专题讲座写作第十一讲应用文（一）-书信、电子邮件.ppt

1、第十一讲应用文（一）书信、书信、电子邮电子邮件件专题讲 座 写作由实例说起课下多练笔写作三步曲题目要求题目要求(2011全国卷全国卷)假定你是李华，你所喜爱的假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：编写封信，内容主要包括：1说明你是该报的忠实读者说明你是该报的忠实读者2赞赏该报优点：赞赏该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事介绍名人成功故事3提出建议：提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章刊登指导英语学习的文章注意：注意：1词数词数100左

2、右，开头语已为你写好；左右，开头语已为你写好；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear EditorinChief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!_Sincerely yours,Li Hua技法指导技法指导 书信、电子邮件的写作是高考中出现频率最高的一种书信、电子邮件的写作是高考中出现频率最高的一种题型。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、题型。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投

3、诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。不论哪种形式，信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。不论哪种形式，一般都有固定的写作模式，只要记住其特定的写作模板，并一般都有固定的写作模式，只要记住其特定的写作模板，并能在具体的写作中加以融会贯通，一定能让你的作文水平快能在具体的写作中加以融会贯通，一定能让你的作文水平快速提高，从而在考场上写出档次较高的文章。下面介绍一下速提高，从而在考场上写出档次较高的文章。下面介绍一下几种常考书信的模板，供大家写作时借鉴。几种常考书信的模板，供大家写作时借鉴。1投诉信投诉信 Dear _，My name is/I am _.I am w

4、riting to you for _.Firstly,_.Secondly,_.Thirdly,_.Therefore,I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.To be honest/Honestly speaking,_.Therefore,I do require(hope)_.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Ming2建议信建议信 Dear _，I am _.Your collection of suggestio

5、n on _ is _.As is known,_.My suggestions are _：First,_.(People can _.)Second,(to make economic profits,)_.Third,_.(As many of them _.)I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details(Or：Your kind consideration of my suggestions will

6、be highly appreciated)Good luck with your _(祝愿祝愿)Yours sincerely,Li Ming3求职信求职信 Dear Sir or Madam,I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in _(报纸名称报纸名称)of _(广告广告发布时间发布时间)I am _ from _.As a/an _，I have been _.Besides,I won _ in _.If you consider me appropriate for the j

7、ob,please call me at _.I will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application,and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely,Li Ming4邀请信邀请信Dear _，How is everything with you?I am writing to tell you that there will be a _(内容内容)at/in _(地点地

8、点)on _(时间时间)We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at _(具体时间具体时间).This will be followed by a _(进一步的安排进一步的安排)At around _(时间时间)，_(另一个安排另一个安排)Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not,will you?I really hope you can make it.My phone number is _.Looking forward to

9、 _.Yours sincerely,Li Ming5感谢信感谢信 Dear _，I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _(感谢的原因感谢的原因)If it had not been for your assistance in _(对方给对方给你的具体帮助你的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been _(没没有对方帮助的后果有对方帮助的后果)Everyone agrees that it was you who _(给出给出细节细节)Again,I would like to express my war

10、m thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Ming6道歉信道歉信 Dear _，I am truly sorry that _(道歉的原因道歉的原因)The reason is that _(介绍原因介绍原因).Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely,Li Ming第一步构建框架，清晰行文第一步构建框

11、架，清晰行文谋篇布局谋篇布局黄金模板黄金模板Dear EditorinChief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!Im _(介绍自己介绍自己).I like it very much for_(两个理由两个理由).First,it covers _(优势优势之一之一)so that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn _(了解的事情了解的事情)during the week._(优势之二优势之二)are the success stories of worldfamous

12、 people which help me _(对自己的帮助对自己的帮助).As a young student,I suggest _(建议建议)to guide us in our English learning,and I hope _(希望希望)Sincerely yours,Li Hua第二步打造亮句，增色文章第二步打造亮句，增色文章1首先，它兼顾国内外新闻，因此，我随便翻几页就可以首先，它兼顾国内外新闻，因此，我随便翻几页就可以了解到本周发生的重要事件。了解到本周发生的重要事件。Firstly,there are both national and international n

13、ews on it.So when I turn the pages simply,I can know all important things happened during the week.First,it covers both national and international news so that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.2作为一名年轻的学生，我建议作为一名年轻的学生，我建议Global Mirror刊登一些

14、指刊登一些指导英语学习的文章。导英语学习的文章。As a young student,I make a suggestion that Global Mirror publish some articles that can guide us in our English learning.As a young student,I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning.第三步串句成文，保证流畅第三步串句成文，保证流畅Dear EditorinChief,Congratulati

15、ons on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!Im a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.First,it covers both national and international news so that,by simply turningthe pages,I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.Equal

16、ly attractive are the success stories of worldfamous people,which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.As a young student,I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning,and I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincere

17、ly yours,Li Hua(2011山东高考山东高考)假设你是李华，你的美国朋友假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：写一封电子邮件：1询问询问Tom的生活和学习情况；的生活和学习情况；2谈谈你的困难并请谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；帮忙；3告诉告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。你打算赛后去看他。注意：注意：1.词

18、数：词数：120150；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_参考范文：参考范文：Dear Tom,How time flies!It has been a month since you came to Beijing.How is everything going on with your life and study now?What excited me most is that I will go to Beijing to attend an English speech contest to be held in summer holiday in Ju

19、ly for middle school students.But unfortunately,Im encountering many difficulties in collecting materials needed and I also have problems in the application of the language.I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties.I really appreciate it if you could help me.Here is good news for you.Ive decided to go to see you after the English speech contest.I am looking forward to seeing you.Best wishes to you and your parents!YoursLi Hua