作文：高三英语新高考复习课件：读后续写如何写记叙文-.ppt

1、How to complete a narrative article(记叙文记叙文)英语科考试说明英语科考试说明读后续写：读后续写：提供一篇提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的记叙文记叙文，偶有少，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。情节和结构完整的短文。After class,you will be abl

2、e toAfter class,you will be able to Read for the main idea/plot Write the end according to the given information Polish your writingReadingReadingWhats the style of the passage?A.Narration 记叙文记叙文 B.Exposition 说明文说明文 C.Argumentation 议论文议论文 Who?When?Where?What?Why?How?ReadingReadingStyle-Narration 记叙文

3、记叙文Basic forms of the 6 questionsBasic forms of the 6 questionsWho is the main character?When did the story happen?Where did the story happen?What happened in the story?Why was the matter caused?How was the matter solved/ended?Who?When?Where?What?Why?How?Arthurone day;when he was on the way to workP

4、ark Avenue,near the First National BankA bank robbery;Arthur helped a young man.but.was mistaken for the bank thief.the suitcase in his handMain IdeaMain Idea One day,at Park Avenue,Arthur helped a young man carry a _when he was on the way to work.Suddenly,he heard the sound of an alarm and found th

5、at a _ which was happening in the bank.When a young woman looked at his suitcase,he thought he might be _for the bank thief.suitcasemistakenrobbery第二节：读后续写（满分第二节：读后续写（满分25分）分）阅读下面短文，根据所给阅读下面短文，根据所给情节情节进行续写，使之构成一进行续写，使之构成一个个完整完整的故事。的故事。注意：注意：所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右；左右；应使用应使用5个以上个以上短文中标有短文中标有下划线的关键词

6、语下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语开头语已为你写好；已为你写好；续写完成后，请用续写完成后，请用下划线标出下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。你所使用的关键词语。How to choose the underlined key words in your writing?How to make full use of the given sentences and the plot?How to make the story coherent and logical?若词数少于若词数少于130，从总分中扣去，从总分中扣去2分。分。The underlined

7、key words:Park Avenue The young man suitcase in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thiefTip1:The key words that respectively stand for the most important information,the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing.Given-New Strate

8、gyParagraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.Tip2:Focus on the given sentence of paragraph2 first.And some information in it must be mentioned in paragraph 1.Tip3.Use the key nouns in the

9、 given sentences to infer more information.Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station.In Paragraph1,Arthur might have said something to the taxi driver.For example,“Sir,please take me to the police station quickly.I have s

10、omething important to report to the policeman.”What will Arthur do in the police station?In Paragraph2,there may be a conversation between Arthur and the policeman.Who else may go to the police station?(a surprising end)Tip4.Write proper conversations between the related characters in each paragraph

11、.Key Words:Park Avenue The young man suitcase in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thiefParagraph1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Two characters：Arthur and the young manArthur might realize that the young man wa

12、s the bank thief.Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station.The young man wanted to get his suitcase back.There may be some money or something else in the suitcase.The young man may(not)be the bank thief.Paragraph2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.Para 1&2Tip5.Use th

13、e characters and their actions to infer more information.Have a try!Have a try!Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”_Arthur might realize that the young man was the bank thief.Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station.Arthur might have said som

14、ething to the taxi driver.For example,“Sir,please take me to the police station quickly.I have something important to report to the policeman.”coherent,correct,logical,reasonable,rich in vocabulary and sentence patternUnderline the key wordsPolish your writingParagraph 1:As he was running,Arthur hea

15、rd the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Arthur realized that the young man was the bank thief.He continued running,stopped a taxi and got into it.He said to the taxi driver,“Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible.I have a robbery to report to the policeman.”Then the taxi went away.

16、Which kind is more suitable?-therefore,however,in addition/besides,whats more/furthermore,on the contrary,on the other hand.-unfortunately,suddenly(all of a sudden),to his joy,worried about.,with the help of.add some detailsUse different structures coherence,content,language,key wordsUse transitiona

17、l words (衔接词衔接词)Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Arthur realized that the young man was the bank thief.He continued running,stopped a taxi and got into it.He said to the taxi driver,“Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible.I have a robb

18、ery to report to the policeman.”Then the taxi went away.add some details Use different structures Use transitional words“Give my suitcase back to me!”Hearing this,Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief.So he continued running until he stopped a taxi.Then he quickly got int

19、o it and sat in the back seat.Out of breath/breathlessly,Arthur said to the taxi driver,“.”The moment the taxi driver got the request,he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.like an arrow/straight to the police station.Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shout

20、ing behind,“Stop,stop!”“Give my suitcase back to me!”Hearing this,Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief.So he continued running until he stopped a taxi.Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat.Out of breath,Arthur said to the taxi driver,“Please go to the Poli

21、ce Station as soon as possible.I have a robbery to report to the policeman.”The moment the taxi driver got the request,he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.add some detailsUse different structures Proper transitionHave a try!Have a try!Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of t

22、he Police Station and Arthur_In Paragraph2,there may be a conversation between Arthur and the policeman.The young man wanted to get his suitcase back.There may be some money or something else in the suitcase.The young man may(not)be the bank thief.coherent,correct,logical,reasonable,rich in vocabula

23、ry and sentence patternUnderline the key wordsWhat kind of ending would you prefer for this story?surprising and interestingA funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.Someone or something that is funny is amusing and likely to make you smile or laughTip4.Sometimes,the ge

24、neral key word can guide us to imagine reasonably.Read Ask 6 basic questions (who?When?Where?What?Why?How?)3.Get the main idea4.Infer the ending (the plot,the underlined words,the given two sentences)Begin to write (language requirements-structure,style,vocabulary)6.Polish your writing7.Handwriting

25、(neat and clear)Steps to complete a story激励学生学习的名言格言激励学生学习的名言格言220、每一个成功者都有一个开始。勇于开始，才能找到成功的路。221、世界会向那些有目标和远见的人让路（冯两努香港著名推销商）222、绊脚石乃是进身之阶。223、销售世界上第一号的产品不是汽车，而是自己。在你成功地把自己推销给别人之前，你必须百分之百的把自己推销给自己。224、即使爬到最高的山上，一次也只能脚踏实地地迈一步。225、积极思考造成积极人生，消极思考造成消极人生。226、人之所以有一张嘴，而有两只耳朵，原因是听的要比说的多一倍。227、别想一下造出大海，必须

26、先由小河川开始。228、有事者，事竟成；破釜沉舟，百二秦关终归楚；苦心人，天不负；卧薪尝胆，三千越甲可吞吴。229、以诚感人者，人亦诚而应。230、积极的人在每一次忧患中都看到一个机会，而消极的人则在每个机会都看到某种忧患。231、出门走好路，出口说好话，出手做好事。232、旁观者的姓名永远爬不到比赛的计分板上。233、怠惰是贫穷的制造厂。234、莫找借口失败，只找理由成功。（不为失败找理由，要为成功找方法）235、如果我们想要更多的玫瑰花，就必须种植更多的玫瑰树。236、伟人之所以伟大，是因为他与别人共处逆境时，别人失去了信心，他却下决心实现自己的目标。237、世上没有绝望的处境，只有对处境

27、绝望的人。238、回避现实的人，未来将更不理想。239、当你感到悲哀痛苦时，最好是去学些什么东西。学习会使你永远立于不败之地。240、伟人所达到并保持着的高处，并不是一飞就到的，而是他们在同伴们都睡着的时候，一步步艰辛地向上爬241、世界上那些最容易的事情中，拖延时间最不费力。242、坚韧是成功的一大要素，只要在门上敲得够久、够大声，终会把人唤醒的。243、人之所以能，是相信能。244、没有口水与汗水，就没有成功的泪水。245、一个有信念者所开发出的力量，大于99个只有兴趣者。246、环境不会改变，解决之道在于改变自己。247、两粒种子，一片森林。248、每一发奋努力的背后，必有加倍的赏赐。249、如果你希望成功，以恒心为良友，以经验为参谋，以小心为兄弟，以希望为哨兵。250、大多数人想要改造这个世界，但却罕有人想改造自己。