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.I hope文章的背景信息人称:I时态：一般将来时 说明文1.背景信息2.Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2.Why do you like it?How 根

40、据提示信息扩展内容Other.写前Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacationput into different kindsgivetohave a book saleStep 1审题 说明文1.背景信息2.Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2.Why do you like it?How 根据提示信息扩展内容Other写前Id like

41、 to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacationput into different kindsgivetohave a book sale.Step 2第一人称一般将来时审题 说明文1.背景信息2.Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2.Why do you like it?How 根据提示信息扩展内容Other写前Id like to share some

42、 ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacationput into different kindsgivetohave a book sale1.keep the notebooks for myself2.bring me a lot of sweet memoriesStep 3第一人称一般将来时审题写前 搜集、提取信息1.put books into different kinds2.give my textbooks

43、to younger sisters3.have a book sale4.keep the notebooks for myself5.bring me a lot of sweet memories6.Firstly,Secondly,Next,FinallyStep 4写前依据依据呈现句子呈现句子将第一条提示语转化为第一条理由Firstly,I will put books into different kinds.将第二条提示语转化为第二条理由Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to younger sisters.根据上文添加信息They

44、 can study at home during the comingsummer vacation.将第三条提示语转化为第三条理由Thirdly,I have a book sale.Step 5根据上文添加信息Children can buy them at low prices.添加信息 I want to keep the notebooks for myself.Because they bring me a lot of sweet memories.添加信息The used paper will be taken to the waste center.搜集、提取信息写中Ste

45、p 1 First of all,I will put all my books into different kinds.Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters.They can study at home during the coming summer vacation.Thirdly,I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.I decide to keep the noteb

46、ooks for myself.They bring me lots of sweet memories.Finally,the used paper will be taken to the waste center.These are my ideas.I hope they can help.Yours,Li Hua组织信息draftWhats moreIn this way写中 First of all,I will put all my books into different kinds.Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to my

47、younger sisters.They can study at home during the coming summer vacation.Thirdly,I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.I decide to keep the notebooks for myself.They bring me lots of sweet memories.Finally,the used paper will be taken to the waste center

48、.These are my ideas.I hope they can help.Yours,Li HuaStep 2添加信息（写作小技巧）Besides写作小技巧4写作小技巧2 主要内容 检查词数 检查语法 拼写、标点、结构写后Step 3 First of all,I will put all my books into different kinds.Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters.In the way,they can study at home during the coming summe

49、r vacation.Besides,I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.Whats more,I decide to keep the notebooks for myself.They bring me lots of sweet memories.Finally,the used paper will be taken to the waste center.These are my ideas.I hope they can help.Yours,Li H

50、ua First of all,I will put all my books into different kinds.Secondly,I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters.In the way,they can study at home during the coming summer vacation.Besides,I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.Whats more,I dec