写作技巧点拨系列(八).ppt

1、写作技巧点拨系列(八)揣摩图画内涵,从容掌控图画作文【典例导练【典例导练】(2013江苏高考江苏高考)请根据请根据你对右面两幅画的理解你对右面两幅画的理解,以以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题为题,用英语写一篇用英语写一篇作文。作文。你的作文应包括以下内容你的作文应包括以下内容:1.简要描述两幅图的内容简要描述两幅图的内容;2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。举例说明两幅图对你的启示。【写作指导【写作指导】.常用句式常用句式 (1)What is illustrated/reflected in

2、the picture is that.(2)What the picture describes vividly is a kind of common phenomenon that.(3)The picture vividly reflects a phenomenon where our society is in bad need of.(4)Seeing the picture,I cant help thinking how ridiculous.is.However,what is reflected in the picture is not a rare phenomeno

3、n in modern society.(5)There are at least two good reasons accounting for.(6)There may be three factors which contribute to/account for/are responsible for this phenomenon.(7)The second reason is that.(8)Faced with phenomenon/these problems,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with.

4、(9)It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon/these problems.(10)Only in this way can we.(11)First,.Second,.Third,.(12)The social problem has aroused great concern among people.(13)We should raise peoples awareness of.黄金模板黄金模板 第一段第一段:描述图画描述图画 As is vividly shown in the pi

5、cture,图画的内容图画的内容.The picture tells us that图片大致反映的意思图片大致反映的意思.第二段第二段:解释、说明和分析图片解释、说明和分析图片 The implied meaning of the picture should be taken into account seriously.First/To begin with,揭示涵义揭示涵义/原因原因/结果结果1,Second/Whats more,揭示涵义揭示涵义/原因原因/结果结果2.Last but not least/Finally,揭示涵义揭示涵义/原因原因/结果结果3(如果有的话如果有的话).

6、And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon)has aroused the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.第三段第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法 In my view/point of view(or As for me),we should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems shown in the pictu

7、re.First,we should具体的措施具体的措施1.And then we have to/must具体的措施具体的措施2.Only in these ways can we solve the problem of具体的问题具体的问题.【审题谋篇【审题谋篇】信息全而不漏信息全而不漏【佳句锤炼【佳句锤炼】词句精而高级词句精而高级1.图画中的信息是图画中的信息是“百说不如一干百说不如一干”。(一般表达一般表达)The message in the pictures is“Actions speak louder than words.”(主语从句和同位语从句主语从句和同位语从句)_ is

8、 the message _What the pictures describevividly/conveythat“Actions speak louder thanwords.”2.我们的地球正受到严重的破坏。我们该怎么做我们的地球正受到严重的破坏。我们该怎么做,是说空话还是说空话还是采取切实可行的措施呢是采取切实可行的措施呢?(一般表达一般表达)Our earth is suffering severe damage.What should we do,just have empty talk or take practical measures?(不定式作状语不定式作状语+高级词汇高级

9、词汇+定语从句定语从句)Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just _or take practical measures _ _ the earth _?pay lip servicetoprotectwhich is suffering severe damage3.为了改善环境为了改善环境,我们应该立即采取措施我们应该立即采取措施,如停止砍伐树木。如停止砍伐树木。(一般表达一般表达)To improve the environment,we should take immediate action.We should stop

10、cutting down trees.(过去分词作状语过去分词作状语)_,we should take immediate measures,such as stopping cutting down trees,to better the environment.Faced with phenomenon/the problem4.我们应该把书和体育用品捐给需要的儿童我们应该把书和体育用品捐给需要的儿童,而不是空喊口而不是空喊口号。号。(一般表达一般表达)We should donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should

11、nt shout empty slogans.(it作形式主语作形式主语+定语从句定语从句)Instead of shouting empty slogans,_ _donate books and sports goods to children _.itis more meaningful towho need them/needing them5.我们应该严格自觉遵守交通规则我们应该严格自觉遵守交通规则,红灯停红灯停,而不是抱怨交通而不是抱怨交通拥堵。拥堵。(一般表达一般表达)We should strictly and voluntarily obey traffic rules.We

12、 should stop at the red light.We shouldnt complain about traffic jams.(虚拟语气虚拟语气+倒装倒装)_ strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules and _ just complain about traffic jams.It is high time that we shouldunder no circumstancesshould we【连句成篇【连句成篇】过渡巧而自然过渡巧而自然Actions Speak Louder than Words People celeb

13、rate Earth Day differently.In Picture1,a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps,but in vain,while Picture2shows a couple planting trees happily.The message conveyed here is clear:“Actions speak louder than words.”Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just pay

14、 lip service or take practical measures to protect it?The answer is definitely the latter.Immediate action should be taken,like stopping cutting down trees,to better the environment.Actions are important in other fields,too.Instead of shouting empty slogans,it is more meaningful to donate books and

15、sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules,stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference.【命题专家如是说【命题专家如是说】图画类作文解题关键图画类作文解题关键 图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方

16、式呈现内容要点,其其难点在于如何将图画语言转化为逻辑语言。只有读懂图画所难点在于如何将图画语言转化为逻辑语言。只有读懂图画所蕴含的深刻道理蕴含的深刻道理,才能有的放矢。需注意以下几点才能有的放矢。需注意以下几点:1.仔细观察图画。图画中的每一个要素对表达图画的寓意都仔细观察图画。图画中的每一个要素对表达图画的寓意都有提示作用有提示作用,注意图画中每一个要素提供的信息。注意图画中每一个要素提供的信息。2.品味图画文字。图画配有的语言文字言简意赅品味图画文字。图画配有的语言文字言简意赅,认真思考这认真思考这些文字所隐含的观点些文字所隐含的观点,使之成为弄清图画寓意的钥匙。使之成为弄清图画寓意的钥匙

17、。3.挖掘深刻内涵。图画背后隐藏的深刻寓意才是图画要揭示挖掘深刻内涵。图画背后隐藏的深刻寓意才是图画要揭示的真正主题。挖掘出图画的寓意是写作的关键。的真正主题。挖掘出图画的寓意是写作的关键。4.适度联想发挥。图画作文一般要求做适度的联想发挥适度联想发挥。图画作文一般要求做适度的联想发挥,以使以使上下文更好地衔接。但一定要根据图画做到合情合理。上下文更好地衔接。但一定要根据图画做到合情合理。5.描写虚实结合。对图画中的内容分清主次描写虚实结合。对图画中的内容分清主次,详略得当。详略得当。6.做好衔接过渡。在适度发挥的前提下做好衔接过渡。在适度发挥的前提下,注意连词的使用注意连词的使用,达达到浑然一体的效果。到浑然一体的效果。