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1、Basic Writing-Character introduction Just guess the manDescribed in the following sentencesu Born into a poor farmers family in 1931 and graduate from the Southwest Agriculture University in 1953,a famous scientist,began his teaching career at an agriculture school in Anjiang,Hunan Province.u Coming

2、 up with an idea for hybrid rice in the 1960s,he began to devoted himself to the research of a better rice breed.Page 4u In 1973,working with others,he was able to develope a type of hybrid rice species which had great advantages.uThe next year their research made a breakthrough(突破突破)in seeding.They

3、 successfully developed hybrid rice,putting China in the lead worldwide in rice production,for which he was named the Father of Hybrid Rice.Yuan Longping(袁隆平袁隆平)n Born into a poor farmers family in 1931 and graduate from the Southwest Agriculture Institute in 1953,Yuan,a famous scientist,began his t

4、eaching career at an agriculture school in Anjiang,Hunan Province.分词结构分词结构 同位语同位语身份与身份与生平生平尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺 Coming up with an idea for hybridrice in the 1960s,he began to devoted himself to the research of a better rice breed.In 1973,working with others,he was able to cul

5、tivate(培养培养)a type of hybrid rice species which had great advantages.经历经历省略句省略句定语从句定语从句注意尽量用非谓语动词注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼使文章精炼尽量用复合句尽量用复合句,倒装倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章非限定定语从句等，润色文章The next year their research made a breakthrough in seeding.They successfully developed hybrid rice,putting China in the lead worldwide in

6、 rice production,for which he was named the Father of Hybrid Rice.评价评价注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组非限定性定语从句V-ing 作伴随状语1.她她1901年年12月月23日生于一个教师家庭，日生于一个教师家庭，1983年年4月月22日因病于北京逝世。日因病于北京逝世。(due to)She was born into a teachers family on December 23,1901 and died due to disease in Beijing on April 22

7、,1983.Born into a teachers family on December 23,1901,she passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 22,1983.2.当当她5岁时，母亲因癌症去世，使得她梦想成为一名医生。When she was 5 years old,her mother died of cancer,which made her dream of becoming a doctor.3.19211929年于协和医学堂学习并获得博士学位，之后到英国继续深造，在国外游学期间同时撰写医学方面的文章和书籍。(furth

8、er education)Between 1921and 1929,she studied in Union Medical College and received her doctors degree and then went to England for further education.During her travelling abroad time,she studied as well as wrote books and articles.Page 124.回国后，致力于医治妇女儿童疾病，帮助了很多贫穷的乡下妇女.Returning to motherland,she de

9、voted to helping the women and children free of diseases,especially many poor women in tne countryside.5.她确保平安接生的孩子有一万多却选择一生未婚，是一位大慈大爱的女性.（deliever）She made sure that about 10,000babies were safely delivered andchose not to have a family of her own.she is a woman who shows great kindness to everyone

10、.Page 146.在中国，被人们看做是一个医生女英雄.(consider.as.)She is considered as a heroine doctor in China.林巧稚是我国著名的妇产科医生。请根据下文提示，林巧稚是我国著名的妇产科医生。请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下林巧稚女士。用英文写一篇短文介绍一下林巧稚女士。生平生平1901年年12月月23日生于一个教师家庭，日生于一个教师家庭，1983年年4月月22日因日因病于北京逝世。病于北京逝世。经历经历1、5岁时，母亲因癌症去世，使得她梦想成为一名医生。岁时，母亲因癌症去世，使得她梦想成为一名医生。2、19211929年

11、于协和医学堂学习并获得博士学位，年于协和医学堂学习并获得博士学位，之后到英国继续深造，在国外游学期间同时撰写医学方之后到英国继续深造，在国外游学期间同时撰写医学方面的文章和书籍。面的文章和书籍。3、回国后，致力于医治妇女儿童疾病，帮助了很多贫穷、回国后，致力于医治妇女儿童疾病，帮助了很多贫穷的乡下妇女。的乡下妇女。评价评价1、一生未婚，可接生的孩子却有一万多，是中国历史上、一生未婚，可接生的孩子却有一万多，是中国历史上一位大慈大爱的女性。一位大慈大爱的女性。2、在中国，被人们看做是一个医生女英雄。、在中国，被人们看做是一个医生女英雄。How How dodoyouyoudodothe the

12、Basic Basic WritingWriting?The suggested steps:The suggested steps:1.审题审题:确定文体、人称和时态确定文体、人称和时态 2.整合信息整合信息 3.翻译句子：考虑语法结构翻译句子：考虑语法结构 4.连句成篇连句成篇 5.检查检查林巧稚是我国著名的妇产科（林巧稚是我国著名的妇产科（obsteric）医生）医生。请根。请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下林巧稚女据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下林巧稚女士。士。生平生平1901年年12月月23日生于一个教师家庭，日生于一个教师家庭，1983年年4月月22日因日因病于北京逝世。

13、病于北京逝世。经历经历1、5岁时，母亲因癌症去世，使得她梦想成为一名医生。岁时，母亲因癌症去世，使得她梦想成为一名医生。2、19211929年于协和医学堂学习并获得博士学位，年于协和医学堂学习并获得博士学位，之后到英国继续深造，在国外游学期间同时撰写医学方之后到英国继续深造，在国外游学期间同时撰写医学方面的文章和书籍。面的文章和书籍。3、回国后，致力于医治妇女儿童疾病，帮助了很多贫穷、回国后，致力于医治妇女儿童疾病，帮助了很多贫穷的乡下妇女。的乡下妇女。评价评价1、一生未婚，可接生的孩子却有一万多，是中国历史上、一生未婚，可接生的孩子却有一万多，是中国历史上一位大慈大爱的女性。一位大慈大爱的女

14、性。2、在中国，被人们看做是一个医生女英雄。、在中国，被人们看做是一个医生女英雄。检查检查(How to correct?)pants纠错原则：纠错原则：1)pattern 2)agreement 3)number 4)tense 5)spelling .Born into a teachers family on December 23,1901,Lin Qiaozhi,a famous obsteric doctor,passed away due to disease in Beijing on April22,1983.When she was 5 years old,her moth

15、er died of cancer,which made her dream of becoming a doctor.Between 1921 and 1929,she studied in Union Medical College and then went to England for further education.During her travelling abroad time,she studied Page 20as well as wrote books and articles.After Returning to motherland,she devoted to

16、helping the women and children free of diseases,especially many poor women in the countryside.Lin Qiaozhi,a woman who shows great kindness to everyone,made sure that about 10,000 babies were safely delivered and chose not to have a family of her own,she is considered as a heroine doctor in China.出出

17、生生1923年年5月月,香港香港.经历经历1,7岁丧父岁丧父,家境贫困家境贫困;2,1955年后年后,经营建筑经营建筑(architecture),航运航运,石油等石油等,成为成为国内外知名人士国内外知名人士;3,改革开放改革开放(the reform and open policy)以来以来,先后捐先后捐资支持教育资支持教育,文化文化,体育体育,和福利事业款项达和福利事业款项达100多亿港元多亿港元.影影 响响成为成为感动中国感动中国的人物的人物(Moving China hero).请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章.牛刀小试牛刀小试:Now come

18、s your turn!In May 1923,Dr Huo Yingdong was born from a poor family in Hong Kong.At the age of ten,his father died.After 1955,he was engaged in architecture,shipping,petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad.Since the beginning of the reform and open policy,he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education,culture,sports,and public welfare in Mainland.He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country,which makes him a Moving China hero.